LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 14

Created

Last reply

Replies

822

Views

60.5k

Users

93

Likes

2.1k

Frequent Posters

IlaTanwar thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -padmarao-

Just read all the updates... Loving the story

Interesting concept 👍🏼



Originally posted by: pari1689

awesome update...
hehe maan ki gadi speed se chl rhi h...
geet nd gautam convo was nice...geet calling him bhai he is also happy with that...
waiting for nxt update soon



Originally posted by: khwaishfan


hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! superbly written! Maan n Geet talk! she offers 2 drop n she refuses! Geer attacked by some guys! Maan is there n drops her home! Geet speaks 2 Gautam! she understands his position! he asks abt his mom n she assures him! she calls him Bhai n says sorry bt he is happy to have a sister! update soon, interesting precap



Originally posted by: myrahluvsk

Nice update
geet n maan talk about case when they r leaving maan offer geet to ride home but geet denied someone attack geet after that maan drop geet home
geet n gautam talk about the case
gautam tell geet about his feeling for his mom is not talking to him geet assure to gautam everything is gonna all right

interesting precape

waiting for next update



Originally posted by: maansee

Gud going maan ...

Kya bola meri jangli billi..wow cery fast

Lovely talk between gautam n geet

Precap... Eagerly waitimg dpr mextpart





Originally posted by: mlaran852

awesome update!!!!

so geet and maan are getting closer..geet talked to maan about the case and asked him not to tell gautam about who she is...

geet went to talk with gautam ..she wants to know what happened and why he arrested his dad..she is a bit hard with him but they find a way to connect...
gautam asks for his mom and geet gets a new brother...

does gautam know about the sister that he has???


Answer:- Nope she he doesn't know as he was very young so he forget her and further will be revealed in future depends upom response...😳


loved it and the trailer!!!


Thanks for the comment






IlaTanwar thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ambbiha

Awesome part. Geet is worried for her father as she doesnt want her father's trust to be broken. All proves claims that her real father is a culprit. MAAN trying to be her emotional support. Loved it😉




Originally posted by: utsha

Awesome update.

I'm totally into the story now.
More of maan and geet I liked gautam and geet's convo in this update.
Gautam's outbursts were justified and his helplessness dripped from each word he uttered.
Geet's inner tussle was beautifully portrayed though it will be a bane in her ambition.
Geet, inspite of her naivity, is evolving for the good. Its great to see how she is changing gradually, from the confused soul believing only in her father's trust only, to the fierce , bold, suave lawyer who skillfully manipulated Gautam to give in to her wish.
Maybe its the effect of Maan's words.
But why is she being attacked like this? Is it an accident or co incidental??
Answer:- Nope not now till now it was some college students drving a car rashly... that's why he was hit by them nothing else...😳
Seems Maan is falling for her.
Anyways waiting for the mystery to be unveiled.
Pls pls pls cont soon.
Thanks for the pm.

P.S. Sorry for my short comment. I'm a little short of time these days for my exams and sorry for being late in replying.

Answer:- Its ok for late reply i will wait these lines are also enough for guiding me... i will try to more elaborate my story focus on case plus there love too... may be bit more case please do keep me update if it's going too much case oriented...😃😃



Originally posted by: Alamelu

Ww maan and geet opening up yo each other and how easily geet thinks of Gautama as her brother inadvertently. Waiting to see what Acp jairaj discloses



Originally posted by: swapna.p

awesome update...
waiting for next update ..



Originally posted by: Donnaa

cute update...
maan is started to like geet...he is irritating her to call him maan...chalo gundo k bahane hi sahi she is calling him maan :P
love goutam and geet's talk...
ehh ye goutam baat baat pe kuch zyada hi hyper ho jata hai...well case bhi way too sensitive for him as jairaj is his dad...so understandable...
awww geet goutam ko bhai and aunty se mom pe aagayi...feeling the pull...
lived geet and goutam's small banter...


