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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Savz_uniqueblis

wow action packed chap. ur FF is blockbuster are you inspired by farah khan 😉 😃

naa ji complete mix so old new south hollywood tellywood bhojpoori films see i m such a stealofy ff writer 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

nachooo...woo skeleton kanha gaya kya abir ne use bhi break kar diya😛


yay engagement nahi hui...daddy ne kuch nahi sikhaya kesu ko kuch bhi nahi sachi😳😆Tooo tooo gud.⭐️.lubbed the action sequence.👏.lol..maine bhi khun kharaba likha😆 meine padha haaye haaye kitne behraami se pitaayi karvaayi sach bata kesau mein taklu nazar aa raha tha kya jo lagi thi use bajane nonstop next chappi jaldi lao.Tongue.i want lots of chiii😳lubbed the chappi...👏 me lobbed ursEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 27

And she sat on the car

Kesar was amused to hear it he couldn't resist to smile…he smiled widely and then walked towards his car and started the car

He looked at her and said to himself "agar yeh sapna hai to plz bhagwaan meri ankhen mat khulne dena"

And she looked at him and said to herself "agar iske aas pass rahungi to iske khilaf sabot laa sakungi kesar tumhe nahi pata tumhe khud apne liye musibat khadi kar li hai"

Here durgesh got the news that his gangmember were killed and gulaal was missing he slammed his fits on the table and said "phir bach gaayi yeh ladki aur mujhe mere saathi k marne ka koi afsos nahi hai…unhe to marna hi tha par yeh gulaal woo kanha gaayab ho gaayi"

His gangmember came and said "bhai bahoot pata kiya par kisi ko kuch nahi malum gulaal kanha gayi hai kisi ko kuch nahi malum"

Durgesh grabbed his collar "mein kuch nahi jaanta kanhi se bhi dhundhe uuse agar police waalo ne daar kar uuse kanhi chupa diya ho to pata karo dushyant k aadmi ko khareed lo kaise bhi kuch bhi karke mujhe gulaal chahiye"

And on the other hand dushyant and revji were clueless they talked to the guard whose uniform was taken by kesar

They asked tumne kuch dekha

He said "nahi sir humne kuch bhi nahi dekha hume to peeche se kisi ne hamla kiya tha"

Then they talked to the videographer he said "nahi sir engagement k recording mein kuch bhi nahi aaya infact woo shootout mein saara camera destroy ho gaya hai kuch bhi clue nahi"

Dushyant stood up in frustration "samajh nahi aa raha gulaal kanha gayab ho gayi kanhi uska kidnap to nahi ho gaya…"

Revji was frightened to hear it "nahi aisa hota to kidnaapers ka call aata hum gulaal k missing k khabar media mein bhi nahi de sakte uski liye khatra aur badh jaayega….bas chupchap tehkikaat kar sakte hai"

Dushyant said "don't worry uncle mein gulaal ko dhundh launga aur is durgesh ko mein nahi chodunga gulaal par hamle ki keemat uuse chukani hogi police waalo ko bahoot kamzor samajh liya hai usne uuse batana padega hum kya cheez hai…bas ek baar gulaal ka pata chal jaaye"

Here Gulaal was looking at him with her soft expressive eyes…he stared at her with the deep passion……..and then he touched her cheeks softly and slowly moved too close to her…… gulaal was smiling and blushing and then she heard "gulaal" and she opened her eyes and snapped out of her thought and saw kesar was looking at her with love filled eyes..

Kesar asked "kya hua kanha kho gayi thi"

gulaal rolled her eyes in amusement…….she was floating in his dreams………she always considered him enemy….many time she had stormed at him….but still her compassion stood still…..soft fire still kindle inside that confounded her..the more she pretended to hate him the more she found love shining in his vulnerable eyes and that frustrated her further…and she turned her face in desperation

Kesar looked at her and stopped the car and brought some snacks for her and said "yeh lo kha lo 5 hrs se travel kar rahe hain tumhe bhuk lagi hogi" and he extended the burger to her

Gulaal took the burger in suspicion and then smelled it to confirm weather he hadn't put anything in it

