LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Donnaa

nice update...
geet went to meet tejaswini n talked with her...
their convo regarding geet's kheer prem is cute...but tajaswini is not ready to hear goutam's name...
love this bold geet..she answered hawaldar perfectly...and meet with jairaj...
ermm this chai and praksh is fishy...

did he really drugged jairaj?!!
Answer:- Wait for the updates to know the answer... its too soon to reveall...😛

jairaj understand what goutam did and why..its his duty...
lets see what goutam maan and geet will do now...





Originally posted by: mlaran852

very interesting update!!!!

geet moved in with her "aunt" and she went to visit in jail...

will she manage to bring back together gautum with his mom??

Answer:- Well let's see what happens but right now it will be impossible till Jairaj is in jail...😳




Originally posted by: ambbiha

Awesome part. Geet tried to speak with acp and got some hints. May be someone have spiked his beverage.




Originally posted by: fict

Interesting story. Different and well written. Geet trying to solve the mystery of the case. Noone knows her real identity except Maan but he doesn't know the truth about her being ACP's own daughter. Waiting for next update.





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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pari1689

nice update...
hehe taarzan wala look poor gautam...
lgta hai us prakash ne Hi kuch gadbad ki h...
geet ko kheer kitni tasty lgi 3 bowl kha gyi...








Thanks for the Reply...😃

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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks for liking the Part 7...





Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-8






Jairaj- Ok Beta! Apna or Tejaswini ka khayal rkhna aur ho sake toh Gautam se baat krte rehna Mere dil ko tasalli milti rahegi...


Geet- Ok Uncle ab main chlti hun. (Jairaj nodded)


[Geet left from there and she was thinking about the case.]


Geet(Self Talk)- Prakash... Chai means ki sir ko behosh krke... fir kaam ko anjaam dena... but Tejaswini aunty ka Uncle se ye naah puchna ki aap raat ko pur din aaye kyu nhi kuch ajeeb se hi hai... uncle ka duplicate how is it possible itne time mein kaha se milega... kuch toh hai jo ajeeb hai par kya... yeh baat... agr Gautam bhai yaa Mr. Maan ko btau toh kya vo yakeen karenge...??? Phir b ek baar koshish krke dekhti hun...


Maan- Hey!... (feeling Weird) Hello... Hello Madam... Hello Miss Geet... [Maan came there and saw her going and try to say hello but Geet didn't reacted.. and she was moving ahead... Maan was trying to get her attention...]


Geet(getting out of her thoughts)- huh... Oh... Hii Mr. Maan aap yha kaise??


Maan- Hello Miss Geet! Kahan khoyi huyi thi app kabse bula rha hun apko aur ap hain ki koi response hi nhi...


Geet(feeling Confused)- Nahi aisi koi baat nhi case k silsile mein aayi thi so, dhyaan nhi diya...


Maan(getting her point and try to ease the situation)- Lo footi Kismat meri... Itna smart hone ka b koi fayda nhi... koi bhav hi nhi deta shayad galat profession mein aa gya main... (making expression as if he is sad)...


Geet(laughs)- Mr. Maan aap bhi naah... (diverts his mind to serious thing otherwise he will be in fun mode again)... Aisi baat nhi hai... aur aap yha kaise????


Maan(smiles)- Bas vhi puraana kaam abhi ek ko pkda hai bas usse hi hand over krne aaya tha main yha... tumhe dekha toh socha tumse hi mil lun...


Geet(getting serious)- Ohk... Toh busy...


Maan- haan... Kya karein Police vaalon ki life hoti hi aisi hai... busy busy and busy...


Geet- Woh toh hai... acha suno muje kuch btana tha voh ACP sir ke case ke baare mein... Jab free ho toh btana... Muje kuch pata krna hai... ki hua kya tha... i am very tensed and confuse... Gautam se b baat krti hun main...


Maan(getting serious)- ACP sir se... k baare mein kya?... Unse mili thi kya tum...???


Geet- Haan ! i met him right now he told me something... and i m really shocked right now... but i want to tell it to both of you... so that we can work on that...


Maan(thinking)- Hmmm... Chalo shukar hai aap ko toh kuch btaya ACP Sir ne vrna humaare se toh vo kuch bol hi nhi rhe... atleast pata toh chalega ki hua kya hai...


Inspector Aditya- Sir! Aapko bula rhe hai... [Inspector Aditya cam and asked Maan to come as he has been asked for it.]


Maan- Ok! Tum chalo main aata hun...


Inspector Aditya- OK Sir!


Maan- So, ab main chlta hun.. Tumhe aaj 5 pm milta hun... I will pick you from your home. then we will discuss about it... Please mana mat krna... Kyuki we are meeting at my house i will pick you and drop you...


Geet(smiles)- Ok... But i have shifted to Gautam's house as Aunty ji insisted... so you have to pick me from that.


Maan- Ok that's good... I will pick you from there... I will tell Gautam to reach at my home... we will have dinner in my house so don't worry... as i think it will take time... so, vahin baat krte hain ok...


Geet- Ok See ya at 5 then...Bye


Maan- Bye...


[Geet leaves]


Maan(calls Gautam)- Hello Gautam! what's up?


Gautam- Hello Maan! Nothing as usual busy in case... aur tum sunao kaise yaad kiya aaj?


Maan- Bas yhi btana tha Geet met your father... he told something about the case and Geet wants to discuss it with us. So, you have to reach at my place at 5.


Gautam- Kya Dad opened up about the case that's great.. I and Geet will be there... at 5...


