Arjun FF: Haunted mansion Ch. 30, p.79;end note p. 80. *Complete* - Page 48

Posted: 10 years ago
intresting update 😊
dis story seems more intrestng vd every update 😊
ye kya ETF ko mummy bnakr ltka dia un smugglers ne...sb phas gye aB kya hoga 😲
bt ye bhI ETF h...Expert in Thodna Fhodna πŸ˜‰
kuch na kuch to rasta nikal hi kenge πŸ˜ƒ
updTe soon πŸ‘
Posted: 10 years ago
All are trapped now
hope shree aur chotu kuch kare
thanks for pm
continue soon
Posted: 10 years ago

nice one

all r trapeed

poor arjun itni mehnat ki sab bekar ho gayi 

loved it

thanx for the pm

Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update dear...
Interesting ...

Loved the convo between bhaisa and them...

Anyways...eager to know how they will manage to escape from there...

Cont. soon...
Posted: 10 years ago
omg... Ab kya hone waala hai...
amazing update dear
Continue soon
Posted: 10 years ago
what is this??u have trapped all of them without any chance of an exit???ab kiya hoga??

i know wahi hoga jo manzure atisha hoga..πŸ˜†

i loved this update but who the hell was the old lady??nd that sympathy lady??would she help??

continue soon...i was wondering how you gonna do this...😳😳
Posted: 10 years ago
wow..super update..so much mystery its interesting...your imagination is really super..eagerly waiting for the next part...
Posted: 10 years ago
great update.
story is moving very well.
loved it.
thankx for pm cont soon..
Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 26 :

Shree and Sonali were sitting in the van monitoring others movement, and Shree was recording the metal dictator data for the entrance of that tunnel. When Aisha chased that shadow and reached to the mirror fitted door. Suddenly they lost her.

Sonali : Shree? Aisha's camera has gone off!

Shree : Yeh ladki vi!! Tunnel main ghus gayee!! Ruko Rathod sir...

But the ACPs were already in the projection room.

Shree : Now, they'll grab that ghost!

Sonali : Hope so!

And then suddenly all connection went dead.

Shree : Yeh kya hua? Sir ne communicator nikal dia!!

Sonali : No, not them. They must be attacked.

Shree : but nobody went inside? Chotu?

Chotu : Haan, shree?

Shree : Koi andar gaya kya?

Chotu : No.

Shree the contacted the team near Swamis resident and asked them the same question. They answered the same.

Shree : Chotu, uss garden ke raaste pe Nazar rakhna, aur main mansion ke andar jaa raha hoon.

He handled the console to another officer, hopped down from the van and gestured some officers to com with him. Sonali followed him.

Chotu : Shree? Tu?

Shree : Haan, they must've attacked and need help. I'm going in to find them and you, stay connected. If anything happens immediately send force, inside and you'll go and arrest each person in Swami's. OK.

Chotu : Ruk, main vi chalungi..

Shree : No, tu bahar ruk. Sab ko ek saath fasne ki zaroorat nahi hain.

Chotu : Ok.

Shree ran to the mansion door and gestured the officers to break the door. Then he rushed to the window through others entered.

He lit his UV torch and started searching for the traces. He directly went to the projection room from where Arjun and Rathod were disappeared. He entered the room and started search the place for his senior's traces when he heard footsteps. He turned and saw Sonali also looking around the room.

Shree : Sonali? What are you doing here?

Sonali : (didn't stop her work)Sameer was asked me to stick to you, remember?

Shree : But...

Sonali : (picking up a torch) ETF ka hain, may be Arjun's.

Shree : (Took it and looked closely) Haan..but yahan gira...matlab yahan se un dono ko uthaya gaya hain.(he kept it)

Sonali : But they didn't left any sign here...toh... bahar chalo, maybe we can find something in the corridor...

Shree looked at her for a brief moment and agreed. However, he noticed footprints on the dust-covered floor.

Shree : Sonali, look.

Sonali came forward and looked at those prints.

Sonali : Yeh Arjun aur Sameer ki hain.