Kesar looked at her smelling the food he smiled and took the burger from her hand and ate half and then gave it back and said "lo gulaal ab kha sakti ho….waise bhi ab agar is burger mein jeher hua to marna pakka..dekho naa mein kha chukka hun ab drive karte karte mar gaya to car ka accident ho jayega aur tum bhuki hi bhagwaan ko pyaari ho jaougi better yeh k kha k maro"

Gulaal said "pata hai jyada bakwaas karna bimari hoti hai bhuj pahunch kar apna check up jaror karwa lena" and she ate the burger angrily…and then drank water and after some time dozed off

Kesar was driving the car…there was perfect silence in the car…he looked at her and studied her soft features in the shifting rays of the winter sunlight that was slowly withdrawing themseves….he looked at her….his woman was beautiful…..her beauty was unaffected by the darkness of the night that was surrounding her face slowly…..her innocence capitivated his mind instantly for him nothing matter than to admire her..she was beautiful indeed beautiful ……..then he remembered gulaal's harsh word "sach yeh ki tum jaise log humare society k kichad ho

….sach yeh hai kesar agar raaste ka kichad hum shareef logo k ghar mein pahunch jaaye to use saaf kar diya jaata hai par uuse ghar k shaan nahi banaya jaata hai"

and he turned his face with tears he drive the car with the stern face…he turned the fm radio and the song "kahin to kahin to from the movie jaane tu yaa jaane naa played http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7zfEXYjgQjQ

Kahin to.. kahin to
Hogi wo,
Duniya jahan tu mere saath hai..

Jahan mein, jahan tu,
Aur jahan, bass tere mere jazbaat hai,
Hogi jahan subah teri,
Palko ki, kirano mein,
Lori jahan chand ki,
Sune teri baahoin mein..

He turned his face and looked at her again…his heart was so weak that it didn't allow him to turn his face away from gulaal….he looked at her..who was sleeping she was looking so pretty her face reflected that of an angel soft skin her soft lips were mesmerizing…..her beautiful curls waved on her face which together with the winter breeze brushing on her face and blowing of her hairs were soothing to his soul

stanza played

Jaane naa kahan wo duniya hai,
Jaane naa wo hai bhi ya nahi,
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse,
Itni khafa nahi..) – 2
he then looked at the small hint of the mustard sauce that was present around the corner of her mouth…he extended his hand and wipe the mustard sauce from his warm and gentle finger…her lips were so soft as if it would melt with his touch…the touch that was enough to drive him crazy unable to resist he gently floated his finger on her lips…his touch made her quiver with passion and she opened her eyes and she met his eyes and here breath was betraying her…they looked it into each other eyes

Kahin to, kahin to,
Hai nasha..
Teri meri har mulaqaat mein,
Hoton se, hoton ko,
Chumti, o rehte hai hum har baat pe,
Kehti hai fiza jahan,
Teri zamin aasmaan..

Jahan hai tu, meri hassi,
Meri khushi, meri jaan…

(Jaane naa kahan wo duniya hai,
Jaane naa wo hai bhi ya nahi,
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse,
Itni khafa nahi..) – 3

they were looking in their eyes and were interrupted by continous blowing of the horn from the trucks behind…kesar regained himself and saw his car stood still in the middle of the road he quickly started the car and started driving and without looking at her said softly "woo sauce lagi hui thi"

gulaal hung her head down and then looked outside careful not to look at him again

she continuosly looked outside the window dwelling in her own thought till the car stopped and kesar said "gulaal hum bhuj mein hai mera ghar aa gaya hai"

gulaal looked at him and saw his home that was nice and cozy like his banglow in delhi

she got out of the car…..it was cold and she was shivering…kesar looked at her and gently put his jacket on her and said in low voice "chale"

she looked at him and walked together in the quiet night

he said "mein yanha par kabhi kabhi aata hun isliye naukar nahi hai kal saaf safai waale aa jayenge" while opening the lock……he opened the gate and asked gulaal to enter…but gulaal stood there

kesar switched on the light and saw gulaal was standing outside

he said "kya hua gulaal andar kyu nahi aa rahi"

gulaal said "mera kisi hotel mein room book kar do mein yanha nahi rah sakti jab waapas jaungi to paise bhejwa dungi"

kesar said "kya par kyu tum hotel mein kyu rehna chahiti ho"

gulaal said "mein tumhare saath nahi reh sakti"

kesar asked "kyu"