Originally posted by: taahir004

Interesting Update

After Geet and Maan's meeting is over he asked her if should drop her off at home
and she refuses only for some guys to push and Maan comes again to asking her
if he should drop her but again she refuses and when he walks away again some guy
hits her two incidents in one night that is terrible and worst Maan did not even warn those
guys-He wasn't able to as they were in car and it's not always like that hero will always comes in time and saves and beat the villain... i want it simple and more of geet and maan fighting shighting not right now... it needs time to come... as i ahve to evolve myself to that part more... but now Geet has no choice and goes with him
she now seems confused at the fact that ACP Sir may not be innocent but her father trust in him
and believes that he is innocent and here Maan tells Geet she has to make her mind up
if she believes he is innocent than surely he will be proved innocent but if she herself is confused
than even before trial ACP Sir will lose the case and Geet gets encouraged by Maan and decides
that she will do everything to prove he is innocent and she is also aware that its risky



Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice update

maan is falling for geet
gautam n geet's meet is also very cute




Originally posted by: kabslocks

Awesome update. Maan asked Geet to drop her at her home but she denied. She was waiting for cab when a goon's jeep hit her. She screamed. Maan heard her voice and immediately came to her. He asked her to sit in the car. She agreed and he dropped her. Geet went to meet Gautam and asked about case. He told her many things. She did not believe that Jairaj was the culprit but he is not opening his mouth and this is making the case against him.







Thanks for the replying...😳
IlaTanwar thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_DD

wonderful updteee maan d geet after meeting maan offered her lift bt geet denied someone pushed geet maan strictly warned to drop geet. geet is tensd abt case case ko harne se jyada use apne papa ka trust kone ka darr hai maan i s giving e cofindence...there is strong points in case too for jairaj has to tell d truth. gautam is helpless he is in betweenhis duty d father geet d gautam covo was gud he asking her to take care if his mom
precap is intesting waiting for d nxt updte...




Originally posted by: preetidhawan

Fantastic Update

Maan told Geet that she should be confident and not to be nervous as there is no loophole in this case and moreover ACP is not opening his mouth in his defence, Geet promised not to loose hope, wonderful conv. between Geet and Gautam, poor Gautam he is helpless but showed the way to geet how she can handle this case
Precap is interesting, waiting for next update



Thanks for replying...👏
IlaTanwar thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
Hi

I was overwhelmed by the people who have commented and given their reviews in big comments i came to know you guys really read it carefully and ask what you like or not. I will improve more from your suggestion please keep commenting and giving your comments in 4-5 lines like before. I will be highly obliged.

Thanks for commenting Guys. Love You for that...😃

With Regards
Dhruvika😃






Thanks for liking the part who likes my part i will be obliged if likers also comment on the part. Thanks a lot...😃



Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago
IlaTanwar thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
Part-7



Gautam(smiles)- aisa kuch nhi hai filhaal self grooming ka time nhi hai... so i am like this.. (slaps her head Geet- Ouch!)... Jyada dimaag chalaane ki jarurat nhi... Now go mom will be waiting...


Geet(rubbing her head)- Ok bhai...


[she went to have a dinner with Tejaswini and Geet informs about what she got to know.] [Bell Rang]


Tejaswini- Ek minute abhi aayi.


Geet- Namaste Aunty!


Tejaswini- Namaste Beta kahan thi tum abhi tak main toh kab se tumhra wait kar rhi hun?


Geet- woh main Inspector Gautam se milne gyi thi. (noticing the change).


Tejaswini(getting angry and ignoring)- Ok


Geet(changing the topic)- Aunty bhut bhook lagi hai khaane khaate hai.


Tejaswini(smiles)- Haan Beta! Main abhi lgaati hun tum fresh ho jao.


Geet- Ok Aunty!


[Geet comes after freshening up and she was having a dinner]


Geet- Wow Aunty! Kheer... My favourite... (and she started relishing it)... Aunty bhut yummmy hai muje ek aur bowl pass krnaaa...


