LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018

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nadia khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

chapter 6 lovely update maan drops geet though she denies but still maan teasing geet he finally forced to drop her seems all r out to get her geet is worried for her dad as she is confused jairaj is innocent or not she is scared of the consequences maan thinking abt geet she met gautam wanted to talk to witnbess but gautam is being adamant geet wants to make sure he is telling the truth but gautam wants to go by the book geet is trying to make him understand gautam burts out geet explains him its important gautam misses his mom geet assures him she is fine will take time but will forgave him as he is just doing his job geet called gautam as her bhai let me gyuess they r bro sis for real loved their bonding

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

Nice Update

Maan loves teasing geet and even enjoy it, loved it

Eagerly waiting for next

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: pari1689
nice update...
uff maaneet both are fighting like kids...

Originally posted by: crazyfriends007
Awesome update

Originally posted by: suwaibah
tom and jerry lgte hain maaneet larte hue...
short update😕😕...

Originally posted by: Donnaa
nice update...
lol full of maaneet nokjhok...
jungli billi and rakshak :P
bechara naam geet ne ache khase hero ko rakshas bana diya ...
love it..

Originally posted by: maansee
Lovely cute fight

Originally posted by: deep002
Fabulous updates dear, loved maan and geet is talk

Originally posted by: Alamelu
Aww they hardly know each other and have started fighting with each ... looks like maan loves annoying geet and getting reaction from her...gautam mom sounds like dadi ...cute update

Originally posted by: dreamy
maneet fighting like kids

Originally posted by: fict
Lovely update. Geet was lost thinking about the case and Maan started teasing her but their fight was cute.
Thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: --GOLD--
Nice 😊

Originally posted by: aparna3011
very nice update
maan is teasing geet

Thanks for replying...😃

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: swapna.p
nice update..
maan is teasing geet..
waiting for next update..

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n great update! well written! Maaneet argue! Tejaswini stops them! Maaneet talk! update soon

Originally posted by: pari_DD
amazing updte... when maan came geet lost somewhere else maan stated teasing he started annoying he by calling miss geet they fighting like kids jungleebilli d rakshas.
waiting fir d nxt updte..

Originally posted by: -padmarao-
Nice update
Maaneet ka tu tu mein mein... Too good
Waiting for maaneet n gautam discussion

Originally posted by: kabslocks
Nice update. Maan came to take Geet with him. Geet is lost in her own thoughts. They start their nok-jhok.

Originally posted by: nakh5683
chapter 6 lovely update maan drops geet though she denies but still maan teasing geet he finally forced to drop her seems all r out to get her geet is worried for her dad as she is confused jairaj is innocent or not she is scared of the consequences maan thinking abt geet she met gautam wanted to talk to witnbess but gautam is being adamant geet wants to make sure he is telling the truth but gautam wants to go by the book geet is trying to make him understand gautam burts out geet explains him its important gautam misses his mom geet assures him she is fine will take time but will forgave him as he is just doing his job geet called gautam as her bhai let me gyuess they r bro sis for real loved their bonding

Originally posted by: preetidhawan
Nice Update
Maan loves teasing geet and even enjoy it, loved it
Eagerly waiting for next

Thanks for replying😃

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: utsha
Really a fun filled and lively update.
Liked it thoroughly.
Loved the bickerings of maan and geet.
Each and every words they used against each other were hilarious.
They even started calling each other by nicknames.
Good choice done by u again.
Thank you... i liked it too😳☺️
Maan was clearly disappointed by the name given to him and

I bet he will take revenge on geet for calling him rakshas, quite soon.

Well depends on circumstances whether he gets chance... or not... i will make sure it will be unique too probably in my style...😳☺️

What I liked most is that, both in spite of being so childish don't take even a fraction of a sec to get changed into serious , responsible roles when needed. Both of them r so balanced and u have portrayed these shades of characters so efficiently dear. U did an appreciable job. Actually this update gave an essence of maaneet.
Well, these two didn't even leave the poor soul gautam and maybe in sometime they will manage to reduce some of his loneliness and pain as they did with tejaswini.
Anyways, waiting for the meeting of the trio and their convo.

What plan will they hatch to uncover the culprits???

I am still working on it... and soon i will coming on that too...😳☺️

And the precap seemed too interesting.

A new entry is always welcome as long as he or she brings a new perspective with him or her. Hope this person will be resourceful enough so that he/she can help the trio in solving the case .

I don't the new character is resourceful or not but it will surely brings a new prespective...😳☺️

Do cont soon dear.😳

Suspense is going over board. He he. Its not that I don't like it. In fact I love it too too much and ur story too.

Thanks for replying😃

Originally posted by: taahir004
Another Fantastic Update

When Geet is in deep thoughts she actually forgets surroundings and for some reason I like it especially when Maan is around he teases her Geet and Maan both want the other to just call on their names but both stubborn and calls either Miss Geet or Mr Maan .
they already have set a nice comfortable friendly bond between them , I totally enjoy their teasing and little banters . the highlight for me about Maan and Geet is that they have establish trust between them in this short span of time .

Thanks for replying thoroughly liked your explainatio i got to know that you are getting the exact feel that i want my reader to get thanks for sharing i would also like to know my flaws too according to you😃😃😃

with regards
dhruvika

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Hii

Thanks for replying and commenting on my story i am eagerly waited for your comments and liked it and have replied to... Thanks for your appreciation... I am sorry to update my story late as i am busy with job as computer teacher and these days exams session is started so i am busy with it... So, kindly do visit it and read and comment atleast in 3-4 lines... I will be highly obliged to you...

