LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...
lol flirty maan ...he is so cute...
loved maaneet's convo...
they discussed their theory and maan to agreed to help her if jairaj is really innocent...
oh kaibr is maan n goutam's hero...wow...
loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Donnaa

nice update...
lol flirty maan ...he is so cute...
loved maaneet's convo...
they discussed their theory and maan to agreed to help her if jairaj is really innocent...
oh kaibr is maan n goutam's hero...wow...
loved it...




Thnx for replying




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Posted: 9 years ago



Part-6




Geet- I don't know but please don't tell him since he is ACP Sir's son.


Maan(feeling weird)- Ok I won't tell him.


[Now they leave the restaurant. Maan insisted he would leave her but she refused and was waiting for the cab. Suddenly, some of the guys came and pushed her. She falls and screems for help... Maan came and drop her in her home. Geet was tensed and Maan relieved her tension for a while.]


Maan- Come, I will drop you.


Geet- No, I will take a cab anyways thank you.


Maan- Car hai mere pass voh b apni.


Geet- Nahi aisi koi baat nhi hai I will have a cab vaise b maine order kar diya hai online thnx for asking.


Maan- As you wish Miss Geet.


Geet(irritatingly)- Mr Maan...


Maan(smiles)- Ok Bye.


Geet- bye


[Maan is leaving for the parking. he was little away from Geet.Suddenly, some guy came in a jeep and hit Geet. He heard Geet's scream and came running to her.]


Geet(Screams)- Maan...


[Maan turned back listening to her screams and ran towards her.]


Maan- Geet! What happened? Are you alright?


Geet- Yeah!


[Maan helped her in standing]


Maan- I will drop you now and no argument on that (getting serious).


Geet(having no choice)- Ok


[They both left for parking and thinking of the case. She is in car and lost in her thought. Maan thought to lighten the moment.]


Maan(looking at Geet who is lost)- Kya soch rhi ho?


Geet(lost)- huh...


Maan(smiles and lightening the atmosphere)- Tabhi bol rha tha I will drop you.


Geet(smiles knowing his attempt)- Thanks! but i am not thinking of that.


Maan- Good vaise uss cheez se ik cheez achi huyi ki tumne muje Maan bulana seekh liya.(Laughs).


Geet- Mr Maan.


Maan- Ok.. Ok.. Vaise kya soch rhi thi fir app.


Geet(Seriously)- Kuch nhi bas sirf case k baare mein hi soch rhi thi...


Maan- toh kya sochti ho tum iss case k baare mein?


Geet(Genuinely feeling confused)- Don't know.. By your story and evidences its complicated... can't understand what to do?


Maan(trying to cheer up)- So, you are saying he is not innocent.


Geet(confused)- Pta nhi Mr Maan...


Maan- You have to decide Geet. Aise confuse rahogi toh case kaise ladogi... tum toh ladne se pehle hi haar jaogi... kyuki on a serious note yeh case ACP Jairaj k against hai aur voh b kaafi strong... humaare taraf se jo enquiry huyi hai usme kahin loopholes nhi hai siwaaye ke ACP Jairaj kuch b bolte nhi hain apne defence mein taaki humein pata chale kuch... unki chuppi hi sabse bada kaaran hai... aur tum be aise confuse hogi toh... no wonder agli hearing mein Jairaj sir jail k ander aur tum case haari huyi hogi...


Geet(worriedly)- It's my father's trust mainly. He trusts him so much and thinks he is innocent and someone else has done something to frame him but... i am afraid of loosing... loosing him... Mere dad bardaasht nhi kar paayenge agr vo sach mein corrupt nikalenge... (having tears) case haarne ka itna dukh nhi hoga jitna dad k trust tutne ka... kyuki jahan tak tumhri baat suni hai i agree koi loopholes nhi hai...


Maan(giving confidence to her)- So, what you think about your father point of view? Do you think his trusts is baseless?


Geet- Nope, I think he is right and saying the truth because he will never back a person who is a culprit. He had known ACP sir much more than us. I think ACP Sir is innocent i will look in it and I promise i will bring the truth out no matter what it is even if ACP sir is culprit which is not possible...


Maan(Smiles)- So, have confidence on him and fight. If he is innocent no matter what happened he is goanna be proved innocent right.


Geet(Smiles)- thanx Mr Maan You are right It's a risk but i will take it i know uncle is innocent and I will prove it...


Maan- Hmmm... Good...


