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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks dear
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Originally posted by: JZephyr

OMG - this keeps getting crazier and crazier 😆 Arti, are you at all inspired by the Hrithik and Aish Dhoom version?! 😆 Will you also give us chiii like that?! ☺️

what do u think😛 ...was dhoom 2 strong enough to tempt us???? 😉well i can say there can be shoot out lots of fighting fireworks chii between chor and police is like hein????

Okay jokes apart - while I understand your apprehension about the experimenting of Gulaal and Kesar's AU characterizations in this FF, I assure you, your hesitance is unfound, and this is turning out to be one hell of a fun fic to read! Yes its not simmering of charge and oozing of push pull intensity - but someone needs to outgrow that boundary and give new experiments a shot - I for one am totally in for whatever you plan to do with this one, trusting you for your one never failing potential - of making it a complete entertainer! So think no more, and keep it coming!
ohh thanks but i will repeat myself i started as a spoof😛

As for the chapter - how cute is Kesar to enter her office as a cleaning guy?! And this has to be Indian police right out of a 3rd grade Bollywood movie to not find the thief time and again right under their nose! 😆 Koi bi ajata hai for cleaning at the Police Station 😆
well reality of indian police department is worse i gurantee bribe the consatble 1500 rs and they gave u their own uniform to rome in the city (read in the newspaper ) its so easy to enter such corrupt department if terrorist could enter parliament...golden temple...indian airlines...its a just corrupt department bribe the constable and enter there as police chief noone will question... will highlight this fact in coming chapii and i was expecting u will raise the point u never disappoint me...

But like I said last time - ye chor to Gullu ke haath hi ayega - faise bhi atak gayi hai uski 😆
kya pata gullu is trapped by kesu😆

ps: Kunnu is his accomplice? Will Talli be one too?! OMG imagine Talli being a dacoit 🤣 And imagine her going all tapori in lowe expressing for Kesar 🤣
talli not at all the ff is so tense to handle how can i handle tht sar par nachati chudail its too much chor police lob is beyond imagination y to introduce third angle and that too talli

thanks jzee for liking
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: prachurya

Arti...tujhe chori ke plan ka idea kahan se aaya???? aur yeh saddam bhai kaun hain????ahahahahah🤣

Kesar ka style toh lajawab hai...for a while I thought...Gulaal ko dekhte dekhte guards na pakkad le. Ooohhh...Gullu ne usse chindichor kaha...cmon Kesar dekhade tu Mr.A level ka chor hai koi chindichor nahi! Lovely writing, Arti! I knw I am repeating myself but I am so happy dat u r back!!!!

belive me i m not a chor😃😆 meine bas imagine kar liya ...saddam bhai just a mediator a person who is between kesar and buyer and ofcourse he knows everything happeining in his world...kesar istlyesh to hoga hi...gullu is fuming in anger thanks see the forum shouldnt consist of excellent work kuch bekar write up bhi hone chahiye who better than me😛
thanks and waiting for u ff 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Arti tu naya FF le ayi wow wow wow kesar is mr. A 😆 ya mr. K 😆 lovely yar, loved all the chapters 😃 jaldi se aur chapters update kar yar, me waiting impatiently 😃 i wanna know ab agay kya hoga, akhir mr. K gulaal k office tak toh aa gaya 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: arti07

chapter 2
After the theft the museum door were closed and the police officers started searching the thief..whole night gulaal and dushyant searched for kesar but all in vain after 8 hrs of intensive searching there was no clue and no sign of fugitive

Gulaal was disappointed it was her first day of her duty and the mishap happened the very first day and morever she was been fooled by a thief

" damm u kesar "she thought and stood near her jeep and hung her head down trying to remember the face she met last night

in the meantime dushyant came near her and said pareshaan mat ho yeh sab to hota rehta hai police force join ki chor se paala to padega hiOye yahan bhi pareshani hai..🤣where is d bottle now..😛

gulaal asked yeh kesar kaun hai

he was about to say but then he received revji's call and he attented it revji asked them to meet him in the office

dushyant attended the call and said to gulaal "chalo hitler bula rahe hain ab hum sabki left right left hone waali hai"oye beti ke saamne baap ko hitler bula raha hai..😕

gulaal looked at him with disappointment

dushyant and gulaal reached CID office where revji was waiting for them he was furious and enraged

he called a meeting with his staff members in the meeting he reprimanded his collegue for being so careless