Maan(interuppting)- Actually Gautam! Geet is coming with me you don't have to worry about her... You just reach there... ok...


Gautam(feeling protective and hesitatingly)- aah... Okk... I will be there and take care...


Maan- Yeah sure...


[They cut the call and got busy with there respective cases. In the meanwhile, Geet reached her house where she is living and had a talk with Tejaswini.]


Tejaswini- lo Aa gyi itni der kahan lga di thi.


Geet- Yeah Aunty bas vhi kaam ke chakkar mein bas. Aunty! Bas khaane ko milega bhut bhook lag rhi hai...


Tejaswini(smiles at her antic)- Ok lunch ready hai main lgwaati hun tum freshen up ho jao tab tak...


Geet- Ok Aunty.


[At Lunch]


Tejaswini- Kaise hain tumhre uncle?


Geet- Uncle ache hain but naraaz hain aapse?


Tejaswini- Naraaz mere se kyu?


Geet(misheviously)- Kyuki maine apki complaint ki hai ki aap apna khayal bilkul nhi rkhti isiliye...


Tejaswini(laughs)- Hahahahaaa... Acha baba aage se rkhungi... Uncle ki informer... Acha kuch bola unhone kuch bola case se related...


Geet(getting serious)- Aunty! Haan btaya toh sahi but itna kuch khaas nhi bas usike liye main aaj shaam ko Mr. Maan ke ghar pe jaungi...


Tejaswini(Worriedly)- Ok beta but ghar jldi aa jaana.


Geet- Ok Aunty vaise main dinner krke hi aungi voh Mr. Maan ne kaha tha...


Tejaswini- ok... But jldi aane ki koshish krna (teasingly)... Vaise ajkal badi dosti shoshti ho rhi hai Mr. Maan... se Baat kya hai????


Geet(feeling flustered)- aisa kuch b nhi hai Aunty voh toh bas case ke baare mein...


Tejaswini(Laughs)- It's ok...


Geet- Acha Aunty! Jo Press conference huyi thi jisme ACP sir ne yeh btaya tha ki unhe evidences mile hain toh uske baad ACP sir ghr aaye the...


Tejaswini- Haan! voh roz aate the toh par bhut late kbhi kbhi toh itne ki muje pata nhi nhi chlta tha ki voh aaye b hai yaa nhi...


Geet(Self Talk)- Ajeeb baat hain... How is it possible agar Uncle behosh the toh woh ghr pe b aate the par kaise??? It's too complicated...


[Tejaswini went for the household chore]


[In the meanwhile, Bell rang]


Tejaswini- Geet! Door Khona aur dekho jara kaun hai?? Mujhe todha kaam hai...


Geet- Ok


[She opens the door]


Maan- Hello! huh.. (frowns)... isse kya hua yeh response kyu nhi de rhi... [He enters the house..] Hello... Ummh... Hello...


Geet(deeply in thoughts)- But how is it possi... Aaahh... Oh. Sorry for that Maan... [She was thinking suddenly she turns. Maaan was standing just behind her. when she turns she just collides with him making both of them stumbles but Maan grabbed her hand and makes her stable.]


Maan- Miss Geet! Todha toh apne aas paas ka khayal rkhna chaahiye...


Geet- Aap kab aaye?


Maan(raised his brows)- Abhi abhi... Tumne hi toh gate khola... OH... Sorry... [Suddenly he realised he is holding her hand. He leaves her hand and apologised to her] ... Sorry voh maine dhyaan nhi diyaa... (feeling embarrassed)... Vaise ajkal tumhra dhyan rehta kahan hai?


Geet- I am so sorry Mr. Maan...




Precap: Maan and Geet in Maan's home... 😃









Part 9


Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


With Regards
Dhruvika



Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
interesting update...
this case is getting more and more interesting...
its really strange that jairaj was senseless and nobody know about it...even tajaswini didnt know about it...some one is playing with lots of planning...
geet is so lost that she didnt even notice maan...maan is as usual flirting and making the situation easy ...
aahaa goutam is feeling protective toward geet...jab pata chalega she is his sister tab kya karega bechara maan 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...some one is there jisne jairaj ko bhot planning se fasaya h...
geet case m bhot khoyi hui h use apne aas pass kuch pta hi nhi...Hope maaneet nd gautam soon find evidence that helps them to save jairaj...
Edited by pari1689 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Quite a lighter update for relaxing a bit amidst all the tension and despair.
Loved this calculative geet, overexerting herself for the case.
Her determination and dedication will help her a lot in finding the missing pieces of the puzzle.
Maan , as usual flirting to the fullest and is utilising every bit of opportunity he is getting and this is so much needed to ease the current situation a bit. Kitna punctual hai yeh banda!!!! He went to pick up geet but was welcomed in quite a different manner by deep thinking and diverted geet, who couldn't even conceive his presence at first. He he.
After quite sometime, saw tejaswini behaving a little normal while she talked to maan and also stopped their fight.
Its good that the trio maan geet and gautam r coming closer becoz of the case.
Gautam protectiveness touches the heart. What is gonna happen when he gets to know geet's real identity?? And what will be the reaction of certain maan , will be worth reading.
Usse toh aur papad belne honge. He he he.
The case is getting more and more intriguing. Somebody played the cards to frame jairaj meticulously. It will not be that easy to get hold of him, it seems.
Many questions need answers.
Waiting for further updates.
Do cont soon and thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting update
Geet met ACP... Wants to discuss the matter with maan n gautam
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting hoti ja hrahi hai story
Uff kya hua hoga

Grwat start geet chalo kuch kafi to mili

Hope trio will slove the case jaldi

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