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Posted: 13 years ago
Short comments this time Arti - sorry for that - but to say for the nth time, untiringly, I love the ambivalence of heart and mind both G and K are facing. K, a little less, not because he's understands the 'love' more profoundly, but because he's more the kind of person to introspect more fearlessly and sans inhibition as opposed to Gulaal who is likely to take her time battling down the - this is wrong I must not think like this - prude rule!

Their encounters are delightful as ever, I love how punk Kesar gets and how Gulaal is ever so ready to be miffed! I swear is she showed him one time of no reaction, it would get under his nerves so much more than all the times she tries to argue or demean him, which actually amuses him, because she lacks conviction out and out 😆

Overall - the progress of their bond - so credible, and so fun! ☺️ Abhi next update kab hona?! 🤔

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Posted: 13 years ago
Aarey next chappie kahaan hai???😭
I love dis FF dnt axe it😭
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Arthi...ye sab kya kehe rahe hai..😲oye jaldi se next chappie..la..jyada bhaav math khaa abhi..😆nikamme wickedians..ye word kahin suna tha maine..😉😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 10

Next morning gulaal woke up she saw she was holding kesar's necklace close to her heart…she had slept holding the necklace gulaal looked at it in suprise and then threw the necklace in anger….and then she got up and started getting ready for her office…she was standing infront of mirror brushing her hair…while she kept looking at the necklace that she threw on the floor with confusion

Then she heard knock at her door

It was bulbul her only friend since childhood

Bulbul came in…gulaal hugged her and said "kanha thi inti din yaad nahi aayi"

Bulbul "ab tu police mein hai ab teri yaad jyada nahi karni chahiye pata haina police waalo ki dosti achi nahi hoti"

Gulaal replied "pata nahi kaise psychatrist ban gayi tu sach mein paagal hai chal mein chai mangwaati hun phir saath mein nikalenge"

Gulaal called her servant to bring tea and snacks

And bulbul took her cell carelessly she was searching her cellphone and she saw the picture of kesar that gulaal clicked from her mobile for the investigation purpose

Bulbul was amused she asked "guaal tere cell mein ek ladke k pics sach mein progress kar rahi hai…..wow kinta cute hai…kaun hai"

Gulaal looked at her and replied chor hai"

Bulbul asked "kitno k dil churaye hai…itna handsome ladka to sirf ladkiyon k dil chura sakta hai"

Gulaal was irritated she said "bulbul ab tujhe chor bhi acha lagne laga u r a limit"

Bulbul said "acha chal ise chod tu bata dushyant k saath kaam karke kaisa lag raha hai….tum log kafi time spend karte hoge naa saath mein"

Gulaal become resltess she avoided her and looked in other direction

She said bulbul "tu faltu k baat mat kar"

Bulbul said "arey galat kya hai tu to janti haina…."

Gulaal interrupted "chai aa gayi hai chupchap chai pee"

Bulbul took a sip and then she saw the necklace on the floor

She picked it up and said "hey gulaal kinta sundar necklace hai yanha kyu pada tha"

Gulaal looked at necklace said "isliye kyuki mujhe nahi pasand…phek diya tha"

Bulbul said "bahoot acha necklace hai…mein rakh leti hun"

Gulaal looked at the necklace with force took the necklace and said "nahi…tum mat lo"

Bulbul asked "arey yeh kya baat hui na rakhna hai na kisiko dena hai..kya baat hai"

Gulaal was uneasy even she didn't knew y she didn't want to give that necklace to bulbul wen she didn't wanted to keep it….

She made an accuse "kyunki yeh mere relative ne gift mein diya..agar tumhare pass yeh necklace dekh lega to use bura lagega"

Bulbul said smilingly "koi baat nahi chal chlate hai bahoot der ho rahi hai"

CID office

Gulaal sitting in her office she was staring her laptop blankly her mind was preoccupied with kesar's thoughts…gulaal always considered him as counterfeiter when she thought about him she was realizing that there was something beyond her job that made her think of him…this man had really stuck in her mind….

