LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 71

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Posted: 8 years ago
very interesting story...
so geet is going to india...

Geet is smart and very strong


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Posted: 8 years ago

like maan and geet convo...
but he have some confuse towards geet

So gautom friendship with geet

it is getting interesting...
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Posted: 8 years ago

maan and geet make me laugh...

2 different case.. but looks link together

hope gautam.. dont stay away from geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting two new characters
though Viraj steals and earns money he also donates to the orphage
while the Rahul has a blind sister and ACP Sir helped her again showing the kindess of this man
Rahul is a police informer
so it means he must have been the one to give Maan the photo of the tattoo
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 23



Maan (smiles)- Kheer! Vaah kya baat hai... vaise strange tumhe aur Jairaj sir ko bhi kheer bhut pasand hai... Tum, Sir aur Geet kitne milte julte ho even your temper bhi... {Kheer! Wow Interesting... by the way it's strange you, Jairaj sir too likes kheer... You, Sir and Geet are so similar even your temper too...}

Gautam (shrugs his shoulder)- Yeh toh merko pata nhi but try it out... kya pata baat ban jaaye... Ok ab mein phone rkhta hun paper work krna hai... {I don't know about this... You may never know it will help you... Ok I will hang up now I have to do paper work now...}

Maan(smiles)- Ok... Bye and Todha Mayank se bhi help le lo... (hangs up the call) {Ok... Bye and little bit of help you can take from Mayank too...(hangs up the call)}

[After completing his work he went to Khurana Mansion. It was late at night and he was sitting on sofa and was thinking what to do... Lalita and Daadima was coming down from their room for having a small get together with saas bahu and they saw Maan sitting on the sofa with closed eyes. They were curious usually he would have created a havoc for dinner as he can't stand his hunger... So, they went there and they sat beside him and asked about the matter..]

Daadima- Maan bete kya soch rahe hain aap?? (Giving secret glances to Lalita to listen carefully) {Maan bete What are you thinking??(Giving secret glances to Lalita to listen carefully)}

Maan(smiles thinking about Geet)- yhi ki kheer kaise banaate hain... {How to make kheer}

Lalita and Daadima(Shocked expression)- Kya????? (Maan got in senses what he had said but it was too late) {What?????(Maan got in senses what he had said but it was too late) }

Daadima(Unbelievable look)- (Checking his head for fever) Maan bete aapki tabiyat toh theekh hai... aapko kabse interest ho gya cooking mein voh bhi kheer????{(Checking his head for fever)Maan bete Are you alright... When you got interestingin kheer that too Kheer????}

Maan(rolled his eyes)- Ab kya btaun Daadi bas meri futti kismat har pange mere saath hi hota hai you know daadi mera naam apne Maan Khurana galat rkh diya hai iski bjaaye Disaster Khurana rkhna chaahiye tha (Daadima and Lalita laughs at him) Hns lo apko kya pata mere saath kya hua... (Daadi smiles) {What to say Daadi... My fate is really bad Every bad thing happens with me only You know Daadi My name should not be Maan Khurana but it should be Disaster Khurana(Daadima and Lalita laughs at him) You only laugh at me you don't know what happened with me...(Daadi smiles)}

Lalita(smiles and shook his head)- Yeh nhi sudhrega!!!! (mutters under her breath and Maan- Maine Sun liya Mom...) Vaise yeh chodo tumne aaj kya kiya Commissioner Sir ke saath? jo aise behave kar rhe ho... Dekho fir se tumhri koi complaint aayi toh tumhre papa ke kehar se main toh kya mom bhi nhi bcha paayengi... { He will not change!!!!! (mutters under her breath and Maan- Maine Sun liya Mom...) Anyway Leave it... What you have done with Commissioner Sir now that you are behaving like this... See, If there is another complaint me and mom will not be able to save you from your father's wrath}

