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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alanta

yeah it hurts and nothing better than that could cure it...


mujhe laga ki kichad (mud) mein kamal (lotus) khil (blossom) sakte hain par mein galat tha yankeen manayee mein aapko is bare mein pareshan nahi karunga'"


These lines are my fav..👏...Thank u arti..update soon dear

thanks alot alanta and yaa nothing is better than the pain gets cure thanks alot for liking
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

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Arti...nice chappie yaar...thanks alot

I hope kesar ka wish sach ho...n gulaal taking his help n expecting to arrest him...why not galool hai yeh...aur nahi to kya last moment tak galool rahegi
Duggu ka plan flop...dushy saying he will see duggu ka end...tum dono lado aur ladki koh bas kesar ke liye chodo...haan dunno bandar ladte rahenge and the cake is taken by the fox
Gulaal dream was so sweet...liked their convo regarding eating burger...offo kesar having FBs of gulaals words...he is sad n me tooo...yaa its hard to forget someone who has rebuke him so harshly
Me also love that song from JTYJN...me too
Sauce wala scene bhi bahut achcha tha yaar...thanks alot
Bhuj pahuchgayee...n see she is showing nakhras...saying how can she stay here in his house...kyun kesar ke against evidence hotel se kaise milenge...pata nahi par nakhra dikhana jaruri hai nahi to kaise pata chalega woo uski galool hai
pyaar karha hai issi liye nahi rehsakthi...magar ghar se engagement ke din bhaag sakthi hai iske saath...yeh bhagwaan yeh ladki bhi na...kesar koh paagal kar degi...
Me loved kesars reply when he says that abt kheechad, kamal n also when he says that she is some others amaanath...thanks alot for liking
These days me liking kunal n kesar convos soo much...they share a very good bond...just hope ki gulaal ke wajai se yeh dosti na toote...well they are best of friends so kunal knew him better than him
Kunal such a good friend of keasr...he knew each feeling of kesar...
Kesar is very hurt n me also very very hurt😭...aakhir usne pyaar kyun kiya...kithna khush tha FF ka starting mein...

Update soon yaar...thanks alot for liking will update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: minizz

finished reading,short comment loved it.will give a detailed one tomorrow😃


loved the whole romance in the car bit with the kahin to hogi woh song playing in the background...yaa totaly in contrast what was happening and what was in his heart.I felt so sad for Kesar.He feels so much love for her and he has to control his emotions around her yet they just spill out sometimes unknowingly like with mustard sauce incident.That was so intense yet so touching.oww thanks alot actually he has to control himself before gulaal as he has promised her he wont bother her in this regard...beside he knew he might be rejected but her hating him is breaking him in pieces And you have shown his heartbreak so beautifully through his thoughts and dialogues especially when he breaks down in front of Kunal.loved the "kamal in khichad" and the "kisi aur ki amaanat" dialogues.thanks alot Kunal's stand is understandable.He is concerned for his friend's well being.I do love his character here.A beautiful chapter and I can still hear the "kahin tho...hogi woh"-so romantic but heartrending too,perfect song for this situation.
Arti,thanks a lot for this update and eagerly looking forward to the next one😊yaa but me wanna read ur chapii eagerly do update soon and thanks for liking will udpate soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rsk16

excellent chapter.loved it.great story

thanks raunika for liking😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nneeiill

wowieee nice chapi arti..di

itni jaldi jaldi mai bhi u write such a fab chappi..loved the lotus lines...fab it is...the mustard scene was just wow nahi mein hamesha hi bakwaas likhti hun chahe jaldi mein likhu yaa aaram se😉

but kesar's pain is so unbearable..kithna dashing chor tha..ab devdaas ban ke reh gaya
i wish gullu surrender to her feelings soon..haan bechare ppl in love... fall in love and say bye to ur life forever thanks for liking

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Posted: 13 years ago

chapter 28

DAY 1

morning 8:30 a.m.

