LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice update

geet is in full force



Originally posted by: suwaibah

feeling sad for mr jairaj...

nice update



Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! well written! Malini prepares 4 Geet's trip! Geet in India n meets Tejaswini n convinces 2 let fight the case! Geet at court! she meets Jairaj as well! Tejaswini n Jairaj wonder abt Geet! Gautam rude 2 Geet n Maan intervenes! Maan introduces himself 2 her! update soon



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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: taahir004

Interesting Update

Geet getting confirmation from Tejaswini to go ahead and fight the case for Jairaj
he was shocked just like everyone else but was convinced by her story and allowed her too
while both Gautum and Maan felt it weird and wanted to know why she is doing the case
she tried and provoked Gautum but again it has to be difficult for him too
seeing the evidence against his dad
Maan on the other hand tries and be sarcastic with her but Geet answers him too



Originally posted by: pari_DD

amazing updte geet came to india d met tejaswini d geet convinces her tht she vl fight d jairaj case gautam talk rudely with geet d maan stoped them waiting for d nxt updte



Originally posted by: nakh5683

Lovely update now we getting somewhere so geet met tejaswini and somehow convinced her she wants to fight jairaj case she agreed all were shocked with the development jairaj came to know geet is kabirs daughter and he agreed gautam had an heated argument with geet where she was supporting his dad maaneet finally met seems gautam gets his temper from his mom she is angry geet is hoping she can get the mother son near by solving te case




Originally posted by: CookieMonster.

Awesome part
so geet convinced tejiswini to fight case 4 jairaj...dats gr8
maaneet met!!
Cant wait 4 nxt




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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Awesome story. Awesome updates. Geet is Jairaj Handa's daughter and is adopted by Kabir Deshmukh and Malini Deshmukh. Geet did not know this. Jairaj Handa is arrested by his own son Gautam Handa who is also an inspector for some false case. He is falsely trapped. When Kabir got to know about this he is disturbed. Geet decided to go to India to fight Jairaj case. Kabir allowed her to go but on a condition not to reveal her identity. Geet came and met Tejaswini and get her ready to allow her to fight Jairaj case.






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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Hi Every one


Sorry for updating late. As i got a job in school as teacher and students are having their exam these days and the function preparation is also going on so i will not be able to update the story frequently please don't stop reading i will try to update frequently.I will be highly obliged if you keep commenting on the story. I would like to know what you like about my story in your words. I will be highly grateful.


With Regards
Dhruvika



Thanks for liking the story...



Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4


[Geet saw Gautam and Maan. Geet was keenly looking at Gautam and Gautam was looking at his mother with longing eyes.]


Geet (self Talk)- Just like his mother... Gussa aayega... saath mein toofan hi laayega... lgta hai yeh case b mujhe hi solve krna padega... (smiles)...


[In her house, she was moving to and fro and thinking from where to start. she don't even have a clue. She thinks it started with Maan. So, She decided to have a talk with Maan First.]


[Next Day, She goes to that police station where Maan works. She enters the Station. She is looking here and there.]


Geet- Excuse Me!


Puja (giving a weird look)- Yes! How can I help you?


Geet- I want to meet Inspector Maan Singh Khurana. Can you tell me where is he?


Puja(making a face)- Sir is not here but he will be back after sometime you can wait in a waiting area or else you can tell me i will help you.


Geet(smiles)- No thanks for asking! i just came here to meet him. Can you just tell me when he will come?


Puja- hmm... Can't say he will be here in 10 minutes. You can wait here.


[Puja leaves from there].

[Geet was standing there. Suddenly she gets collides with Maan and scolds Maan without looking at him.]


Geet(gets collides with Maan)- Aaah... Abey dekhke chalna nahi aata kya?


Maan(Saw Geet and smirks)- Toh tumhe sochna chaahiye naah ye koi standing garden nhi hai ek police station hai raste mein khada nhi rehna chaaiye Bhaitne mein tax nhi lgta.


Geet(irritatingly)- Bhaitne ki jagah ho toh bhaitengee agar bhait b jaaye toh logon ki pahunch hi itni hoti hai ki dhmki deke utha de. After all it's India jiski jitni power utna misuse kyu sahi kaha naah? (Smirks)


Maan(smiles and cross folding his hands)- Hmmm... Toh aap yha hum se iss topic pe debate karne aayi hain (stops for a while) Miss Geet.


Geet- Nahi mere paas group discussion krne ka time kaha. I was here because i want to have a talk with you.


Maan(Getting Serious)- Mere se kis baare mein?


Geet- ACP Jairaj ke case ke baare main. I was not able to think from where to starts. Ab jab shuruat tumse huyi toh socha tumhi se shuru karun apna case.


Maan- Ohk... Well miss Geet abhi toh nhi par shaam ko chalega right now i am on duty.


Geet- Ok kab or kaha?


Maan- 7 o'clock Basche Marriott ok Miss Geet.


Geet- Miss Geet nhi sirf Geet and done 7 o'clock i will be there.


Maan- Aap shayad nayi hain mumbai main. so, aap apna address de dijiye. I will pick you from there.


Geet- Thanks for courtsey but i will reach own my on.


Maan (smiles)- Ok... Geet jaisa aap chaahe.


[They shakes hand and Geet is going. But Maan is watching her. Suddenly, she turns as if she knew Maan is watching her but Maan turns back because someone came and ask for him. She is only able to see his back.]

Maan(watching her going and Self Talk)- Jungli Billi (and nodded his head and smirks and turns)


Geet(while turning and looking at his back and smiles)- Jhalli! Kya kar rhi hai...


[at evening, Geet reaches Basche Marriott. She was looking for Maan and they have a talk.]


Geet(To Herself)- Where is he? Oh! there is he...


[They shake hand with each other]


Geet(while shaking hand)- Hello Mr. Khurana!


Maan (smiles)- Hi Miss Geet.


[Maan pulls the chair and make her sit]


Maan(while pulling the chair)- Have a seat Miss Geet.


Geet (smiles)- Thank you.


Maan- So, Main kya kar skta hun aapke liye.


Geet- Huh... (surprised) ji.. Mtlb


Maan(smiles)- Mtlb ki We are here for the case discussion right...


Geet(feeling awkward)- Haan! Sorry .. I wanna know what happened till now I was wondering from where to start. then, I thought of you. That's why I am here.


Maan(sensing her uneasiness tries to make her comfortable)- hmmm... (smiles) Usse pehle aapko humaare sawaalon ka jwaab dena padega.





Precap: Maan and Geet's Discussion on case. :)















Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


With Regards
Dhruvika


Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
nice update...
lol i was waiting for maaneet's famous takkar...ho gayi takkar :P
geet is at PS to ask maan about the case...
maan is very friendly...liked him a lot...
now case history time...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
nice update..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Part 3
Nice Update
Geet reached India and after 1month training met tejaswani ad convinced her to take Jairaj case, Tejaswani agreed and everyone was shocked for this change, Gautam argued with Geet but Maan calmed him down, Tejaswani is angry with Gautam , loved the whole update

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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Part 4
Lovely Update 👏
Geet went to police station to meet inspector Maan Singh Khurana and Maneet first encounter with takker, loved it 😉
Maan named Geet Jungli Billi 😆 aur Geet ne bhi mud ker dekha 😉
Geet met Maan for case discussion
Waiting for next update

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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
very nice update
geet reach ps to meet maan for more information about case
maan call her jangli bili ask her to meet in hotel in evening as he is bussy with his work

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