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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wow wow amazing chapter n amazing FF arti, aray i love u so much, fantastic story i love it, i love dhoom 2 n is FF men thora sa us ka touch bhi hai i m going crazy over it yaar its fantastic 👏 arti 🤗 jaldi jaldi jaldi next chapi la yar 🥳 n mr. K wants gulaal to go on a date 😆 what a clever thief, i love him 😃
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Chapter 5

After the meeting kesar returned home…..kunal was waiting impatiently

He saw kesar and asked "kanha rah gaya tu pata hai mein kab se upar neeche ho raha hun???"

Kesar said smiling "sasural k hawa kha kar aa raha hun"

Kunal "abe tu khud to marega saath mein hume bhi marwaayega…..pata hai constable sharma kitna pagal ho raha tha uski to saans hi atak gayi thi jab dushyant ne usese cid k office ko search karne k liye kaha….soch jisne entry dilwaayi wohi search kar raha tha"

Kesar smiled and asked "waise us sharma ko kitne paise mein set kiya tha entry k liye"

Kunal "50000 mein"

Kesar "use 1 lac de dena sasural kuch jyada hi acha tha" and he smiled

Kunal "waise bhabhi se kya baat hui"

Kesar "tujhe kyu batau…..woo sab chod yeh bata woo necklace aur woo crown client tak deliver ho gaya"

Kunal "ofcourse yaar isme kya mushkil tha…."

Then he smiled and said "waise kaun soch sakta hai jis necklace ko delhi police aur cid dhundh rahi hai woo ek camel cart ka camel apne neck pe pehne hoga…..tujhe pata hai kesar poori delhi police torch lekar cars bus airport aur naa jaane kis kis jagah necklace dhundh rahi thi aur hum camel cart mein beith kar aaram se nikal gaye delhi k outside border mein client ko deliver kar diya hai and paise humare swiss bank mein aa chuke hai"

And kesar smiled

and 30 crores worth necklace and 10 crores crown worth tiara was delivered through a camel cart the tiara was hidden inside the shaft and the necklace was tied around the camel neck and was hidden with the traditional camel necklaces of gujarat….the deal was done

while kesar and kunal were discussing about the necklace gulaal was numbed she was restless she kept thinking about her meeting with kesar

she said to herself "aakhir is kesar k man mein chal kya raha hai isne mujhse saari baatein kyu ki aur kyu mujhe bulaya hai"

then she pick her cellphone to dial dushyant's number…but she thought for a sec and then she stopped and said to herself "nahi sir ko nahi bata sakti…kya batayungi ek chor mere saath date par jaane k baat kah rah hai sab mujhe paagal samajhenge aur phir bahoot mazak ban chuka hai…no I shouldn't call him" and she ended the call

then "par ab kya mein kesar k saath date…..no never mein hargiz nahi jaungi"

next morning CID office

dushyant came in gulaal's cabin and was stunned gulaal was wearing a slim expensive little black dress and small diamond earnings and sleek bracelet on her right hand….she has wore a pair of black stilleto heels

dushyant was surprised he asked "gulaal aise dress up kyu ???"

gulaal said "woo bulbul k yanha party hai ghar jaane ka time nahi milega socha yanhi se aise hi chali jau so yeh wear kiya hai…"

dushyant" woow acha time management hai"

gulaal didn't said anything….whole day her collegue kept looking her in utter bewilderment and she kept waiting for kesar

10 '0 clock CID office

everyone left for home dushyant asked her to leave too as she may get late for the party…gulaal came out of the office she was irked as kesar didn't came she was walking in the street in frustration "damm u kesar y did I belived u "she said

suddenly a sport car in high speed stopped right besides her and a hand came out of the car and pulled her inside…gulaal was completely shocked and scared…the door were locked and car drove away

gulaal was inside the car and she looked up a a handsome boy was driving the car…gulaal carefully examined him innocent face shinny unkept hairs dusky complexion appealing in every possible way remarkbly sweet smile atheltic body and the most beautiful eyes…..he was a tall dark handsome man supposedly what a woman wants in a man's apperance he was handsome in a way that could cause a girl to gasp… …..

gulaal was staring him

kesar smiled and asked "kya hua mujhse jyada handsome ladka nahi dekha kya?"

Gulaal blinked her eyes and asked "kesar"

Kesar just smiled

Gulaal asked "kanha jaa rahe hain hum"

Kesar "pata chal jayega don't be so desparate"

Gulaal turned her face in frustration

Kesar asked "so how is my car?"