kesar woke early in the morning he went inside gulaal's room to see weather she was alright

he carelessly entered her room saying gulaal…woo breakfast

and he stopped he saw gulaal…she had taken fresh bath and was sitting in the red bathrobe

her face was soft like the fog cloud on the cold water surface and her damp curled hairs floated down her back…..her skin was as white and soft as snow fallen in the leaf

kesar could resist but to stare her deep….he gazed her and then his gaze was drawn to the water dripping occasionally from her hair on her soft cheeks running down the to her neck...he stood there for a moment say nothing only the soft sound of his breathing filling the silence

gulaal noticed his gaze and blushed…..his eyes were admiring her and at that moment she consider herself beautiful…..shyly she withdrew her eyes and ran her finger in her hair and said in low voice "woo mere pass pehene ki liye koi kapde nahi hai"

kesar snapped out of his thought and asked "kya"

gulaal repeated "kesar mere pass pehne k liye kuch bhi nahi hai…mein kab tak is bathrobe mein biethi rahungi"

kesar thought for a sec he said "haan mein kuch kapde le aata hun"

and he left after half an hour kesar returned with some clothes and handed it to gulaal

gulaal wore the clothes and came out in anger

as keasr and kunal saw her…they burst into laughter….kunal was laughing loudly and kesar controlled his laugh

she threw a angry glare at him and said "what the hell yeh kaun se plus size k kadpde le kar aaye ho….hanger lag rahi hun mein"

kesar said innocently "jo mila so le aaya"

gulaal replied " yeh navtra k garba dress hai aur yeh sirf kisi elephant ko fit ho sakti hai aur jab navtra k dress le aaye to saath mein do dande kyu nahi laaye yanhi garba kar leti mein"

kesar replied "par mein kya karo tumhe intne jaldi bath lene k kya jarurat thi abhi sirf roadside stall k shop khuli thi to le aaya…..mall ek ghante baad khulega tab jaake aaram se shopping kar lenge"

and then he said "waise agar tum kaho to mein closed shop se bhi tumhare liye badhiya designer wear laa sakta hun…"and he winked his eyes

gulaal looked at him irritated and said "subah subah log bhagwaan k bare mein sochte hai chori karne k bare mein nahi….koi jarurat nahi hai…hum rukar mall mein shopping karne chalenge"

and he smiled

after one hr kesar took gulaal in the mall…kesar and gulaal were walking in the mall and the ppl were giving weird look at gulaal she looked around and then said to kesar" I wish mere pass licence to kill hota to sabse pehle tumhe shoot kar deti"

he replied "agar mere pass hota to mein us muchaad ko shoot kar deta"

gulaal looked at him..she was nervous….as she feared kesar might say something that she cant answer

kesar smiled and naughtily said "arey itne bade muche rakhe k jurm mein to use shoot kar dena chahiye pata nahi apne colony k kitne masoom bacho ko haunt karta hoga"

gulaal couldn't stop smiling and pretending to be angry she turned her face and said "chalo shopping karna hai"

and then they stopped at a shop

gulaal was selecting her dress and kesar was staring her from the near distance..everytime their gaze met a shudder ran down on both of them and they withdrew their eyes in fear

after a shortwhile gulaal selected a dress and showed to kesar and asked "kaise hai…mein try kar k aati hun" and she went inside the trial room changed the dress and came and asked kaise lag rahi hun

kesar looked at her and gave a weird look and said "average lag rahi ho"

gulaal was upset so she tried another dress but kesar gave the same weird expression "naa tum ajeeb lag rahi ho"

gulaal tried 26 dress in the row but kesar was unsatisfied

in anger she came out from the trial room and looked at him and said "ab yeh 27 baar mein change kar rahi hun aur chahe tumhe pasand ho yaa naa ho mein yahi purchase karogi"

kesar replied naughtily "to kar lo waise bhi mujhe impress karne k liye tumne 26 dress kyu try ki aur isme bhi tum average hi lag rahi ho"