Maan(with narrow eyes)- For Your Information baat agr Commissioner Sir ki hoti toh problem nhi thi but yaha baat kisi aur ki hai... uff... I messed up mom I was in a market place for my duty and I saw Geet there and she was...(and explained everything in detail what happen and now she is furious)... Ab Gautam ne btaya mujhe she likes kheer toh vhi soch rha tha ki Kheer se usse mana lun... {For your Information If it was the case of Commissioner Sir then there will be no problem but here the the situation something else... uff... I messed up mom I was in a market place for my duty and I saw Geet there and She was...and explained everything in detail what happen and now she is furious)... And Now Gautam has told me that She likes Kheer so i was thinking to pacify her with Kheer...}

Daadima (mischevious look)- Oh Geet hmmmph... Vaise yeh baat humein bol dete beta hum bna dete yaa fir Maamla gadbad hai... jo apne haath ki bnaayi huyi khilaani hai... {Oh geet Hmmmph... Anyway You should have told this thing to us I would have made it or there is something fishy... that you want her to eat the Kheer made by you...}

Maan (rolls his eyes)- Daadi Apko iske elawa kuch aur sujhta nhi hai kya???? Isiliye soch rha tha khud banau vrna aap yhi sochti rahengi... {Daadi You won't think something else right... Because of this I was thinking of making it myself otherwise you will only keep thinking...}

Daadima(Laughs)- Acha! Isme hum kya karein humaari umar ho gyi hai... upar se pehli baar Maan Khurana kisi ldki k liye kheer ke baare mein soch rha hai toh dil ke armaan toh jaagenge hi humein bhi apne great grandchildren dekhne ka showk hai... {Really! what to do i am getting too old... and this is the first time Maan Khurana is thinking of some girl giving kheer then the hope in my heart will rise because in the end i too have a wish to see the great grand children after all...}

Maan- Aap aur apke Great Grand Children ke dream ab yeh sab chodo meri madad karo... atleast mom aap toh kar do... {You and your Great Grand Children's dream leave all this and help me... At least mom you can help me...}

Lalita(smiles)- Chalo kitchen mein bnaate hain tumhri Geet (winks at Daadi) k liye Kheer... {Come! we will make Kheer for your Geet (winks at Daadi)}

Maan- Mom Aap bhi Please spare me right now please... (Lalita laughs and Lalita- Ok Maan ! Ab chalo...) Phew finally my plan is working... {Mom! You too Please Spare me right now please...(Lalita laughs and Lalita- Ok Maan ! Ab chalo...) Phew finally my plan is working...}

[Maan, Lalita and Daadima were working in the kitchen and Maan was seeing them doing the work for him and happy that he will complete his mission Manao Geet on time...]

Maan- Vaise Daadima hum kheer abhi kyu bna rahe hain mujhe toh subah deni hai naa... toh subah bnaate... {Anyway Daadima Why are we making Kheer right now I have to give it in morning so Why not in morning...}

Daadima- Voh isiliye Maan ki Kheer thandi aur bhi tasty ho jaati hai... apne continental food ki duniya se baahar aayiye tbhi toh jaan paayenge... iska taste... {It's beacuse Kheer is more tasty when it is cooled...Please leave your continental food and taste Indian food then you will know about it's taste...}

Maan (smiles)- Really daadi... Will try for sure pehle ban toh jaaye... Vaise mom Dad kaha hai dikhaayi nhi de rhe... Mr. Mogambo nhi hai toh shaanti nazar aa rhi hai... {Really Daadi... Will try for sure it should be cooked first... Anyway Mom where is Dad He is not seen anywhere... It's quite peaceful without Mr. Mogambo...}

Lalita(frowns)- (slaps him on his arms and Maan- Ouch!) Chup kar badmaash apne dad k baare mein aise bolte hain kya (Daadima smiles at her grand sons antics) Office mein aaj kaam bhut hain kuch issue aa gya tha quotation ko leke isiliye late ho gya hai...ajkal bhut pareshaan rehte hain... (She was worrying for her husband and his health) khair Maan voh gussa isiliye krte hain kyunki he loves you a lot beta but dikha nhi paate... He only have you in his life and he wanted his son to enjoy the life and you are risking it main mana nhi krti apne dreams ko follow krne k liye but tum apne dad ko todha smjh toh skte ho naa... and tum yeh baat tab smjhoge jab tum khud unki jgh aaoge... {(slaps him on his arms and Maan- Ouch!) Shut up Badmaash! Anybody speaks like that about their dad like this(Daadima smiles at her grand sons antics) . there is a lot of work in Office because of the issue of quotation that's why he is late and he worries too much about it... (She was worrying for her husband and his health)anyway He gets angry because he loves you a lot beta but he is not able to show it... He only have you in his life and he wanted his son to enjoy his life and you are risking your life I don't stop you to follow your dream but i can expect you can understand your father right... and you will understand this when you will come in his place...}

