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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

AnSh Scene 5

Shiv seemed to have kicked the closet that caused a loud commotion in the room. Anandi , who was startled looked towards Shiv's direction and found him smiling at her, but something was different about him

Click Click…

Anandi clicking her fingers in front of shiv as if trying to wake him up from a trance. She noticed a silly smile on his face glaring towards the opposite side of the wall.

Collector sahab… aap teekh hain? she asked but no response

Collector sahab.. she called again again no response…

This time she touched his shoulders slightly patting it…

as if he got a jolt of 100 watts, shiv shook and in the process knocked over Anandi who almost fell but was supported by Shiv.

Shiv looked at Anandi who was now in his arms with her eyes closed as if to avoid a fall. The hair strand, which he had imagined earlier on, her face was back on her face again. He moved closer to remove it but was suddenly given a slight push by Anandi who had tried to stand up.

Anandi looked extremely uncomfortable and without a word she walked out of the room.

Ye kya kiya thumnay shiv! Anandiji abh kya sochengi! mujhe unkay peechay jana hoga.

Shiv hurriedly put on his shirt but just then Lal singh had entered.

Anandi kahan gayi? he asked

Mujhe nahi malon said shiv with a stern face. He did not want him to think that something he had done might have driven Anandi away.

Lal singh wrote a prescription and handed it to shiv who then thanked him and walked out.

He walked towards the corridor of the hospital hurriedly looking towards right and left hoping to find Anandi. He then found her walking towards the door when Abhishekh called her name

Anandiji

Shiv rushed towards Anandi to join her in the conversation.

Anandi who had noticed him coming towards her had turned her face away and looked at Abhisheikh.

Anandiji , Asha nay ghar per dawat rakhi hai aur aapko aamantran denay ko kaha tha.

Lal singh who was also walking towads the collector , joined them and said,

aap apna purse bhul gaye thay kamre main.

Oh thank you Doctor! Shiv said, absentmindedly thinking about who Asha might be.

Maine Dr. Laal singh ko aur unki patni ko bhi amantrit ker diya hai. Tho aap please apnay puray parivar kay saat padhariye.

As soon as shiv heard the word Patni , his whole body relaxed as if it just was drenched in cool water.

Abhishekh turned towards Shiv and said,

aap bhi humaray ghar aayiye. Humay bohot acha lagega.

Shiv hesitated and said: ye aapkay ghar ki baat hai, main kiyun beech main…..

but Abhishek cut in

Aap jetsar ke liye ithna ker rahe hain tho aap bhi humaray hi parivar ke hue. It will be our pleasure.

Shiv who was beyond happy was only too glad to oblige, but he noticed the silence besides him.

He looked at Anandi who he noticed was avoiding his gaze and he felt as if someone had let out the air from the balloon that had emerged earlier in his heart.

Without a word he then walked away.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: preity_d

lovely..but i think this will be a dream 😉 what say? @suchi?


YEAHh sahih pehchana...


Anandi falling in his armsss!!! (haiii we wish)
but it wil happen in its own time :) not this soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Shiv was daydreaming..😆 I knew it could only be his imagination...haha..bechara shiv..Anandi is probably going to avoid him now as much as possible...but atleast his MU got cleared


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good one Suchi :) 👏.
Hope the CVs take this idea and show it on air. Would love to see Shiv's dreamy sequence of Pehla Nasha.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very lovely SS. Hope CVs take the Shiv's dream dance scene and use it as Shiv imagination in his birthday party.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Suchi WOW
Continue soon..I am loving all of Ansh and brilliant SS
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
my god !!!!!!!!!!!
you simply rocks with your imagination...
i am nothing to your writing skills...you are simply .their is not word to say about your such fab. imagination..👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
Suchiii...🤗
OMG u r writing on AnSh...!!!!!
haiyyyeee...
jealous shiv is so funny n cute...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
suchi read part 3,4 and 5 togethernd they r just brilliant yaar.luved them a lot.u r just fabulous in writting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Thank you! lol yes ASH after nivren this is the first time I am writing about someone else heehhe

LOVEEE ANSH!!!

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