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Scene 20

'Anandi kya hua beta? Aap bohot pareshan lag rahin hain' asked Hansa.

Anandi had knocked the door. It was 11:00 AM. She was hesitant to go to Hansa's room but she had no other choice.

'ji voh..Anandi hesitated

'Shiv ji ka call aya tha..

Hansa looked on waiting for Anandi to continue

'Wahan college main, jis ladkay kay baray main complain kernay gaye thay, us ladkay nay Neel ji per goli chala di hai'' Said Anandi

As soon as she saw Hansa turning pale white she added quickly

'Lekin voh teekh hain.. bilkul teekh..'

Hansa moved her mouth, trying to form words.

'voh Hospital main hain. Shiv ji unkay paas hai aur Ikshu ji ghar aa rahe hain. Doctors nay kaha hai ki khatre ki baat kuch nahi hai kiyunki goli kandhon ko chu ker nikli thi' Said Anandi

As Hansa tried to collect herself , Anandi took her by her hand and made her sit down. She quickly then poured some water for her from the jug that was placed on the dressing table

'Abhi ikshu ji aathay hi hongay' Said Anandi giving her time to think

Anandi took Hansa downstairs and they entered the living room. Anandi saw Shamita walk in. She turned and looked at Hansa trying to silently communicate and find out a way to break the news to her.

Just then Ikshu had walked in and Anandi heard a loud gasp behind her

'Ikshu kya hua?! said shamita as she rushed over towards him. There was blood on his shirt

'Ma, voh papa''

'Kya hua thumharay papa ko' asked Shamita frantically

'Ikshu ji aap andhar jayiye aur dress change kar lijiye. Main inhay batati hun' said Anandi rushing over to Ikshu and indicating him to not waste time

Anandi narrated the incident to Shamita

The earth seemed to have disappeared under her feet as she fell on sofa loosing her balance.

'Shamita' Cried Hansa'

'm'mujhe unhe dekhna hai bhabi.. Abhi'mujhe jana hai'

Anandi knelt besides Shamita

'Ikshu kay papa bilkul teekh hain. Meri baat hui hai shiv ji sey. Aap please apnay aap ko sambhaliye. Agar aap is tarah pareshan hongi tho Neel ji ko kon sambhalega' Said Anandi trying to reason with her

'Han shamita, shant ho jao. Ikshu chalo main aur Shamita bhi chalengi thumharay saat' said Hansa

'Lekin Dolly?' asked Shamita

She knew that Naina was out of town and shravan had gone to pick her up.

'aap iski bilkul chinta mat kariyega. Main hun ha. Dolly ko le lungi school sey' said Anandi

'Ma voh papa ke liye kuch kapday chahiye. chotay- bhaiyyah nay mangwaya hai' Said Ikshu

Shamita ran to her room to prepare for the visit

Meanwhile Anandi turned to Hansa

'Main ishika ko sambhal lungi. Usko shayad college main hi pata chal gaya hoga' Said Anandi worried thinking about Ishika

'Agar voh hospital aaye tho aap Ishika ko ghar bej dijiye ga'

Ishika would blame herself for what had happened. Anandi thought it would be best if she stayed away from the hospital

Ikshu and Shamita came back hurriedly into the living room and quickly left with Hansa


Scene 20b

Ishika had returned from her college and Anandi, who had been waiting for her knew at once that the news had reached her.

'Anandi ji..! Ishika ran towards Anandi and hugged her.

'S'sab meri galthi hai. Meri wajay sey chachu ko aaj..s..sab meri wajay sey' She cried

'Ishika shant ho jao. Aapkay chachu teek hain. Abhi meri aapkay bhaiiyah sey baat hui thi.' assured Anandi

Ishika continued to cry as Anandi made her sit besides her. Nothing that she said did much good.

Anandi then called shiv.

'Hello Shiv ji.

'aapkay Chachu kaise hain abh?she asked

'Voh bilkul teekh hai. Doctors nay kaha hai ki raath thak hum inhay ghar le ker aa sakthay hain' assured Shiv

'Shiv ji , Ishika bohot ro rahi hai. Aap please unhay samjhayiye' said Anandi

'Ishi.. kya hua ?, thum ro kiyun rahi ho? said Shiv once he heard Ishika's sobs on the phone

'bhaiyyah.. voh' she sobbed

'Dekho, chachu bilkul teekh hai aur thum bilkul fiker math karo. Sabh kuch teekh ho gaya hai. Hum sham thak ghar aa jayengay' Said Shiv

Ishika's sobs lessened as she heard her brother's assuring voice. She then finished the conversation and gave the phone back to Anandi.

Acha chalo sabh ke liye khana banathay hain.

