FF: Dil Kya Kare! Scene 30a&b Pg 61 - Page 34

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow! Ah- mazing ff! I'm loving it! It's so much fun!
Thank u so much for this ff, you are doing a great job suchivirman! Shiv's family is great esp rithul, ikshu, ishika, naina... Anandi, her family and shiv are nice too but they are all on the serious side... I'm so glad that you've given shiv has such masti filled family members! Big jhappis to you!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Still waiting for update please.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey waiting for your update...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Scene 27


Shiv went up to his room and packed his things. He was pondering on his brother's words.
'hmm aggressive? am I capable of that?' he thought to himself. When ever he was around Anandi, his mouth would go dry and words somehow could not make their way past his throat.

'But his brother was right. He could not just sit there and take things lightly and hope for matters to fall in its place. It was time for action.'

Thought Shiv as he punched the air


'amm where do I start?' he said to himself now ruffling his hair
He then mustered his strength and opened the door to head towards Anandi's room.

'Anandi thum na meray salwar kameez pehen lo' suggested Naina
'Main aur salwar?' Asked Anandi. As she said that she remembered the Mumbai sequence
where Jagya had first asked her to wear Salwar kameez. A sad pain shot through her heart.

'Teekh hai' she said regaining herself. The only way to move away from the past was if she did those things that brought her sadness and replaced them with happy memories.

Naina handed couple of her Salwar Kameez
'I think ithna kaafi hoga...hai na?' asked Naina

Anandi just shrugged.

'Main kuch madad ker dun?' came the voice of shiv from the door
Anandi and Naina turned around and they saw shiv standing at the door looking directly at Anandi.

'Han, shiv. Mujhe na uper walay shelf sey water cooler nikalna tha. hum na usmay ice bhar lengay aur pani ki bottles rakh lengay. Kya khayal hai ?' asked Naina

Shiv looked at her and nodded
'kahan per hai?' he asked

'Store room main' replied Naina

'Ok..Anandi ji aap chaliye meray saath. Bhabi aapko lunch ki tayyari kerni hai na' asked Shiv

Naina gave a slight smile and immediately took off towards the door without waiting for Anandi to say much
Anandi stood at the bedside with a confused look
'chaliye' said shiv
Anandi followed him. They reached the lower level of the mansion which pretty much had a huge empty room with doors carved into its walls leading to other rooms.

They reached the south end of the room and opened the door which led to a gloomy looking room due to its lack of light. Shiv turned on the lights
'abh ye cooler kahan hai' he muttered to himself

'aap bhi dekhiye na' he said turning to Anandi

Anandi started searching the place with her eyes. The place was filled with furniture which seemed from another century. It had an old piano lying in the corner, an old bike, huge cupboards with dishes stacked up.

'hmm...' said shiv
He then moved forward towards the piano trying to look for the cooler there.
Anandi then saw shiv smiling.

Shiv moved forward towards his bike and placed his hand fondly over its seat.
'Papa nay mujhe ye bike class main first anay ki wajay sey dee thi. Mujhe yaad hai! Bohot kush tha main. Us waqt ye sabsey latest model thi. Papa ko maine kaha tha ki main kudh isey khareedh ker launga. Unhonay mujhe 2000 RS/- diye thay' He said reminiscing the past

'Main wapis ghar is bicycle per aaya tha. Main bohot gussa hui thi...' laughed shiv

'kyun? asked Anandi

'actually store na kaafi door tha. Mujhe puray 4 ghantay lagay wapis ghar aanay main. Mom papa per bohot gussa hui ki unhonay mujhe akele kiyun janay diya.' said Shiv

'Kithnay be fikri kay din hua kerthay thay na?' asked Shiv

Anandi's smile faltered. Only if she had a normal childhood. Alas! no. Though she had sweet memories of her childhood, they were now tainted with the brush of pain and loneliness.

Shiv who had turned his back on Anandi now looked back and saw Anandi lost in thoughts. He bit his tongue in anger. He understood that, Anandi probably did not have a pleasant childhood.

'Sorry Anandi. Mera matlab aapko dukh pahunchanay ka nahi tha' said Shiv coming closer to her
Anandi looked at him and with a sigh turned her face away and started looking for the cooler.

'are.. kahin voh tho nahin' asked Anandi pointing towards a medium sized red box

Shiv looked at the direction where Anandi was pointing and headed towards it. The box was lying on top of one of the cupboards. He pulled it down.

'meray khayal main do-teen aur honay chahiye' he said

Anandi went towards another cupboard and tried looking but she was too short to see the things that were on the top.

She then stepped back few steps in order to get a clearer view.
Shiv was looking at the opposite direction and he did not see Anandi moving backwards.