Geet- Thanks for supporting me.


Maan(Feeling annoyed and rolled his eyes)- Oh fir se thanks... Miss Geet hum frnzzz hain ye thank you thank you krna chodo...


Geet- Ok...


[she reached her home]


Maan- lo tumahaara ghar aa gya...


Geet- Chalo undar chalo for a cofee... kyuki thanks bolungi toh Mr Maan gussa ho jaayenge...


Maan(laughs)- fir kabhi... late ho gya hun abhi... coffee pe jarur aaunga but next time...


Geet- If you say so... bye Good night...


Maan(starting his car)- Bye Good night...


[Maan went from their. On the way he was thinking about geet and her talks... and then thought about her calling Maan... Maan smiles thinking after all his jungli billi is changing...]


Maan(smiles and self talk)- Chalo unn loafers ki vjh se uske muh se apna naam toh mila sunne ko... (smiles) jungli billi... (slaps his head) tu bhi Maan sambhaal apne ko Teri Gaadi kuch jyada hi full speed mein jaa rhi hai... kahin accident naah ho jaaye... (he just smiled inwardly and drives to his home)


[Tomorrow, She goes to meet Gautam and had a conversation with him. Bell rang]


Geet- Hi Mr Gautam!


Gautam- Hi Geet! undar aao


Geet- Sure


Gautam- So, yha kaise aana hua?


Geet- I just wanna talk with you about the case.


Gautam- Ok chalo pehle bahaito.


Geet(sits)- Ok


Gautam- kya logi?


Geet- agar mana karun toh chalega?


Gautam(smiles but it never reaches his eyes)- Nahi bilkul nhi


Geet(smiles)- I will just have a cold drink


Gautam- Ok... (he orders for two cold drink).


Geet- So, Kaise ho?


Gautam- Bas thikh


Geet(coming to her case)- Aapne jo witness the unse proper baat ki thi.


Gautam- Yeah! At first, I don't believe on it but when Prakash confessed. I have to take the action. Or dad... (having Tears)... ka arrest mere haathon sirf isiliye kraaya because my father was consider the most honest.. to avoid the conflict commissioner asked me to take the charge and i have to do it...


Geet(feeling sad)- I know... Prakash ka lie polygraphy test hua...


Gautam- Hmmm.. Nhi yha kabhi use nhi krte...


Geet(getting serious)- Insaan jhuth bol skte hain machinein nhi... Ek baar polygraphy test jarur kraana tha Tasalli k liye...


Gautam(making her understand about Indian Rules)- Voh bhi insaan hai aur hamein izaazat nhi hai...


Geet(interrupted)- Insaan hote hai par insaaniyat nhi... anyway I wanna have talk with Prakash.


Gautam(making her understand)- Sorry its against the law Aap court me hi milna usse...


Geet(getting angry and sarcastic)- ACP Sir ka beta rules kab se follow krne laga... I thought he will do anything for getting justice...


Gautam(getting hyper)- Beta jarur hun iska ye mtlb nhi ki unhe follow karun... i have my role model of my own and maine unhi se hi seekha hai rules are rules... and they are meant for following... hum hi nhi follow karenge toh civilians se kya expect karenge...


Geet(last time convincing him)- apne dad k liye b nhi...


Gautam(adamantly)- Nahi... Code hai and i have to follow it...


[Geet stands and got angry on him and statrted going out but last she was not able to hold back her anger and told him...]


Geet(angry)- Ok Inspector Gautam! aap apne code ko follow krte rahiye chaahe koi bekasoor ko fansi hi kyu naa ho jaaye right.


Gautam(furiosly shouted at her)- Geet!... Enough... Atleast dekh toh lo kiske ke baarein mein baat kar rhi ho... (having tears because of anguish and helplessness)... (controlling himself and explainig her his point of view) Ok I promise i will let you talk with prakash if you provide me any information that is a strong view which can help you proving your stand... for this you have to meet ACP Jairaj sir... Kyuki voh hi hai jinki chupi ki vjh se yeh case unpe chal rha hai... agr vo kuch btayenge iss baarein mein toh hi main... kuch madad kar paun... Iss se pehle mujse please kuch expect mat kro... Main kuch nhi kar skta... voh mera jurisdiction nhi hai... Maan tumhri help isiliye kar rha hai because he is directly linked i am not... so please understands me... and please don't complicate things for me... vaise hi... (he stops himself for pouring out his feeling).