gulaal said "kyunki tum ek chor ho mein ek officer….mein tumhare saath hargiz nahi rah sakti"

kesar said sternly "nahi gulaal abhi iske siwai aur koi raasta nahi hai tum bhuj mein meri jimmedari ho ab yanhase tumhe safely ghar pahunchana meri jimmedari hai mein is tarah tumhe akele nahi chod sakta"

gulaal said "par"

kesar interrupted "tumhe yanhi problem haina ki mein ek chor hun thek hai jabtak tum mere saath ho mein koi bhi galat kaam nahi karunga I promise" he said honeslty

gulaal replied "par tumne us din mujhse so joo kaha tha ki tum mujse pyaar…. uske baad mein tumhare saath kaise reh sakti hun"

kesar said sternly "us baat ko bhool jaayee memsahib ek deewane k naadani samajh kar maaf kar dijeyega mujhe laga ki kichad (mud) mein kamal (lotus) khil (blossom) sakte hain par mein galat tha yankeen manayee mein aapko is bare mein pareshan nahi karunga…"

he looked at her with moist eyes and said in cracked voice "memsahib aap kisi aur ki amanat hai aur mein is baat ko samajhta hun"

his word pierced her heart and her soul cried at his harsh word but she was silent and hung her head down in desperation

meanwhile kunal came inside the house and shouted "kesar kesar woo" and he looked at gulaal he was confounded he gained himself and said "woo kesar briyani khani hai neeraj sir?"

gulaal looked at kunal and said "nice try"

and then she asked for her bedroom and then went inside the room and locked it

after she left kunal looked kesar angrily

kesar looked at him and said "dekh samjhaane de mujhe"

but kunal didn't listened and hit him and said "tu paagal ho gaya hai kya dimag kharab ho gaya hai arey ek police officer ko apne ghar le aaya aur iski engagement thi dushyant k saath abe muchad hume goli se uda dega"

kesar said "sun to le yaar mein akele hi yanha aa raha tha par raaste mein dekha ki wanha woo musibat mein thi to sirf use bachane k liye use yanha le aaya"

kunal replied "abe use to bacha lega par hume kaun bacheyaga usese..woo police cop hai yaar aur woo diamond bhi yanhi hai aur saath din baad peter aa raha hai heera lene gulaal ko yanha koi surag mil gaya to hume tere sasural k chakki peesni padegi"

kesar said "chinta mat kar kuch dekh lenge aur dekh uuse yanha renhe dete hai mat bhul kunal uusne mere jaan bachayi thi…mujhe bachane k chakkar mein to woo is durgesh k chakkar mein phass gayi…aj mein uski wajah se jee raha hun"

kunal looked at him and replied sarcastically "tu jinda kanha hai kesar" looking at his pain

kesar looked at him and brushed it off he stood and said "arey…paagal..hai…kya….aisa kuch nahi hai….kuch din k baad hai dekhna durgesh ne seedhe shootout karke dushyant aur police force se panga liya hai woo nahi chodega uuse aur phir kunal tujhe kuch bhi information durgesh k bare mein mile to tu sharma ko de dena jab durgesh inactive ho jaayega to gulaal waapas chali jaayegi"

kunal said "tu apni soch kesar tune kabhi socha hai tu kya karega kaise uska saamna karega"

kesar looked at other direction and with immense pain said "arey mera kya hai mein thek hun aur phir tune hi to kaha tha k pehle jaise hasta khelta kesar ban jaa dekhna jab tak woo mere saath rehegi mere dard ka use ehsaas hi nahi hoga…uske saamne hasta hua kesar hi rehega"

and he smiled controlling his tears in his eyes

kunal looked at his vulnerable eyes and placed his hand on his shoulder and said "itna bhi mat hasna kesar ki dard akhoon se ansoo ban kar chalak jaaye…"

kesar looked at him and broke down in tears" it hurts kunal it really hurts…and he cried "bahoot takleef hoti hai ……kyu pyaar kiya meine kyu…..it hurts kunal"

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Posted: 13 years ago
yeah it hurts and nothing better than that could cure it...

mujhe laga ki kichad (mud) mein kamal (lotus) khil (blossom) sakte hain par mein galat tha yankeen manayee mein aapko is bare mein pareshan nahi karunga'"


These lines are my fav..👏...Thank u arti..update soon dear
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

ok guys chapii 27 updted wrote superfast pata nahi par kuch to likha hai 😃 thank alot guyz

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arti...nice chappie yaar...

