LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018

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Gudiyeet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Kabir was shcoked watching news

Jairaj arresteted

Geet ask her father he know him

But kabir no to her he cant face her daughter

Geet sensed something about kabir worried face

Nice update

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nadia khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

lovely update so kabir is shocked to know abt jairaj he refuses to believe that he could do something like this geet was suspicious that her dad was supporting jai as if he knows him kabir is worried for jai there is some truth that geets parents hid from her they r scared she will not forgive him jairaj has some relation with geet which she dosent know abt her dad and geet will go india to find out abt the truth that jairaj has been framed

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

very nice start

seems interesting

continue soon

congrats for first attempt to write

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Heema Somani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Amazing update

kabir is shocked watching the news

jairaj is arrested

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preetidhawan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Awesome Start and Awesome Storyline

Geet,s father is too much worried for his friend and want to meet him and help him , Geet getting suspicious about his father,s behaviour

Eagerly waiting for next

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pari_DD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

amazing strt waitin for d nxt...

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Thnx for the Reply

Originally posted by: priya_21
VERY NICE START
I LIKE TO SEE GEET IN LAWYER

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi superb start! Kabir stunned! Geet questions him! he denies he knows Jairaj bt he does! they cannot tell her the truth

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Yup truth but not so soon...😃

thnx for reply

Originally posted by: taahir004
A Fantastic Start

Kabir is concerned for Jairaj he believes his friend cannot be corrupted

Malini wants that she and Kabir tell Geet the truth

Originally posted by: Donnaa
part 1
nice start...
kabir is worried watching the news of jairaj's arrest...and he is very confident that jairaj is innocent...
so geet didnt know about being handa in real...n she is suspicious seeing her father worry too much for an unknown person...
looks like time for truth...but they are scared of geet's reaction...

Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Thnx for the reply

Originally posted by: anuradha.nandam
Beautiful theme too many characters...thoda samajna mushkil oras per o.kchalths hsi. Dekhna pafega hum kaise dtory ko leaf karthe ho. Nice do pm me if it is oy a problem to u. And cogrstes go u for ur start. Welcome to the forum. U will rock. All the best

Originally posted by: envi
Kabir was shcoked watching news
Jairaj arresteted
Geet ask her father he know him
But kabir no to her he cant face her daughter
Geet sensed something about kabir worried face
Nice update

Originally posted by: aparna3011
very nice start
seems interesting
continue soon

congrats for first attempt to write

Originally posted by: heemasomani
Amazing update
kabir is shocked watching the news
jairaj is arrested

Originally posted by: preetidhawan
Awesome Start and Awesome Storyline
Geet,s father is too much worried for his friend and want to meet him and help him , Geet getting suspicious about his father,s behaviour
Eagerly waiting for next