She thought "Jab mein usese nafrat karti hun jab woo sirf ek mujrim hai to phir mein uske baare mein hamesha kyu sochiti hun"…she wondered

Gulaal recalled all the moments with kesar but her thoughts never permitted her to remember any bad memories with kesar….she always thought about her sweet moment with him…..she tried to hard to recall how much kesar had irritated her but always the caring and loving kesar flashed in her mind…that irritated her more she slammed the table in frustration

Meanwhile dushyant came in her cabin he saw her and asked itne dhyaan se kiske baare mein soch rahi ho"

Gulaal blurted out "kesar k baare mein"

Dushyant looked at her and said "ajkal tum sirf kesar k baat karti ho agar woo criminal nahi hota to mein usese jealous feel karta"

Gulaal said "sir woo sochna to padega hi humara kaam hi yanhi hai"

Dushyant said "gulaal mere khayal se tumhe kesar k case par kaam nahi karna chahiye"

Gulaal was shocked she said "sir kyu mein to is case par kaam kar rahi thi"

Dushyant said "gulaal tum abhi nayi aayi ho aur aati hi meine tumhe sabse difficult case de diya its wrong…shuruat mein inta difficult case tumhe dena thek nahi hai"

Gulaal replied "sir mein investigation kar rahi hun aur jaldi hi koi na koi clue haath aa jayega"

Dushyant replied "I appreciate ur gesture gulaal but mein tumahra senior hun tumhare career k liye yeh case abhi sahi nahi hai…..ise senior officer handle kar lenge tum koi dusare cases lo isese tumhe learn karne ka jyada muaka milega"

Dushyant said "ek kaam karo tum south delhi k area ko cover karo woo area ab tumhare under mein hoga…ab kesar k case mein pareshaan hone k jarurat nahi hai"

Gulaal replied "but sir mein…"

Dushyant its an order gulaal

Gulaal didn't argue any further and the a new case was given to her….

And dushyant left the cabin

Gulaal was not happy with dushyant's decision she was ordered not to investigate him not to meet him again….though dushyant had taken a right decision but there was a fact that gulaal had met kesar….his personality has certainly made a deep impact on her and while she was investigating the case she could easily see him meet him talk to him unleash her anger her undefined frustration on him but now not seeing him hearing him again made her miserable

She came back home late night and was resltess…there was complex feeling for this decision

Gulaal said yeh kya baat hui pehle inti din tak kesar k peecha kiya aur ab achanak se yeh case mujh se le liya….not fair

And she closed her eyes in frustration….and then she thought and said "par sir ne thek hi kiya hai mere career k liye yeh decision shayad thek hai mein baaki k cases ko assist karungi to jyada seekh paungi is case mein to koi saboot koi gawah kuch bhi nahi hai….sir ne sahi kiya hai par phir mujhe itna gussa kyu aa raha hai

Kyu inti taqkleef ho rahi hai"

All the night she dwelt on this thought that grew more and more mysterious

For Next 2 days gulaal went to work in quite low mood she sat in her cabin and tried to study the case given to her but she couldn't concentrate….certainly she thought of kesar with much frequency…never she had wished so much to see him again after their encounter at various occasions…his presence affected her greatly…..gulaal had never allowed any boy to come near her she never permitted anyone to love her as it was taboo for her and she was satisfied with it as she was told by her elders and relatives love is sheer waste of time and till now she had belived this fact using it to strenghten the purpose of her life….but as a girl she did dreamt about someone who love her passionately that was hidden beneath the moral principles of her thought….and now her dreams that previously reflected blurred image of a unknown stranger were taking shape of kesar slowly and steadily….kesar had attracted her and not the less because of his wrong deeds….for her he was a person wholly without principle wrong man in every sense….. here was the man who was imperfect…. person that her mind disdain but her heart willing to think about him more and more…..as her interest grew for this mysterious person her curiosity become more haunting and complex for her…certainly she had feel the attraction and passion for her in him……feelings that she could sense were genuine for her….she wanted to close her door to her instinct that kept knocking her but they plainly refuge to get tammed…she was enchanted by him…. she cant consider it as love nor it was the beginning of love certainly not with a theif but

what was it then? Y his personality appeared so charming to her y his touch was so familiar??

Under the strict rules and regulation of moral values and ethical thought was it correct to think about kesar? Was it correct to look him as a human filled with sweet emotions for her..she the subject of his passion….was it possible to consider themselves individuals who were developing attraction for each other….this was the strange question posed on her and she had to understand the new dimension of her personality she had to resolve her physical curiosity for him

Gulaal closed the files in desparation..she got up from the chair and looked out of the window she turned around and saw kesar he was sitting on chair winking his eyes with a playful smile….she was shocked and after a sec it disappeared

and now gulaal imagined him every now and then

She imagined him playing football as she came out of her CID office in her corridor

At night while having dinner with her father gulaal imagined kesar sitting smiling at her and saying "gulaal khana 24 baar byte karke khana chahiye papa ne nahi seekhaya" and she was numbed her concentration broke wen her father asked "gulaal blank chair k taraf kyu dekh rahi ho" and she was confounded

Gulaal imagined kesar massaging her feet while she was laying in her bed

And she closed her eyes in fear and open it again not see him

Next morning gulaal was getting ready infront of mirro and she imagaind him standing close to her and kissing his finger placing in her cheeks…gulaal squeezed her eyes shut and said to herself "enough bahoot ho gaya……yeh sab kya ho raha hai…mujhe professional help leni padegi!"