Thank You

With Regards

Dhruvika😃

Thanks for liking my story😃😃😃

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Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Part-10

Maan(self talk)- Hmmm... Chalo shukar hai ladne ke bahaane tumne muje Maan toh bulaya vrna Mr Maan sunte sunte pak gya tha... Aur voh kya tha Rakshash... iska khaamyaaza toh chukana padega... ache khaase dashing hero ko koi aise kehta hai...

Geet(hearing his self talk)- Kya?

Maan(rolls his eyes)- Kuch nhi Chalte hain vrna sach mein Gautam se humaari remand lagegi... usse wait krna pasand nhi...

Geet(Smiles)- Hmmm... Haan sach mein vrna Gautam naam ka volcano fatta toh rokna mushkil ho jaayega... (Both of them laugh out loud at the remark)

[They went from their.]

Maan(stopping the car)- Lo pahunch gye... [They reached at Maan's home. They were in drawing hall standing there waiting for Gautam.]. So, What you want to tell us...

Geet- Have you informed Gautam?

Maan- Yeah! I have... aata hi hoga

[They were talking Lalita khurana Maan's mother enters their]

Lalita Khurana- Maan tum kab aaye?

Maan- Maa! Bas abhi abhi... Isse milo yeh hai Geet maine btaya tha na apko... (signals about his roll model)... and Geet yeh meri mom hai...

Geet(smiles)- Namaste Aunty

Lalita- Namste bete! Kaisi ho? I hope apko India pasand aa rha hoga...

Geet- Ji Aunty ! Its really a nice place i really want to be here... and Mr Maan is also here for helping me...

Lalita(smiles)- I hope yeh jyada pareshaan naa krta ho...

Maan(feels embarrass)- Maa... Aap bhi naah

Geet- Nahi aunty aisa kuch nhi hai... Yeh really main ache hain...

Lalita(laughs)- It's ok beta... Maan tumhre liye surprise hain koi aaya hai tumse milne... maine tumhre room bola hai wait krne ko tum Geet ko leke vhi chale jao Gautam ko b vhi bhej dungi ok... [after saying this his mother left]...

Maan- Ok Mom... (after sometime)... Lo gautam bhi aa gya... Hii Gautam

Gautam- Hi Maan! I hope i am not late vo actually case ke silsile mein todha late ho gya...

Maan- Arre nahi yaar itna sab chlta hai... pahunch gya naah... bas yhi kaafi hai...

Gautam(Saw Geet)- Hello Geet! Toh dad ne kya btaya...

Geet- Hello Gautam! voh... actually...

Maan(interrupting)- Tum log yhi shuru ho gye... upar mere room mein chalo vha krte hain baat vaise b aur koi b aaya hai yha usse b milna hai... so discussion will be held in my room not here...

Geet and Gautam- Jaisi apki mrzi...

Maan(letting them in)- Come in... Don't be shy...

Shikha(shouts)- Hii Maaan... What's up? [Suddenly She shouts and hugs him... Geet was surprised and doesn't get what happened and Gautam as usual roll his eyes seeing her antics]

Maan(flabbergasted and shocked)- Hii Shikha... Nothing u tell and how's you?

Shikha- I am fine aur tum btao kya kar rhe ho ajkal naa phone naa kuch.. Tum aur Gautam toh aise gayab huye ki... Hey what a surprise... Hiii Gautam! Tum yha kaise??? aakhir baat kya hai... jo tum log yha pe ikhtee... [Suddenly, noticing Gautam and hugs him too...]...

Gautam(smiles)- Nothing bas case ki silsile mein hi aaye the...

Shikha- Oh... [her eyes fell on Geet..] umm... Well guys... koi muje inse b introduce kraayega...

Maan(taking a sigh of relief)- Wait Miss Express hum logon ko bhaitne ka mauka toh do... yaa muje mere ghr ke darwaaze pe hi saari baat krni padegi... [They moved and settles in couch]...

Maan- Well She is Geet Deshmukh.. and Geet she is Shikha meri childhood friend aur Mere sir ka dard...Ouch... (Shikha whacked him for saying this...) Oops sorry main bhool gya tha tum yha pe ho... (and laughs)... [Geet smiles seeing their friendship]

Shikha(ignoring him)- Hii Geet! iski baaton pe jyada dhyaan mat do yeh aisa hi hai... ik sarfira... todha dur hi rehna vrna tumhe b apne jaisa bna dega... (listening to this Geet laughs out loud)...

[Maan got spell bound listening to her laughs... but broke his trance when Geet spoke]

Geet(controlling her laughs)- Hi Shikha... Aur tum kya krti ho?

Shikha- Nothing i just own a NGO and busy with NGO work...

Geet- Wow that's good and i will love to know about your NGO much more...

Shikha- Yeah sure do visit it's a nice place and bche b khush honge...

Geet- Yeah absolutely i will surely come...

Gautam(interuppting their chatting session)- Guys, I think agr tumhri baatein ho gyi ho toh jiske liye aaye hain vo baat karein...

Maan(getting the situation)- Sure... Haan Geet! You waaannn...

Shikha(interrupted him)- Yeah! main toh btana bhool hi gyi thi main kyu aayi thi actually i heard about the news regarding ACP Jairaj about a new lawyer is appointed for him...

[Everyone looks here and there listening to her...]

Precap- Case discussion and Shikha and Geet's outbursts... :) and someone is getting Jealous...

Part 9

Part 11

Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...

With Regards

Dhruvika

Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago

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