and he left her and walked towards the payment counter for the payment

as he left she turned around in the mirror and said to herself "chii ajkal dresses bhi ache nahi bante mein sach mein achi nahi lag rahi"

and she walked towards kesar in distress

as she reached the counter salesgirl handed her 26 dresses packet the salesgirl said "madam yeh aapka hai"

gulaal was amused she looked at kesar who standing beside her with beautiful smile

she said "arey yeh kya….sab purchase kar li"

kesar replied "haan"

she asked "jab dress khareedeni thi to itni saari dresses kyu try karvaayi"

kesar looked at her and said honestly "gulaal pata nahi tumhara aur mera saath kanha tak likha hai…..isliye tumhe har andaz mein dekhna chahta tha"

gulaal was overwhelmed to hear it and then she said in the low voice "nahi mein yeh dresses nahi le sakti"

kesar looked at her and said "gulaal don't worry tumhare upar mein wahi paise kharch karunga jo meine apni mehnat se kamaye hai..dont worry yeh chori k nahi hai" and then kesar asked the guard to put the packets inside his car

while gulaal was speechless to hear it

and then dropped her eyelids and said in low voice "par kya fayda mein inme achi nahi lag rahi hun"

kesar looked at her smiled and said earnestly "gulaal tum in dresses mein dunia ki 2nd most beautiful woman lag rahi ho"

gulaal eyes sparkled to hear such a sweet compliment she said in complaining voice "acha 2nd to first kaun hai?"

kesar replied soflty "meri maa –panba"

gulaal was excited to hear about his family member he never told about his family member to her in excitement she asked panba

and kesar remembered his mother..the memories of his childhood flashed in his mind he remembered how her mother use to cuddle him and shower her love and affection on him "kesuda…upar chat se uthar nahi to gir jaayega"

he remembered how his mother use to run after him asking him to go to school "kesuda chupchap paathsaala jaa nahi to maar padegi"

he remember how she use to fed his vasantbha and him in the kitchen..she use to gave the roll of pickle and roti and he use to eat it fondly before his vasantbha could take a bite "yeh kya kesuda panba mujhe khila rahi hai tu kyu beech mein aa gaya"…and he use to reply "kyuki jab mein khaunga to aap ka pet apne aap bhar jaayega haina vasantbha…."

Kesar was relishing his childhood memories and then he remembered the loneliness around him and his eyes were wet

Gulaal was looking at him and was trying to understand his undefined emotions her face grew grave and she asked "kya hua kesar tumahari aankhen kyu bhar aayi"

Kesar burshed off his tears and looked into the other direction and said "kuch nahi chalo yanha se nahi to mein aaj hi bankrupt ho jaunga"

Gulaal was surprised by his behaviour

She quietly came out of the shop and was looking at kesar who was trying to avoid his eyes so that he could hide his pain from her

They were walking silently kesar broke the silence and said "gulaal lunch ka samay ho gaya hai abhi paavbhaaji waale to nahi khule honge to if u don't mind Italian brunch ho jaaye"

Gulaal squeezed the smile and said "jaisa tum thek samjho"

And then they headed towards the restaurant

As kesar turned around he saw the price tag and name tag was still attached to her dress

Kesar looked at her and said "gulaal woo tumahre dress mein price tag laga abhi tak laga hua hai hata do"

Gulaal felt embarrassed she immediately passed her hand on her back to tear the plastic chord attached to the tag…but it was tight for her

Kesar was looking at her he asked softly "kya mein hata du"

Gulaal looked at him and nodded her head in consent and then she turned around

Kesar gently moved forward and stood cloe behind…..he pushed her hairs on the other side of the neck and she stood silent feeling him

He gently put his finger across the chord to break it but it was tight so he came near and tilted his head and gently cut the chord with his mouth and in the process his lips brushed on her neck and she sighed deeply….the warm sensation ran across her body making her helpless she turned around and looked deep into his eyes"

He looked at her with deepl love and said "chale gulaal…"and he took her inside the Italian restaurant

