FF: Dil Kya Kare! Scene 30a&b Pg 61 - Page 26

Thanks Suchi for the PM..Mindblowing update,cant even imagine whats going to be next

Hi Suchi m a silent reader ...but a big fan of ur FFS. ...ur ffs are much more interesting than the ongoing track ...must say u r fab write keep writing,sometimes I login jst to read ur updates ...m loving shiv and his personality. ...
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ANSH rocks ...:)

When are you posting your next episode???
Love the way you are unfolding each petal one by one! Your story is turning rosy!😳

awesome part.. love it... finally shiv confessed his love for her...

Scene 24: Part 1

AnSh confrontation

Anandi was in her room crying silently. Tears were pouring out of her eyes. Streaks of teary marks were visible on her cheeks.

How could Shiv do this to her. He had not only humiliated her in front of his whole family but also dejected a girl's feelings. Ashima's feelings.

Her brain seemed to be clouded with thoughts. What she has been going through, could he even imagine? She was sure that he had NO idea about the pain and suffering he has been through. It was so easy for him to convey his feelings but what about her feelings. How was she to face his family now.

'I have to leave now' she thought to herself adamantly.

She started quickly putting all the clothing in the suitcase. As she was dumping her pallu had come out. Yet she did not care. She was throwing things into her bag now and with every moment towards the cubboard a strong dislike pouring forth for Shiv.

'How could he' she thought as the scene of him holding her hand and confessing his love in front of his entire family flashed in her mind.

She was having a hard time closing the bag. She then took out couple of ghaghras and threw them on the bed and closed the suitcase.

Then her eyes moved towards the wall clock. It was 10:00 PM

where will she go this late at night?! But she had to get out of there.

She dialed her home number but then stopped herself. If she calls now then everyone would panic. She then dropped the bag in anger and sat down on the bed.

A few seconds later she got up again and started to pace back and forth. The anger that was erupting inside of her was forcing her to take some action, any action.

She desperately opened the room's door and to her surprise she found Shiv standing there.

The anger inside of her erupted

'aapnay aisa kiyun kiya' she asked angrily

Shiv looked at her meekly and worried. He had never seen Anandi that angry.

Anandi could not bring words in her mouth so she just turned away from him and grabbed the bag

'Anandi ji aap ye kya ker rahi hain' said Shiv extremely worried

'Mujhe ghar jana hai' said Anandi clearly, pain etched on each word

'Ithni raath ko kaise !?

'Mujhe bas ghar jana hai' she said stubbornly

'aap koi gadi ka intezaam ker dijiye' she added angrily

'Anandi ji, please aap samajhnay ki koshish ki jiye. Main mantha hun ki maine jo bhi kaha, kiya ussey aapko takleef hui hai, lekin iska matlab ye nahi ki aap zid per''

As shiv was talking Anandi , who could not bear to stand and hear any more of his words, took the bag and started to storm out towards the door

Shiv got hold of the bag and pulled it away from her

'Anandi ! aap kahin nahi jaa rahin hain bas' said SHIv in a commanding tone

Anandi who was already angry , started to pull the bag towards her.

Shiv on the other hand did not put much effort in pulling it back but he did try to resist a bit. Anandi was smaller and weaker in physical strength than him but Anandi did not seem to stop. A craze had come over her

She pulled the bag even harder and this time it almost slipped off Shiv's hands. Afraid of hurting Anandi by letting the bag go and her falling behind with force, he pulled the bag towards him with strength.

Anandi lost her grip and came forward and stepped on his toe, making shiv loose his balance. Shiv's hand dropped the bag and instead caught her waist and his other hand caught her hand which was flying towards him trying to seek balance.

They both stumbled and fell on the bed.

Anandi on top of Shiv and her cheek touching his while her thick and long hair covering his entire face.

Anandi struggled to get off of him but her dupatta was stuck to Shiv's belt and as she tried to get up, she fell again on top of him.

Anandi tried once again to get up but her duppata pulled her down once again and she fell on shiv with great force

'OUCH' yelled shiv as Anandi's elbow hit his stomach

Anandi looked at him but could not see his face as her hair obscuring the sight

'Anandi ji ek min rukhiye said Shiv as if out of breath

He then started feeling for his belt and he could feel the duppata stuck to the buckle.

As he tried to remove it , his hand brushed against the bare skin of Anandi's waist.

He knew that made Anandi uncomfortable as he felt a slight shudder and immediately felt a slight burn near his ears. Anandi's cheek was brushed against it.

He quickly tore the duppata off the buckle and Anandi got up immediately, off of him.

Anandi went silent. She looked at her dupatta and saw a big tear on it.

Suddenly there was a knock at the door and Anandi saw Hansa standing at the door.

Wow Suchi ! Anjana and Ritzi se kafi prabhavit huvi ho aap bhi ! 😉
Superb one though ! 😊

yeah? were they talking about the same thing?

Originally posted by: Suchi-Virmanian

yeah? were they talking about the same thing?

oh yes. No I thought they had also written a similar to this one so I was wondering where :)

Originally posted by: Suchi-Virmanian

oh yes. No I thought they had also written a similar to this one so I was wondering where :)

but yeah lol they are great at those scenes ROFl. I am bit more shareef

JK 😆