LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 39

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hi there! waiting 4 an update!!
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Hey Thanks who had commented on previous part



I am not updating the list but those who had commented i m obliged those who have liked thanks for appreciating i will be obliged if you comment too...



With Regards
Dhruvika
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Part 14




Tejaswini(raising her hand)- Bas Gautam! Main Bahas nhi krna chaahti Tum bas usse dur rehna...


Gautam(breaking down)- Thik hai... Maa Jaisa aap chaaho kar lo apni marzii...


[He furiously left from there...]


[Geet wake up in the morning...]


Geet- Ummmhhh... Where am I?


[She find herself in her room and feels happy that Gautam came her to drop inside the house and thinks he must be here...]


Tejaswini- Good Morning bcha...


Geet(with happy voice)- Good Morning...


Tejaswini- Toh uth gyi app... Kaisi aayi neend...


Geet(with expectant eyes)- Voh Aunty Main yha kaise?


Tejaswini- Gautam leke aaya tha yahaan...


Geet(beemed with happiness)- Really voh yhin pe hain...


Tejaswini(furiously)- Nahii...


Geet(Her Face fell)- Ok... (with low voice)


Tejaswini- Chalo fresh ho jao Main naashta lgaati hun... (Diverting the topic...)


Geet- OK...


[She went for freshen up... Meanwhile Geet's phone rang..]


Geet(Picks up the call)- Hello!


Mayank- Hello! Kya aap Geet Madam bol rhi hain?


Geet- Yes! Aap kaun?


Mayank- Madam! Main sub inspector Mayank Bol rha hun Gautam Sir ne kaha tha ki prakash ki interrogation ki arrangment krne k liye...


Geet- Haan! Kab mil skti hun main?


Mayank- Aap abhi aa jaaye maine arrangement kar di hai...


Geet- Ohk Main aati hun i will be there in half an hour


Mayank- Ok Madam


[She left for the police station at police station]


Mayank- Geet Madam!


Geet- Yes! You are Mayank????


Mayank- Yeah... Just wait here for 5 minutes i will bring prakash in interrogation room...


Geet(looking for Gautam)- Ok but Inspector Gautam kahan hai? Voh nhi aayenge aaj??


Mayank(making an excuse)- Ummmhhh... Sir, abhi kisi kaam se bahar gye hain...


Geet(feeling disheartened)- Ok...


[Mayank leaves from there to the main room...]


Mayank- Sir Geet Madam is here. I have told her to wait in the interrogation room...


Gautam- Theekh hai! Mayank suno uska dhyan rkhna and usse prakash k saath akela mat chodna uske saath hi rehna main yhan se video mein sab dekh sun rha hun par fir bhi usse akela mat chodna ok... or haan muje inform krte rehna main yhin hun...


Mayank(feeling weird)- Sir! app unse nhi milenge...


Gautam(feeling furious)- Nahii...


Mayank- But sir...


Gautam(ordering him)- Bas jo bola hai vhi karo...


Mayank- Ji Sir... (and left from there)


Mayank- Geet Madam! Chaliye... I will take you to the interrogation room...


Geet- Ok...


Mayank- He is here... (Tells to Prakash)... Tumse jo pucha jaaye vhi jwaab dena... OK...


Prakash- huh... Baar baar puchne se sach badal nhi jaayega...


Geet(raising her eyebrows)- Oh... Par muje kuch pata chala hai... ki tum ACP sir ko chai dete ho...


Prakash(feeling weird)- Haan Toh sbhi dete hain... aur Sir jab tensed hote hain toh chai lete hai...


Geet- Toh tumne Press confrence ki raat bhi di hogi right??


Prakash- Haan di thi isme bura kya hai... unhone maangi toh maine di thi...


Geet(moving little bit ahead)- Oh toh fir tumne hi ACP sir ke chai mein drug milaayi hogi aur ussi ke karan sir behosh huye honge... aur tumne hi evidences ko destroy kiya aur naam ACP sir pe dall diya right...


Prakash(Flabbergasted)- Yeh tum kya keh rhi ho...


Geet(Adamantly)- Vahi jo tumne suna ki tumne hi drug diya ACP sir ko evidences ko destroy kiya...


Prakash(shocked and feeling sweaty)- Maine maine kuch nhi kiya hai... Main kyu krne laga aisa...


Geet- Chai tumne hi di thi...


Prakash- Haan Maine hi di thi magar maine usme kuch nhi milaaya tha...


Geet- Acha tumne nhi kiya toh kisne kiya hai tum hi rehte ho ACP Sir ke saath...


Prakash- Mujhe nhi pata (not meeting her eyes...)


Geet- Changing the topic... Acha Chai laate kahan se ho??


Prakash- Office ke bahar hi Thella hai vhan se...


Geet- Oh... Fir toh tum Chai vaale ko pehchaan loge right...


Prakash- Haan...


Geet- Mayank!... Jara ACP Sir k office k bahar jo Chai vaala thella lgaata hai usse bulaake laana... (Geet ordered Mayank to bring the Chai vaala...)


Mayank- Ok Madam! Main abhi bolta hun usse laane ko...


[Mayank told Hawaldaar Ramesh to bring the chai vaala...]



Precap:- Reveleation of Chai vaala and Gautam at his own house ;)...




Part 13


Part 15



Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


With Regards
Dhruvika


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Posted: 8 years ago
Chai bol bol ke ..
Mann me laalach ..
kara diya ..
but mere chai ko
spike mat karna koi ...
Hehe ..
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Originally posted by: nitika20

Chai bol bol ke ..
Mann me laalach ..
kara diya ..
but mere chai ko
spike mat karna koi ...
Hehe ..



heheheee... lolzz loyal readers k saath koi prob nhi hai spike no way but irregular readers ko pnga hoga...
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Posted: 8 years ago
gr8 part..
cont.soon

hope they get some lead to solve the case

thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update
y gautum is not coming in front of geet
nd chai wala kon hai
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Uff Gautam will not meet geet..poor him

Maan kaha hai...
I miss him here...
Chai hai full part mein mannet seh zyada yaar...
Waiting for next

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