And she drove to bulbul's clinic as she was pyshcatrist

Bulbul' cabin

Gulaal entered her cabin…bulbul saw her and greeted her

She asked "gulaal yanha kaise kya hua"

Gulaal "help leni hai problem hai yaar"

And then she explained her the whole situation her illusions

Gulaal said restlessly "kuch samajh nahi aa raha bulbul kya ho raha hai….ankhen band karti ho uska chehra ankhon k saamne aa jata hai….aankhen kholu to woo ass pass nazar aata hai…aisa lagta hai har pal har lamha uska saaya mera peecha kar raha hai…yeh sab kya ho raha hai"

Bulbul smiled and said agar "to officer nahi hoti aur woo chor nahi hota to kah deti tujhe pyaar ho gaya hai"

Gulaal was shocked she replied in irritation "bulbul faltu k bakwaas mat kar

Bulbul said relax "gulaal koi problem nahi hai"

Gulaal asked kaise

Bulbul said "dekh gulaal kesar tera subject hai inti din se din raat to sirf uske case k baare mein soch raahi hai uska peecha kar rahi hai uske baare mein information le rahi hai...din raat jab uske baare mein sochegi to use imagine kar rahi hai…..it so common"

She contiuned "gulaal jab hum exams k preparation karte hain aur din raat jab subect ko padhte hai bas humare man mein sirf usi subject k notes ghumte rehte hai yaa phir koi achi movie dekhte hai to uske scenes maan mein aate hain isi tarah kesar k baare mein information lete lete to usko imagine kar rahi hai…isme koi problem nahi hai"

Gulaal was unsatisfied she thought in mind "agar aisa hai to phir maan bechain kyu ho raha hai….kyu itni ghabarahat hoti hai….movies aur exams mein to aisa nahi hota"

Bulbul told her to take rest and said "gulaal relax kuch nahi hua hai tu thek hai bas ab kesar se apna man hata le waise bhi ab dushyant ji ne tujhe dusara case de diya hai tu bas ab is case ko aur is kesar k chapter ko close kar de"

Gulaal just looked at her and left

At night she returned home and saw kesar was sitting in her chair he was looking at her fondly

Gulaal closed her eyes and said "oh no not again" and just overlooked him

Kesar called her "gulaal apne guest ko inti cold response deta hai kya"

Gulaal rolled her eyes and turned back kesar was standing behind her she was shocked did she wake up in her dreams or her dreams came to life

Kesar snapped his finger and asked kya hua….??

Gulaal collected herself and said angrily "u tum yanha mere ghar mein himmat kaise hui yanha aane ki"

Kesar replied "arey do din se tumne mera peecha nahi kiya mujhpar gussa nahi kiya koi dhamki nahi di mujhe laga kanhi bimar to nahi ho gayi…..waise bhi jab tak mein apni red angry bird ko naa dekh lu din poora kanha hota hai"

Gulaal placed her arms around his neck pushed him and said "aa to gaye par aaj nahi chodungi"

Kesar stared at her and she softened her hand

kesar asked "iraada kya hai memsahib"

Gulaal said she removed her hand and asked "what"

And instantly kesar siezed her and pulled her close

Gulaal reacted she wanted to knock him out but kesar seized her wrist and twisted it back and hold her other hand with his other hand

Kesar asked "waise sirf mujhe mein interest hai yaa koi aur bhi hai?"

Gulaal stared a him angrily and said "what the hell"

He said while holding her "sirf choro mein interest hai yaa aapka department drug dealers yaa smugglers par bhi dhyaan deta hai"

Gulaal raised her eyes and asked "kyu puch rahe ho"

Then kesar placed a note in her hand and released her

He said "kal old delhi mein ek badi drug dealing hone waali kafi saara coccin k dealing hai yeh address tumhare haath mein hain thek kal raat k 1:30 baje…agar interest ho to pahunch jaana"

She asked "aur mein tumhara bharosa kaise karu"

Kesar smiled and said "yeh apne dil se pucho"

Gulaal asked "tumhara kya interest hai"

Kesar replied "well mujhe durg dealers murderers etc etc kuch khaas pasand nahi aur mein ek responsible indian citizen hone ka farz nibha raha hu"

Gulaal said ofcourse ek tumhe to ho responsible baaki hum sab to chor hai

Gulaal further asked "par mein hi kyu…mujhe kyu bataya"

Kesar replied aur koi hai kya tumse jyada charming uska address de do use bata dunga"

Gulaal turned her face

Kesar replied "softly meine tumhe kaafi pareshan kiya hai aur mere wajah se tumhare office mein kafi badnaami hui thi isliye…."