Maan (smiles)- I know mom Dad ka pyaar karne ka tarika bhut alag hai but mere dream kuch aur hi the mujhe bhi bura lgta hai... but voh bhi toh mujhe nhi smjhte... par don't worry mom... i have my plans too... (thinking about the future) Vaise mom jayda problem toh nhi hai naa buisness mein aur unki tabiyat toh theekh rehti hai... {I know Mom The way of Dad loving me is very different but I have my dreams and I too feel bad... but he doesn't understand me... but you don't worry mom... I have my plans too...(thinking about the future) Anyway Mom There is not too much problem in business and How's his health...}

Samarth- Meri tabiyat theekh hai aur abhi achi ho jaayegi agr tum yeh apne chor police ka game khelne ki jgh business mein interest dikhao... yeh empire maine tumhre liye khada kiya hai naaki kisi aur ke liye... {I am alright and my health will improve if you stop playing police thief game and start taking interest in business... this empire is made for you not for anyone else...}

[Before Lalita could say anything. Samarth had come and replied to the Maan's comment without listening to the full words of Maan. He tries to show what Maan is missing and what he wanted...]

Daadima(mutters under her breath)- Lo shuru ho gye baap bete... pata nhi voh din kab aayega jab ye do loggerheads ek baat pe agree karenge acha khaasa Maan baat smjh rha tha... nhi Mere bete ko apni taang toh adaani hi hai... ab bhuktana iska outcome Phew! (she sighs seeing the drama unfolded here)... {See The son and father duo has started... When will the day come when these two loggerhead will agree on same thing... It was so goo to see Maan understanding him... but No My son always love to poke his nose... now facte the outcome of it Phew! (she sighs seeing the drama unfolded here)... }

Lalita- (divulging the topic) Aa gye aap... Itni der laga di aapne... fresh ho jaayiye main apke liye khaana lgaati hun vaise bhi Maan ne bhi nhi kiya hai aaj ikhaate kar lena... {(divulging the topic)You are here... why are you so late... just fresh n up I will take out the dinner and Maan too haven't have dinner so, we will have it together...}

Samarth- Hmmm... Theekh hai Main aata hun... tum khaana lagao... vaise bhi aaj main bhut thak gya hun... {Hmmm... Ok I will come after sometime you will take out the dinner and iam really tired right now...}

[Daadima took the sigh of relief to see the tornado changing his direction for a while... ]

Maan (getting a grumpy feeling)- Mr. Mogambo kabhi nhi badlenge... ache khaase mood kharaab kar diya...(Lalita glare at him...)Beta chalo Maan ek round of verbal boxing khelne k liye...(Lalita listening to him slaps him on his head) Ouch Mom! Lagti hai... Theekh hai Nhi bolunga ab Meri toh sirf Daadima hai jo meri side leti hai...bas... {Mr. Mogambo will never change... He spoils the good mood right now... (Lalita glare at him...)Beta Chalo Maan Get ready for the next round of verbal boxing...(Lalita listening to him slaps him on his head) Ouch mom! It hurts... Ok I will not say this now... Now only daadima is on my side...}

Lalita- Haan theekh Hai Daadima ke laadesar ab dinning table pe chalte hain and Maan control your temper for the dinner at least I don't want any fuss... {Haan Daadima ke Laadesar Now let's go to Dinning table and Maan just control your temper at dinner at least I don't want any fuss...}

[They left for Dining table and Samarth came down for dinner... they were having dinner]

Samarth- Kab tak tum yeh job krte rahoge?? {Till when you will kept doing this job?}