Gulaal said "chori k hogi"

Kesar "well yeh baat tum mere sales girls se nahi bol dena tumhe upar se neeche phek degi pata hai use kitne papad balne pade the mujhe convince karne k liye"

Gulaal "whatever"

And then he took her to seven star luxurious hotel in delhi…..he took her in the penthouse resturant of the hotel that was all reserved for her….gulaal glanced at the restaurant…the interiors were exotic and grand

Kesar said "kisi mein bhi beith jau sab booked hai"

Gulaal didn't said anything

Kesar looked at her and asked "waise mujhse milne aayi ho koi gift nahi laayi"

Gulaal looked at kesar who was smiling mischiviously she knew what he meant so she took out 2 guns and 3 knives that she had kept with her

Kesar looked at it and asked "bas itna hi"

Gulaal took a deep breath and took out a small knife from her shoes and placed in the table and said "bas itna hi hai"

Kesar smiled widely and asked her to be seated

They sat on the chair

Gulaal looked at him in anger and asked "yanha kyu bulaya hai"

Kesar said "I told u na we are on date"

Gulaal asked "mere saath kyu"

Kesar "I wish I knew the answer"

Gulaal said dekho tum nahi bachoge

Kesar asked "kya"

Gulaal "tumne jo bhi chori k hai ek din uski sazaa jarur milegi tum chahe kuch bhi karlo jyada din tak nahi bachoge….."

Uniinterested in her talks kesar was just staring her he watched her not understanding the captivating effect she made in his heart…..she was talking and he was silently looking at her

Suddenly his hand moved closed to her cheek gulaal's heart pounded in her ears she twitched a little bit

"Yeh kya hai" asked kesar as he took out the mini recorder that she had hide behind her ears so that she could tape his conversation

and he then took her pin and started working on the recorder and while working on it he said "gulaal tum to pink panther ko bhi embarrass kar dogi

21 cenury k theif ko pakadane k liye 16 th century ka formula oh no kya hoga is desh ka" he smircked

he gave the recorder back and said "ab kabhi kaam nahi karega"

gulaal was frustrated

kesar continued "haan to hum kanha the"

gulaal "tum yeh chori kyu karte ho"

kesar "kyu nahi karu"

gulaal "woo necklace india k amanat hai it belongs to indian ppl"

kesar"haan to mein bhi to indian hun meine apni cheez le li to isme kaun si badi baat hai aur phir memsahab duniya mein aur bhi bade bade log india k amanat bade aaram se lekar ghum rahe hain aap unhe kyu nahi pakadti"

gulaal said "dekho tum"

in between waiter serve the soup

gulaal looked at the soup sorry was wriiten with the cream

gulaal looked at it and asked "sorry???"

Kesar "tumhe us din ulta lataka diya tha na isliye….waise mujhe ladki ko ulta latakana pasand nahi hai"

Gulaal looked in the different direction

Kesar said "waise aaj thek lag rahi ho do teen baar date par chalogi to style me rehna aa jayega"

Gulaal smircked "oh yaa tum seekhaoge?"

And then waiter served the main course Enchilladas chili pepper

Kesar said "soup to piya nahi chalo dinner le lo waise bhi yeh tumahri fav dish hai"

Gulaal asked "kaise pata"

Kesar "common jab mein ek bank k reserve mein jaa sakta hun to kya tumhare mails aur personal blog mein nahi jaa sakta"

Gulaal "don't u dare go near my mails and FB"

Kesar smiled "yaa ab nahi jaunga jo pata karna tha kar liya"

Gulaal "bahoot besharam ho"

Kesar "nahi sirf thoda saa…chalo dinner le lo"

Gulaal "bilkul nahi….mein tumhare saath dine nahi karogi"

Kesar "to kya sirf meri shakal dekhti rahogi…kha lo yanha ka mexician cuisine bahoot tasty hai"

Gulaal "kya pata tumne isme kuch mila diya ho"

Kesar smiled and took a bite from her plate ate it and said "yummy! ab kha lo waise bhi jhoota khane se pyaar badhta hai"

Gulaal replied angrily "yucks ab to bilkul nahi khaungi"

Kesar took out his gun and pointed towards her and said "bas bahoot hua chupchap kha lo warna"

Gulaal was scared she was terrified as the gun was pointed towards her she didn't have any weapon with her and now she cursed herself to come along with him

She was scared and said fearfully "k…khati hun"

and she started eating very quickly her mouth was stuffed with the food but she forget she was eating spicy Mexican food….her throat was choked and her mouth burned with the intense chilly flavour…and she began to cough

Kesar offered her water and she drank three glass of water instantly and then he gave her the icecream…she ate it quickly to cool down the burning sensation of chillies

Kesar smiled and said "arey tumhe to khana bhi dhang se nahi aata….khana dheere dheere 24 baar byte karke chahiye..daddy ne nahi sikhaya" he said while wiping the corner of her mouth that had icecream traces with his finger gently

And then he gently burn the candle with his gun ….lighter gun that he showed to gulaal to make her eat food….

gulaal was surprised and he innocently asked "kya hua"

Gulaal was so irritated that she got up and started to walk…. A soft music began to play and kesar came behind and said "hey chalo lets dance"

Gulaal asked "kya mein tumhare saath dance?"