revji said in anger "yakeen nahi hota mujhe k 50 guards aur mere intne kabil officers k hote hue bhi woo chor asaani se chori kar ke chala gaya aur aap sab kuch bhi nahi kar paye"

gulaal and duhsyant hung their head down

revji "aap sab ne 20 din tak is necklace k security k planning ki aur us ladke ko sirf 20 minute lage uuse churane mein...bilkul useless hote jaa rahe hain"

revji asked "woo security cameras se kya information mili hai"

a officer said "sir woo pehle hi hack kar liya tha usme chori k koi recording nahi hai"

revji "aur lesar beams"

dushyant hesistatently "usme chewing gum chipki hui thi"chewing gum..🤣

revji "aur net"

dusyant "woo bhi kaam nahi kar raha tha"

revji "to aap log kya kar rahe the soo rahe the yaa gappe lada rahe the"

officer said sir humara poora dhyaan tha wanha par tha aap to jante hain woo kesar kaise aata hai aur ekdum se kanha gayab ho jaata hai pata hi nahi chal pata"

rebji interrupted in between "mujhe aisa bahane nahi chahiye"

and then he turned towards gulaal and said "aur aap inspector gulaal apko chor aur police mein fark karna nahi aata aur aap is batch k sabse kabil officer hai aur phir bhi dhoka kha gayi I m surprised really"Arre..kaise kehethi ki..papaji..actually me us chor ke eyes mein my image detect kar rahi thi..😕

gulaal hung her head and said "sir mein nayee thi isliye aur officers k baare mein koi information nahi thi..sorry sir"

revji "that's really pathetic inspector gulaal aapne uska chehra dekha?"

Gulaal said nahi sir basement mein kafi andhera tha par ankhen dekhi hai

Revji "damm mujhe kuch nahi sunana mujhe 24 ghante mein woo chor milna chahiye wiase bhi delhi cid branch k kafi beijati ho chuki hai hum char saal se yeh case nahi solve kar paa rahe hai"

Dushyant assured revji and gulaal and dushyant came out of the cabin

Gulaal was highly irritated she just slammed the door in frustration

Dushyant looked at her and said "arey tension kyu le rahi hun humare boss ka bhairav raag to roz chalta hai itna upset hone k jarurat nahi hai"ye gullu ka asli baap hai na..woh kaise sun rahi hai..apne daddy ke against ye sab words..😲

Gulaal said "upset nahi ho to aur kya hun first day mein hi itna sab kuch ho gaya sab hans rahe hain mujhe par..us idiot k wajah se kitna kuch sunana pada"

Dushyant "relax"

Gulaal said "aapne bataya nahi kesar k baare mein"

Duhyant said "haan chalo hume investigation karna hai raste mein batata hun"

In the police jeep he said "kesar ek high profile professinal thief jisne chaar saal se humare department ko pareshaan karke rakha hai..precious diamonds rare artifacts painting and collectibles k chori karta hai plus internet hacker hai duniya k bade se bade security system ko pal mein sabotage kar deta hai...aur yeh sab itne smart tareeke se karta hai k aaj tak hum log uske khilaf koi clue nahi dhuundh paaye infact humare department mein aaj tak kisi ne use dhang se nahi dekha bas do ya teen logo ne uski halki si jhalak dekhi hai tum pehle cop ho jisne use kareeb se dekha I wish wanha par jara light hoti"heeh..Mr..A😛

Gulaal said "par koi to clue hoga I mean woo yeh sab karke kisi na kisi ko to bechata hi hoga hum yanha k dealer aur mediators ko contact kar sakte hain"

Dushyant said "haan humne kosish k thi jurm k duniya k log ek dusare k baare mein kam hi batate hai yeh criminal logo mein unity kafi hoti hai isliye log use jante hue bhi uske baare mein nahi batateAur police mein kya hothi hai..😛

Phir bhi humne ek do mediator ko trace kiya tha par kesar kabhi direct dealing nahi karta woo kabhi logo ya buyers k samne nahi aata bas woo maal deliver kar deta hai kaise karta hai kuch nahi pata tabhi to kah raha hun woo bahoot smart hai abhi tak ek dhang ka sketch bhi nahi hai"

Bas jisne use halka s dekha hai usese yeh pata chalta hai koi young 23-24 saal 5'9 inch ka ladka hai sab kehte hai ankhen bahoot achi hain tumne bhi to dekhi thi"