Anandi walked backward few more steps and her leg slipped on a piece of wood that was lying on the floor making her fall.
Shiv caught Anandi's fall and helped her to her feet.

'aap teekh hai na' he asked with concern
Anandi who was clearly embarrassed nodded

'voh rahe' said shiv as he headed towards another cupboard and pulled out two more coolers.

'bohot dhool jami hui hai inper' said Annadi as she dusted the handle some of the dust flew into her eyes. She immediately started rubbing her eyes.

Shiv came running towards her
'aap teekh hai na? main... main madad ker dun?' he asked as Anandi continued to rub her eyes frantically
'nahi main teekh hun' she replied

Anandi continued to rub her eyes and shiv looked on to her helplessly then suddenly took hold of her hands
'ek min' he said
Then he took out a handkerchief and started blowing into it.
'idhar dikhayiye' he said
'nahi ..koi zaroorat..' said Anandi resisting but shiv cut in
'chup karo ek min ke liye Anandi. Har waqt zid teekh nahi hothi' he said Angrily as he pulled her hands once again away from her face

He then placed the warm handkerchief in her eyes
'ouch' said Anandi
' kya hua... idhar dikhao' said Shiv taking a step closer towards her
He then placed his two fingers on her eyes and opened them slowly and started blowing into them slowly. Followed with blowing into the kerchief and placing it on her eyes. He repeated this three times.
'Abh teekh hai' he asked
Anandi nodded but then took her hand towards her eyes. Shiv stopped her hands in the mid air
'Anandi , is tarah baar baar rub nahi karo ankhon ko' he said with concern and then he blew into the kerchief and placed it on her eyes again.

'Abh?' he asked

Anandi nodded and this time she did not bring her hands back to her eyes. The irritation had lessened.

She then moved her hand towards the cooler and once again shiv pulled her hands away.

'main ker lunga' he said
He then started moving the dust slowly from the cooler but also stealing glances of her. Anandi was standing holding the kerchief in her eyes and he could sense that she was feeling uneasy.

'Ah!' said shiv indicating pain
Anandi noticed that Shiv was rubbing his eyes. It had seemed that the dust had gone in his eyes as well. She wanted to step in and help him but hesitated.

Shiv was frantically rubbing his eyes and Anandi who could not hesitate any longer moved towards him.

'aap .. teheriye... rukhiye.. nahi ithni zor sey nahi '' words were coming out of her mouth as she saw Shiv rub his eyes

Then she stopped his hands. Shiv immediately stopped and paused.
With the other eye he saw Anandi indicate to him to bend a bit as she could not reach him'

Shiv bent down and Anandi brought his face closer to hers and with her two fingers she opened his left eye and started blowing slowly into it.

It was the best feeling. The warm air from her was as if entering directly into his heart and pumping it.
Then Shiv slowly held Anandi's hand and moved it from his face. He opened his eyes and a big grin formed in his face.

Anandi looked at shiv confused and then she realized that shiv had been pretending that something had gone in his eyes.
Edited by Suchi-Virmanian - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome suchi!!!
My god it was so very cute...wow!!!😳
continue soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part suchi
it was damn sweet
lovely.plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love you Suchi for this...Its going amazingly awesome... do continue for tomorrow dose :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
😆 aggressive kaha toh yeh hua !!! will anandi get angry at him for d trick ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
areey maar khayge kya ab anandi se🤣
he tricked anandi😲...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Scene 28a

Anandi glared at shiv angrily
Shiv laughed out loud, which just made her angrier

'ye kaisa mazak tha' she started out angrily

'Ok ok.. sorry!' He said still laughing

'aap ithna awkward feel ker rahi thi..' said shiv smiling

'acha sorry..sorry.. he said holding his ears' as Anandi continued to glare at him

Looking at him hold his ears she then gave a faint smile

'Phew! Thank God. Abh chalain?' he asked

Anandi nodded.

They went upstairs and handed the boxes to Naina. Anandi helped Naina to clean them up and filled them with ice.

'Beta ghar sey kuch leker jaogay ya bahar khanay ka irada hai?' asked Hansa
'tayiji, Bahar sey hi kha lengay. Aaj gharmi bhi ithni hai, khana kharab na ho jaye' said Naina

'Han ye bhi sahih hai.
Teekh hai thumlog jao aur tayyar ho jao' Said Hansa

Anandi and Naina headed upstairs to change.

Thirty minutes later, Rithul, Ishika and Ikshu had arrived in the living room. They picked up the picnic baskets that was packed by Hansa, containing sandwiches for the road, box of chips and soda cans. They helped Raman singh carry the things to their car.

