LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 64

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21

maan badke aur daat kahye

plus ab jaake manayo bhi😆





Thanks for the comment...Priya_21

Yeah manofying her... ab daant toh padni thi kam bhi toh aisa kiya tha...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

Nice part...
Geet is horrified seeing their fight...
Finally geet cleared the air...
He he he funny part..
Now geet is angry maan had to manofy her





thank you for the comment Sanjana

and i am glad you find it funny...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash1991

superb update...

how maan got protective for geet...
glad both apologised...
geet angry on maan...
by any chance is the case jai studying related to gautama father???



Thanks for the commenting Ash1991

Jai's case is not related to the present case of jairaj but one of the old case which he has solved...😃😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Superb update
Jai is so protective towards geet
But maan was too much without listening to her



heheheheheee... Maan is always over the board... Chalo let's see what happens...

Thanks for the commenting😃😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

rocking fab update! superbly written! Omg Maan n Jai fighting! Geet intervenes wne they r lose control! She explains that Jai is her bro! Maan surprised! Geet angry at Maan! he tries 2 apologise! update soon, lovely precap




Thanks for the commenting but yeah will try to update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

maan without thinking punched jai and jai also mu himsnd start thr fight geet get irritate and stop them and intro both

and demand say sorry jai took leave and maan asking apology from geet fr his blunder geet went away maan want to paxify his jangli billi





Thanks for the commenting Sanum23😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Lovely story. Geet has come to India to help her fathers friend prove his innocence. Geet has great chemistry with maan pipeline each others leg. Goutham is protective towards Geet. Poor guy has to take all the anger of his mother for doing his duty. Hope she realises her mistake and forgives his.


Hi custodian75

Glad you find my fan fiction worth for your reading i will be glad if you read other parts and let me know...


Thanks for the lovely comment...

about her realising her mistake don't know how will it happen...😃😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
You just got me into big trouble with my dad 😆
Gosh I laughed so much just visualizing the scene of Jai and Maan fighting it out
and poor Geet stands baffled at the two guys
actually Maan was rather slow he saw Geet been followed yet he did nothing at the time he should have reacted immediately
Jai talking about the people of the very country he came to study is simply disrespectful though it was in anger but he should maintain himself in a dignified way
now I'm actually happy that Geet is upset with Maan , I've actually missed them together so yeah I'm looking forward now to see how will Maan calm Geet down and will she forgive him for his blunder
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

You just got me into big trouble with my dad 😆
Gosh I laughed so much just visualizing the scene of Jai and Maan fighting it out
and poor Geet stands baffled at the two guys
actually Maan was rather slow he saw Geet been followed yet he did nothing at the time he should have reacted immediately
Jai talking about the people of the very country he came to study is simply disrespectful though it was in anger but he should maintain himself in a dignified way
now I'm actually happy that Geet is upset with Maan , I've actually missed them together so yeah I'm looking forward now to see how will Maan calm Geet down and will she forgive him for his blunder



Hi Taahir

I am so glad Taahir that you got in trouble from your dad it means the thing i want to show it reached your heart... I am glad in hectic schedule of yours it brings some smile on your face So happy to hear that... Yeah he was slow as i wasn't getting anything and you can say i forgot this point but koi naah people loved it too i will keep in mind too... Yeah Jai telling this is disrespectful i too thought but he is grown in different country it has its own impact he doesn't want to belong to hyproctic that's why he condemns negative point...

Awwh... You missed them together I am so sorry dear due to case i want to portray every characters place and it is crucial too... so, less maan and geet but once the case is solved you will see Maan and Geet more frequent... well it's really a big surprise for you wait and read for it...

With Regard
Ila
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 22




Maan - Geet! Usne bhi toh merko maara tha... toh kya usne meri jaan nhi nikaali. {Geet! He had also beaten me... Then he also took my life...}


Geet - Oh as if usne sab kuch shuru kiya hain naah... Ufff (Controlling herself). Chaddo Rehne do aapse toh baat krna hi bekaar hai...{Oh! As if He started everything Right... Ufff (Controlling herself) Leave it It is useless to talk with you...}


[Maan closes his eyes for his major blunder. She started to go from there and Maan was behind her for manaofying his jungli billi. but jungli billi is not ready to listen to anyone. She took the taxi and went from there]


[Here, Geet reached at home and she was highly irritated with Maan]


Geet - Aaj toh mera dimaag hi kharaab ho gya... pata nhi log bina kuch soche smjhe react kyu krte hain... Ufff... agr main time pe nhi chillati... Maan ne toh koi chance hi nhi choda tha Jai ko upar pahunchaane mein... and Voh Jai pata hai Maan is in anger yeh nhi ki provoke krna chod de... Nhi voh kyu sunega usse toh maza aata dusron ko chedne mein... bada aaya apne apko kahin ka hero smjhta hai... uff Geet ab chod yeh sab shaam toh ho hi gyi hai... and ab case pe bhi dhyaan dena hai... {today, my mind has gone bonkers... Don't know why people react without even thinking... Ufff... If i wouldn't have shouted at time... Maan hadn't leave any chance to kill Jai... and Jai too when he knew Maan is in anger so stop provoking him but no... why would he listen?? He enjoy so much in poking everyone at wrong time... huh and he is so full of himself thinking I am a hero of somewhere... Uff Geet You have to stop thinking about this now... and concentrate on case too...}


[In mean while, Maan was standing there and watching Geet leaving... He was thinking of the big blunder he had done... How he is going to rectify it. Suddenly, he saw someone standing beside him...]


