LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 59

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Roopaamrutha

Nice one ... Jai is very funny ... He loves his sister to the core ...Geet is very happy by seeing her brother... One doubt does jai know that Geet is not his real sister or not ??? Loved the convo of bro nd sis .. waiting for next one ... Update soon



No Jai doesn't know Geet too doesn't know and he is baby brother of Geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice part
love the bond of geet and jai
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their conversation like it!
lagta hy jai ka mentor kain maan na ho
lovely update
waiting for next
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cont soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaa9

nice part

love the bond of geet and jai
mastani😆
their conversation like it!
lagta hy jai ka mentor kain maan na ho
lovely update
waiting for next
thanks for pm
cont soon


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse

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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh my Gosh !!! that was such a spunky prank played by Jai just awesome I loved it
but what now some punched him too maybe Gautum or Maan lets see
I like that though the stranger was following Geet she did not show any fear and this fact most girls
go wrong by fearing and that's when they get themselves further into a problem but here Geet wanted to slap the guy okay that always not work because its simply for a man to grab at a lady's hand and stop her completely but because it was Jai he managed to take the beating his sister showed on him then like a comdian singing but I like that it shows that Geet and Jai really have a good bond between them
is Jai also working on the same case Geet is working on
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Oh my Gosh !!! that was such a spunky prank played by Jai just awesome I loved it
but what now some punched him too maybe Gautum or Maan lets see
I like that though the stranger was following Geet she did not show any fear and this fact most girls
go wrong by fearing and that's when they get themselves further into a problem but here Geet wanted to slap the guy okay that always not work because its simply for a man to grab at a lady's hand and stop her completely but because it was Jai he managed to take the beating his sister showed on him then like a comdian singing but I like that it shows that Geet and Jai really have a good bond between them
is Jai also working on the same case Geet is working on


I am glad Taahir you liked the way i portrayed the scene... Yeah they share a good bond... Taahir no Jai is not solving the same case as Jai had mention it was solved by Jairaj and Jairaj hasn't solved this and previous case in which he was charged against corruption... So, it's an old case of Jairaj which he has solved in his younger days...



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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 21




Jai- Vaise Mastaani! Tujhe koi mil toh nhi gya... voh kya hai na dad and mom pareshaan ho gye hain tujhse... soch rhe jald se jald vida kar de... {Vaise Mastaani! Did you not Find anyone? It's because Mom and Dad are irritated with you and they are thinking to marry you off}


Geet- Hat... Jai (lightly Punched him) tujhe vida karenge hum mujhe nhi... smjha... {Hat... Jai... (lightly punched him) We will marry you off not me understand}


Jai - Acha baba! ab main chlta hun. {Ok Dear! I have to leave now}


[Suddenly, he got punched on his face and landed on ground]


[Geet was horrified seeing Jai got punched and he was lying on the ground. Before she had reacted the person started beating him without stopping. Coming to her senses she try to drag him away from Jai. She was able to drag the person away and saw furious Maan.]


Maan - Geet! Ik Minute bas isse main din mein taare dikhata hun. Jo yeh tumhe ched rha tha. Aise log ko sirf mukke or laaton ki bhasha hi smjh aati hai. Tumhe toh kya aaj ke baad kisiko bhi nhi chedega yeh. {Geet! Wait for a minute I will make him see stars in broad daylight for teasing you. These kind of people only understand the the language of kicks and punches. He will not tease not you only but the girls too from now on}


Geet (worrying) - Meri Baat Suno Ik minute ke liye... {For a minute just listem to me}


[Before she can tell. Jai already have punched him on the face. Geet was scared and horrified to react. She was so much in dilemma how to stop them from fighting.]


Jai - Stay away from her. I know what kind of people are you and Don't interfere between us without knowing us. I know Indians have a tendency to judge people without knowing. She is naive but not me. So, stay away from her.


[Geet was horrified listening to Jai because she knew no matter what you can't infuriate the other people about their country. Before she had stopped Jai for doing any damage Maan had grabbed his collar]


Maan(with almost red eyes) - What just you say? It is my business until she is here. It is my business (narrowing his eyes) It is you who had cause disruption and causing trouble for her and mind it tum abhi ke abhi jail jaane vaale ho jo yeh harkat ki hai. Tum soch bhi nhi skte ki main tumhra kya haal krne vaala hun. Maan Khurana Naam hai mera. {What just you say? It is my business until she is here. It is my business (narrowing his eyes) It is you who had cause disruption and causing trouble for her and mind it you are going to jail right now the act you have done right now. You don't have any idea what will I do with you? My name is Maan Khurana.}


Jai - Maan ho yaa Abhimaan I don't care... tumse main darta nhi and maine aisa koi kaam nhi kiya jisse ki tum muje jail mein daal sako.{Whatever You are Maan or Abhimaan I don't Care... I am not afraid of you and I haven't done anything that you will put me in jail.}


Maan(smirking) - Acha! Abhi jo tum isse ched rahe the vo kya tha... I saw you with my own eyes... the way you were following her. she was telling you to stay away and her running away and then she started beating you and then the punch... haan uska punch todha dheere se laga hoga mere se kam aur rhi baat Jail ki voh toh tum jaake hi rahoge...{Really! what were you doing with her what was that?I saw you with my own eyes... the way you were following her. she was telling you to stay away and her running away and then she started beating you and then the punch...Yes, And her punch, I agree that her punch would have hit you lighter than me and for the jail that you have to go there}


Jai - Aur Voh kaun bhejega tum... huh... Pehle apni shakal aayine mein dekh fir mujhe draana... {And who will send me to jail you... huh first see your face in mirror then try to afraid me...}


[Geet was getting irritated seeing them fighting like children and interfered between them.]


