Arjun FF: Haunted mansion Ch. 30, p.79;end note p. 80. *Complete*

It's about 8 months I've joind IF and had really a good time with Arjun forum. All the fictions are too awesome and so are the writers. And I've been too afraid to write something here. At last, my ideas are having a shape, so whatever it is, I want to share it here, with you.

I'm always been a thrillertroph. So my fiction would be a thriller (I guess!!).

Well, here's the concept.

some dead bodies are found in a old deserted mansion situated in the hilly outskirts of Mumbai. During investigation... the investigation team also gone through some random attacks and some investigation officers were injured. So, the mansion became famous as a haunted one possessed by some dangerous Ghosts.

Now, it's time to solve ETF the mystery of the haunted mansion, and punish the culprit.

I know it's very common concept, but I'll try to make it interesting (Hope so). This would be a thriller of team ETF consist of mystery, excitement, facts and fun, except romance (I'm not good at writing , specially emotions, so forgive me for that, and also for the spelling and grammatical errors coz I'm not very good at English also). So please, read at your own risk.

If any similar story have been /being posted in IF, or you don't want to read such ones, then plz inform me and I'll not post it here.

Index, CS and Prologue : Scroll down.

My index : Mon Chateau de la Fiction : The Whimsical World

Sounds very interesting, please continue😊

Index:

Chapter 1 : (Installment 1)

Installment 2

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5 : (installment 1)

(installment 2)

(installment 3)

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8 : (installment 1)

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3735521&PID=93743280&#p93743280">(installment 2)

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3735521&PID=93933530&#p93933530">Chapter 9

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3735521&PID=94025926&#p94025926">Chapter 10

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3735521&PID=94226157&#p94226157">Chapter 11

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3735521&PID=94428147&#p94428147">Chapter 12

Chapter 13 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3735521&PID=94545652&#p94545652">(1st installment)

( 2nd installment )

Chapter 14 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3735521&PID=94863704&#p94863704">(Installment 1)

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3735521&TPN=28">( installment 2)

">( installment 3 )

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3735521&PID=95198571&#p95198571">(installment 4)

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3735521&PID=95329584&#p95329584">(installment 5)

Chapter 15 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3735521&PID=95469613&#p95469613">(installment 1)

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3735521&PID=95616402&#p95616402">(installment 2)

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3735521&PID=95748242&#p95748242">Chapter 16

Chapter 17

Chapter 18 : (installment 1)

(installment 2)

Chapter 19 : (Installment 1)

(Installment 2)

Chapter 20

Chapter 21

Chapter 22 : (Installment 1)

(Installment 2)

Chapter 23

Chapter 24 : (Installment 1)

(Installment 2)

Chapter 25 : (Installment 1)

(Installment 2)

Chapter 26

Chapter 27 : 101095952 101097016

Chapter 28

Chapter 29 : (Installment 1)

(Installment 2)

Chapter 30

Character Sketch:

TEAM ETF: (All are same as the show)

Commander: Sameer Daam Singh Rathod

Second-in-Command: Arjun Suryakant Rawte

Investigation Officer: Ayesha Kapoor & Chandrakant Patil ( Ex- commando)

Tech expert : Shreekant Sen

Forensic Expert : Lisa D'cruise

Public and Media Communications officer : Saakshi Anand -an Ex crime journalist.

Sonali Mitra : Ex- colleague & friend of Saakshi

Chikky : A Arcangel Pigeon.

Pinto : A Brazilian Parrot

Other characters will come forward according to the story.

NOTE: The author doesn't owe the characters, names of the places, people, or establishments. Those are used here only for the sake of the fiction.

Chapter 1:

4.30 pm, Afternoon

The Hilly outskirts of Mumbai

Three men were walking around a luxurious old mansion over a small hillock. They were observing the whole area around the house and talking about the condition of the mansion.

Man 1: Location is beautiful, and the exterior of the mansion is good as well. If external arrangement is this ..I wonder the interior would be more fascinating.

Man 2: You are right Mr. Vadera. This heritage mansion of Mehra's is a masterpiece indeed. Although it was built in 18^th century, in early 60's It went through a complete renovation. The Sr. Mehra himself redesigned this and he had increased its beauty about 100 times.

Man 3 : So Mr. Dayal, you want to say, this oldie...

Man 2 (Mr. Dayal) : Yes Mr. Vadera Jr. this oldie actually not like those ancient ones. It includes all the modern facilities...

Vadera Jr. : You are calling the 60's arrangements modern?!

Mr. Dayal : Let me complete, sir! The interior has further went through renovations several times after that...last time it was in 1990.

Mr. Vadera : But it was almost 30 years ago Mr. Dayal.

Mr. Dayal : Right sir... After that this mansion was deserted and it didn't need to renovate. But now this old lady would going to be yours and you can do whatever you want. We just have to finish the paper work next week and she'd be all yours.

Vadera Jr. : Well dad... We've seen it from the outside...can we go inside plz. It's already late and we have to reach home at the evening. We have a party to join, remember? & you are the host.

Mr. Vadera : Yes I remember son... after all it's your engagement. So we shouldn't be late. But it's only 4.30pm so don't worry. We have time.

Vadera Jr. : I don't think so... sunlight is decreasing...

Mr. Dayal : Actually Mr. Vadera Jr. it's natural in hill areas. yahan sunset thora jald hi hota hai.