Before she could say anything kesar took her hand in his put his arm around her waist and made her dance without her consent…..he danced salsa steps with her and then he looked into her eyes…..she was in pain….kesar became conscious and quickly parted with her

He asked "kya hua"

Gulaal didn't said anything but she sat on the chair her foot was aching she had been wearing high heels whole day…now her feet were crippled….she cant even walk

Gulaal put her hand on her feet kesr sensed it and quickly sat on the floor and said "yeh shoes k wajah se dard ho raha haina"

Gulaal said angrily "don't u dare touch me"

Kesar took his real gun and said "shut up aur chupchap beithi raho"

Gulaal was so much in pain that she didn't said anything kesar took her legs on her lap and gently took out the shoes he then asked waitor to get him the icepack

Waitor came up with ice pack and put on the gulaal feets at first she hesistated but then she was tired so she let him put the icepack..he then gently massaged the arch of her foot, the pads of her feet and then gently massaging each toe….. his hands were very warm gentle and kind…gulaal felt a deep relaxation…for a moment all her issues where desolate and all that matter was the warm and gentle touch of kesar

Gulaal was a lonely child her mother died at the young age and her father was strict police officer who was always busy at his work there was a sort of distance between daughter and father…whenever gulaal was sick or in pain there was a team of doctor and grany to serve her but never the gentle concern and caring touch that she carved for all these years…..the sweet and caring touch that gives warmth in the pain… the touch that gives the calm feeling….. that gives the sense of belonginess….that warm touch was missing till now…but today she was getting it that too from a enemy she was overwhelmed but next moment she snapped out as he was kesar----A THIEF

She quickly get up and wanted to walk away but couldn't and tembled kesar supported her and called waitress and said "madam k pairo mein problem hai inhe neeche le jaaye carefully aur taxi mein beitha dena"

As he knew gulaal was uncomfortable coz of him

Gulaal said "meine apna promise poora kiya hai ab tum"

Kesar said softly "mein apna promise hamseha poora karta hun" and then he put his hand on her forehead and said "apna khayal rakhna gulaal..take care"

The waitress supported her and she started walking away from kesar…..she turned back and saw kesar was standing there looking at her with deep love….his eyes were fixed on her there was concern care kindness and subtle passion for her she looked at him and there gaze met for a long time

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prachurya

Kesar is out of this world! He is a super thief, funny, witty and so romantic! Arti tujhe choron k paintron k baare mein badi knowledge hai😉 . I just loved Kesar's dialogues- my fav "Tumhe kya laga Indian Economy k baare mein lecture dene bulaya tha"- hahahahahh😆. This is so exciting and fun...plz update soon.

thanks dear nahi sachi mujhe kuch nahi malum mujhe laga ki aisa ho sakta hai bas...and updated
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Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

wow wow wow amazing chapter n amazing FF arti, aray i love u so much, fantastic story i love it, i love dhoom 2 n is FF men thora sa us ka touch bhi hai i m going crazy over it yaar its fantastic 👏 arti 🤗 jaldi jaldi jaldi next chapi la yar 🥳 n mr. K wants gulaal to go on a date 😆 what a clever thief, i love him 😃

thanks dear and updated and where is ur ff???
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

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Arti...Lovely chappie...ohh yeh kesar is such a brat😳...so much confident...so flirty...i am just loving this chindichor...cid logon ne date koh kachra kardiya...just waiting for the second date...

thanks dear he is brat and chor and police mein kaise date wanha to encounter hota hai...yaa updated
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Posted: 13 years ago
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am I first here?! 🤔



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OMG Arti , I loved loved loved this date - it was cute and naughty and caring and oh-so-dreamy!!! 😍

How can you say anything about the 'TRPs' of the FF! Dude! you've got a whole bunch of readers who're hanging onto every word written here, okay?! And TRPs par jaana is not Gulaal fans ka rule, remember!!! 😎 This FF is turning out to be one fantastic entertainer, ye chor kitna charming hai - muje bi ek date dilaa do 😆 And me loves Mexican anyway ☺️ *same pinch CC (chindichor 😆 )*