Geet(thinking and understanding)- Hmm... Sorry I shouldn't have said that but Gautam some times code ko todna padta yhi apke dad b krte the... right for justice anyway thanks for telling me the way... i will do it... This is what you want and i will do it... I promise... atleast you showed me the way...


Gautam(feeling tensed how to ask but he asked)- Geet! Voh... I mean... Maa Kaisi hai?


Geet(smiles)- Maa...She is fine...


Gautam(not meeting her gaze)- Voh i was just tensed about her... voh kya hai naah meri vjh se she has to suffer a lot...


Geet(making him understands he is not at fault)- It's not your fault... You are just doing your duty. Your senior has asked to do it... koi b apki jgh hota vo b yhi krta... Infact apke dad ko appe proud hoga...


Gautam(tensed)- But Maa mujse naraaz hai..


Geet- koi baat nhi aaj nhi toh kal unhe smjhna hi hoga aur vaise b mom log jyada der tak gussa nhi rehte... she will understand when she will get to know your situation... and jab ACP Sir innocent prove hoke bahar aayenge fir toh ACP Sir b honge naah unhe smjhaane k liye... so, don't be upset sab theekh hoga...


Gautam(feeling relieved)- thanks! i am feeling little bit relieved at least tum toh hogi unke saath... if you don't mind please aati jaati rehne tumhre bahaane i will be able to know about mom...


Geet- Ye b koi bolne vaali baat hai bhai ab toh main aati jaati rahungi you don't need to worry... aur jald hi dekhna mom aur aap ik saath hi rehna shuru b kar doge... OOPS sorry i called you bhai... in a flow... But pta nhi kyu aisa laga jaise mein apko bhai keh.ke bulaun...(with expectant eyes).


Gautam(smiles at her antics)- Ab tumne muje bhai bula hi liya hai toh... i don't mind being called your brother... issi bahaane ,muje ek choti behan mil jaayegi... (smiles with his heart)... bas on duty dhyan rkhna avoid krna muje bhai bulaana tab ok...


Geet(Smiles)- As you say bhai i will keep in mind... Acha main chalti hun ab Aunty intezaar kar rhi hongi...


Gautam- OK


Gautam- Ok Bye... and take care..


Geet- Bye... and i will take care of myself and aunty too... and please you too take care of yourself... vaise b ye tarzan vaali look kyu bnaayi huyi hai... kya raaz hai iska... (giving naughty look)... Btao btao...


Gautam(smiles)- aisa kuch nhi hai filhaal self grooming ka time nhi hai... so i am like this.. (slaps her head Geet- Ouch!)... Jyada dimaag chalaane ki jarurat nhi... Now go mom will be waiting...


Geet(rubbing her head)- Ok bhai...


[she went to have a dinner with Tejaswini. there tejaswini tells her to shift in her palce and Geet informs about what she got to know and about Gautam too...]


Precap: Geet and Tejaswini Talks and Finally ACP Jairaj open himself infront of geet and brings about the fact that will make other stunned...







Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


With Regards
Dhruvika



Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
hehe maan ki gadi speed se chl rhi h...
geet nd gautam convo was nice...geet calling him bhai he is also happy with that...
waiting for nxt update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just read all the updates... Loving the story
Interesting concept 👍🏼

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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! superbly written! Maan n Geet talk! she offers 2 drop n she refuses! Geer attacked by some guys! Maan is there n drops her home! Geet speaks 2 Gautam! she understands his position! he asks abt his mom n she assures him! she calls him Bhai n says sorry bt he is happy to have a sister! update soon, interesting precap
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
geet n maan talk about case when they r leaving maan offer geet to ride home but geet denied someone attack geet after that maan drop geet home
geet n gautam talk about the case
gautam tell geet about his feeling for his mom is not talking to him geet assure to gautam everything is gonna all right

interesting precape

waiting for next update

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Posted: 9 years ago
Gud going maan ...
Kya bola meri jangli billi..wow cery fast

Lovely talk between gautam n geet

Precap... Eagerly waitimg dpr mextpart
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update!!!!

so geet and maan are getting closer..geet talked to maan about the case and asked him not to tell gautam about who she is...

geet went to talk with gautam ..she wants to know what happened and why he arrested his dad..she is a bit hard with him but they find a way to connect...
gautam asks for his mom and geet gets a new brother...

does gautam know about the sister that he has???

loved it and the trailer!!!

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