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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rsk16

very heart wrenching update .really great

thanks alot😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Oh I see how the 'universe' is going to conspire and make things happen, I think - or at least am closer guessing it now, smart thinking Arti!thanks alot Kesar is never going to be the easily, happily accepted case in Gulaal's life - but here comes a chance to prove himself somewhere after all!

yes he needs to proof himself they need to understand them alot its not a easy case
Although, there is the whole deal of no one knowing how Neeraj is Kesar - so that's going to be a foil I suppose, even he saves the day this once. lets see

Gulaal's turmoil is just plain sad. From her POV, at this point in such predicament, it's just hard to imagine if the coming of love for real in her life, for the first time, hasn't been more bane than boon! u always left in awe what to say fantastic ur comments matters alot
And so their love brings to my mind yet another poem - oh kick me for random references, but here goes -

I said to Love,
"Thou art not young, thou art not fair,
No faery darts, no cherub air,
Nor swan, nor dove
Are thine; but features pitiless,
And iron daggers of distress,"
I said to Love.
oh thats excellent and heart touching poem loved it
Update soon again 🤗 yaa will update thanks alot for liking

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bioinfo

wat😲sagayi nahiii 😭arey koi rokko is ladki ko 😭jaldi upadet kar aur likh ke sagayi tut gayi😛

thek hai jaldi se updte karti hun thanks for ur comment
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

uff arti mera bohot kuch karne ka dil karing 😆 kaho kaho me listening u know itnay saray chapis parhne men kisi chapi pe dil kiya k i should cry, somewhr i thought to laugh, somewhr my heart completely broke, somewhr some hope did build up, somewhr i felt like throwing mojris hahahaha 😆 he he he end mein mojiris phekne ka hi maan karega i guarantee but somewhr i thought nahi nahi no mojris only hugs 😉 oww hugswa to u too per ab agar gulaal ki engagement hogayi na toh main kesar ko marun gi 😉 haan uuse char lagana us k hotay how can the engagement happen yar, kunal ki baat sun raha hai aray go n stop the engagement 😃 kaise how mana gulaal ko, n oh yar blue dress 😍 sho cute me loving it so much, so desperate for the next chapi wese arti shadi men koi bara drama hone wala hai kya? haanji hoga jaror hoga me feeling that n woh durgesh ko paani men phenko koiii hehehe lovely story yar, jaldi se next update la 😃 thanks alot jaldi laungi


Note: Aik line men reply mat dena 🤣 😆 atleast 2 lines karlena yar 😆pata nahi kinte lines likhi count kar lena...thanks alot for liking

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Arti last two chappis padhke main behaal..Oh no my voice is choking...Gullu kesu😭fantastic and emotional updates ekdum arti ishtyle..lubbed the emotions😭 ...haila mein kabse emotional queen ban gaayi😲😲😲

Gullu ki engagement mat kara warna main frown karke baithing..yeh lo langoor ko fox ko nahi diya ...now this fox is eyeing on the khata angoor after gullu kesu all mine😃 *pat my back* good job haina


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Posted: 13 years ago

chapter 26

here kesar was leaving for bhuj

Before leaving he wished to see gulaal for the last time...he sat in the car and stopped outside the farmhouse

he stood at the near distance he looked out at the farm house desparately searching her...his love was destroyed but his longing was unchanged his passion was severe...he wanted to look her for the last time so that he can capture her in his eyes...he wanted to see her as someone else bride so that he could break his meek hope forever...he stood there with the storm of tears caged inside him and here gulaal was crying bitterly...she had lost him forever..his vulnerable face was haunting her and she was guilty of her soul of her heart...

kesar was looking there and he saw durgesh car stopped near distance he quickly slid behind the bushes and saw 10 members came out of car in police uniform

one of them called durgesh and said "bhai hum police uniform mein aa chuke hai ab chupchap ander jaa kar gulaal ka khel khatam kar denge"

kesar was horrorified to hear it...he was frightened to knew gulaal was in danger he quickly dialled her number but gulaal was not in the state to pick the cell

the gangster quietly went inside one by one in the uniform since they were in disguise and were having id cards the police gaurds on protocol hardly recognize them

kesar said to himself "kya karu sharma ka cell nahi lag raha kya karu"

and then an idea struck in his mind he quickly went near the gangster jeep and punctured it and with the high speed he went inside the car and parked the car in the dense bushes at the backyard of the farm house

he came out of the car put his handgloves and came near a guard who was on protocol...he put the choloroform laden cloth over guard's mouth and made the guard inhaled it in few seconds guard lost his senses and he collapsed on the ground... carefully he took the guard in the dark and exchanged his clothes and then he in the police uniform went inside the farm house

dushyant and revji were surrounded with the guests hence were unaware about the surroundings the other guards were also in jovial mood so noone really paid attention to what happened in the fraction of seconds

here durgesh member talked with themselves and said to one of the gangster "upar gulaal hai tum jaakar gulaal ka khel khatam kar do...aur raja tum lobby par nazar rakhan aur hum yanha 5 min baad shoot out shuru kar denge.akhir pata chalna chahiye logo ko durgesh k gang se takkarana ka anjaam kitna bura hota"

the two gangsters went inside the farmhouse and rest of the members stood in the garden area waiting for the 5 min to get over

kesar looked at the farmhouse and saw gulaal was sitting infront of the mirror with her head down

he quickly went inside the farmhouse

here the sharpshooter found gulaal's room her friends and relatives were about to go inside to take her to downstairs for engagement the sharpshooter interrupted and said in police guard uniform "aap sabko revji neeche bula rahe hain kuch jaruri baat karni hai"

her friends and relatives nodded their head.