Shree : Tumko kaise pata?

Sonali : They are coming from the door and no further prints..Actually fresh prints after this place...look they are finished near the piano...and then this fresh places, these are signs of struggling...and then these two new sets of footprints...coming from that door and they went to prop room...means..

Shree : thy carried them on their shoulder.

Sonali : Right.

They rushed to the prop room and found that closet, but couldn't find the way to open that door.

Shree : Torr dun..

Sonali : Sasha ne jo raaste se gaye hain woh lete hain..woh closed nahi hoga.

Shree : Tumko kaise pata?

Sonali: I know her, Shree. If nobody entered that place after her, that door should be open, come.

They rushed to that mirror through which Saakshi entered. And yes , Sonali was right. Saakshi's pen was preventing that door from closing. They pushed that door open and entered in the corridor.

Shree : Now?

Sonali : She must've left traces, give me your UV light.

Shree passed her the UV torch and she lit it thy saw arrows were made on the wall after few distances.

Sonali : (smiled) I knew it! Meri sayani billi trace chorke gayee. Come, Shree.

Shree started following her... he became curious.

Shree : Sonali, how did you know Saakshi left that track and these marks...those are drawn in a special manner...kya tum dono scouting karti thi.

Sonali : Yes, in college...& don't forget we were partners..she always left traces behind. Come..this way...

They reached to a staircase; Shree climbed up one or two steps and then came back

Shree : No...I think they went downstairs...

Sonali : Yes..She marked it...come.

They climbed down the stairs and then reached another corridor where they found a key chain...

Shree : Arjun Sir's Key chain!! He never left it this manner...s Ky chain!! He never left it this manner...r r two steps and then cam back...

Sonali : They are captured, remember. We don't have much time Shree, come.

They reached to the basement hall, Yatin's meeting room.

Sonali : Wow...just like a horror film's set...

Shree : Haan but we have to find our way...

Sonali was looking around the room while Shree was searching for another door ...both are using their UV light...Suddenly Sonali peeped under the big round table and called Shree.

Shree : What, found any way?

Sonali : No, found a jammer...Shree isko deactivate karo nahi to Chotu se contact nahi karr payenge.

Shree had a look on that magnetic signal jammer and within two minutes, he deactivated it. Then he contacted Chotu and asked him to activate all the standby teams except Swamis resident. Chotu immediately ordered all the team to arrest all the suspects in Docs, Mermaid's crew's and Mohali's shop. The raid team also went at Mohali's place.

Sonali found a piece of white cloth stuck at a wooden paneling of a big mural. She called Shree to see it.

Shree : It's a door, Sonali...but how we open it?

Sonali : Break it...

Shree : Paagal ho? Sirf mural hota toh thik hain..iski peche jo deewar hain who kam se kam 5" thick hain...hum dono milke vi toreng toh vi puri raat nikal jayega...

Sonali : Agar yeh door hain toh itna thick nahi hoga..tum toro...

They picked up two spears from two armor suits and started working. The wooden mural was very old and it became weak enough so it didn't took too long, after 10 minutes they managed to make a big hole enough for enter a man.

 They moved through the corridor, looking for traces of Saakshi or others, on their way they checked almost all the rooms, in front of a door Sonali found Saakshi's broken bangle when Shree found a communicator lying on other end of the corridor.

Sonali : Shree , saakshi was here...somebody attacked her.

Shree : I think so (Showed the communicator and kept into his pocket)

They climbed down the staircase and found three doors at the end of it.

Sonali : Now?

Shree : Right wala se start karte hain...come.

They proceeded through the right hand side door. It was again another corridor. Sonali was disheartened.

Sonali : Yaar, yeh corridors khatam nehi hota!! Aab kya?

Shree : Ek kaam karte hain...let's switch off our torches...Shayed andhere main aawaz sunke kuch pata chale.

Sonali agreed and both switched off their torches. Darkness enveloped them and suddenly they heard some sound and saw a light at the end of the corridor. Sonali nudged Shree to follow that light. But suddenly Sonali stumbled and fell down.