Stranger- hmmm... Mushkil hai... {Hmmm... Impossible...}





Maan (frowning and looked at his side) - Tumse mtlb... {It's none of your business...}


[Maan was about to go but stops listening to him...]


Informant - Isko patana mushkil hai sahaab but jo case yeh lad rhi hai uski ek chaabi apun k paas hai bole toh... chaahiye... {It's impossible to woo her sahaab but the case she is fighting, I have one of the key to solve it... say it... If you want...}


Maan(got serious listeing to him) - Acha! Aur tum itni asaani se bta bhi doge... Pehle apna rate toh bta do... {Really! and you will give tell me so easily... first tell me your rate...}


Informant(smirked) - Vaise sahaab! Maanana padega har ek insaan ko kaafi ache se jaante ho... but apun concession deta hai apko voh kya hai naah jisko bchaana hai kbhi usne bhi apun pe ehsaan kiya tha... anyway... 5000 Rs/- I want this much only... Isse kam nhi... manjur hai... {Vaise Sahaab! I have to agree that you know every person very well... but I am giving you concession as it's like that the person you want to save had done a lot of things for me i am obliged to him... anyway... 5000 Rs/-... I only want this much... not less than this... Is it ok!!!!!}


Maan(smiles) - Thank you for the discount ab jaruri baat bolo... {Thank you for the discount Now, tell me the important things...}


Informant - Agr ACP sahaab ko bchaana hai Isse pkdo... agr isse pkd liya toh smjho apka case solve (He showed one pic to Maan and Maan sees and keeps it with him for future reference.) yhi hai jo apko apki manjil tak le jaayega...{ If you want to save ACP sir you have to catch him... if you are able to catch him your case is solved...(He showed one pic to Maan and Maan sees and keeps it with him for future reference.) He is the one who can take you to your fortune}



Maan (thinking and seriously analysing) - Tattoo! but iss tattoo ka iss case se kya lena dena... {Tattoo! but what is the relation between this tattoo and case...}


Informant(Laughs) - Sahaab! Iss tattoo ka hi toh lena dena hai ab voh aap dekho main bas itna keh skta hun yeh tattoo kisi ke left baaju pe bana hai... aur todha aap bhi yaad karein... ACP Sir ke saath Press conference ke baad aur uss lab ke jalne se pehle aap hi the unke saath shayad kuch ajeeb dekha ho aapne... (apun ko yeh toh nhi pata ki kaun hai) but itna jarur jaanta hun ki bhut high profile log hai isme... {Sahaab! This tattoo is the only relation with the case and you have to figure it out. I can only say that this tattoo is printed on the left arm of a person... and you also remember something... you think upon the time after press conference and before the the lab got fire... if you have find something weird because you are with the ACP sir that time...(I don't know who is he?) but i can only say that very high profile person is involved...}


Maan(Looks at the tattoo and put his google) - Hmmm... Theekh hai Dekhta hun... (he gives the money to the informant). {Hmmm... Ok I will see... (he gives the money to the informant).}


Informant - Acha apun chalta hai ab... {OK! Now I have to leave...}


[Saying this and taking his money Informant leave him. He knew now it's upto Maan to guess and think what is left]


Maan - This Tattoo... Iss case se kya lena dena hai... He said about after press conference... ke baad agle din ACP sir se mila... raat ko mein vaha gya jaha mein behosh hua tha... usske agle din mera suspension... (He was thinking about something, suddenly he remembers that he had seen it on someone's arm and he knew that person but he wants to confirm if he is right or wrong...) Yaad aaya isse... toh maine unke baaju pe dekha tha accidently jab unki shirt baaju se todhi upar huyi thi... pehle ajeeb laga fir maine yeh sochke ignore kar diya shayad naya bnaya hoga... lekin pehle toh mujhe yeh confirm krna hoga... Mujhe Gautam se baat krni hai... {This Tattoo... What is the relation of this tattoo with this case... He said about after press conference... After this I met ACP Sir next day... at night I went to that palce where i got fainted... and next day was my suspension... (He was thinking about something, suddenly he remembers that he had seen it on someone's arm and he knew that person but he wants to confirm if he is right or wrong...) Now, I remember i have seen this on his arm when accidentally his shirt's sleeve went up... I felt this weird but i ignored thinking may be he had printed new one... but I have to confirm it first... I have to talk to Gautam...}


[Maan was dialing the number suddenly he got hit by someone. He look at his back and that person without looking him moves out muttering an apology...]