There was excitement in the air. Ishika and Ikshu were chatting away merrily. Her yellow salwar made her look like a huge talking sunflower. Ikshu on the other hand had a white T-shirt and wore casual jeans. Ikshu opened the car roof and sat at the drivers seat, and was soon joined by Rithul who had worn a checked white T-shirt with green collar and black jeans.

'Bhaiiyah its going to be HOT , aapnay black jeans kiyun pehna hai' asked Ikshu

Rithul smiled at his brother and took out his sunglasses and placed it behind his neck collar.

Ishiki giggled and Ikshu snorted
'NO bhaiyyah, aap salman khan ki tarah nahi ho...please!'

Rithul tried to jump into the car but after two failed attempts he just opened the door and sat in the passenger seat.

Ishika was laughing out loud watching her brother's antics.

Ikshu honked the car.
'bhabhi bhi na... saal lagathi hai anay main' he complained

Naina was rushing downstairs towards the hall. She met with Shiv who was standing in the living room wearing a light blue T-shirt and dark blue jeans.
'Anandi kahan hain?' he asked looking towards the direction of her room

'aa rahi hai' said Naina
'lo...aa gayi' she said as she saw Anandi walking down the stairs

Shiv's eyes widened as she saw the picture of perfection walking towards him.
Anandi was wearing a beautiful light blue salwar kameez. Her long thick hair sat perfectly on her back enhancing her facial features.
'are vah Anandi, thum tho bohot khubsurat lag rahi ho' said Naina

Shiv continued to glare at Anandi, as if determined to memorize her face
Anandi's cheeks turned the lightest shade of pink.

'Wakay main '' said Shiv
Anandi looked up at his remark and noticed him staring at her with widened eyes and a smile on his face.
She looked the other way not knowing how to react.

'Shiv bhaiyyah, chalain?' asked Naina
Shiv continued to stare at Anandi and did not respond. Anandi who was looking away waited for movements
'hello' said Naina trying to wake up shiv from his trance

Shiv continued to stare and did not move. Anandi was feeling embarrassed at SHiv's reaction. She wanted to leave on her own accord but could not muster up the courage. To add to the situation Hansa and Shamita had just walked in

'are vah Anandi, thum tho bohot pyari lag rahi ho' Said Hansa
Anandi looked at hansa and smiled shyly.
'sachi, bohot pyari lag rahi ho beta' agreed shamita as she softly placed her hands on her cheek.
Naina then tapped Shamita's hands and pointed at Shiv. Shiv was continuing to glare at Anandi. Shamita smiled at his reaction. Hansa turned her attention to shiv and tapped him on his shoulders.

'Shiv, nikalna nahi hai' She said
As if coming out from a trance
'Mom.!' Said Shiv shocked. Hansa had appeared out of thin air for him.

'Mujhe pata hai ki Anandi bohot pyari lag rahi hai, lekin iska matlab ye tho nahi ki thum ghumnay janay kay bajaye ghurna shuru kerdo' she said holding his ears

Anandi went red. She did not know how to react.
Naina laughed out loud. She took Anandi by her hand and dragged her to the door.

Shiv followed them and waved goodbye to his mom and chachi.

As they came to the front yard, Ishika jumped out of the car and ran towards Naina and Anandi.

'Wow Anandi ji aap kithni pyari lag rahi ho. Haina bhabhi. She looks like my age!' said Ishika
Naina nodded

Anandi looked at the car and jeep which were standing ready to head out. She moved towards the car wanting to sit with Naina.

Rithul stepped outside and smiled at Anandi.
He then took Naina's hands and pulled her towards him.
'Ye kya ker rahe ho aap' said Naina clearly taken aback

'kya khoob lagthi ho... badi sundar dikthi ho..' he started singing
Naina, Ikshu and Ishika closed their ears simultaneously

'Ouch!! Rithul aap please meray kaanon per reham kijiye' said Naina with mock pain on her face

Ishika and Ikshu laughed out loud. Looking at their antics Anandi too smiled.

'Jana nahi hai kya' said Hansa. Hansa and Shamita were standing near the front door. Looking at them Rithul immediately let go of Naina's hands.

Naina shook her head and sat in the back of the car with Ishika. Ikshu and rithul sat in the front.

'Uh Oh! house full' said Rithul smiling
Anandi saw him looked towards Shiv, who was now sitting comfortably in the jeep, looking everywhere but near Anandi's direction.

Anandi stood there waiting for some solution, a solution that involved no shiv.

'Anandi ji jayiye, shiv ki gadi main jagah hai' said Rithul seriously

Anandi looked at shiv and hesitated

'Jao beta. dair ho rahi hai' came the voice of Hansa
Anandi could not avoid her suggestion and she slowly walked towards shiv's jeep.
Edited by Suchi-Virmanian - 13 years ago

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