And then the gangster went inside

Gulaal lifted her head and saw the gangster standing infront of her...she was about to speak but the gangster took out his gun and pointed towards her...gulaal was shocked...she couldn't react

Then with the reflex kesar came inside the room he saw the gangster he quickly grabbed his arm from behind and with the jerk knock him down...he hit him with the metal vase and the gangster lost his consciousness..and then he looked at gulaal who was numbed...kesar went near her examined her and wrapped her in his arms and murmured "thank god tum theek ho"..the warmth of his body brought life back in gulaal...the girl who was lifeless now breathed and she pressed her arms around him and hold him tightly

Kesar consoled her "shhh...nahi gulaal kuch nahi hua hai...mein aa gaaya hun tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga" securing her in his arm...they stood hugging each other tightly

And then he heard the shootout kesar quickly ran towards the window and saw there was a massive shootout..the gangmembers began to shoot to sabotage the function and the police force came and gunbattle was going on...kesar looked at gulaal who was standing there bedazzled as she could only see him...her man was infront of her and for her the only one who matter was him

Kesar looked at her and extended his hand and said "chalo gulaal hume yanha se nikalna hoga tumhari jaan khatre mein hai"

Gulaal put her hand on his and he took her out of the room...gulaal was like dry leave who was flowing with her autumn breeze...he was taking her and she silently obeyed him...in the lobby the other gangster looked at gulaal and tried to shoot her but kesar who had already taken gulaal's gun shot him at his shoulder and he fell on the ground

and then he carefully took gulaal at the backyard while shootout was going out inside they jumped out of the boundary wall...all the guards who were at protocol ran inside so noone noticed them and they ran to the near distance where kesar had parked his car in the densed bushes...gulaal sat on the car...kesar took his clothes and disppeared in the darkness

Here at the khanna house gunbattle was going on..in the fight a gangster shot at dushyant...to escape from the bullet duhyant fell on the sharp triangle bricks and his head was injured badly and he collapsed on the ground..after much fight the police force managed to kill the gangster..some of the guard quickly went inside the gangster present at the lobby tried to shoot them but they shot him back and ... the sharpshooter gain the consiouness he came out and started shooting at the guards who in turn shot him dead...and then the guards went inside the room searched for gulaal but she was found nowhere

They came out in fear

Revji asked "gulaal kanha hai uuse kuch hua to nahi"

Guards hung their head down and said "sir gulaal madam ka kuch pata nahi chal raha"

Revji shrank in fear he was pale and frightened...he then looked at dushyant who regained consiousness and he stood up and asked "sir gulaal kanha hai"

Revji said fearfully "gulaal yanha nahi hai usko bahoot dhunda par woo nahi mili"

Dushant sank down he said to himself "kanha hogi woo thek hai yaa nahi" and he rolled his eyes in fear

Here kesar and gulaal were in the car..kesar was driving the car with high speed looking from the rear mirror to make sure nobody followed them and she was looking at him fondly...they had reached in the outskirts of delhi

Then after sometime gulaal snapped out of her thoughts...she realized today was her engagement...dushyant and revji were facing shootout there...she was scared for them..kesar turned on fm radio where the news reporter informed about the shootout and that all the gangster were killed and dushyant and revji were safe...gulaal took a deep breath

And then she said "kesar stop the car"

Kesar looked at her in surprise kya?.car rok do par kyu

Gulaal looked angrily and said "I said stop the car kesar"

Kesar stopped the car

Gulaal looked at him and then came out of the car and started walking

Kesar tried to stopped her "kanha jaa rahi ho gulaal"

Gulaal overlooked him and started walking

Kesar grabbed her by arm and said angrily "bas gulaal bahoot manmaani kar li...tum kanhi nahi jaa rahi"

Gulaal pulled her back and replied "tum paagal ho gaye ho?..r u mad or mujhe meri engagement mein se kaise le aaye aur mein waapas jaa rahi hun"

Kesar looked at her angrily and replied "gulaal dimaag tumhara kharab ho gaya hai...woo durgesh k aadmi the tumhe maarne aaye the tumhari jaan khatre mein hai gulaal...tum wanha nahi jaugi hargiz nahi"

Gulaal looked back and said acha "tum rukoge aur phir kya pata woo shootout tumne nahi karvaya...meri engagement kharab karne k liye"

Kesar grabbed her and looked deep in her eyes and said "tumhe aisa lagta hai k mein tumhe koi nuksaan pahucha sakta hun"

Gulaal didn't said anything and drop her eyelids

Kesar looked at her with love and said in low voice "joo ilzaam dena hai gulaal de lo par mein tumhe waapas nahi jaane dunga tumhari jaan khatre mein hai "