Ishika smiled and followed Anandi into the kitchen.

'HUmaray ghar main khana, Mom aur chachi banathi hain. Naukar ghar kay baki kaam dekhthay hain. You know cleaning, cutting the vegetables wagairah' said Ishika

Anandi smiled and then started taking things out from the fridge. She started taking the required materials out with Ishika's help and started cooking food.

Soon the entire kitchen was filled with beautiful fragrance.

'Ye lo kichdi bhi ban gayi' said Anandi as she gave a final stir to the vessel. Aapkay chachu ko kuch halka khana chahiye na' Said Anandi

'Vah Anandi ji. Aap ithna kuch , ithni jaldi kaise bana lethi hain? Main nahi ker sakthi. Pata hai ek baar mom nay mujhe tamatar katnay ko kaha. maine apni ungli kaatli aur shiv bhaiyyah ithna naraaz hue us din sab per ki main kudh dar gayi. said Ishika

'unhonay kaha ki 'kya zaroorat hai kaatnay ke liye, mujhe bata diya hotha' She said imitating a thick male voice of shiv

Anandi smiled

'Voh aapsey bohot pyar kerthay hain. Aur mujhe pata hai ki aapko voh college continue kernay dengay' she said assuringly

Ishika looked at Anandi and smiled.

'Pata hai Anandi ji mujhe na Naina bhabhi kay bina ghar per bohot bore feel hotha hai. Lekin aapnay unki kami nahi mehsoos honay di mujhe. Agar aap nahi hothi tho ' said Ishika and then she became silent

a few seconds later

'Thanks' said Ishika

'Lagtha hai Dolly aa gayi hai' Said Ishika as she heard the honk of the bus.

'Usey kuch nahi batana ' said Anandi as ishika headed towards the door to receive dolly.

'Main aa gayi!' Announced Dolly

'Welcome back!' said Ishika sarcastically as she took dolly's school bad from her hands.

'Didi..choti dadi aur badi dadi kahan hai? she asked looking around

'Dolly, thum andhar tho chalo. Athay hi chapar chapar shuru' said Ishika

A few minutes later Dolly came back into the dining room with her dress changed. Anandi served her food

'aapnay banaya hai? asked dolly

Anandi did not answer but smiled at her

'aap hi nay banaya hoga. Di nay tho definitely nahi banaya hoga' she concluded looking at Ishika

Anandi gave a small smile as she saw ishika hit Dolly head softly

As Dolly ate her food, Anandi went back into the kitchen and started doing the dishes.

'Anandi ji , aap dishes kiyun wash ker rahi hain. Maid hai na. Ye ker legi. Please chaliye aap. urged Ishika pulling Anandi's hand away from the kitchen sink

'bas ho gaya. Said Anandi

'aap jao aur dolly kay saath baito'

Dolly finished her food and then headed towards her room. Anandi asked Ishika to keep her company so that she does not hear about the mishap.

Scene 20 c

'Lagtha hai voh sabh aa gaye hain' Said Ishika loudly as she heard the honking of their cars

'Sambhalkay'. dheeray' Said shamita as she followed Neel who walked with his left arm around Shiv.

The doctors had placed a plaster on his arm for support so that the wound could heal easily. They did not want any sort of pressure on the shoulders.

'Shiv, Neel ko unkay kamray tak le jao' Suggested Hansa who looked tired

Doctors nay kya kaha asked Ishika, as Hansa, Ikshu, Hasit made their way towards the living room.

'Raman singh, kuch peenay ke liye le ker aao sabh ke liye! called our Hansa as she sat on the sofa

' Mujhe tho abhi bhi yaqeen nahi ho raha hai' said Ikshu angrily

'Ikshu, abh bas! said Hansa with a commanding tone

Hansa noticed that her husband was awfully quiet. She knew that Neel was very close to him and such an incident had definitely shook him.

'Suniye, aap fikr na karain. Uperwalay nay hum sabh per ithni badi meherbani ki hai. Neel Sahih salamat ghar aa gaya. Aur chot bhi gehri nahi said Hansa softly

'Ye lijye' said Anandi

Hansa looked up and noticed Anandi who had carried the tray filled with juice and water.

She looked a bit surprised

'beta aapko ye kernay ki kya zaroorat thi. Raman singh le ker aa jatha' said Hansa

Anandi smiled and started offering the drinks to everyone. She then looked around to find Shiv

Hansa noticed that

'Shiv andhar gaya hai. Neel aur Shamita kay saath unkay kamray tak.' She said.

Anandi looked at Hansa

'Unki tabiyat kaise hai abh?' she asked

Hansa took her about the doctors statements.

