FF chura lo na dil new chapii updt pg 140 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Keithuu

oye tantrum queen ..tujhe kiske comments ka intezaar hai...?😛

my bijli mujhe dabloo bana rahi thi..issliye aa nahi paayi...

ab jaldi next chappi la...😃

yup...mujhe flirtwa chokra bada accha laagat...😳

Originally posted by: minizz

I read the chapter yesterday itself but couldn't comment on it.Arti,lovely chapter.I was so looking forward to this and I must tell you I loved it. I really can't call Kesar 'chindichor' anymore.uski insult hogi

u can he is still chindichor

.kitna creative aur intelligent chor hai.the camel cart idea of his -brilliant.I loved the 'sasuraal' comment don't worry Kesarji once you win Gullu's you will get your own 'sasuraal' not the chor police wala😆though no great hopes regarding a loving one from your description of the lukewarm relationship between Gulaal and her father.Bechaari.lonely girl.

well lets see its to difficult for a girl to fall in love with a thief i dont know will she fall or not

and Gulaal is a chupirustam I tell you she wants to go on a date with the chor that's why all the dressing up😆

bechari k izzat ka faluda thief ne kar diya has to flaunt herself😉

I remembered that old song'sajna hai mujhe sajna ke liye'😉and please keep Dushyant away from her somehow I don't trust his intentions he looks quite taken with her makeover🤢😆good that she didn't reveal the real reason and came up with that excuse.'time management'😆😆

dushyant is her senior i cant do that😳

and Kesar well Mr.K has to impress the girl so what better than a sports car but Gulaal is no ordinary girl and instead of being impressed she insulted him😆.good.so we get a look at the hero and Gulaal's thoughts about him.interestingthe exchange in the car was very cute.

yup izzat ka kachra gulaal is all trained in it

finally The Date and what a Date.he booked the whole place.leaving no stone to impress the girl.taking out the gun and knives ,how did she hide all those things?and who is she trying to fool -Mr.K😆.I loved the small moment between them.tension.good.

thanks she is cop she has got training to hide those things

Mexican cuisine.delicious.but Kesarji dara dhamkake khana khilayega tho ladki kaise pategi?😆the whole exchange between them was funny.loved it.the dance -very romantic but the high heels had to be the haddi.and Kesar is so sweet if though he needs some lessons in romance.the eyelock between them so emotional.

thanks again

I have a feeling Gullu will be completely lattu over him very soon.who can resist such a sweet guy but the main obstacle here they are from opposite sides of law...so who will jump over to the other side?may be may be not

alll in all an enjoyable chapter.please update soon.

Originally posted by: MR21

Arti...i am just becoming crazy abt this chor-police love story re...

kesar such a brat na...i am just loving his character so much...sasuraal oh bahut achcha hi hoga...gulaal jo waha rahthi hai...n kunal calling her as bhaabhi..kesar ne toh bahut bada plan kiya hai shaayad...

transfering the ornaments out of city using camels...what a brilliant idea...

good tha she didnot informed anyone especially dushy abt her date with kesu...

OMG...she is staring at him😍...loved how he asked abt the gifts that she would have brought for him...his clarification that he is stealing indian things as he is an indian...his way of saying sorry to her...gulaal mailid n FB hack kiya hai...bahut bhura hai tu kesar(tali istyle)...the way he made her to eat...to dance with him...and and the way he cared for her😳...

Arti wonderful chappie hai...loved the dialogues n conversation between kesar n gulaal...waiting for next one...jaldi update karna...