Tejaswini(smiles)- Tumhe bhut pasand hai... Tumhre Uncle ko bhi pasand hai aur... (she reminded of Gautam but hold herself and ignore)... lo tumhra teesra bowl...


Geet(knowing about the ignorance)- Haan! Muje itna pasand hai ki main iske liye kuch b kar skti hun... agr koi muje rishwat dena chaahe naah... i mean ghr vaale jab bhi koi kaam krwaana hai toh unke liye kheer hi sabse best option hai... Iske liye toh kuch bhi...


Tejaswini(smiles at her antic)- Oh.. Toh itna pasand hai...


Geet- haan aur yeh sach mein bhut hi tasty hai...


Tejaswini(hesitate to ask about the case)- Voh... Geet! Case ke baare mein kuch pata chala... sab theekh hai...


Geet- hmm... Aunty ji ! abhi toh sirf yhi pata chala hai ki sab kahan se shuru hua aur kaise... Huh... (getting tensed)... Mr. Maan se baat huyi thi meri he told me from where it start. par Aunty ACP Sir ne kuch btaya nhi yaa kuch kaha ho ki hua kya tha?


Tejaswini- nhi unhone aisa kuch nhi kaha...(getting worried) even main jab milne gyi thi toh b unhone kuch nhi kaha...


Geet(thinking and making Tejaswini feel better)- Aunty Ji koi baat nhi ACP Sir jarur bahar aayenge dekhna sach kbhi jyada der tak chupta nhi ab toh Mr. Maan aur Gautam bhai b toh hai voh b meri help krne k liye maan gye hain...


Tejaswini(getting worried)- Tum Gautam! Se milne gyi thi...


Geet- Ji aunty voh unse b kuch case k baare mein jaan na tha isiliye... (with expectant eyes)... Aur unhone kaha he will help me... and aunty ji... sach kahun toh... Voh bilkul b theekh nhi hai... naah khaane ka pata hai kab karenge... sote b hai yaa nhi... bilkul b dhyan nhi rkhte...


Tejaswini(avoiding Gautam's topic)- Koi nhi Police officer hai seekh lega rehna...


Geet- Aunty! aap b toh yha akele rehti hain... kya vo yhaa...


Tejaswini(interrupted her and firmly told)- Nope Geet! Bas ek baat kaan khol kar sun lo Muje Gautam ka naam b nhi sun na hai...


Geet(bit her lips)- ok Aunty...


[After sometime]


Geet- Acha Aunty Ab main chlti hun raat b kaafi ho gyi hai


Tejaswini- ok! Beta, tum akele rehti ho... kyu na tum yha shift ho jaao yha main b akeli hun muje b company mil jaayegi...


Geet(smiles)- Aunty! Baat toh sahi hai... Main kal hi shift ho jaungi ... Acha ab main chlti hun... Good night...


Tejaswini- Good night beta


[Geet left after having dinner. Tomorrow, she went to meet ACP Jairaj, so that he will open up. She had a talk and got to know about some vital point that can be very helpful of her.]


[After shifting to Tejaswini's place she went to jail.]


Geet- Excuse Me!


Hawaldaar- Ji!


Geet- Kya main ACP Jairaj se mil skti hun. Main unki lawyer hun.


Hawaldaar (rudely)- Toh aap hain jo London se aayi hain.


Geet(angrily answered him)- Haan! Toh koi problem hai... Seedhe Seedhe bolo mil skti hun yaa tumhre sahab se baat karun...


Hawaldaar(getting scared)- Nahi! Tumhe yhi case mila tha.


Geet(rudely)- Haan! tumse mtlb. Jo bola hai utna hi karo...


Hawaldaar- Theekh hai... vha pe jaaayie ACP Sir b aate honge...


[She went there and waited for ACP Jairaj. He came after sometime.]


Geet(smiles)- Namaste Sir!


Jairaj- Namaste Beta! tum muje uncle bula skti hun vaise b yha abhi main ACP nhi hun... jab tak i am not coming out...