'Shukriya beta aapnay ithna kuch kiya. Bohot abhaar. ' She said with gratitude

'Aise koi baat nahi hai' Said Anandi

She then noticed Shiv coming downstairs looking weary.

He noticed her and started at her. His entire tiredness started to wear off. He started feeling better.

Anandi looked at him and gave him a plain look. He could not read the expresssions on her face but he knew that her actions proved her otherwise. Today, when he needed her she was there and that was enough for him.

Hansa was looking at Shiv and then she looked at Anandi. She then looked away her forehead sketched with worry lines.

Shiv came and stood besides Anandi. Anandi looked at him and offered him the juice. Shiv moved his hand forward towards the glass and his hands froze on the glass. He was still staring at Anandi.

Anandi turned her face away

'Ishika aap please meray saath chaliye' she said quickly.

Ishika followed Anandi.

'Chalo khana laga dethay hain' She told Ishika in a low voice.

'Kya hua beta?' asked Hansa as she saw Ishika and Anandi leave

'khanaay ki tayyari kernay ja rahe hain' said ishika

Hansa put her fists on the sofa and putting her weight on them, she got up.

'han chalo. Bhukh bhi tho lagi hogi sabhko' she said and followed them towards the Kitchen.

As soon as Hansa entered into the kitchen, she could smell the fragrance of freshly cooked meal.

'Anandi beta. Aapnay ye sabh kab banaya?! she asked shocked.

before Anandi could answer Ishika jumped in

'Mom main bhi tho bana sakthi hun na. Aapnay seedha keh diya ki Anandi nay banaya hoga! she said mockingly

Hansa shook her head

'Han bai-sa jaise aap roz banathi hain' she said sarcastically

Anandi let out a soft laugh


'Maine Neel ji ke liye Khichdi banayi hai. Halka hai aur unke liye sahih hoga' she said as she turned around to get a plate and prepare a tray for him.

Hansa looked at her lovingly. She had a longing look on her face. Together they set up the table. Hansa explained to everyone how Anandi had helped prepare the food in their absence. Anandi was feeling embarrassed by their constant mention of her work.

'aap sabh kha lijiye main jaker Neel ji aur shamita ji ko khana de ker aathi hun' Said Anandi

There were two trays. Anandi wanted to take Ishika's help but , she had left to Dolly room to check on her as per Hansa's command.

'Main chaltha hun' said Shiv readily

He took the tray and both walked towards the room. Anandi handed the tray to Neel and after Shamita's constant thanking they left the room together.

'Anandi ji .. ek min' Said shiv

'Anandi ji aapnay aaj meray parivar ke liye bohot kuch kiya' he said

He then raised his hand to stop Anandi. Anandi was about to dismiss his praise

' aise koi'' she said

'Anandi ji.. mujhe kehnay dijiye. Meray liye asaan nahi tha aaj ka din. Humaray ghar main sabh bohot nazdeekh hain ek dusray kay. aapnay tho ye dekh hi liya hoga. lekin is mushkil wali ghadi main jis tarah aapnay mera saath diya , mera matlab hai meraay parivar ke liye'.

he then stopped '.

looked at her intensely.

'Nahi.. mera saath diya, mujhe sahara diya, jo apna pan dikhaya, main uske liye thanks kehna chahtha hun. He said

Anandi looked at him. She noticed a slight fire in his eyes. She knew that shiv had more than just mere respect for her and that is why she wanted to keep her distance.

'Collector sa'' started Anandi

'Anandi please' Said Shiv angrily

He then took a small breath of air

'Shiv' he said looking at her determined

Anandi looked at him and without knowing how to react to his sudden outburst, she just lowered her gaze.

'Chalain? khanay per humara intezaar ho raha hoga' she said

As she was about to walk, she stepped onto Shiv's feet and slipped, falling in his Arms forward.

'Anandi ji..aap teek hain na' said shiv as he held Anandi's shoulders to push her up.

Anandi quickly moved away from his grip and without looking at him, she nodded.

'Chaliye' Said shiv as he moved aside letting Anandi to pass by.

Edited by Suchi-Virmanian - 13 years ago
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Scene 21

It was around 8:00 PM in the evening. The entire family was sitting in the Family room discussing the day's events. Neel was taking rest in his room. Naina and Rithul were to return the next day. They wanted to come back but Hansa adviced them to come in the morning to avoid late night travels.

A lot was going on in Hansa's mind. She was silently sitting and listening to everyone's conversation in the room but her eyes were flickering back and forth from Anandi to Shiv. Her son, the son whom she was proud of has feelings for the girl sitting in front of her. She knew that Shiv always took proper decisions. He has not faltered so far and by and far , Anandi seemed to be the perfect match for him, but her mind conflicted with her heart.

Why was Anandi avoiding shiv? Is it because she is in his house?