Gulaal said "haan un ankhon k kaise bhool sakti hun"woh khali khali ankhe..tu ru ru..😆

and she remembered the lovely pair of eyes that she met in the basement pair of eyes brownish enchanting, shining with playfulnes the eyes that met her with the most tender passion.. the pair of eyes into which she had ever gazed with such strong urge to stare longer and deeper..the touch of the eyes that crept the uneasiness and shyness in her even in that strange moment

she was thinking about it suddenly dushyant called her gulaal "kya hua kya soch rahi ho"

gulaal blinked her eyes and broke the dream that her eyes were weaving secretly without her knowledgehaha..eyes dikhayi diya tho ye sab sochnelagi..patha nahin..agar poora face dikhgaya hotha tho kya kya karthi..😆

she said "ji"

dushyant said "tum abhi yanhi gadi mein ruko mein zara kisi se mil kar aata hun"

gulaal looked around they stopped near a beautiful and lavish house and dushyant had gone inside

dushyant met the guard and asked "neeraj mehta hai??"Dushty ka girl friend hai kya..😕

Guard said "ji nahi woo to business k purpose se mumbai gaye hun hai 3-4 din mein aa jayenge"

Dushyant thought for a sec and said "jab aaye to mujhe is number par call kar dena"

And then he headed towards the jeep gulaal asked "hum yanha kyu aaye"

Dushyant said "kaam tha chalo pehle museum chal kar museum staff ko interrograte kar lete hai aur visitors ko check kar lete hain"

And gulaal and dushyant went to museum they did the rotuine inspection and interrograted the staff members and the visitors and as usual there was no clue they closed the museum for the visitors and then came back and check the criminal records

At night gulaal left for home the museum was on her way to home as she was crossing the museum she saw a flash of torch light coming out of a window?..

gulaal thought "yeh torch kaun flash kar raha hai"

She stopped and decided to go inside the guards saw her

She asked "kuch problem to nahi hai"

Guards said "nahi madam"

Gulaal thek hai mein ek baar confirm kar leti hun tum log yanhi cover karna

And she entered the museum she was searching something suspicious and soon she entered the high security area of the museum and then she saw a person 5'9 dark and toned body in the guards clothes...he was seraching something with the torch in his mouth...gulaal took out her gun and stand behind him and asked "yeh kya kar rahe ho"

The person was little consious he said "well dekhne aaya tha sab thek hai yaa nahi"

Gulaal pointed the gun on his back and said "bevkoof samajh rakha hai u r under arrest kesar"hehehe..kesu pakdagya..😛


Loved d chappie..arthi sorry 4 d late comment...diffrent angle gullu ka..already flaunt kar rahi hai..kesu ke eyes..pe..😛just lubed it..😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: arti07

thanks dear for the previous ff it was in my mind so wrote it thanks for the appreciation this ff is for fun something different no deeyarvattu no age difference but a taboo lovestory though i didnt thought to start it but then started as my fellow wickedians my frns wanna know how crazy can i be😉😆 so now i have started i really dont know where to go let see...kesar is high profile thief not only of dhooom machale but lts of other movies like jewel thief shalimaar etc etc but gulaal is not that supercop she is just a beginner
thnks a lot for liking i hope u liked it becoz i m really suspicious i write the chapii and then read it and think am i crazy or what y am i posting it 😕 but stil posted it😛
thnks again 😛

arre the plot is fun.experimentation with the characters is good.it is very risky and not many succeed but your's is a total paisa vasool blockbuster yaar👏⭐️ so no worries.I have already started seeing K as Mr.A and G in a uniform😃.so don't be suspicious at all and finally a little craziness is needed for creativity.so all good.please continue and update soon 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: arti07

chapter 3
Kesar turned back he flashed the torched light on gulaal eyes for a sec gulaal was blinded and he snatched the gun from her and grabbed her from behind and placed the gun on her chin and said "smart girl but I m smarter...aur haan mujhe mere kaam mein disturbance pasand nahi hai"

Gulaal was in his arm she punched his ebbs with her elbow and with the jerk the gun fell down far away from them

Gulaal looked at him he had covered his face with the mask only his upper half of face was visible

Kesar looked at her and said "hey u meine kal tumhari jaan bachayi aur tum mujhe punch kar rahi ho"

Gulaal said "oh u shutup aaj nahi bachoge"Dekhthe hai..😆

And she tried to punch him again on his face...but kesar defended

And they were involved in fight...gulaal tried to knock him down and he was trying to defend himself but didn't hit her back

While fighting she said "bade besharam ho marne ka jyada shok tha dubara yanha aa gaye"

Kesar said "well kya kare customer k nakhre to sahan karne padenge...ab custmer ko nekpiece k saath saath earning bhi chahiye thi wahi lene aaya tha aur waise bhi yanha to yeh useless thi"oye genuinely sharing d work secrets.😛

Gulaal said acha and she puched him on right jaw...