Originally posted by: Keithuu

main idhar spam karungi...🥳

Originally posted by: arti07

kar chale hum fida yeh ff saathiyun😛

ab tumhare hawale yeh thread saathiyun😛

and she heard "gulaal utho kitni der se utha raha hun"

Gulaal opened her eyes and saw dushyant was sitting next to her...gulaal was horrified and immediately pulled her blanket and in great confusion asked "dushyant..sir aap"

Dushyant replied "sir bahar yanha to hum dost hai na...gulaal itni der se awaaz laga raha tha tum sun hi nahi rahi thi isliye upar aa gaya"

Gulaal stood up and was in confusion

Dushyant asked "waise itna smile kyu kar rahi thi koi bahoot acha sapna dekha"

Gulaal immediately repelled "mein smile...nahi...mein kyu smile" karungi...mein koi smile nahi kar rahi thi"

Dushyant said "relax...thek hai nahi kar rahi thi acha tayyar hokar neeche aa jau hume jaldi nikala hai"

And he was leaving and he came back and said "waise tumhe pata hai woo cyndi bank waalo k reserve mein 10 lac dollar phir se show kar raha hai...ab kah rahe hai shayad security system mein kuch problem hai...yeh bank waale khud to check karte nahi hai hum police waalo ko faltu samajh kar yanha wanha bhatakate rehte hain"

Gulaal was surprised finally kesar fullfilled his promise...gulaal stopped dushyant said sir kuch kenha tha aapse

And then she was about to tell about her date with kesar but then she stopped.she had already gone through humilition coz of kesar now her date with kesar was highly embarassing her reputation can be tarnished. so she perfered to be silent

Gulaal said "sir bas jaldi aati hun"

While taking the shower she said to herself" kya 10 lac dollar k hera pheri sirf ek date k liye thi" and she struggled not to smile while she kept looking at her foot

And then in angrily mood said "kesar agar haath aa gaye to nahi bachoge"

Then she got ready and left with dushyant

On the way she asked "hum kanha jaa rahe hain"

Dushyant said "neeraj mehta k yanha se phone aaya tha woo aa gaya hai isliye milne jaa rahe hain"

Gulaal "neeraj mehta acha woo jisese milne aap us necklace k chori k dusare din gaye the"

Dushyant "haan"

Gulaal "kaun hai yeh neeraj mehta"

Dushyant "ek businessman hai...gujarat k bhuj se aaya hai 5-6 saal pehle yanhi immigrate hua hai"

He continued "uska chunar aur gujarati kapdo k business hai...export aur import bhi karta hai"

Gulaal "to phir hum uske ghar kyu jaa rahe hain"

Dushyant "mujhe baar baar yeh lagta hai k kesar uar neeraj mehta ka kuch connection hai.. meine iske collegue ko ek do baar suspicious logo aur suspicious jagah par dekha hai"
meine ek baar kesar ka peecha kiya tha tab woo ise ghar mein aaya tha aur phir wanha search karne par bhi nahi mila...mujhe lagta hai kesar ne use kuch becha hai yaa phir woo mediator hai kuch bhi but something strange is about him"

gulaal "to phir aapne interrogate nahi kiya use"

Dushyant kiya tha par uske pass har cheez ka jwab hai...uske legal papers papers bikul saaf the aur bilkul sahi lag rahe the...everything seem to be perfect"

Gulaaal "then"

Dushyant "par neeraj k legal papers mein sab kuch inte perfect kaise ho sakte hain?.jab sab kuch jarurat se jyada perfect dekhe to samajh lena kuch na kuch gadbad hai"

While talking to her they reached neeraj mehta's resisdence

Dushyant and gulaal came inside and stood in a lovely garden waiting for neeraj

Gulaal said "sir aap yanha wait kariye tab tak jara mein ghar k andar investigation karke aati hun kya pata kuch suraag mil jaaye"

And gulaal went inside she was looking here and there

Suddenly she saw a boy was coming in the hall he had taken a fresh bath so came outside rubbing his wet hairs with dry towel he was shirtless and

just wore black lower drying his hair with towel

Gulaal freezed her eyes rolled up in amusement she was completely numbed as it was kesar

