FF chura lo na dil new chapii updt pg 140

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chapter 1... page 1
chapter 2... page 5
chapter 3... page 8





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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ohmeegeee look who's back to writing for us - yayiiie arti !!!

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I'm trying to remember, but I feel like I was the first to comment on your first FF too! 😆 And so my luvre continues - will come back and read in a bit, and comment!

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🤣 🤣 🤣 OMG Arti, trust you to come up with such an out of box characterization for GK! I can imagine these two being far more Tom and Jerry, than chor police 😆 LOL! nayi ho kya!!! And she actually goes on and produces her ID to prove it - abbe dubloo, uska ID bhi to maang 😆

Totally speculating these two in their brand new avatars - please do your daily updates like before! 😎

🤗 for starting another FF Arti!

Edited by JZephyr - 13 years ago
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chapter 1

CID chief Revji Malhotra was waiting anxiously in his cabin suddenly there is knock at the door

revji "come in"

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a gal walked in his cabin revji was happy to see her

he said "good morning inspector gulaal so aaj apki duty ka pehla din hai"

gulaal said "yes sir"

and then she come near and touch his feet and said" papa blessings nahi denge"

revji gave her blessing and say "i m so proud of u gulaal tum apne batch k sabse bright student rahi ho and u have stood first aur isliye tumhe seedhe CID branch mila hai u know kitne waqt lagta hai is position ko hasil karne mein"

gulaal said "yeh sab aapke wajah se papa so mujhe kya karna hai"

revji called senior inspector dushyant and said "duhsyant gulaal ko unka kaam samjha do" duhsyant noded his head and then they took the permission and left dushyant and gulaal came out of the cabin
D "tumhe poore teen saal baad dekh raha hun gulaal so nice to see u"
gulaal "so good to see u too so suna kafi medal jama kar liye hain tumhara 100% sucess rate hai"
d "par koi hai jisne mujhe bahoot tang karke rakha hai
gulaal said kaun hai"
d "itne jaldi kya abhi aa gayi ho aur ab tum meri collegue bhi ho dheere dheere sab pata chal jayega"
g "so mujhe kya karna hoga"
d "pehle treat deni hogi as yeh tumhari duty ka pehla din hai aur phir hume delhi museum men jana humari duty wanhi hai"
gulaal smiled
delhi museum
the curator of the museum was showing the rare artifacts and figures and figurine to gulaal and dushyant just then gulaal saw a beautiful neckpiece that was kept secured in the glass cabin as she headed towards it
dushyant stopped her
he said "kya kar rahi ho gulaal tumhe pata hai yanha lazor aur infrared beams hai plus agar jyada kareeb gayi to upar jaal hain seedhe tumhare upar girega ... is field mein enter mat karna bahoot danegours hai"
gulaal said "wow itna intzaam must be expensive peice"
curator said "haan yeh neckpiece hydrabad k nizam ka hai isme 10 carat k kam se kam 100 diamond jade hue hai iski keemt crore mein nahi batayi jaa sakti aap iska earing dekh rahi hai is chote se earing k keemat 5 crores hao to sochiye neckpiece k kitne hogi"
gulaal said "par itne security kyu"
dushyant said "isko public display k liye rakha jaa raha hai aur humara kaam hai is neckpiece par nazar rakhna
gulaal looked at the neckpiece with amusement unaware a pair of eyes were looking at her
night 2:30 delhi museum
security guard were dozed off gulaal and dushyant were tired as they were doing their duty since morning
d said gulaal mein coffee lata hun
gulaal said ok
she was drowsy
sudden;y she felt a figure passed by she turned back but noone was there she igonred
after 20 minutes museum emergency alarm rang
and the gaurds started running gulaal stopped a guard and asked "kya hua"
guard said "lagta hai museum mein chori hui hai"
gulaal was amused "itne tight security mein choori ho gayi"
duhaynt came running he asked "kya hua"
gulaal said "lagta hai choori hui hai"
dushyant said "yeh usi ka kaam ho sakta hai" and ran
gulaal asked "kiska"
but duhaynt was gone
gulaal quickly ran inside and saw the neckpiece was missing she took out her gun and started searching
the museum doors were closed and guards were searching the theif
suddenly gulaal heard some noises in the basement area she took her gun and run in the basement area and in the rush she ran into a stranger they touched each other and there gun fall gulaal and the stranger bend down to pick the gun and there eyes met...
for a sec both of them were dumbed and then pointed the gun towards each other
before gulaal could say anything
stranger said "senior inspector kesar tum kaun ho and surrender urself"
gulaal changed her expression and said "oh sorry mein inspector gulaal hun"
kesar "y should i belive u"
gulaal took out her identity card and showed him
kesar lowered his gun and said "naayi aayi ho pehle to nahi dekha"
gulaal said "jee aaj hi meine duty join ki hai"
kesar said "kiske under mein"
gulaal "senior inspector Dushyant Verma k under mein"
kesar smiled and said "poor u really feel for u"
gulaal said "ji"
and before she could say anyfurther kesar pulled her towards him and took her into his arms
gulaal was suprised her heartbeat skipped a beat for a sec
kesar looked in her eyes and said "abhi abhi tumhare pass se bullet nikali hai...madam hum yanha picnic manane aaye hai k aap mujhe introduction de rahi hain"
gulaal couldnt react
kesar said "chor ko nahi pakdana kya"
gulaal regained herself yaa pakdana hain
and then she looked into the direction as she was new she didnt know where to go
kesar smiled and said "stupid gal" in his mind and then he showed her the way
kesar pointing towards the direction "yanha se upar jao mein basement mein cover karta hun" and then he picked up his gun and went in the other direction
gulaal reached upwards and saw dushyant and other guards were searching the thief
gulaal asked dushyant "mil gaya "
dushyant said "nahi mila tum kanha rah gayi thi"
gulaal "woo inpector kesar k saath basement mein baat kar rahi thi"
dushyant was confused he said "kaun inspector kesar" and then he said "oh shit"
gulaal asked "kya hua"
dushyant said "kesar ...woo...koi inspector nahi hai...wahi chor hai...usko hi dhoondh rahe the hum"
gulaal was suprised she said "kya"
dushyant ran into basement while gulaal stood speechless remembering kesar