I hope kesar ka wish sach ho...n gulaal taking his help n expecting to arrest him...why not galool hai yeh...
Duggu ka plan flop...dushy saying he will see duggu ka end...tum dono lado aur ladki koh bas kesar ke liye chodo...
Gulaal dream was so sweet...liked their convo regarding eating burger...offo kesar having FBs of gulaals words...he is sad n me tooo...
Me also love that song from JTYJN...
Sauce wala scene bhi bahut achcha tha yaar...
Bhuj pahuchgayee...n see she is showing nakhras...saying how can she stay here in his house...kyun kesar ke against evidence hotel se kaise milenge...
pyaar karha hai issi liye nahi rehsakthi...magar ghar se engagement ke din bhaag sakthi hai iske saath...yeh bhagwaan yeh ladki bhi na...kesar koh paagal kar degi...
Me loved kesars reply when he says that abt kheechad, kamal n also when he says that she is some others amaanath...
These days me liking kunal n kesar convos soo much...they share a very good bond...just hope ki gulaal ke wajai se yeh dosti na toote...
Kunal such a good friend of keasr...he knew each feeling of kesar...
Kesar is very hurt n me also very very hurt😭...aakhir usne pyaar kyun kiya...kithna khush tha FF ka starting mein...

Update soon yaar...

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
finished reading,short comment loved it.will give a detailed one tomorrow😃

loved the whole romance in the car bit with the kahin to hogi woh song playing in the background.I felt so sad for Kesar.He feels so much love for her and he has to control his emotions around her yet they just spill out sometimes unknowingly like with mustard sauce incident.That was so intense yet so touching.And you have shown his heartbreak so beautifully through his thoughts and dialogues especially when he breaks down in front of Kunal.loved the "kamal in khichad" and the "kisi aur ki amaanat" dialogues.Kunal's stand is understandable.He is concerned for his friend's well being.I do love his character here.A beautiful chapter and I can still hear the "kahin tho...hogi woh"-so romantic but heartrending too,perfect song for this situation.
Arti,thanks a lot for this update and eagerly looking forward to the next one😊
Edited by minizz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowieee nice chapi arti..
itni jaldi jaldi mai bhi u write such a fab chappi..loved the lotus lines...fab it is...the mustard scene was just wow

but kesar's pain is so unbearable..kithna dashing chor tha..ab devdaas ban ke reh gaya
i wish gullu surrender to her feelings soon..
Edited by nneeiill - 13 years ago
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So just to clarify from my last comment - I realized they were not going to have the flimsy cute romance at hand, because their predicaments are far removed from that! But when I say happy, I just mean GK pushed to be together - by hook or by crook! With Gulaal being a bull head, and Kesar breaking but resolving to stay put for her sake, I anticipate some great fun (read: intense dramatics) up ahead - and like you said, can't tale less than an apocalypse for the dawn of revelation to descend upon dear Galool

Dushyant's swearing to get back Gulaal safe and render justice for Duggu's attack had me roll eyes and laugh. I still feel a tad for him, poor guy playing collateral damage to the GK love story but his 'dreams' are plain amusing 😆

Looking forward to the next chapter soon - especially, of course, how Kesar gets to dealing with Gulaal's contant presence, and rebuke, thereby the implicit rejection! I just dig the way he shoves 'polite' back at her everytime she's on the burner rude!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Arti my chotu govinda.🤗.tu my skeleton dhunding na..ye le..😆

nachooo


aur wah wah kya chappi likha.👏.me so emotional..😭a chappi with so many different shades.👏.oh the burger sequence and gullu ka logic.😆.iske saath rahungi to iske khilaaf saboot..had me in splits 😆and that song sequence..it is one of my fav song...i just lubbed it..and dushy..tujhe to andaaza bhi nahi hai ki kabhi na hone wali teri dulhan bhag gayi..superchor k saath...😉

Oh kunnu bandar ko muchhad aur uski goli ki padi hai..😆and kesu ka kamal aur kichad wala dialogue...⭐️mujhe rona aying...kesudaa..😭

arti jaldi se chii wala chappi la..😛..taki main tamatarmukhi ban jaun😳

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