Kesar "ouch ! gulaal ladki hone ka galat fayda mat uthao ok"

Gulaal didn't stopped she want to get hold of him and she wanna unleash her power punches...while fighting gulaal unknowingly entered into the temproray trap that was put in the high security areas... till the security system of the museum were installed again... security system that kesar sabotaged previous night...It was a sort of hunter loop...a cord was tied to the pillar of the musuem at one end passed through the ceiling...the other end of the cord was tied into the loop...placed on the ground and a tigger device was attached to it

kesar looked at her feet that were on the trap He looked into her eyes and said "ok game over"hahahha..ye kya..ullu apne jaal mein khud hi phansgayi..🤣

Before gulaal could understood anything kesar took out his knife and throwed on the cord that cut the cord and the sapling quickly straightened and the loop tightened around her leg.and within the fraction of second kesar pulled the cord and made gulaal hung upside down from the ceiling

Gulaal was helpless and she was swinging upside down kesar tied the cord again on the pillar and then he tied her hand

Gulaal shouted for the help but he came near and said "shut up ok...chilana se gala kharab hoo jayega" and he put the tape on her mouthheheh..h sweet was that dialogue..😳

In the meantime he emergancy alarm rang and guards were alert they ran to reach the first floor

Kesar heard it and said "sorry honey...jana padega baaki baat baad mein aur darna nahi 3 min mein guards aa jayenge aur tumhe choda lenge itna time mein kuch nahi hoga bye sweetheart"

And he ran leaving her

As he ran he just stopped to stare her back and he turned and was awestruck..the most precious thing was infront of him?.he saw her and was arrested in her beauty...for there was a warmth a subtle innocence in her beauty and some sweetness in her features that stopped his footsteps.at that moment she was not a cop not a enemy but a beautiful girl as innocent as a beautiful snowdrop shivering and shaking in fear...he was completely taken byye lo ab ye bhi patgaya..ladki ke liye..😡

Gulaal was struggling to free herself and she looked at him she was amused to see him standing dumbfonded...she could feel his concious gaze at her

There gaze met and kesar blurted in bewilderment "mar gaya kesar"

Enchanted by her he walked towards her gulaal was getting concious he came near he examined her more carefully and then he was about to cut the rope to free her but guards arrived he looked at them and then looked at her he kissed his fingers and gently placed on her cheeks

He said softly "apna khayal rakhna kanhi is chaand ko daag na lag jaaaye"Ahan..chand se jaise mehebooba...😛baqi ka gana mujhe nahin aatha.😳

gulaal turned her face

and he ran...guards came there running and kesar exploded two smoke bombs there was smoke everywhere there was complete chaos and kesar escaped in the guard uniformtho finally chalagaya na..😛

Latenight at kesar's residence

Kesar was lying in the couch of his terrace...he was holding the identity card of gulaal that fell down as she hung upside down...kesar was looking at her pics with complete fondness

The stars were shinning above him and he was holding his morning star in his hand it seemed like that he would never ask anything in his life except getting the previlge to see her

He said "itna khoobsoorat chehra police deptt mein?pata nahi kitno k katl karne ka irada hai"Mar daala..allah..mar daala..🥺

And then he heard kunal his partner in crime calling him in the top of the voice

"Kesar?kesar?. unbelivebale yaar tune do din mein doo baar museum mein chori kar li its soo wow pata hai humari duniya mein jise bhi pata chal raha hai sab yahi kah rahe hai yeh kaam sirf kesar hi kar sakta hai saddam bhai bhi keh rehe the kesar is best" said kunal in excitement

"Sach mein kesar u r best"

kesar said carelessly "koi naayi baat kar I know I m the best"hehe..he thinks he is d best..lets see..h cannot he bow b4 her..😛

kunal said "haan par do baar museum mein chori?"

