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Posted: 13 years ago
I just read the whole story at one go and I have to say, this FF by far is my favorite one of AnSh!!!! I hope you have the next part written and updated for us ASAP!! In fact this FF is SO GOODDD that I'm actually wishing that this was the real story taking place in the show right now!!! HATS OFF TO YOU MY FRIEND!! :D
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Scene 26

Anandi became silent at the sudden outburst of laughter. She was thinking about what she had said. It became a bit confusing to her. She then took another bite of the toast in front of her and looked at shiv, waiting for his response.

The laughter had subdued mainly because of Hansa's flashing eyes.

'Anandi ji , mujhe abhi call aayi thi , Chief engineer ki. Unhonay kaha hai ki koi personal reasons ki wajay sey unhay out of town jana padega. Isiliye voh humari final meeting Monday tak postpone karengay' said Shiv

Anandi looked troubled.

'Lekin aaj tho shukrwar hai. Iska matlab teen aur din?' she asked worried

'Ithnay din main ghar sey door.. aur abh 3 aur din?' she mumbled to herself

Shiv understood her worry. He knew that, she did not wish to stay at his house especially after yesterday's fiasco. Now that the meeting has been postponed, it would just increase her restlessness.

'Anandiji agar aap kahain tho main aapko aaj Jetsar chod detha hun. Phir Monday subah pick kernay aa jaunga' He said

Everyone glanced at shiv as if he had gone mad!

Anandi looked at Shiv and then looked at Hansa. She could see the concern on her face.

'Nahi collector sahab. Main Monday tak yahin rukungi' she said

'Are you sure? mujhe koi problem nahi hai' asked shiv

Anandi just nodded her head in a negative and continued to eat.

'are VAH! kya baat hai. Shiv yaar pata nahi thum wapis kab aaogay. Well ho saktha hai ki hum wahan aa jaye' said Rithul winking at Naina , who let out a giggle

Anandi who was listening adjusted her pallu a bit.

'Lekin tab tak, koi pata nahi ki hum sab phir kab is tarah ikhatte rahengay. SO'. I propose ki ye weekend ek zor dar weekend ho' said Rithul

'Kya matlab ?' asked ikshu

'acha batata hun. Lekin sabh log living room may chalo' said Rithul pulling Ikshu who inturn grabbed Ishika's hand

'OUUUCH' yelled Ishika as she went behind them

'OK humaray paas puraay 3 din hai masti kernay ke liye. chalo kahin hillstation chalthay hain, vacation ho jayegi' said Rihul who was now sitting on the living room sofa with Ikshu and Ishika.

'Outdoors? hmmm mujhe koi interest nahi hai' said ishika

'thumsey kisi nay pucha kya?' retorted Ikshu

'bhabi aap batayiye' said Ikshu

'Agra chalay?' she suggested

'Agra teek hain' agreed shiv slowly

'Han han thumhay tho aaj kal agra bohot pasand aa raha hoga' said Rithul snorting

Shiv looked at him angrily

'Teekh aap log jayiye, main yahin rahunga' he responded

'are bhai naraz math hona. Acha Anandi ji aapka kya khayal hai kahan jana chahiye' asked Rithul

Anandi looked at him surprised

'main?' she asked wondering if she heard her name right

'ji app! abh aap bhi is ghar ki member hain, I mean ithnay din aap rahin humaray saath. Mehmanon kay status sey promotion milegi na' said Rithul covering up

Shiv looked at Anandi worried, expecting another outburst but was pleasantly surprised at seeing her smile

'yahan Rajasthan main hi kafi achi jagah hay ghumnay ke liye' Suggested Anandi

'Han! ye tho hai, Jaipur bhi kithni khoobsurat jagah hai.' agreed Naina

'aur jetsar bhi, kiyun chotay bhaiyyah' whispered ikshu

'Jyada zuban chalanay ki zaroorat nahi hai' replied Shiv angrily

Anandi was looking at them and enjoying their conversation despite yesterday's events. She felt comfortable.

'teekh hai, Anandi ji ke kehnay per hum sabh rajasthan ki sair karengay' said Rithul excitedly

'Lekin hum nahi aa payengay' said Hansa

'Han, main tho bilkul bhi nahi' said shamita

'Kiyun!' yelled Ishika

'Neel ki tabiyat kharab hai aur aapkay papa bhi tho nahi jaa sakthay' added Hansa

'aww.. ye kya baat hui' whined ishika

'Chalo koi baat nahi, Naina thum na jaker tayyariyan kerni shuru ker do aur Anandi ji ki bhi madad ker dena' said Rithul

'Main yahin rahungi' said Anandi

'Kiyun?; asked Shiv before anyone could ask

Anandi turned slightly pink at Shiv's asking. She did not respond to him.