Geet(highly irritated from both of them) - Enough Already, Bahut tamasha kar chuke tum log. Abhi ke Abhi ek dusre ka collar chodo. (They were Still not listening to her) Maine kaha now. {Enough Already, You have created enough drama. Leave the collars of each other right now (They were Still not listening to her) I said right now}


[Seeing no option both of them leave each other]


Maan & Jai- Dekho Geet/Mastani... {Listen Geet/Mastani}


[Both look at each other and glaring at each other]


Geet - Ab Main bolungi tum log sunoge smjhe tum log. Mr. Maan yeh mera bhai Jai Deshmukh hai maine btaya tha naa apko. He had taken the exam of IPS and he had cleared it. He was training at Dehradun but yaha sirf kuch dino ke liye aaya tha...(Maan listening to this closed his eyes thinking about the blunder he had did). Yaha pe training ke liye ik drill chal rhi thi jisme yeh log ek purana case solve kar rahe hain aur maharaj ko mere se prank khelne mein maza aata hai toh janaab apna quota pura kar rhe the jisse aapne galat smjh liya. (Looking toward Jai) Aur Jai yeh Inspector Maan Khurana hai from Crime Branch, Mumbai, aur tumhare senior (Jai closes his eyes listening to the blunder he had done without knowing he had messed with his senior) yaha ke jaane maane police inspector hain. Aur meri case mein madad kar rahe hain. Aur ab mujhe lagta hai tum dono ko kya krna chaahiye and I am waiting for apologies from both of you guys without any argument. {Now, I will speak and you both guys will listen understand! Mr. Maan He is Jai Deshmukh my brother I have told you earlier. He had taken the exam of IPS and he had cleared it. He was training at Dehradun but He is here for sometime...(Maan listening to this closed his eyes thinking about the blunder he had did) He is here for training and there is drill going on in which they are trying to solve the previous case and His Highness loves to play prank with me so he was completing his quota and you understand that thing wrong. (Looking toward Jai) And Jai he is Inspector Maan Khurana from Crime Branch, Mumbai and your senior (Jai closes his eyes listening to the blunder he had done without knowing he had messed with his senior) He is a well known police officer here. He is helping me in my case and I am waiting for apologies from both of you guys without any argument.}


Jai & Maan- Sorry...


Geet (finally getting relieved) - I guess iske baad koi misunderstanding nhi hogi. {I guess now there would be no misunderstanding.}


Jai - Mastani! (For making the atmosphere light but one glare of Geet) Ok... Geetu I am sorry yaar Vaise shuruat inhone ki thi. Anyway (Looking toward Maan) Nice to meet you Sir. Galatfaimi k liye I am sorry afterall I am your junior. {Mastani! (For making the atmosphere light but one glare of Geet) Ok... Geetu I am sorry... And by the way He started it. Anyway (Looking toward Maan) Nice to meet you Sir. For misunderstanding I am Sorry Afterall I am your Junior.}


Maan - Same Here, Vaise galti meri thi bina soche smjhe react kar diya maine... vaise yaha iss tarah?? {Same Here, Actually Fault was mine I reacted without knowing... by the way you are here and like this????}


[Finally Jai removed his some of the extra material ]


Jai - Bas Mera jo Trainer hai todha sanki hai socha yaha pe pehle din masti karenge ghumenge chill karenge par usse humaari khushi pasand nhi hai naa isiliye ik purana case diya hua tha use hi solve kar rhe hain. (seeing the time) Acha ab main chlta hun mera clue wait kar rha hai voh jayda der rukega nhi aur peeche paltan aati hogi... Maine 2 ghnte aage chala tha ab ik ghnte peeche ho gya hun... bye Mastani Fir kbhi araam se milke baat karunga... {My Trainer is little bit weird i had thought that first day we will enjoy and roam the city and chill out but he doesn't like our happiness that's why he had given one case to solve and we are here to solve it. (seeing the time) OK, I am going now as my clue is waiting he will not wait for long and behind my whole team is coming... I moved 2 hours ahead and right know i am falling behind from 1 hour bye Mastaani I will talk you when I will be free...}


Geet - Jai! Ruk Meri baat toh sun... Ufff Ab yeh nhi rukega... {Jai! Stop Listen to me... Ufff... He will not stop now...}


[Maan to gain attention cleared his throat. Geet looked at him She was still miffed on him.]


Maan - Geet Voh... I am Sorry yaar merko nhi pata tha ki voh tumhra bhai hai...agar pata hota toh main aisa kuch nhi krta... {Geet Voh... I am Sorry yaar... I didn't know he is you brother if I had known I wouldn't have done that...}


Geet - Acha! Isiliye kehte hain Think before you act. Aapne toh uski jaan hi nikaal di thi... {Oh! That's why it is said Think before you act. You have taken out his life.}


Maan - Geet! Usne bhi toh merko maara tha... toh kya usne meri jaan nhi nikaali. {Geet! He had also beaten me... Then he also took my life...}


Geet - Oh! as if usne sab kuch shuru kiya hain naah... Ufff (Controlling herself). Chaddo Rehne do aapse toh baat krna hi bekaar hai... {Oh! As if He started everything Right... Ufff (Controlling herself) Leave it It is useless to talk with you...}


[Maan closes his eyes for his major blunder. She started to go from there and Maan was behind her for manofying his jungli billi. but jungli billi is not ready to listen to anyone. She took the taxi and went from there]


Precap- Pacifying Geet and Maan Taking advice from Gautam...😆



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Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Maan jumping on jai without thinking
Trying to protect geet
Jai retaliating
Both boys scuffling
Liked how geet scolded both made them apologise
Maan sticking his tail between his legs n now he has to pacify geet
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part Ila
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Maan and Jai 😆 let's see how Maan will convince her

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