That could not be the reason as she noticed that Anandi behaved very normally and friendly with everyone except Shiv whom she seemed to maintain 'distance.

Just then she heard Anandi's phone ring

'Hello,

said Anandi

'bapusa.. ji. Teekh hun.' Said Anandi

'Nahi bapusa aaj nahi' said Anandi

"Anandi ji.. kya bhairav singh ji video conference ki baat ker rahe hain? he asked

'Anandi looked at him and nodded.

'Han tho ker lijiye na' Said Shiv

'nahi aaj nahi' said Anandi

'Anandi beta, baat ker lo. Isi bahanay meri bhi baat ho jayegi. Main chahthi hun ki main unsey milun' Said Hansa

Anandi nodded and told BHairav to come online in few minutes. Shiv had gotten his laptop and then signed on a few minutes later. He saw Bhairav login.

'Voh aa gaye' he told Anandi

Soon Anandi saw Bhairav come into the video frame and then slowly she saw the camera turn towards Dadisa who was sitting on the chair.

Anandi felt a sudder urge to hug her dadisa. With the turn of events at Shiv's place she felt the need to be with her Dadisa even more.

'Dadisaa.. she said her voice shaking

'Kaise hai thu chori' said Dadisa tearing up

'main teekh hun dadisa. Aap kaisi ho? she asked

Anandi talked with dadisa for few minutes asking her about her health. She enquired if she was taking care of herself and then she talked with Gehna, basant and bhairav

'bapusa, main 2 din main wapis aa jaungi' she said

'han beta abh aa ja. Teri kami bohot khatak rahi hai' said bhairav

'Anandi beta mujhe baat kerni hai unsey' said Hansa

Hansa then introduced herself and talked with Dadisa

'Ghani khamma Maji. Main shiv ki Ma hun' said Hansa

'Khamma ghani. Said Dadisa with a huge smile on her face. aapkay baray main shiv betay sey kafi suna tha aur aaj dekh bhi liya' said Dadisa

'Ji Shiv nay bhi kaafi tareef kee thi aur aapkay ghar ki. Mujhe bohot acha laga ye sun ker ki ek anjaan jagay pe meray betay ko ko apnon ki kami mahsoos nahi hui. Bohot abhaar aapka' said Hansa

'Nahi ji, ye tho humara saubhaghy hai ki ,shiv mila humain. Bohot hi achay hain' said Bhairav from behind Dadisa

Hansa smiled

'Achi tho aapki Anandi bhi hai. Hum sabh sey bohot gul mil gayi hai. Ghar per lagtha hi nahi ki koi mehmaan hain. ' said Hansa smiling

Shiv looked at his mother with a huge smile. Anandi smiled as well but it was short lived.

'aaj tho Anandi nay humari bohot madad ki' Said Hansa and she narrated the whole incident to them

Dadisa's facial expression changed as the narration progressed.

'Abh tho unki tabiyat teekh hai na' asked Basant

'ji ji'said hansa

'Nandu , ek min rukh ja' said gehna as she saw Nandu poke his head in between to get a glimpse of Anandi

'Nandu baat ker rahe hain hum' said Gehna a bit frustrated.

'Mujeh bhi baat kerni hai' said nandu

'ye mera beta hai Nandu. Bohot shararti hai , said Basant as Nandu squeezed himself between the elders.

' are vah, ' mujhe tho sabh dikhayi de raha hai' said nandu but his expression changed from excitement to curiosity

'Lekin bhabi sa nazar nahi aa rahi hai' he asked turning to his father

Hansa looked at him questiongly.

'Anandi bhabi-sa, kahan ho aap? asked Nandu

with the words as if a silent cold air had run through shiv's residence. Hansa's face color had changed. She looked shocked and when she turned towards her family she noticed that Ikshu, Ishika, Hasit and shamita were equally shocked. Anandi had stepped in and was chatting with Nandu animatedly.

'Han han Nandu mujhe yaad hain , main leker aaungi' said Anandi smilingly

Hansa looked at shiv, anger reflecting in her eyes.

Shiv also glared at his mother and his expressions were worried.

Edited by Suchi-Virmanian - 13 years ago
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ah d real drama starts now !!
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now you have gotten to the good part you have to continue soon I cannot wait to see what happens
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What a way to introduce Anandi's background to Shiv's family ! Awesome suchi !
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what a place to stop. cant wait for the next update.
plz continue soon
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too good story 👏, I just can't wait to read more...
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Originally posted by: coolgirl7

what a place to stop. cant wait for the next update.
plz continue soon



eagerly waiting for next update..
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really...the real drama starts now.. will eagerly wait for the next👍🏼
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Lovely FF, can't wait for the next chapter.

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