Maan- Jab tak Main Chaahunga... and dad hum kitni baar discuss kar chuke hain mujhe issi job mein khushi milti hai... (Daadima and Lalita gave I-Know-this-would-happen look to each other) dad business mein mujhe interest nhi hain... {Till when I want... and Dad we have talked about it too many times... I love to do this job... (Daadima and Lalita gave I-Know-this-would-happen look to each other)Dad I don't have any interest in business...}

Samarth- Interest nhi hai toh banao... vrna ik kaam karo Mr. Khanna ki beti hai Saakshi she is single she is in business too well educated hai kyu naah tum aur voh shaadi ke baare mein socho... tum apni job krna voh business mein meri help kar degi aur she is the only child toh Khurana's ke saath unka merger humaare liye bhi better hoga... {If yo don't have interst then create... otherwise do one thing Get married... Mr. Khanna's Daughter Saakshi she is single she is business too and she is well educated why don't you think about marrying her... you will do your job she will help in me in business... and beside she is the only child and the merger will be good for Khurana Construction...}

Maan (frowns and was getting hyper but calmed himself)- Dad Marriage is not a business deal... jo usme I will find profit... usse shaadi... dekha hai maine usse jara bhi tameez nhi hai bado se kaise baat krte hain... aap se hi dekh lo kiss tareeke se baat karti hai... as if she is trying to hit on you... mujhe pe toh try kiya toh kiya aapko bhi nhi choda... {Dad Marriage is not a business deal... that i will see a profit in it... marriage with her... I have seen her She doesn't know how to talk with elders... see how she talks with you... as if she is trying to hit on you... She hits on me but she didn't left you too...}

Samarth (in anger and control tone)- Maan! bolne se pehle kuch socha karo kya bol rhe ho... and when did she do that... Haan agr voh baat kar rhi thi mujse iska mtlb yeh nhi ki tum kuch bhi bolo... (Maan rolls his eyes on his father's innocence and ignorance) lekin fir bhi main tumhe bolunga ki iske baare mein socho mujhe bhi jarurat hai empire mein madad ki yaa toh tum yeh bachpana chodo aur business mein interest dikhao vrna shaadi ke baare mein socho... {Maan}! think before you speak and think what are you saying... and when did she do that... Yes, If she has talked with me that doesn't mean you can say anything... (Maan rolls his eyes on his father's innocence and ignorance)still I will say to you do think about this I need you to handle the empire either you help me and leave this kiddishness and join the business otherwise think about marriage...}

[Daadima and Lalita were the silent spectator of this World War III and continuously seeing Maan and Samarth and were helpless to do anything and waiting for the tornado to go from here]

Maan (closing his eyes)- Fine Main sochunga but uss Mr. Khanna ki beti ke baare mein nhi kisi aur ke baare mein... (Daadima chokes her food listening to this because her mind bulb gives the different signals and everyone looks at her and she just smiles)... but dad please jayda umeed mat rkhna ki main raazi ho gya hun... {Fine I willthink but not about Mr. Khanna's daughter but of someone else...(Daadima chokes her food listening to this because her mind bulb gives the different signals and everyone looks at her and she just smiles)... but dad Please don't have too much hope from me I am agree that is enough...}

Samarth (in his hard tone)- Theekh hai... at least i will be relieved from little things... vaise tum kitchen mein kya kar rhe the (He was too interested in his son's life) Hmmph... vaise aaj kheer kis khushi mein ban rhi thi... {It's ok... At least I will be relieved from little things... Anyway What were you doing in Kitchen (He was too interested in his son's life) Hmmph... Any Kheer for what occassion...}

Daadima(Having a teasing smile)- Tumhri bahu k liye (Maan glare at her) I mean Geet k liye voh kya hai naa Maan ne Geet ke bhai ko glti se peet diya ab voh isse baat nhi kar rhi isiliye... {For your duaghter-in-law (Maan glare at her) I mean for Geet... Maan had beaten her brother by mistaked and she is not talking to him that's why...}

Samarth(raising his eyebrows)- Huh Maan! Geet ke liye huh yeh toh nayi development hain...vaise yeh hai kaun... mujhe toh abhi tak mili nhi kahin parties mein yaa kahin.. {Huh Maan! for Geet... It's really a new development anyway who is she... I haven't met her in parties...}