He continued "gulaal plz meri baat samjhne k koshish karo dekho aaj yeh shootout hua hai sirf tumhare liye tum to bach gayi par is shootout mein naa jaane kitne log ghayal hue hai..is tarah tumhari wajah se tumhare apne bhi musibat mein pad sakte hai"

He said "gulaal mein tumse kaha tha naa kuch din k liye kanhi chali jao durgesh k maan mein abhi bas apne bhai ka badla lene ka junoon hai kuch din mein jab yeh khatam ho jaaye to aa jana..tum kanhi bhi jaa sakti ho gulaal..bas is shahar se door raho plz"

He thought and said "gulaal tum mere saath chal sakti ho mein bhuj jaa raha hun...durgesh sapne mein bhi nahi soch sakta ki tum mere saath hogi"

Gulaal heard it and yelled "what?? Mein tumhare saath jaao r u crazy?..mr kesar meri fikr karne k jarurat nahi hai...mein apna dhyaan rakh sakti hun aur phir mat bhulo mere pita or honewaale pati donno police officer woo mera khayal rakh lenge"

Kesar was hurt to hear it..he closed his eyes in frustration and then said "thek hai memsahib jaisa aap thek samjhe"

He then called the taxi and said to the driver "memsahib janha jaana chahe unhe chod dena"

And then he glared at gulaal with teary eyes he said "shaadi mubarak"

And turned his face and started walking towards the car

Gulaal also turned her face in anger and said "stupid chindichor"

and started walking towards the taxi

Both walked away from each other...

While walking gulaal thought "kya karu mein kuch samjh nahi aa raha...mein agar waapas jaungi to phir se mujhe dushyantji k saath sagai?.nahi mein abhi unse sagai nahi kar sakti mein kuch samay chahati hun itni jaldi nahi...par kesar k saath jaana thek hoga?aur papa unka kya woo kya sochenge" she was contemplating on her thought and heard the car engine she turned back and saw kesar had started his car and he drived away

Gulaal heart pounded hard she shiver with the thought of losing him again not seeing him again..she was blank

And without losing any sec she sat in the taxi and said "chalo bhaiyya jaldi us car ka peecha karo"

Driver was amused he asked "madam ji jab unke saath jaana tha to phir hume kyu rukwaaya"

Gulaal looked at him and said "bakwaas karne k jarurat nahi hai aur chupchap unke peeche chalo samjhe"

And he followed her instruction and began to drive to catch kesar

Kesar drove to the distance and saw the taxi was following him he applied the brakes in frustration

He got out of the car gulaal came out from the taxi

Kesar looked at her in frustration and asked angrily"what the hell ab kya problem hai kyu mera peecha kar rahi ho"

Gulaal replied angrily "sharam nahi aati ek ladki ko uski engagement mein se bhaga kar akela chod diya..sach mein daddy ne tumhe kuch bhi nahi seekhaya"

And she sat in the car

Kesar was amused to hear it he couldn't resist to smile...he smiled widely and then walked towards his car and started the car

Edited by arti07 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok guys chapii 26 updated 😛
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Arti...happy shappy chapter after 2 rona dhona chaoters...
loved there hug very much...n also gulaal only looking at him when there is soo much happening around her...ab kesar ka asar kuch aisa hi hai...
dekha...ladka ne bhaagne koh kaha..aur ladki ek dum raazi hai😆
offo..phir se galool, mode mein chali gayee...n she is blaming kesar for this also...
he so much care for her na when he says what ever u want to think abt me i dont care but please stay away from the city...
achah ur father n honewaali husband will take care of u...ab koun bhachaaya tujhe...
bechaara usse ab bhi hurt karrahi hai na...
loved cab driver n gulaal convo...
offo...the last was sooo good n dil khush hua Arti...

Wiating for next one...expecting some good light moments between them...update soon...


Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maine res nahin kiya hai 🥱
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Heheheh..Arthi..I lubed d chappie...😳😳😳😳lubed d lost gullu n hug..☺️..n then at last phir uska ostrich roop..😆.agar dushty ko mardiya hotha..tho dil ko sukoon miltha..😳😳😳😃.n then last ka humor bhari lines..(kiske liye daali hai humor😛).😳😳😳daddy ne nahin sikhaye...n u know I lub u..☺️...but love u more for this chappie...arthi..
😳😳😳😳😳
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Arti,this one was great.loved the humour in it.and so good to smile after 2 back to back emotional chapters. Durgesh bhaiya aap kahaan hain?main aapke charan choona chahti hoon😆His plan worked to our beloved jodi's advantage.and chindichor kidnapping the girl-loved the whole action sequence.Gulaal tried to be Galool for some time but Kesar ka jaadoo chal gaya.I know,Gulaal's reason for going with him is different but it's just an excuse😊I loved the exchange between the taxiwala and madamji.hilarious.that guy stole the show with his one line👏and the ending bit-so sweet.loved Gulaal's dialogue.now eagerly waiting to see the adventures of Chindichor and his madamji😆Great job Arti.It was a complete masala entertainer😃
Edited by minizz - 13 years ago

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