Stranger- Sorry...



Maan (ignored him) - (he was dialing Gautam's number and told about the progress and he got what new lead...) Hello Gautam...


Gautam - Haan Maan bolo kuch kaam tha... {Yes Maan! You need something???}


Maan- Guess what Mujhe ek lead mili hai kuch kaam se mein yaha aaya tha aur ek informant ne merko kuch diya jisse Geet ko madad mile but mujhe kuch confirm krna hai pehle... Kya tum meri meeting arrange kara skte ho... apne dad se... I mean Jairaj sir se mujhe unse kuch discuss krna hai... {Guess what I had found the lead I was here for some work and one of the informant has given me something that will help Geet in her case but i have to confirm first... Can you arrange a meeting... with your dad... I mean Jairaj Sir I have to discuss something...}


Gautam(got interested listening to this)- Maan kaunsi lead mili hai... and yeah kal tum mil lena unse I hope woh tumhe toh kuch btaaye mere se toh bolte tak nhi hai voh... pata nhi kya sochte rehte hain... {Maan which lead you have got... and yeah you meet him tomorrow I hope he will tell you something he won't talk with me... don't know what he always think...}


Maan- Merko ek tattoo ki photo di thi informant ne and theekh vaisa tattoo maine Jairaj sir ki left baaju mein dekha tha... press conference ke agle din mujhe ajeeb laga par maine ignore kar diya may be unko showk ho bnwaya ho kbhi... Tumhe what's app kiya hai abhi check it (he had already send the image to Gautam) {Informant has given me the photo of a tattoo and the same tattoo I have seen on Jairaj Sir's left arm... day after press conference i found it weird and I ignored it as I thought may be He liked to have a tattoo so he had printed... I have what's app the photo to you check it once...(he had already send the image to Gautam)}


Gautam (was shocked)- What! I don' know about this as far as I know... Dad ko tattoo se allergy hai... toh tattoo unke baajoo pe hona impossible hai fir bhi ek baar unse confirm kar lena... abhi toh raat ho gyi hai kal mil lena ok... {What! I don't know about this as far as I know Dad has an allergy from tattoo... So The tattoo on his arm is quite impossible... but confirm it from him first... Right now it is night meet him tomorrow ok...}


Maan- Ok Gautam! Yaar Gautam Mujse naa ek gadbad ho gyi hai... tumhri madad chaahiye...(He had closed his eyes and muttering please in his heart and finger crossed) {Ok Gautam! Yaar Gautam I have messed up something... And I need your help... (He had closed his eyes and muttering please in his heart and finger crossed)}


Gautam (rolled his eyes)- Ab kya kar diya tumne... Commissioner sir ki gaadi ka sheesha toda yaa unki gaadi ke tyre nikaal diye... {Now, what have you done... Broken the window pane of the Commissioner Sir's car or You have taken out the tyre of his Car...}


Maan - Isse bhi bura... Geet ka bhai aaya hua tha yaha... and he was in training and he had disguise himself... and mujhe laga voh koi lucha lafanga hai and I beat him... aur Geet ab bhadak gyi hai... Tere paas usse manaane ka idea hai... {Much worse then this... Geet's brother was here... and he was in training and he had disguise himself... and I thought he is some rowdy guy... and I beat him... and Geet is miffed now... You have any Idea how to manofy her...}


Gautam (sighs)- Yeh nhi sudherga (muttered under his breath and Maan- Kya kaha!!!) Kuch nhi... Vaise the mashoor flirt of crime branch ko meri madad chaahiye ek ladki ke gusse ko shaant krne mein kya baat... (smiles at his plight) On serious note mujhe bhi nhi pata ki voh kaise shaant hogi bas itna pata hai usse kheer bhut pasand hai... shayad isse baat ban jaaye... { He will not change (muttered under his breath and Maan- What did you say!!!) Nothing... by the way the famous flirt of Crime Branch needs my help in calming down the anger of a girl interesting... (smiles at his plight) On serious note I don't know how will she pacify I just know this that she likes Kheer... I guess this will work out...}


Maan (smiles)- Kheer! Vaah kya baat hai... vaise strange tumhe aur Jairaj sir ko bhi kheer bhut pasand hai... Tum, Sir aur Geet kitne milte julte ho even your temper bhi... {Kheer! Wow Interesting... by the way it's strange you, Jairaj sir too likes kheer... You, Sir and Geet are so similar even your temper too...}


Gautam (shrugs his shoulder)- Yeh toh merko pata nhi but try it out... kya pata baat ban jaaye... Ok ab mein phone rkhta hun paper work krna hai... {I don't know about this... You may never know it will help you... Ok I will hang up now I have to do paper work now...}


Maan(smiles)- Ok... Bye and Todha Mayank se bhi help le lo... (hangs up the call) {Ok... Bye and little bit of help you can take from Mayank too...(hangs up the call)}

Precap- Maan manaofying Geet and Meeting of Jairaj and Maan first time after the case....





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Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...


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ILA


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