Geet- Ohk Uncle! Koi nhi uncle aap jald hi bahar honge yeh mera vaada hai... Aur aap kaise hain?


Jairaj(smiles)- Main theekh hun tumhra yhan kaise aana hua...


Geet- Voh uncle bas case ke silsile mein... (She explains what she got to know till from Maan and Gautam and told about Gautam's promise he can only help if you speaks actually what happen.).... Please uncle! Help us ek aap hi hain jo iss case mein madad kar skte hain... aapki chupi hi aapke against hai... Please atleast kuch toh hua hoga un dino... kuch aisa jo ajeeb ho pehle kabhi na hua ho...


Jairaj(geeting serious)- Hmmm... (taking deep breath he told everything he knows what went awkward with him but he was not sure that he is right in judging that or not)... Ye sab wo press conference k baad shuru hua... humein kuch lead mile the... voh bhut hi important evidences the jiske karan press conference rkhi gyi thi... Raat ko ghr jaane se pehle main apne cabin mein gya tha bas chai order ki thi... office mein bas main or Prakash hi the kyunki raat kaafi ho gyi thi or jyada kaam b nhi tha... or fir achaanak... (He was thinking how to tell this... if she doesn't believe him...)


Geet- Achanak kya hua uncle?


Jairaj(shrugged his doubt and told her)- Achaanak muje chakkar aane lage or pata nhi... uske baad jab hosh aaya (Agle din ki raat thi)... Main apne cabin mein hi tha... Maan suspend ho chuka tha or investigation chal rhi thi... or muje kuch yaad hi nhi uss pure din or raat ko kya hua mere saath... Maine prakash or driver se b pucha... but unhone aise react kiya jaise kuch hua hi nhi ho sab normal... jaise kuch nhi hua ho... even Tejaswini ne b nhi pucha ki pichli raat mein kyu nhi aaya or subah aur din mein kaha tha... Muje laga mere weham hoga... par... it's very strange main abhi b confuse hun...


Geet(Feeling Tensed and confuse after hearing)- Aise kaise ho skta hai uncle... (after lot of thinking) Kahin apke chai mein kuch milaya toh nhi tha... aapko chai kisne di thi...


Jairaj- Prakash ne... magar vo aisa kyu karega???


Geet- Ab yeh toh voh hi bta skta hai... ki aisa kyu kiya... but iske peeche jo b hai he is very clever... (thinking about the master mind).


Jairaj(getting tense about the case and Geet)- Pata nhi... bas sab kuch theekh ho jaaye... tum b kaha fass gyi iss case mein...


Geet(making him relax)- Uncle! Sabkuch theekh ho jaayega... ab toh bas yhi pata krna hai ki voh chai Prakash ne apko kyu di or in sab ke peeche hai kaun...


Jairaj- Hmm... Beta! (getting worried) Tum apna khayal rkhna yhan kadam kadam par tumhe gumrah krne vaale milenge...


Geet(smiles)- Theekh hai uncle main khayal rkhungi but vaise bhi muje jyada fikar krne ki jarurat nhi Mr. Maan and Gautam b taiyaar hain madad krne ke liye... (Jairaj was surprise listening about his son who is taking steps without caring about rules. Geet clarifies Gautam's point...) Haan! Gautam ne tbhi haan kahin jab mein koi strong proof laun... unke paas... but yeh b toh madad hi huyi naah... (listening to this Jairaj smiles and nodded his head about his son's attitude)...


Jairaj- Really! Maan toh muje apna gunehgaar maanta hoga...


Geet- Uncle! You don't know anything about this naah... and abhi toh case solve hona shuru hi hua hai... toh aise guilty mat feel kijiye...


Jairaj- Acha! Tum Gautam se milli thi kaise hai vo?


