FF: Dil Kya Kare! Scene 30a&b Pg 61

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Ayushi Budhia

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Posted: 13 years ago

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SUchi u r grear my jaan!!! love it!! u m,ade my weekend really interesting! read it earlier but comment karne ka time nahi milaa but u rockk keep writing!

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malika

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Posted: 13 years ago

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lol lol...m so enjoying imagining shiv like that...😆...awesomeee suchi...u write so well...continue asap!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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OK guyz here is my 3rd Scene. I loving thinking about these scenes as much as writing them. So please LIKEEE and POST comments

MUAZZ

Scene 3

Aap meray saath kamre main chaliye..Lal singh told shiv.

Shiv looked at Anandi and before he could stop himself the words came pouring forth

" aap bhi chaliye'

Anandi turned apple red beside herself. She could not understand that a full grown man like Shiv would need someone to go with him for a doctor's visit.

Then she remembered how shiv was afraid of injections.

Then why was she blushing? He is only asking her for help and nothing else. But why did he have to ask in front of lal singh and ABhishek ji?

She did not know what to answer and before she could say something shiv cut in

voh mujhe aapse neher kay project kay baray main kuch puchna tha.

Anandi knew that he was covering up and looking at his face she saw how child-like he was! trying to make excuses and be tough when she knew the real reason behind the invite'

SO SHE THOUGHT!

I want Anandi to be besides me or else that Abhishekh would certainly try to talk more with her. Who wouldn't and here if she is with me, lal singh would not have a chance to speak with her. She would be right in front of my eyes. He thought and smiled to himself

Anandi followed him into the Doctors room. Lal Singh asked him to remove his shirt.

Shiv readily obeyed. As he put his hands on his shirt he glanced at Anandi.

Anandi , was now looking around the office as if memorizing the wall,

Shiv removed his shirt and had his under shirt on. The straps fit perfectly on his sculpted body at the same time revealing his bulging muscles.

Lal Singh took a look at the wound and touched it at various parts asking for any sign of pain. Shiv who was looking at Anandi nodded in a negative.

Laal Singh: Lagtha hai kafi hadh thak teek ho chukka hai, Main bus ek fresh bandage ker detha hun aur ek pain reliever ki ek injection laga detha hun.

Anandi turned around in time to look at Shiv's expressions. She hid her smirk and watched Shiv argue with Lal singh.

Mujhe bas koi tablets de dijiye, Injection ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.

Just then Nurse entered into the room and called Laal singh..

Laal Singh: Shivji main abhi aaya.

He nodded towards Anandi and left the room.

Suddenly the air around the room seemed to rise up in temperature'..

Edited by Suchi-Virmanian - 13 years ago

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Ayushi Budhia

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Posted: 13 years ago

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👍🏼👏⭐️

keep it up mera first comment?

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Suchi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bRUzf7LgjLM&feature=fvwrel[/YOUTUBE]

listen to this song and then read the following as you listen to it

Scene 4:

A breeze suddenly starts flowing from the window nearby making Shiv's hair move in a wavy pattern.

Chaahe tum kuchh na kaho maine sun liya
Ki saathi pyaar ka mujhe chun liya
Chun liya
Maine Sun liya

He looks at Anandi who looks at him lovingly and smiles. Her eyes slowly searched his face for answers that she had been looking. It seemed all her pain had vanished and she was moving towards a feeling that had been unknown to her for a while.

Shiv gets up from the table and moves towards Anandi.

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

The breeze then knocks off the pallu from her face, she looks up at shiv lovingly. Shiv notices a small strand of hair covering her face. He slowly moves it with his finger and places it behind her ears.

Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin

Anandi moves away from him but shiv holds her hand and slowly drags her towards him

Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin

Now he slowly interlocks his fingers with hers and brings them closer to his chest

Ek kar doon aasmaan zameen
Kaho yaaron kya karoon kya nahin

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Shiv then puts his hands around her waist. Anandi slightly feeling the jolt shivers for a moment and then puts her hands on his shoulder. They began to slow dance and go around the room staring at each other with face close to each other so much so that there is nothing but air that could pass between them..

KNOCK < SLAM>. DROPPP

Edited by Suchi-Virmanian - 13 years ago

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malika

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Posted: 13 years ago

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@part 3

Oyeee wot r u doing hun???I am in ansh lala land alreadyyy🤪...now i will b blushing the whole night!! 😆damn m smiling like a mad reading it😳😳...shivu shirtless ufff😍 and gosh i can imagine anandi's look seeing him like that☺️ she wud be completely clean bowled😆

@part4

awesome song...thoda mushkil hai ansh ko itna close imagine karna...my thoughts start getting heated up😆 but still i am lovin it like anything!!😳

Thnxx so much suchi for this anshilicious present this weekend🤗...m thrilled!!plsss update soon...😊

Edited by princessyashika - 13 years ago