FF: Dil Kya Kare! Scene 30a&b Pg 61

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Since everyone is writing an OS here my take at it ROFL

hmm but since its ME, the BIGGEST ANANDI FAN, I am really reallyyy trying hard to stop myself from bashing jagya. It would be fun just to torture him..but I do not want to spoil ANSH mood so I let it go!

Index:

Scene 1 Scene 5

Scene 2 Scene 6

Scene 3 Scene 7 Part 1 : Jetsar to Udaipur

Scene 4 Scene 7 Part 2:

Scene 8 Scene 9 : Shiv's family introduced

Scene 10 Scene 11

Scene 12 Scene 13a Scene 13 b

Scene 14a&b Scene 15

Scene 16a Scene 16b

Scene 17a&b Scene 18, 19 a& b

Scene 20 a,b&c Scene 21

Scene 22 Part a&b Scene 23 part 1and 2

Scene 24 Part 1 Scene 24 Part 2

Scene 25 Scene 26

Scene 27 Scene 28

Scene 29a Scene 29b

Scene 30a&b

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Anandi in Haveli walking towards the door

D.S: Anandi sham ko jaldi aana, ek zaroori kaam hai

Smiling to herself.

Anandi: ji Dadisa

On the way to the school she sees that there is a small village boy sitting on the playground all alone. Anandi is curious and has a worried expression on her face. She asks Makhan to stop the jeep and runs towards the boy and finds him wincing in pain. She asks him how he got hurt to which the boy replies that he was hurrying back home after completing the chore his mother had given him and on the way he tripped over a sharp rock and bruised his Knee.

Anandi looks at the knee and sees it to be covered with dirt. The scorching heat of Jetsar was not doing much help. She calls Makhan to help carry the boy into the jeep and asks him to head towards the hospital.

Hospital Scene:

Anandi calls one of the ward boys and asks for Lal Singh. The boy then goes away to find Lal singh. After 5 minutes lal singh appears with Abishek tagging behind him.

Laal Singh: Anandi kaise ho?

Anandi: teekh hun. Is bachay ko chot lagi hai zara dekho please

Laal singh examines the boy and meanwhile Abhishek starts talking to Anandi. He asks her about all the Haveli members and in turn Anandi asks about Asha , Sughna, Shayam, his parents and Varun. She also asks him about Varun's progress.

In meantime, the hospital doors open and Shiv enters. He was holding his arm and looking at his cut that he had received while fighting with Sumergad Goondas.

Shiv then looks around as to if to find a doctor but his eyes meet Anandi and Abhishekh's animated talk. His brows starts to shrink together as if to form on single line and his nostrils flare up!

Anandi ji? what is she doing here?

He asks himself. But that was not the question his heart was asking. The thought that was fighting to come out was

"Why is she talking to that man with such a smile on her face?" Who is he?

A monster had lept up in his heart!? Shiv's eyes round up in surprise!. Is it really him who is having such ill feelings towards Anandi. Has he gone wonkers!?

How he hated such men who doubted their wives or could not handle when their girlfriends would talk to another man and now he is having similar thoughts!?

His eye pupil go left and right, confused'

Wife? Girl Friend? '.Anandi!?

Why are those words all of a sudden seem connected?

'..

Meanwhile Anandi hears collector sahab, being called out. She looks towards her right and finds Shiv looking at his arms.


...Like it?...

I will continue what happens later heheh

Edited by Suchi-Virmanian - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ohh dats awsmm suchi👍🏼...I mean shivu jealous and anandi caring for him...Aww dat cud be such a cute scene..plsss do continue😊
Edited by princessyashika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Of course yar! I Loveee it! 😍

Its so awesome! 👏Hmm.. so someone is jealous eh?

Continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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rofl...abhisek...hayee...rofl...🤣
abhi se jalan...then if shiv gets to know about prathmesh then..kya hoga..mere bechare shiv kya...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'm imagining shiv's expressions 😍
pls continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oye suchi..put SS or FF on thread name..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hehe oK here is the next scene

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Scene 2

Little did she know that, Shiv had just looked away when he felt that Anandi was about to look towards him. In order to seem careless, he started touching his wound.

Anandi rushing towards Shiv: Are collector sahib, ! Aaap yahan?

She asked with concern in her voice. She looked at the cut and her mind flashed the scene where he had stopped the gun fire!

Shiv who continued to look at the arm said" voh bas, is cut to dress kernay aya tha.

then he realized that perhaps Anandi might think that her desi nuskha did not work and so as to not offend her he quickly retorted back

" isliye nahi ki aapka desi nuskha sahi nahi tha lekin mujhe thodi stinging feeling ho rahi thi isiliye.."

he looked at her face as if to read whats on her mind but he noticed her eyes, her beautiful eyes. How deep they were, black and that surma such perfect alignment! then his eyes moved towards her nose, its soo pointy and perfect. I wonder if when she drinks soda would the bubbles tingle her?

he suddenly smiled and let out a soft laugh!

He then saw her brows constrict and then with sudden realization he corrected his posture and looked at his arm again.

Anandi who was staring at shiv with confusion could not understand his sudden smile.

"ye inko kya hogaya hai, she thought to herself'

Luckily for shiv, as if on Cue Abhishekh came towards Anandi..

Lucky? re-thought shiv. Why is he following her.

Anandi: Collector sahab, inse miliye, Ye Abhishekhji hain.

Shiv gave a small nod with a smile that seemed to resist coming onto his lips.

Lal Singh: Anandi sabh kuch teeh hai. Bas zara si kharoch hai. Maine ointment laga di hai aur ek extra packet de bhi diya hai. kuch hi dinon main teekh ho jayega.

Shiv who was avoiding Anandi's gaze looked up to find Laal Singh standing near Anandi.

Another doctor! and he is calling Anandi by her name? First name basis! Who could he be? And she does seem very comfortable talking to him.

WHY are you getting irritated with every human being that's talking to Anandi Shiv! he thought angrily to himself.

Not every human being! he reasoned with himself, just the male ones. !

As the very reason popped in his mind he felt uncomfortable.

If someone were to closely observe shiv during his inner battle they would certainly assume that he was having a bad case of constipation.

Anandi luckily did notice.

:ye aapko kya ho raha hai!

Lal singh please aap inko dekhiye.

Laal Singh! Abhishekh ji ...scoffed Shiv to himself.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣...suchi...thats hilarious...shiv ko bechara itna maat banao...clear the MU quick..i wanna read his feeling..sigh of relief...rofl
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one..
Tumhare os pad ke yaad aye ash-abhi ye dono kaha hai aur shyam sugna bhi gayab 😛 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow suchi wonderful OS.loved both the parts.plz continue soon

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