kesar said "aur kya karta us italian ko necklace k saath crown bhi chahiye tha aur dunno alag alag security areas mein rakhe hue the ek hi din mein do jagah choori possible nahi thi isliye do baar karni padi"

kunal sat beside him and said "par tu yeh bata tu doosari baar museum mein kaise gaya I mean itni tight security mein kaise gaya"

kesar replied "tujhe yeah kisne kaha pehle baar mein museum se bahar chala gaya tha"

kunal rolled his eyes in amusement "matlab"

kesar looking at gulaal pics said "matlab yeh k mein pehli din bahar nahi nikala wanhi chupa tha ab us museum mein itna material tha k woo dushyant mujhe search karta to shayad budhape mein dhoodh pata.

He continued "bas mummy k costume pehn kar kar ek purani se mummy k coffin mein chupa tha..saara din yeah log kesar k aas paas kesar ko dhudhete rahe aur phir jab officers chale gaye to mauka pakar ek guard ko cloroform dekar use mummy k costume pehenayi aur khud guard ban kar choori kar k unhi k beech se khasta (coughing ) hua nikal gaya"ye Mummy ko delhi museum mein kisne rakha hai..😕

kunal and kesar looked at each other and smiled

kunal laughed "kya baat hai yaar...mazaa aa gaya...ab us mucchad ka kya hoga"

Kesar said "mein to yeh soch raha hun jab woo guard ko hosh aayega aur us chalti firti mummy ko dushyant apni badi badi munchu se dekhega to uska kya haal hoga chilayaga yaa phir faint hoga

Kunal said naughtily "nahi...mujhe lagta hai heart attack hi aa jayega"Muchi man..will run singing..mud mud ke na dekh mud mud ek.😛

And they laughed harder...while the conversation kesar kept looking at gulaal pics

Kunal asked "yeh kya dekh raha hai tu"

Kesar replied "tere dekehne k liye nahi hai "

Kunal said "bata naa yaar kaun hai yeh"

Kesar replied in fondness "pata nahi yaar kaun hai

Subah k pehli sahar (morning breeze) hai ya

Pahado se behta hua shok sa jharna (waterfall)

Badal se chanti hui dhoop hai ya (filtered sunrays from cloud)

Pehli baarish mein bheegi hui mitti k khusboo (fragrance of soil in first shower of rain) pata nahi kaun hai"

And he said to himself "par pata laga lunga"wow..what a lines...👏

Next morning everyone was talking about theft that happened previous night at CID office but more they were gossiping about how gulaal duaghter of CID chief was hung upside down by kesar they were mocking at her secretly

gulaal came in CID headquaters and heard ppl talking "badi chali thi akele chor ko pakadne lo chor ne ulta lataka diya "

kesar ko itne guards nahi pakkad paaye aur ye kya pakadegi"

gulaal was already in anger becoz of last night incident and this humilitaion raised her anger to the maximumyup..BP abhi bhi high hai..😛

gulaal went inside her cabin and the memories of past night falshed on her mind how she was hung by him and how he kissed his finger and placed on her cheeks

she slammed her fist down hard onto the table and in anger said "yankeen nahi hota mujhe ek chindichor ne chakma de diya"what is meant by chindichor ..😕

unknowing the fact that kesar was present in her cabin he has disguised himself as cleaning boy with the sole purpose to see her againaye haye already stumpified..😆

he heard her and smiled and quielty came of her cabin and then he came out of the headquaters

he sat in the car and took out his laptop and started doing something

he said chindichor huh ! abhi pata chal jayega memsahab aapka paala kisi chindichor se nahi pada hai!
and he smiled mischieviouslyAgain ullu banane ka planning..😛



Loved d chappie..Arthi..loving d dishum-dishum with conversation..😆n already he was spell bound by her beauty...😃loved it..jaldi se next chappie lana pleshhh..😳😳
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chapter 4
Kesar took out his laptop and started doing something

he said chindichor huh ! abhi pata chal jayega memsahab aapka paala kisi chindichor se nahi pada hai!
and he smiled mischieviously

gulaal was sitting in the office suddenly a constable entered in her cabin and said "madam jaldi chaliye revji ne meeting bulvaayi hai"

gulaal was confused she said to herself "ab kya hua hai"

and she came out of the cabin dushyant accompanied her too and said "kuch pata hai kya hua lagta hai boss ka mood phir off hai"

gulaal and dushyant went in the meeting room where revji was fuming in anger he was shouting at the top of his voice

