FF: Dil Kya Kare! Scene 30a&b Pg 61 - Page 6

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Scene 7 Part 2

Anandi woke up early that morning. She had been battling herself with the thought of travelling with Shiv. Dadisa and Gehna were convinced that its for the best and she agreed to some extent that shiv is the one who has been her partner for the entire project and not only that, Dadisa believed that Anandi would be safe with Shiv. Even she could not refute that thought. He had of course saved her twice, not worrying about his life, but, the way he came close to her in the hospital. She could not shake that feeling away.

At first she thought she is disgusted by it and that is why she felt uncomfortable, but she did not feel uncomfortable. She realized it was not disgust that she had felt but something different.

She has been numb for so long that it has become hard for her to distinguish feelings.

With a heavy sigh she started packing.

Seven to eight days without Dadisa, bapusa, tausa, taiji and nandu? How is she going to live without them for such a long time?

The very thought made her sick in the stomach. She wished she did not have to go at all. Suddenly tears started to flow from her eyes. Just as they appeared Dadisa also seem to appear as if from think air.

DS: ke hua chori!

Anandi tried to hide the tears but it was too late. dadisa noticed them and started looking worried.

Kuch nahi dadisa. Main ithnay din aap sabhkay bina akele nahi rahi hun na isiliye man bhar aaya.

Anandi noticed that DS also had tears in her eyes, but there was something else, pain?

Kya hua dadisa? she asked worried

7-8 din ke liye roye thu mari chidakli, jab hamesha ke liye chali jayegi thab ke karegi? said Dadisa in a very low whisper

Anandi: Ji Dadisa? kya kaha aapnay? she asked trying to hear dadisa's rumblings.

Dadisa put her hands caressingly over her cheek and smiled. Thu sahih jagay ja rahi hai. Aur 7-8 din kithna lamba hotha hai? bas yun beeth javengay.

Abh thu rona dhona band ker aur bastha leker neechay aaja. Shiv atha hi hoga. Said Dadisa hurriedly and walked towards the door.

Anandi started putting the remaining pile of clothing into her bag and started to zip it.

She did not notice Dadisa standing at the door, who was looking at her intensely. Then without saying anything she flicked a tear away from her cheek and holding the wall as support she walked away from the room.

Nicely written.

Can we get to see Shiv's room also?

naureen..i have updated already yaar...link section check toh karo...:D