LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 69

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Posted: 8 years ago
wonderful parts
maan aur jai ka samna😆
maan have a lead now
interesting
now woh kon tha jo maan sy takraya tha
hmmm zaror kuch connection hy
maan have to manofy geet
waiting for next
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaa9

wonderful parts

maan aur jai ka samna😆
maan have a lead now
interesting
now woh kon tha jo maan sy takraya tha
hmmm zaror kuch connection hy
maan have to manofy geet
waiting for next
thanks for pm
cont soon



thanks for the comment dear...

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Posted: 8 years ago
wonderful update..thanks for pm for amazing FF with interesting concept & lovely prologue ...loved police & crime stories...loved it geet was angry on maan for beating her bro but he was unaware of it & geet went home by cursing both maan & jai...maan met the informer who told him about the solution to solve the case of geet which he knew & impressed with maan's talent he told his rate & gave a pic of a tattoo which maan remembered it was on jairaj's arm & sent pic to gautam to arrange meeting with his dad but also asked help to manofy geet ... hope kheer solve maaneets ruthna manaanaa...excited for update...!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: uluvmg

wonderful update..thanks for pm for amazing FF with interesting concept & lovely prologue ...loved police & crime stories...loved it geet was angry on maan for beating her bro but he was unaware of it & geet went home by cursing both maan & jai...maan met the informer who told him about the solution to solve the case of geet which he knew & impressed with maan's talent he told his rate & gave a pic of a tattoo which maan remembered it was on jairaj's arm & sent pic to gautam to arrange meeting with his dad but also asked help to manofy geet ... hope kheer solve maaneets ruthna manaanaa...excited for update...!!





I am so happy you read it and find it interested keep on commenting and loving it dear i am obliged to have you as a reader of my story,,,😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
waiting for a long time... update soon 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
New Character That Are Important for The Story



Viraj Khanna


He Is A Grey Character... He Was Poor And For Filling His Stomach He Started Robbing And One Time He Find A Person Who Was High Profile Criminal Who Disguise Himself Fraud The People And Then Kill Them That Person Trained Him In This Skill But There Was A Good Thing In Him That He Never Kills The People He Just Take The Money And Flees. Soon He Taking The Assignment From The High Profile People For Example Industrial People Take His Hep To Steal The Quotation And Pay Him He Is 28 Year Old... He Live As Middle Class Person And Donate The Massive Amount To Orphanage...




Rahul



He is 25 year old had a younger sister who is blind and needs an eye donor... ACP jairaj helps him with money and arranges one eye donor too He is a person who needs money and can do anything for it.. He is not that much educated to get a job so he do the things for police to get information of the criminals... He wanted to help ACP sir so he was trying to get the clue and he got it... he knew in and out of Police officer who is corrupt or not... and time to time he helps... any help any information he will have but at one cost pay him high and what he ask...





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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice character sketch...
Well my guess is correct that person is indeed following maan i think... I think he is helping the criminal ... but he doesnt like killing people... so have hope on him that he comes out of such things and help police to catch actual criminal

and coming to rahul i dont like him first but after reading his character sketch i think he is not that bad...
waiting for next part update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks 4 da pm n updated cs! fab cs!
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Posted: 8 years ago
both have their own reasons but if they get opportunity to become clean they grab that and help maan
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part - 21
Awesome update dear !
Loved it soo much !
Thanks for da pm !
Maan beating jai & he thought jai was teasing geet !
Maan & jai both r trying to protect geet from each other !
She was getting irritated seeing thm fighting like children 🤣
Finally geet cleared the mu !
Maan & jai apologized each other !
Now maan babu has to manofy his jungli billi !
Sorry for late comment.

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