He said "gulaal jo bhi maal pakad jaye uska govt commission old age home aur orphange mein donate kar dena.."

And then he said in concern voice "gulaal woo drug dealers durgesh k gang members kafi khatarnaak hai isliye bahoot saari logo k saath jaana aur apna khayal rakhna is chaand se chehre mein daag nahi lagna chahiye"

And he walked towards the window

Gulaal said "fir tum nahi baochoge"

He smiled and turned back and said "mein to kabka maar gaya"

And he slid out of the window and escaped

Gulaal ran to the window and he was nowhere

She called guards and saw her two guards were sleeping

She said in frustration "yeh guards bhi naa soo rahe hai…agar kal kesar mujhe utha kar bhi le jaaye to bhi yeh log sote rahenge"

And she pursued her lips she turned back and saw a red angry bird cushion toy was present in her bed….kesar had placed it on her bed…she looked at it and a smile escaped on her face…the smile that vanished for past two days

And then she looked at the note and thought seriously

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edit:

Arti...just wanna tell you that I love this ff soo much...but dont want to force you to continue this...but if you wish to continue than please do share with me...i always enjoyed reading this one n also your previous one...by the way lovely chapter yaar...

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
phew i wrote chapii 10😕 but i m not at all enthusiastic about the ff i was writing without any interest i m not sure i will bring the next or not...mujhe yeh ff starting se bakwaas lag raha hai and besides i know its bekaar...so not very keen
i thank all of u for ur comment and kind gesture thank u once again
and there are other ff that are sheer fantastic
plz ab mat kehna chapii lene k liye
thank u once again bye guyz
Edited by arti07 - 13 years ago
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aray arti kya keh rahi hai 😲 dont worry i vl bear all kind of dhamkis for u dont u worry, n mujhe bhi itni hi dhamki milengen yar no tension 😆 n i have started updating one chapi in a week as i m not getting the time to write the chapters, shukar aj time mila toh idhar aa k surf kar kar k forum ki jaan le li main ne 😆 n arti ur FF has crazy fans yar, u write wonderfully, n yes u r right i have also seen those FFs with 100s of likes n comments n us men main point chi hi hota hai 😕 those ppl i think r obsessed with chi 😕 ok i know some parts men this can be shown but not always na, per wahan toh ahhh i love my forum n FF writers here yaar 😃 n haan PM bhi tu karegi, n chapi post karna na plz plz plz arti *looking at u with innocent face* 😳
yaar i just brought new chapii and was so bored kya likhun...kuch nahi likhna mujhe sach mein me good at silent stalker bas wahi karungi yeh sab not my cup of tea
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Keithuu

aarti...main idhar rone aayi hun...i want next chappi abhi ke abhi...😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

jaate jaate tujhe danda maarke going...

danda mujhe nahi us paagal mysterious girl ko maaro jisne mujhe itne pm bhej diye k mein dubloo hoing and brought this bhangar chiii
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

My chotu govinda mujhe bhi sirf hardly 11-12 likes milte hain😭..but really it does not dampen my spirit to write about KG .I respect and love the members who read and comment.👏.mere itne friends yaahn chappi update karne k liye wait karte hain.🤗.At least you should write for us..Why bother for them who do not care..Pls update for us who lubb you and your FF😍.I feel so proud that I have made such great friends here.🤗.Quantity is not not important..what matters is Quality..Samjhi.😡.Pls write for us.😳.nakhre mat dikha...😡

*Bribes you to make you the GF of Kesu in my next FF*

😉lUBB YA ARTI...🤗pls update..It is our lubb for Gulaal show which has still bonded us together even after the show has ended.😳

i dont like the fact if 100-200 ppl view it then y only 15 likes i feel like wasting my time most ardently its wrong to be silent coming peeping and going out yanha kya bhajiya fry ho raha hai yaa mein koi circus dekha rahi hun aur agar circus bhi kar rhai hun to bhi atleast i should know naa k mera circus acha hai yaa nahi...if not plz tell me
comments doesnt matter but atleast pata to ho how is my ff and now me getting bored of it updated new plz naya chapii demand mat karna system mein yahi tak likha tha isliye post kar diya
ab agar likhungi to 7-8 mail id lekar personal mail kar dungi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alanta

piu and arti I think or IMO 1 like in our forum is equivalent to 10 likes on the other forums mentioned above no offense to anyone its just my opinion..arti you should continue...please yaar humare liye and arti regular updates de diya kar..please..(as far as possible) I am not forcing you..but dont get disappointed with anything...

well hum humare favourite hai but we shouldnt close our eyes i write for me but post it for ppl to view but i dont understand is it nice or not y should i waste my time
sorry dear but im in blue mood

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