"yeah sab kya ho raha hai humara department itna nikamma ho gaya hai k teen din mein delhi mein teen varadatein ho gayi aur kisi ko kuch bhi pata nahi hai kaise face karenge hum media ko"

gulaal asked her collegue "kya hua"

collegue said "abhi abhi khabar aayi hai cyndi bank mein chori ho gayi hai internet hacking k through uske reserve mein se paise nikal liye gaye hain"

gulaal was shocked "what kitne"

collegue said "10 lac"

dushyant said "sirf dus lac k liye yeh chila rahe hai"

collegue said "10 lac dollars"

gulaal rolled her eyes "10 lac dollars"

while revji said "hume har halat mein yeh internet hacker ko dhundhna hoga ise pehle kisi ko pata chale…..humare software professional kya kah rahe hain ip address track hua?"

Officer said "nahi sir experts kah rahe hain ekdum latest hacking code hai

Aur professional hackers k bhi help li woo bhi jyada kuch nahi bata paa rahe hain"

Revji "dushyant kuch bhi karo I need the person within 24 hrs"

Dushyant "yes sir"

Meantime gulaal received a call from strange number

Gulaal left the meeting room and attended the call

She said "hello"

Kesar " ab to yankeen ho gaya naa memsaab aapka paala kisi mamuli insaan se nahi pada"

Gulaal was amused she asked "kaun bol raha hai"

Kesar "tumhara chindichor"

Gulaal was surprised to hear that word she remebered she uttered the same word in morning for kesar

"Kesar" slipped from her mouth

kesar said "chalo is naam se bhi pukar lo….yeh ilzaam bhi manjoor hai"

gulaal was tensed she look around

kesar said "kya baat hai pareshaan kyu ho gayi"

gulaal was suspicious she said "tum kanha ho"

kesar said "aankhen band karo tumhare saamne hunga"

gulaal said "oh shutup aur apni bakwaas band karo waise bhi jyada din nahi bachoge"

kesar replied "arey memsahab apko bakwaas lag raha hai mujhe to laga tumhe cydi bank mein hui 10 lac dollar k chori mein interest hoga"

gulaal was shocked to hear it…..meantime dushyant came in her cabin she saw him and in sign language told him kesar was on other end dushyant asked her to continue

gulaal said "kisne ki bank mein chori"

kesar replied "tumhe kya lagta hai"

gulaal "u"

kesar "who else"

gulaal "dekho bevkufi band karo aur surrender kar do"

kesar smiled and said "saari baatein phone par hi karni hai yaa milogi bhi"

gulaal thought for a while and explained the situation to dushyant he noded his head

gulaal said "thek hai kanha aana hoga"

kesar "hotel imperial aaj shaam ko chaar baje mein intzaar karunga" and he ended the call

dushyant took the cell and ask his officer to trace the number

gulaal said "sir yeh kesar k aawaz thi usne accpet kiya hai k usne hacking ki hai aur aaj chaar baje milne k liye bulaya"

dushyant said "gulaal mujhe lagta hai fake call hai…..tumhi batao kaun sa chor chori karke batayega k meine chori k hai aur police cop ko milne k bulayega….kisi ne majak kiya hai"

gulaal said "sir par majak kaun karega aur phir yeh baat leak bhi nahi hui hai…..aur phir woo awaz kesar k hi thi"

she continued "aur sir mujhe lagta hai woo yanha aaya tha"

dushyant was shocked he said "gulaal now this is too much police department mein yeh baat kah bhi mat dena ek chor yanha aayega r u mad or what ?"

gulaal sir believe me "ho sakta hai kuch planning ki ho"

dushyant "fine mein constable sharma se kah deta hun woo abhi building search karwa dega ok"

meantime the officer came inside and said "sir number trace ho gaya hai

gulaal "kanha ka number hai"

officer "madam..woo...siberia ka number hai!"

gulaal and dushyant were shocked "kya yeah siberia kaise pahunch gaya"

dushaynt searched the cid office but no traces

at four o clock gulaal arrived at hotel imperial and a cid team were present in the civilian sitting as the guest there…….. keeping eye on kesar

gulaal now and then looked at the clock but kesar didn't came it was 8 o clock they were waiting for four hrs…..tired with it dushyant ordered the team member to return cid office