'han Anandi kyun nahi. Abh mujhe kuch nahi sunna. thum chal rahi ho! bas' Said Naina authoritatively

'Madam ji ka order aa gaya hai. abh tho man-nna padega' teased Rithul

'Waise Anandi, thum kabhi ghoomi ho Rajasthan?' asked Naina

'Nahi, bas Jaipur aur abh udaypur' said Anandi

'hmm.. udaypur kaisa laga thumhay' asked Naina then looking at Shiv who had chosen that exact moment to stare at the sofa corner.

'Yahan kuch dekha nahi. Jithna dekha acha laga' said Anandi

'Tho teek hain, hum na Udaypur sey shuru kerthay hain. Anandi ko yahan kay saray sites dikhayengay' said Naina

'amm Main sana ko invite ker lun? asked Ikshu

'ooo'' said Ishika

'Ouch!' Ikshu had just hit her on the head

'Kon!? Sana Mehra? asked Shamita

'Han voh meri college ki friend. Mom aapko milaya bhi tha' he said

'Han han Kiyun nahi' said Naina winking at Rithul

'Han bhai, kiyun nahi. Waise yaar voh sana bhi na kamal ki ladki hai' said Rithul

'Hai na' said Ikshu excitedly

'hai na' dekho kaise lal tapak rahe hain iskay' he teased

Ikshu realized that his brother was just pulling his leg.

'Ye sana kon hai' asked Shiv concerned

'Bhaiyyah , ye Ikshu ki class mate hai. waise achi hai lekin thodi akdu hai' said Ishika

'Aye, thu hogi akdu ok' he retorted

'Aaj kal kay bachay bhi na' said Hansa shaking her head and indicating shamita to follow her.

'waise pata hai bhai, is valentines day per Ikshu nay usko sabkay samnay ek rose diya' said Ishika and Ikshu jumped towards her trying to cover her mouth

Rithul immediately held his hand and asked Ishika to continue

'lekin Sana nay accept nahi kiya. Puray 3 din tak muh latka ker phir rahe thay ye' said ishika, cherishing the moment

'oh ho.. bechara' said Rithul with fake concern.

Anandi was looking at them and was smiling. She had never seen a family that was this open and frank towards each other. What had surprised her even more was the elder's reaction towards their children's actions.

'Yaar next time na mujhsey tips lena ki Propose kis tarah kerthay hain' said Rithul smugly

' Han Han 'yaad hai mujhe' said Naina

'Are bhabi, ithna tho pata hai ki Rithul bhaiyyah nay propose kiya tha lekin aapnay kabhi bataya nahi ki kaise.'asked Ishika

'Main kay kerthi, jab bhi koshish ki batanay ki aapkay bhaiyyah nay rokh diya' said Naina

'Naina nahi..' warned Rithul

'Kiyun nahi bhai, abh todi dair pehlay thak tho aapko bada maza aa raha tha humari taang khinchnay main. Abh kya hua?' asked Shiv surprising everyone

'Vah! Shiv ji kay tho aaj kal tevar hi badal gaye hain' retorted Rithul back

Shiv immediately looked at Anandi who was avoiding his gaze

'Main aur meri kuch friends bus stand per khaday thay, College janay ke liye. Acha tho ye sahab aaye aur seedha sabkay saamnay meray haath main ek File thama di' said naina

'FILE?' asked Ikshu and Ishika together

Anandi looked confused at her.

'Ji file. aur kaha ki aap is file ko ghar jaker kholiye. Maine bhi socha ki pata nahi koi khaas file hogi lekin jab ghar jaker dekha tho uskay andhar inki bio data thi, photo kay saath.' Laughed Naina

'Usper unhona kaha ki, main aapsey shadi kerna chahtha thun aur ye sabh meri details hain. Yahan tak ghar ki ek VCD bhi rakh di' Said Naina

Rithul was hiding his face under his palm

'Bade bhaiyyah aap shadi ka proposal le ker gaye thay ya koi interview denay? asked Ikshu Laughing

'are Naina, kya ker rahi ho. Meri izzat ka tho janaza nikal raha hai yahan per' Said Rithul

'Waise bhi ladkiyon kay samnay apnay pyar ka izhar kerna ithna asaan tho nahi hai. Ek tho tension uper say thappad ya jhoothay khanay ka khatra' said Rithul

'sabh humaray shiv ki tarah BOLD tho nahi ho sakthay na' said Rithul patting shiv on his back making him cough

Anandi went red as a tomato and she asked Naina to excuse her so that she could go to her room

'Are Anandi rukho. Please mind math kerna. Inko na bas har kisi ki taang khinchnay ki adat hai aur khas kar kay shiv bhaiyyah ka' said Naina pulling Anandi down

'Sorry' said Rithul holding his ears towards shiv, who was flashing his eyes with anger.