Kesar saw her and a mishivious smile pass across his face..he wasn't frightened or scared to see her...he just looked at her with same passion he saw her last night...he kept rubbing his hair with towel and walked calmly and confidently towards her...and he stopped at the arm stretch distance gulaal was speechless she didn't know how to react she was blanked for a moment

and he stood close?he looked at her smiled naughtily and shook his head delibrately and the water droplets from his hairs passed onto gulaal face?gulaal closd her eyes in reflex..and he smiled again and walked away

In the meantime a male sevant came with the glass of orange juice and tshirt

He gave them to kesar and said dushyant "aapka wait kar rahe hai"

Kesar didn't said anything

Gulaal wiped her face and looked at kesar drank orange juice and was wearing his tshirt

Kesar said to his servant "madam ka jab man kare yanha se jaane ka unhe bahar garden mein le aana"

And he turned back to see gulaal who was already confused

Kesar meantime walked into garden and greeted dushyant and offered him chair

Kesar "dushyant ji aaj is garrb k yanha ka rasta kaise bhul gaye"

Dushyant "case mein silsile mein?.aapko museum k chori k baare mein pata chala"

While gulaal came out of the house and stood besides dushyant

Kesar "haan paper mein padha kya zamana aa gaya hai log kuch paison k liye desh k property ko bhi nahi chodete so sad"

Kesar waise paper mein likha tha yeh bhi kesar ka kaam hai?

Dushyant "haan aur hum jaldi hi usko pakkad lenge"

Kesar par aaj tak woo thief kyu nahi pakada gaya?.dekhiye chaar saal se delhi k logo ko kitna pareshaan karke rakha hai?sir hum shariff log hai ab aise chor agar khula ghmenge to darr to lagega hi

Gulaal gave a weired expression

Dushyant "jaldi hi pakada jayega mr neeraj aap kanha the waise aap kanha the itne din"

Kesar ji mumbai gaya hua tha wanha k cabinet minister k beti k shaadi thi to personally saare chunar k order dekh raha tha

Dushyant "don't mind par koi gawah hai kya?..u see hume humari duty to karni padegi"

Kesar welkl kya minister k PR unke secretary aur uski neice k gawahi chal jayegi?

In between kunal arrived

Kesar said ji mere manager bhi aa gaye hai dushyant ji aapko jo puchana hai aur jo bhi papers dekhene hai kunal se puch lijeye uske pass sab kuch hai

And dushyant went to talk to kunal

While gulaal was in deep thought

Kesar got up and stood beside her and asked softly "ab pair ka dard kaisa hai"

Gulaal asked "tum?..kesar?"

Kesar u broke my heart gulaal mujhe to laga mujhse milne k baad tum mujh bhul hi nahi paogi

Gulaal shot back "tum bhi nahi bhuloge jab mein tumhe jail karwaayungi"

Kesar smiled and said "karwa dena pehle saboot to lao?kaise sabit karogi k mein tumhara kesar hun"

Gulaal was in anger she said "u"

As she pointed towards her kesar's dog barked at her and jumped at her to bite her?..gulaal was frightened she grabbed kesar's hand in fear

Kesar looked at her and then said "quiet imli?gulaal is friend not a enemy"

Gulaal asked "imli??"

Kesar said haan bachpan mein mujhe imli pasand thi to apne pet ka naam imli rakh diya wiase mere pass ek pet aur aane waala hai soch raha hun uska kya naam dun looking at her naughtily

Gulaal said angrily don't u dare..ok

Kesar smiled at her

While kesar gave a ointment to her and said yeh lo gulaal dawa laga lena pair ka dard jaldi thek ho jayega

Gulaal turned her face and said ab yeh din aa gaye hai k ek chor se dawai lu?

Meanwhile dushyant said gulaal lets go humara kaam ho gaya hai

Gulaal replied yes sir and turning back to kesar she said "abhi to jaa rahi hun par mein tumhe nahi chodongi"

Kesar said fondly "vaada karo nahi chodogi"

Gulaal unknowingly said "vaada raha kesar"

And she walked away and turned back to give a angry glare?..while kesar looked at her smiled and winked his eyes