Geet- I went to his house.. He is very tensed... Apko bhut miss krte hain... upar se Aunty unhe maaf krne ko taiyaar nhi... vo sach mein bhut dukhi hai... itne tut gye hain voh apne apko guilty smjhte hain apki haalat ke... upar se unki voh Taarzan vaali look... wonder ki Police mein unpe koi dhyan nhi deta... ya koi bolta nhi... well bolenge b kaise... Volcano ki trh blast hone ko toh taiiyaar rehte hain... (Takes a deep breath remembering his outburst...)...


Jairaj(laughs at the last comment on tarzan look and about his son's short temper)- Well Taarzan look ka pata nhi... but... (getting serious)... Ye Tejaswini b naah kab smjhegi ki ye duty hai uski.. Usko aise react nhi krna chaaahiye... Ab isme Gautam ki kya glti... it's an order from higher authority... Gautam nhi toh koi aur sahi... Ab iss baat kaun smjhaaye...


Geet- Sir aap hi hai jo baat kar skte hai aunty se... apki baat vo kbhi nhi taalegi...


Jairaj- Voh nhi maanegi jaanta hun main usse... Gautam aur uski jid ik jaisi hai jab ek baar thaan lein toh itni asaani se koi unhe hila nhi skta ... Main bahar hota toh koi aur baat thi... Lekin dekta hun main iss matter mein kya kar skta hun...


Geet- Ok...


Hawaldaar- Apko jaana hoga.. Time ho Khthm ho gya hai milne ka...


Geet- Ok Uncle Main chalti hun kuch pta laga toh main apko inform krti rahungi...


Jairaj- Ok Beta! Apna or Tejaswini ka khayal rkhna aur ho sake toh Gautam se baat krte rehna Mere dil ko tasalli milti rahegi...


Geet- Ok Uncle ab main chlti hun. (Jairaj nodded)(Geet nodded to him and he left)...


[Geet left from there and she was thinking about the case.]




Precap:- Geet's confusion and Maan, Gautam and Geet decided to meet at Maan's place.... 😃











Part 8




Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


With Regards
Dhruvika

Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago


DO NOT COPY THIS POST AS THIS IS EXCLUSIVE TO INDIA FORUMS


Donnaa thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...
geet went to meet tejaswini n talked with her...
their convo regarding geet's kheer prem is cute...but tajaswini is not ready to hear goutam's name...
love this bold geet..she answered hawaldar perfectly...and meet with jairaj...
ermm this chai and praksh is fishy...did he really drugged jairaj?!!
jairaj understand what goutam did and why..its his duty...
lets see what goutam maan and geet will do now...
Edited by Donnaa - 9 years ago
khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n note! waiting 4 update!
mlaran852 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
very interesting update!!!!

geet moved in with her "aunt" and she went to visit in jail...

will she manage to bring back together gautum with his mom??
ambbiha thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome part. Geet tried to speak with acp and got some hints. May be someone have spiked his beverage.
fict thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting story. Different and well written. Geet trying to solve the mystery of the case. Noone knows her real identity except Maan but he doesn't know the truth about her being ACP's own daughter. Waiting for next update.

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

1 years ago

Something About You- MG || (Part 92|Page 111)- Last Part

Something About You Hi all Lovelies, I am starting to post a new wonderful story called 'Something About Love'. The credit for writing concept...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

1 years ago

FATE 3 Updated P 44 on Pg 73 / 31-7-2025

Introduction Small os or ss not decided yet... might be dependent on the response 🤔 I am not sure.

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

8 months ago

Something About Us- MG || (Part 50|Page 50)

Something About Us Hey All, starting a new story. It is a kind of reboot or version 2 of the story Something About You . Hope you will enjoy it...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

Tera Hone Laga Hoon #2 Chapter 74 pg 46 Updated 28/07 Tera Hone Laga Hoon #2 Chapter 74 pg 46 Updated 28/07

Chapter 52 Sameera watched as Maan arrived at her house. He hadn’t visited for a couple of days and Aavya had started asking when her new friend...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

5 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates~ New Part Updated~pg 45~02.08.25

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".