'acha tho, back to topic ki KAB nikalna hai aur kahan jana hai' asked Rithul generally

'Acha pehlay Anandi ji ko hum City palace leker jayengay. Bohot hi khobsurat palace hai aur phir Kumbhalgarh' said Rithul

'han Kumbhalgarh ki tho baath hi kuch aur hai. Aisa lagtha hai ki sadiyon peechay aa gaye hain hum.

'Han aur sabsey best mansapurna ropeway' suggested Ikshu

'han han ye best hai. Yaad hai hum log sky ride per gaye thay. Wakay Anandi, specially jab sham ko suraj dhaltha hai, '.' said Naina reminiscing the beautiful view

'Ok tho aap log jao aur tayyar ho jao. Main raman singh ko kehtha hun ki gadi tayyar rakhe' said Rithul to Naina

'Waise do gadiyah kafi hai na?' asked Rithul turning to Shiv

'main tho apnay jeep main jaunga' said Shiv

'teekh hai, aur Dolly?' asked Rithul

'Voh tho school gayi hai. meray khayal main usay ghar per ho chodthay hain' suggested naina

'kahin bura na maan jaye' said Shiv

'Don't worry. Abhi thoday din pehlay fun land gayi thi. phir le jayengay' said Naina

'Ok chalo Anandi' she said dragging Anandi with her

As soon as Anandi was out of site, shiv turned to Rithul

'Bhai,yaar Anandi ji kay saamnay aisa kiyun ker rahe ho aap?' Said Shiv angrily

'Voh bura maan jayengi. Pehlay sey hi mamla complicated hai aap please usko aur complicate math kijiye' he continued frustrated

'Shiv, dekho. Anandi sey thum pyar kerthay ho ye saaf zahir hai aur unhonay thumhay reject bhi ker diya hai' said Rithul

Shiv looked away with a sigh

'Main isiliye is baat ko baar baar chedraha hun taki , Anandi ji ko khudh ye baat normal lagni shuru ho jaye' Said Rithul

'Kya matlab?' asked Shiv confused

'matlab ye ki, thumhay abh aggressive hona padega Anandi kay saath'

'wait wait,meri baat puri suno' said Rithul as he saw shiv trying to interrupt

'Anandi thumhay respond kernay sey rahi. Unkay saath jo bhi hua, uski wajay sey unkay liye bohot mushkil hoga ki voh khudh agay badh ker , thumhari proposal ko accept karay. Isiliye, you have to try harder.

Aisa karo ki unko ye baat ajeeb na lagay aur voh thumharay saaath phir sey comfortable feel kerna shuru karay.

Right now, voh jab bhi thumharay paas aa rahi hain voh embarrassed aur uneasy feel ker rahi hain. You have to change that. Aur main bhi yahi chahtha hun. Isiliye main baar baar yahi topic ched raha hun taki unko lagay ki humari family ke liye , ye sabh koi badi baath nahi hai aur no matter what hum unhay accept karengay' said Rithul

Shiv looked at him thoughtfully and then smiled lightly.

'Thanks' he muttered slowly

'No problem bhai sahab. aur yaad rakho thumharay paas 3 din hai. Jithna kareeb aa sakthay ho, aa jana aur ye vacation best mauka hai. So do not let it go' he advised

Shiv smiled at him and shook his head

'abh chalo , thum aur ikshu thum bhi. Lets get ready' said Rithul

The three of them left to their respective rooms

Edited by Suchi-Virmanian - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update.. love shiv family... they are so cute together..
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Posted: 13 years ago
their family is super cute and cool...loved Rithul's advise...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome family drama.

Its like in anyone's house and near to reality. Keep writing suchi. Keeping an eye on my pm's these days just for the update⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesomest one could ever write!!!
Wonderfully lovely!!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Tooo good 👏
Yeh toh awesome hai...kya family hai!!!!
Rithul's advice was the best part ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...

a touch of reality... loved this frankness and cool atmosphere.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!!!
hope to see some progress between them.
thx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Vacation with AnSh... 😊 Awesome as usual.. 😊

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