I love how Gulaal despite knowing his truth is all inexplicably drawn to him; and I like how Kesar pulls off the smart guy by ripping her of cop gadgets, and then sets off to actually make this date a success! He doesn't understand anymore than Gulaal what's happening here - but unlike her, he's so wasy following his heart, rules don't apply to people like him 😆 While he's a sworn and proven rebel (ROFL @him saying main bhi Indian hu, apni cheez lene aaya tha 😆 and especially at him pointing out how many people are romping around with rightful 'public' stuff and never checked by law - the indirect jab at nepotism, corruption, and politics right there was perfect Arti 👏 kudos to you drawing out those subtle points even in such a fun-filled GK comic-drama-love story!) Anyway, Gulaal has this innate rebel in her which has not surfaced from, as it seems now, he need to find pride and affection for herself in her father... she's been the good daughter all her years, because as a child deprived of her parents' affection for whatever reasons, she's struggled to gain it whatever be the way - and that explains her becoming a cop too!

As for reference to the bribes that get Kesar inside the station - sasural zada pasand aane LOL! - his easy get away money ways, and that oh-so-smart smuggling of the priceless neck piece via a camel 👏 ye shor to sach mein genius hai, and kitaa kitaa charming 😍 😆 Pitt him against Dushyant *yawn* Of course Gulaal will fall for the charms of such an exciting bad guy 😆

ps: I liked how she all decked up classy to go for a date - Kesar wasn't the only one making 'plans' - even if she did it in the name of 'keeping' her word so he would keep his, deep inside, he intrigues her like that, she's doing his bidding, because at this point, curiosity about this extraordinary encounter in her uneventful disciplined life is getting the better of her! And the way he keeps her on her toes 😆 Oh Kesar, don't be such a brute! 😆

Update soon Arti - I'm loving the outcome of your spoof turned FF story telling!
Edited by JZephyr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ps: Have you read The Scarlet Pimpernel?! I was thinking about how your story is a lighter, and of course Indian contemporary version of it, in some way! ☺️ One of my favorite Signet classic!
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry bhi bola vo bhi istail mai wow is kesar ki deewani ban chuki hun mai😉 lovely chapi next chapi jaldi lana
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Posted: 13 years ago
I read the chapter yesterday itself but couldn't comment on it.Arti,lovely chapter.I was so looking forward to this and I must tell you I loved it. I really can't call Kesar 'chindichor' anymore.uski insult hogi.kitna creative aur intelligent chor hai.the camel cart idea of his -brilliant.I loved the 'sasuraal' comment don't worry Kesarji once you win Gullu's you will get your own 'sasuraal' not the chor police wala😆though no great hopes regarding a loving one from your description of the lukewarm relationship between Gulaal and her father.Bechaari.lonely girl.
and Gulaal is a chupirustam I tell you she wants to go on a date with the chor that's why all the dressing up😆I remembered that old song'sajna hai mujhe sajna ke liye'😉and please keep Dushyant away from her somehow I don't trust his intentions he looks quite taken with her makeover🤢😆good that she didn't reveal the real reason and came up with that excuse.'time management'😆😆

and Kesar well Mr.K has to impress the girl so what better than a sports car but Gulaal is no ordinary girl and instead of being impressed she insulted him😆.good.so we get a look at the hero and Gulaal's thoughts about him.interesting😳the exchange in the car was very cute.
finally The Date and what a Date.he booked the whole place.leaving no stone to impress the girl.taking out the gun and knives ,how did she hide all those things?and who is she trying to fool -Mr.K😆.I loved the small moment between them.tension.good.Mexican cuisine.delicious.but Kesarji dara dhamkake khana khilayega tho ladki kaise pategi?😆the whole exchange between them was funny.loved it.the dance -very romantic but the high heels had to be the haddi.and Kesar is so sweet if though he needs some lessons in romance.the eyelock between them so emotional.I have a feeling Gullu will be completely lattu over him very soon.who can resist such a sweet guy but the main obstacle here they are from opposite sides of law...so who will jump over to the other side?
alll in all an enjoyable chapter.please update soon.

Edited by minizz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow that was so classy and dreamy! The date was too gud yaar, it had all the elements in it fun,passion,care and affection. Looking forward to more. Again I have to compliment u on the way u described how the jewels were exported...tera dimaag toh lajawaab hai! Waiting for the next chappie- ab pehli date k baad Gullu ke feelings jaan na zaroori hain

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