8:30 CID department

dushyant was frustrated hs said gulaal "I told u yeh ek fake call tha…..jab koi crime hota hai to criminals ko pata lag jaata hai aur phir aise rumors aur aise fake call ka silsila shuru ho jaata hai"

gulaal interrupted "but sir"

dushyant "dekho gulaal tum naayi aayi ho isliye nahi pata….yanha aisa hi hota hai hume sahi aur fake call mein pehchaan karna padta hai hum CID officers hai hum galti nahi kar sakte….tum dheere dheere seekh jaogi"

gulaal said "sir believe me woo kesar"

dushyant said "nahi gulaal tum ek kaam karo ghar jao and take some rest waise bhi do raat se tum so nahi paayi ho"

gulaal didn't argue any further

she took her leave and quietly walked across the corridor thinking about kesar…then she entered the lift in her own thought as she was about to push the button of the lift a hand caught her hand turned the light off and pulled her close to him…gulaal was shocked but the closeness of this person resembled kesar….

She looked at him and was about to take her gun out and her gun was missing

She was about to shout

But kesar put his finger on her lips and said "shhh ! agar chilana hai to chilao aur agar bank k money k baare mein janana chahiti ho to chup rehna" and she saw her gun was with kesar

Kesar pushed the lift button and they went in the terrace

In the terrace there was a complete darkness…..Gulaal want to see his face but again it wasn't visible

Gulaal said "tum kesar"

Kesar said "haan aur kise expect kar rahi thi aaj milna tha naa hume"

Gulaal said "tum nahi bachoge"

Kesar "haan haan nahi bahunga par pehle pakkad kar to dekhao"

Gulaal was irritated she asked "hacking tumne ki thi"

Kesar "aur nahi to kya ek khubsoorat ladki mujhe chindichor samjah rahi thi meri izzat ka sawal tha hacking to karni padi…..u see I m not a chindichor"

Gulaal said "to iske liye bank mein chori kar li?"

Kesar "izzat k lliye to log sar kata sakte hai memsahab"

Gulaal replied "don't worry jaldi hi jail mein nazar aaoge humare experts tumhare system ko trace kar lenge"

Kesar replied "unhe expert kehti ho? jo 6month purane operating system use kar rahe hain….outdated technology se latest technology k hacking code ko pakadenge tch tch tch …..but nice try

Gulaal was irritated she asked "yanha kya karne aaye the"

Kesar "tumhari koi cheez mere pass reh gayi thi"

Gulaal asked "kya"

Kesar showed her identity card that was lost in the museum


Gulaal said "waapas karo"

Kesar "waapas kar dunga par ek baat batao aaj humari date par apne uncles ko kyu laayi thi…koi laata hai kya?"

Gulaal "date…what date"

Kesar "humari date…..tumhe kya laga mein tumhe waha indian economy me lecture dene k liye bulyaa tha"

Gulaal was highly irritated she said r u crazy???

Kesar in his soft voice said "nahi tha par shayad ab ho gaya hun…..so kal humari dusari date hogi wanhi tumhe id card de dunga"

Gulaal "dimaag kharab ho gaya hai kya mein tujh jaise chor k saath date par jaungi"

Kesar said "sacha soldier to desh k liye apni jaan de deta hai tum date par nahi chal sakti"

He said naughtily "gulaal india k money k liye yaa to date par chalo yaa un paiso ko bhul jana……agle 50 saal k liye shayad tab tak tumhare expert woo paise dhundh le"

Gulaal said "never"

Kesar replied "mein kal tumhe pick up karne aa jaunga bas tayyar rehna

He continued "aur is baar apne uncles ko mat bulana kya pata paise waapas dena ka mera mood change ho jaaye

…..aur haan kuch ache kapde pehna u should match kesar's personality"

He said "bye sweetheart" and he kissed his fingers again and placed it on her cheeks and then he ran on the other direction and jumped from the terrace before that he threw her gun towards her….gulaal quickly went near the boundary wall and saw kesar was nowhere…..he had escaped into the darkness leaving her in utter bewilderment and confusion

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

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Arti tu naya FF le ayi wow wow wow kesar is mr. A 😆 ya mr. K 😆 lovely yar, loved all the chapters 😃 jaldi se aur chapters update kar yar, me waiting impatiently 😃 i wanna know ab agay kya hoga, akhir mr. K gulaal k office tak toh aa gaya 😃

thanks kiran and u updated ur chapii so happy shappy thanks dear
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