FF chura lo na dil new chapii updt pg 140 - Page 69

Originally posted by: sauris

Lovely chappi,bechare kesar aur gulaal nadi ki do kinare ki tarah hai,jinka milna muskil hai,kabhi farz,kabhi yeah zalim zamaana aur unke double standards inke pyaar ke beech main dewaar se ban jati hai,magar pyaar toh apna rang dikhayega hi,in sab ko todh ke pyaar ki jeet hogi...haan par kaise its such complicated subject sachi its a big mess now...thanks alot for liking will update soon

Originally posted by: prachurya

The guy is really nuts- bt dats wy I luv dis chindichor even more-

we love nutters dont we😆

He commits a crime just to get to see her again!!!! I just loved the GK convo- Kesar's earnest ,heart-wrenching dialogues were moving! wish the moment wud hav stopped there!

thanks alot but they had to part ways as their world is different and niether can be part of it

Now, Dushy coming to meet him, hope its another case and nothing personal. Love ur FF to da core, Arti! owww so sweet thanks a lot

Originally posted by: enchanted23

Sorry for the late comments yaar, really busy at work. Chapter 21 and chapter 22 really well written and does bring out "push and pull" nuance that's such a trademark Kesar and Gulaal??

oww no i m no way near to the original one it was the classic oh i miss it so much

Chapter 21 : Dushyant KBH ko to wrong time pe entry marna hi tha, Kesar and Kunal conversation was good, and Gulaal in ostrich mode again changing numbers and avoiding his calls?.Chalo she is trying to prove herself to be obedient daughter after all she did join police force to appease her father?I trust Kesar's abilities to get what he wants?.well gulaal is doing the same any person would act in the this conditions it is not easy to fall for him

Chapter 22: Aha! Kesar's just brilliant anything to meet Gullu! 😆Locker room scene was really well written his passion, his dilemma, his yearning all very well expressed and Gulaal of course was speechless, she will soon have to succumb to her inner voice aakhir kab tak avoid karegi apne dil ki aavaz?Dushyant wapas aa gaya kbh kahi ka?Arti Please update soon even if I comment late I will get to it at some point, It's lovely story I can't wait for the next update?😍 thanks alot for liking will update

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Artiii 🤗 jzee🤗😛

Having 5 chapters to read back to back is SO awesome - you wont even guess! And although I initially thought I'd read one at a time and comment individually, once I started, there was this flow, and I just didn't want to stop and type in between - sigh - so now you get a mess of a comment for 5 chapters. oh i so love the comprehensive comment

The whole dilemma for these two, especially Gulaal's which saw more ground work than Kesar's here, was as it should go, for a cop, wrt her criminal target. The instance of her reflex in shooting the bad guys when she thought Kesar's life was threatened was as spontaneous as... I dunno, gravity, in being unstoppable, inevitable, no matter what! It's like trying to hold up a weight mid air with ropes, and preventing its fall - how long can they hold it up before snapping? ...exactly gulaal's dilemma is much grave than his he is wrong not she...for kesar it hardly matters what her profession is...her dilemma is so obivious its impossible for a girl of respectable family developing attraction for a wrong guy

Kesar on the other hand is in sheer desolation and despair. On a personal request Arti, I wish we could read something exclusive on his end of the story, not just about the despair and how it goes for Gulaal - but him sorting out the despair, his introspection, not in being befuddled by this thing entirely, but his self targeting rapid fire. Not to realize his love, he's in that know how even if not in explicit words - but, I dunno, his rapid fire on why Gulaal. There is something about the improbability about his affair with her that should make him question his intention, make him wonder if he's so desperate to chase a challenge, or if he's just found this inexplicable match of souls that seeks no reason! I like Kunal btw. He's the kind of friend and accomplice one would be in general - so maybe he can throw in more questions here, more than plain what are you doing with yourself and your work and your life... something less obvious and more profound like why Gulaal. I just think it would be interesting to watch Kesar unravel that 'why' for himself. It might give him more peace and resolve, and most importantly the undeterred motivation to get together with her, despite her! ofcourse i have some plan for kesar too right now he is despair he cant think anything he has his story to tell but thats later will tell as the story progress...and kunal is genuine frn beside he is his partner in crime he can think more rationally than him

Also have to add I was so glad to read a Revji Gulaal scene. Not just because it added to the whole situation and its onus, especially for Gulaal - but because it would have bothered me to have Kesar, and even Dushyant talk to Gulaal about her safety with that encounter and an attack on her back, and not have Revji show concern once. Because, yes, he may have been somewhat distanced from her in their father daughter bond, but surely, he's not indifferent about her! From his POV, this conversation was bang on! And for the burden it added to Gulaal's guilt - very much coming! ...yaa revji is not abad guy he has maintained a reasonable distance from her daughter bt it doesnt mean he is not concerned for her...she is his pride...

And that's that. Again, reading 5 chapters back to back was awesome, and even though I tried to say all that I thought I would, if I missed anything in this jumble of a comment, sheesh! btw - for someone who gloats of god knows what not hi fi technologies and blah, using pigeons and dogs as modes of communication is a drastic contradiction for Kesar, isn't it 😆 I would put the invisible ink down to his signature fetish and style, but dogs and pigeons, and OH, the facades 😆

actually pegion messageners are quite common in delhi wanna show to bring some originality and then kesar is stylish but not the intermediators we cant expect much from them so pegions

Actually, maybe you can take them to a masquerade next - classic mysterious, adventure, and oh so romantic ☺️ You could add Dushyant and make a dubloo out of him at the occasion just to add kicks too! Because I honestly don't think he's upto any good coming over at this hour to Revji's! Is he going to ask for her hand already?! 😲 Dream on fella! 🥱well lets see...so glad to see ur comment will update soon

Update SOON!

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Originally posted by: manzilmukul

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MY chotu Govinda se yash chopra ki atma bahar ayi.😆.Yeah..Ooo la la..what a passionate romantic chappi..☺️Main kya kahun...Main to bas...teri pankha hun...Oh KG ..meri zubaan pe tala..kyunki..chappi itne emtions waal..Lubbb ya.🤗.Superb fantastic,,awesome mindblowing..mujhe aur kuch bhi nahi kehan..main phir se jakar padhti hun..😳.Next chappi jaldi la..aur humein tamatar mukhi bana☺️

hey raam yeh shayyari ki bhoot phir sar par chad gaya😆...maar gayi mein and tamatar waala ff to tumhara hai mera only rotten tomatoes...thanks for liking will update soon