FF chura lo na dil new chapii updt pg 140 - Page 106

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for updating Arti,It's another emotional chapter after last one but had it's lighter moments too,typical Arti style

The point he wanted to make about Kharkhana running on his hard earned money and not chori ki kamai to her was poignant, he wanted her to know cause it mattered to him the recognition, the acceptance of the fact that he was not all dark and evil she made him out to be….

The Kharkhana scene was quite touching, he had in some way been instrumental in providing daily living for so many people yet he did not deem himself to fit in his father or brother's shoes,he is so afraid of falling in eyes of people who revere him because of his father

She so knows his inner turmoil na,so played that bike prank to get him out of his conflicts but the resulting effect was just hilarious,chalo iss mein ek baat toh usne positive boli ke gaavwale usse budhape mein iss per chedege,ahh he going to grow old in that village away from that paap ki duniya he calls home at the moment

The mango orchard description was really nice,you could actually feel them stealing aam and that maalikaka running with the danda beautiful, also the way you described the pooja room and the moistening of eyes due to this small but significant gesture of hers did nudge one's heart

And finally the time to face reality for both of them, so heart wrenchingly described, you felt sorry for both of them, both caught up and entangled in their own dilemma and justifying their stand with utmost sincerity Ahh this is really sad,sad world emotional but beautiful update Arti,Thanks for a lovely chapter

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Posted: 13 years ago


Yeay..My chotu govinda..🤗.is back..and ab chappi k barein mein baat karte hain.It was such a arti ishtyle chappi for me.😎lots of emotions .I absolutely adored the bike wala banter and pure village mein bechare ka izzat utarofy kar diya Gullu ne...hahahahhahahaa Ladki k piche baith k village mein ghumna...hahahhahaand the karkhana nad the emotional dialogues were beautifully penned down.The mango orchard scene was mast ,..he he kesu bachpan se hi chor and the mandir diya reverence was very subtle nad beautiful.👏

he he kya jawaab diya kesu ne gullu ko about that haq..too good.Oye Cidhaying wo hum hai rahi pyaar k gakar I lubbed that too.

and THe last part actually took my heart.Very emotional yet with so many poignant points from both of them.👏

Lubbly update Arti...ab jaldi se chii laooo😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

@my chotu govinda...main to kab se khadi is paar...ki ankhiyan thak gayi panth nihar..

oye wapas aja...me big dabloo brain pata nahi kahan rakh diya tha 😭


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