Edited by arti07 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: JZephyr

Ohmeegeee look who's back to writing for us - yayiiie arti !!!


*edit*

I'm trying to remember, but I feel like I was the first to comment on your first FF too! 😆 And so my luvre continues - will come back and read in a bit, and comment!

omg jzee its a stupid ff written in the most wiredest mood wen we bunch of wickedians were playing ff -ff at night kya kare ludo nahi tha...its embarassing not upto ur expectation😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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arti you are back?? nice start and Kesar 'the chor' interesting 👏 loved the thief police game😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OHMYEFFINGGOD. ARTI, YOU'RE BACK.
Thank god. Missed you man!
Chura lo na dil, sounds flipping amazing.
Can already sense the sexual attention between Kesar and Gulaal.
Im beeegging you now, please include Vasant has Gulaals brother, not her lover. PLEASE.
I don't care, have Yogesh as her lover but NOT Vasant. Getting really bored off that.
Edited by CertifiedBummer - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: alanta

arti you are back?? nice start and Kesar 'the chor' interesting 👏 loved the thief police game😉

no i m not as i said me and kirti two seedhe saadhe bande were playing ff ff at night just posted there for fun but then someone requested me to put it in the main bas post kar diya apna kya jata hai ppl know i m crazy..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Bhajiyawali is here frying bhajiyas...chalo me reserving😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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me very late😭..res

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Arti is back...he very happy shappy re😳...kesar introduction was bang on...kesar ne toh yaha dushy ko kitna satharaha hai...yeh dushy ke words se hi patha chaltha hai..chor n police love story...me loving it...so next chappie jaldi laana...
Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG 😲..Arti..my chotu govinda.🥳.yeah ff aa gay..

Lubb you arti ..🤗

just lubb you😳..just lubb you...

Yeah..main pagal na ho jaun khushi se..mujhe bachao..

Yeah arti..FF

Main teri life miserable bana dungi 😆agar tune jaldi next part post nahi kya.😳.yeah ghatiya shayars kahn ho tum..humari arti aa gayi

Yeah I now want lots of chii😳

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