Gulaal and kesar sat for the brunch the waiter came and asked for the order but gulaal was lingering in his thought the warm touch of his lips was hard to forget….kesar looked at her and asked "kya hua order karo"

she said "kuch bhi kar do"

kesar looked at her and then explained the waiter and looked at her naughtily

soon the food was served

kesar asked her to eat

gulaal started eating the food it was delicious she said in excitement "wow kitna tasty hai…kya order kiya hai"

kesar replied naughtily "snails"

gulaal was shook out of wits she said "what snails?"

kesar replied "haan"

she spited whatever she had eaten instantly "thu…thu ewww u idiot mein vegetarian hun aur tum mujhe snails khela rahe ho?

kesar smiled at her and said "to kya hua vegeterain khana to roz khaati ho

aaj snails kha kar dekho aur waise bhi mein nahi batata to tum poora kha leti

gulaal said "u r disgusting"

he looked at her and then dig his spoon and started eating "oh wow heavenly sach mein yeh snails kitne tasty hai"

gulaal gave adisgusted look and said "tum poore paagal ho aur mujhe ulti aa rahi hai mein washroom jaa rahi hun"

and she stood and started walking away

kesar smiled and called from behind "arey gulaal mein to mazak kar raha tha koi snails nahi hai sach"

but she didn't listened and went inside the washroom to make herself confortable and said in anger "yeh sach mein paagal hai kaun subah subah snails khaata hai"

and then she came out of the washroom and saw a telephone booth

she stopped there and thought deeply and said to herself "papa ko fikr ho rahi hogi unhe batana hoga ki mein kanha hun aur kiske saath hun"

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Posted: 13 years ago
ok guyz chapter 28 updated itne saare chapii likh diye but yeh ff khatam hi nahi ho raha 😡 phew aisa lag raha mein kekta kapoor ban rahi hun😕 its going endless😲 guys tell me jaldi khatam kar du in two or three chapii or should i continue going crawling like an ant ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arti,main kahoon tho crawl like a snail😆 I am loving this so please don't finish too soon.
will comment on the new one after reading😊

Arti,just finished reading.lovely.the tension between Kesar and Gulaal is so obvious and I am so loving it.the scene with the navratri dress was hilarious.But the bantering in the shopping mall and the trial room scene are my favs😳you have written it so nicely.oooh the tension😳Kesar is reminded of his childhood.something bad has happened na.hope Gulaal will help him heal in the coming chapters.The scene in the restaurant with the snails was very funny.loved it.
Arti,don't finish it off too soon.thoda aur continue karlo.thanks for this lovely update.looking forward to the next adventure of Chindichor and Madamji😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
yeayy ..ek aur res...😆...n hume ant se lagaav,bhavana,chiii sab kuchhai..😳😳😳..n u know what does that mean..😳😳😳n ye kya CBI walon ki tarah...time n day ka number bhi likhing..😆😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: JZephyr

So just to clarify from my last comment - I realized they were not going to have the flimsy cute romance at hand, because their predicaments are far removed from that! But when I say happy, I just mean GK pushed to be together - by hook or by crook! With Gulaal being a bull head, and Kesar breaking but resolving to stay put for her sake, I anticipate some great fun (read: intense dramatics) up ahead - and like you said, can't tale less than an apocalypse for the dawn of revelation to descend upon dear Galool


Dushyant's swearing to get back Gulaal safe and render justice for Duggu's attack had me roll eyes and laugh. I still feel a tad for him, poor guy playing collateral damage to the GK love story but his 'dreams' are plain amusing 😆

Looking forward to the next chapter soon - especially, of course, how Kesar gets to dealing with Gulaal's contant presence, and rebuke, thereby the implicit rejection! I just dig the way he shoves 'polite' back at her everytime she's on the burner rude!

oh boy i wrote a detailed comment but it got disappeared i think i too wrote it with disappearing ink ok so like trying after 5-6 times a small and quick comment ...thanks alot jzee and i must say u sum the whole ff in ur comment i really thrilled and in awe thanks alot for ur detailed and valuable comment
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