Maan- Dad voh yahan ki nhi hai... She is from US voh Famous industrialist hain Kabir Deshmukh interior designing ka jiska business hai unki beti apke saath bhi toh dealing hai unki... {Dad She is not from here... She is from US Duaghter of famous Industrialist Kabir Deshmukh he has a business of Interior Designing.. You deal with them in business...}

Samarth (Amazed)- Wow Kabir ki beti voh yaha... usne toh law ki thi aur voh vahin US mein as a lawyer work kar rhi hai... as far as I know Kabir India shift nhi hua hai haan business k liye aata jaata hai but family nhi aayi kbhi... he rarely comes in business parties... lot's of people has asked me to recommend them to him par voh apne hisaab se hi kaam krta hai,... Voh kar kya rhi hai yahan ajkal?? {Wow Daughter of Kabir She is here... But she has done law and was working as lawyer... as far as I know Kabir hasn't shifted here... Yeah he come for business purpose but he never bring his family... and he rarely comes in business parties... lot's of people has asked me to recommend them to him but he works according to his own way... What she is doing right now?}

[Dadima and Lalita were astonished to see Samarth interested in talking with Maan and that too regarding a different girl who is not from his circle...]

Maan- Voh Jairaj sir ka case hai voh handle kar rhi hai usike liye aayi hai yahan... {She is here for Jairaj Sir's case she is handling that case that's why she is here...}

Samarth(serious and concern)- Ufff... Geet ko bhi yhi case mila tha... dekho maan mujhe nhi pata ki voh kya kar rhi hai but make sure ki tum in sab se todha bchke rehna... main yeh toh nhi keh skta ki kaun sahi hai yaa galat but iss case mein bhut high profile log jude hain and main nhi chaahta ki tumhe isme kuch ho... and haan Geet ka bhi todha dhyaan rkh lena... Kabir se personal relation toh nhi but professional level pe we are very close and main nhi chaahunga uski family suffer kare... Ok {Ufff Geet reallly have to fight this case to fight... See Maan, I don't know what she is doing but make sure you will staye safe from this... I don't know who is right or wrong but in this case the high profile people are involved and i don't want you to suffer and yeah Take care of Geet too... We don't have personal relationship but we have good professional relation and are very close and I don't want his family to suffer... Ok}

Maan- Ok dad Geet ka khayal rkh lunga but iss case mein toh involve ho chuka hun main... isiliye ab peeche hatna mushkil hai... {Ok Dad I will take care of Geet but i have involved myself in this case so i will not back down now...}

[After having Dinner, All left to their respective room. Maan was waiting for the morning to come and manaofying his jungli billi as soon as possible and they have to discuss about the case too but before that he he has to meet Jairaj for the tattoo..]

Precap- Maan and Jairaj Meet and Tatoo's secret is out...:)








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Posted: 8 years ago
Ufff finally u updated.. waiting for a long time...
hehe i am the first... This one is awesome... You have written this very well... really maan is very funny.. lol... this maan is very different from other ffs... he is referring his father as mogambo lol... not even that he referred himself as disaster singh k hurana lol... never expected that maan singh khurana can refer him with that name... round of verbal boxing... lol... 🤣 i just loved it ... samarth and maans conversation is very good... and dadi tho over excited hojathi hain lol... geet ko apni bahu maan rahi hain... even samarth know kabir... positive vibes... he even asked maan to take care of her... so sweet of him.. already in love with samarth... even though he is against maans profession he cares maan a lot... loving maans family... and finally kheer tho ban gaya... abhi maan apni jangli billi ko kaise manayega... dekhna hain. ... update next part soon
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Awesome update...loved it...thanks for the pm too...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful part Ila
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mindblowing update...
Maan is thinking how to make kheer...
loved Daadi maa ,Maan mom and Maan conversation...
Daadi maa teasing Maan ...
Maan dad and Maan is tooo good...
totally enjoyed their discussion on Geet part...
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Posted: 8 years ago
SUPER DISCUSSION REGARDING GEET BETWEEN SON AND FATHER 😉
WAITING FOR MORNING DAMAKA

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