Vadera Jr. : Call me Jay Mr. Dayal, Mr. Vadera Jr. sounds very odd from you. Besides you are elder than me.

Mr. Dayal : OK... let's move in. It'll be dark soon. And plz take your torches. We don't have power inside.

Mr. Vadera : WHAT??? No power ?but...

Mr. Dayal : Bank has disconnected the power after taking over the mansion... But don't worry... we'll fix it next week.

Jay : Is there something more we don't know? (looking to his dad) Dad.. you should've checked every details about this mansion before buying it... At least let me handle this deal...

Mr. Vadera : I want to give you a surprise for your engagement dear...

Jay : And not so surprisingly your surprise is surprising me !... thanks daddy!!

Mr. Vadera : You wanted something different , remember? And trust me I'm not disappointing you son, after all I'm your DAD, buddy.

Meanwhile they reached to the front door of the mansion. It's a huge, heavy door with crafts and decorations of 17^th century . Jay approaches to the door and hold the knocker.

Jay : God!! This knocker is heavier than my dumbels.

Mr. Dayal : That's good na... you can do your sessions every time you enter the mansion... (Jai raised an eyebrow and Mr. Vadera smirked)... Now plz move aside, let me unlock the door.

Mr. Dayal take out the keys and unlock the heavy padlock on the bolts. But the padlock is heavy enough so he looked towards Jay.

Mr. Dayal : Plz. Mr. Jay I need a hand.

Jay : I've two.

They both removed the lock together and also opened the door together. The door is heavy enough to push by one, besides, it has been locked for a long time.

Jay : (Panting)... When this door was opened last time???

Mr. Dayal : About 3 months before...(wiping the sweats from his forehead)... But don't worry... Before handing over this to you we'll take care of everything.

Mr. Vadera : Ya... But first let's get in... come.

After they entered the mansion... suddenly the door shut with a big noise.

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Should I Proceed ?

very nice

awesome
n ya u may proceed

Awesome start dear
concept is really interseting
do pm me
i too love the thriller concepts
good job

Thanks a lot for your feedback. Here the rest of chapter 1.

Chapter 1: (2nd installment)

Same day, 4.30 pm

ETF had just solved a case, and returning to office.

Rathod was driving the SUV, Arjun was beside him, looking outside. Saakshi was talking to Aisha and Shree and also shooting glances towards Arjun. Chotu was taking a nap in the back seat, his snoring was hiding the whispers of the trio( Sa-Ai-Sh). Nobody's seemed to be affected by Chotu's snoring, or was too busy with themselves.

Suddenly Aisha asked Rathod to stop the SUV.

Aisha : Sir, stop the car plz.

Rathod : What happened, Aisha?

Saakshi : Actually I'm feeling like nausea... so I need to change my seat with Shree.

Arjun : (mutter under his breath)Drama...huh.

Rathod stopped the SUV and Saakshi and Shree exchanged their seats. Aisha passed her a water bottle and Saakshi drink from it. Seeing this, Arjun made faces, Rather glared at him and starts the SUV.

Rathod : what happened to you suddenly, Saakshi? If you are not feeling OK, then let's go to a Doctor.

Saakshi : No..no. .Sameer... I'm fine, just need fresh air... actually feeling little strange in my stomach.

Aisha : Is it paining?

Saakshi : Not actually...it's strange!

Shree : Hey ..I think it's may be food poisoning !

All together : What?! (Saakshi in mind he's leaving me on the lurch! I won't spare you Shree!')

Rather pushed the break very hard and stopped the SUV. Due to this Chotu's short slumber broke and his head hit on the side of the backdoor of SUV.

Chotu : (Waking up in a startle) What happened !!!

Rathod : ( turned to Saakshi and asked in a concerned voice) What did you had in lunch?

Saakshi : Same that you had.

Rathod : But I didn't have my lunch yet... One minute, Saakshi...if you..

Arjun : Not only you, none of us had our lunch yet, and it's around 5,so it's too late for lunch.

Rather : (Sighed) So you are hungry Saakshi... Just say it straight na, Why you're playing this drama yaar? You scared me.

Saakshi (grinning): Sorry Sameer, Actually, I'm not too hungry but Aisha and Shree are starving (both shake their head negatively)...and look at Chotu... He has just fainted!

Chotu : No, no... I was sleeping, but yes I'm Starving also. (all except Arjun smiled at that)

Rathod : (smiling)You're impossible Saakshi (and started the SUV).

Arjun : (In a low voice to Rathod) I told you , she's a great dramebaaz. Look, she has just wasted so much time for this trivial matter. Drama queen kahiki!!

Rathod : You're right Rawte, but (turned the SUV to another direction)...you know..

Arjun : What are you doing? This is not the way to the office!

Rathod : I know, but I'm also starving and my body is defying my orders Rawte, I'm helpless!!

Now, Arjun looked at Rathod in disbelieve, shook his head, sighed and turned to look outside.

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Plz tell me how it was.

Nice but different concept dear Plz update it :)
Sakhshi is a real Dramma queen ... But she does care about her friend ... Poor Arjun ... Kya face bana raha tha and Kya Dialouges hain uske miss Chirpy Devi ke liye ... And Rathod is also awesome and funny in this story :)... Thanks Plz update next part soon.

that was cute
dramebazz team
Arjun must be upset...lol
continue soon