Shree : Sonali, you ok?!

He switched on his torch. That alerted the person they were following and it disappeared quickly. Shree ran after it and Sonali followed him. But their way was blocked by a stone wall.

Shree : Another door!!

Sonali : Not again!!

Shree hit it with his torch and heard the sound.

Shree : Sonali, it's wood, painted. Come let's try to break it.

Sonali : Are you mad...itni bari door akele kaise toroge? Tum Chotu nahi ho!!

Shree : Let's try...

He gestured Sonali to step back and he started pushing it with his shoulder. Sonali was looking at his work and suddenly tapped him to step back.

Sonali : Hatho...let me try.

Shree : Tum kaise?

Sonali : Tum thora aaram karo, main tri karti hoon.

Shree stepped back and keenly looking at Sonali's antics. She observed the door keenly, took two step backward and then suddenly kicked the door. After her third kick, her leg pushed inside the door, breaking a part of it.

Shree got her plan and he helped her to break the door. After a while, they reached at the opposite part of the corridor.

Shree : Tune bataya nahi tujhe taikoando aati hain?

Sonali : Zaroorat nahi pari na...aur tumne pucha nahi...come that man went this way...

 Suddenly something flew to them and hit Shree. It startled him and he dropped his torch. It switched off.

Sonali also felt something hit her cheeks, and flew over her head. She sat down beside Shree and suddenly she found may similar objects were flying over their head. She moved her torch which made them mad at her..all started flew to her. One sat on Shree's head and he screamed.

Shree : Switch off your torch, Sonali...this pigeons are attracted to light.

Sonali : shree, we can't move forward, come let's make a retreat.

They took their way back to the staircase and reached at the closed doors.

Shree : Now what?

Sonali : Wahan se aage jaana mushkil hain...aur itna saara pigeons...I don't think they are there. Aur itna lamba corridor, usne kuch to trace chora hota na?

Shree : Maybe they didn't got chances... Toh aab baaki do check karna parega?

Sonali : Haan...Jaldhi karo...aab middlewala dekhte hain...chalo.

They entered the second corridor. It was short and had two doors at the end.

Shree : Aab?

Sonali : pata nahi...SASHA!! TU KAHAN HAIN YAAR!!

Shree : (put a hand on her mouth) kya karr rahi ho?? Hum pakre gaye toh!!

But they heard a reply from behind one of those doors. And Shree never mistakes to recognize his seniors' voices. He took Sonali's torch and looked at the door, it was locked by a padlock, so he shot it to unlocked the door.

They hurriedly freed the captives.

Aisha was rubbing her red tie marks, so did others.

Saakshi : Uff, saalon ne itni kaaske baandha tha...blood circulation band ho gayee...

Arjun : We better hurry...those people..

Shree : I've told Chotu to activate our team out there...the gang is already into our custody...

Rathod : aab sabko kaho wahi wait kare...jo log yahan se nikle hain un sabko pakarna vi to hain...

Shree immediately instructed Chotu into microphone.

Aisha : Shree, yahan se kaise baat kia? Basement main to signals nahi aati...

Shree : thi...I switched off the jammer.

He narrated the whole story...& about Soanli's help. Saakshi stared at her.

Rathod : Saakshi...iski wajay se humari jaan bachi hain...

Saakshi : Hmm...(barked at her)lekin itna time kyun lagaaya? thora aur pehle nahi aa sakti thi tu?

Sonali : Kyun, mujhe toh aana hi nahi chahiye tha na?

Arjun : Bass karo...lets go and nab them come...

They all rushed to the corridor.

Arjun : Shree, corridors ki old map dekho, yeh kahan jaata hain?

Shree brought out his tab and opened the map.

Shree : Sir, yeh right wala passage mansion ki baharr jata hai...yahan highway ki taraf ...below this hillock...centerwala toh uss room tak hi khatam ho jata hain... aur yeh leftwala..yeh bandh hain... renovation ke waqt Ravindra Mehra isko bandh karr dia tha...

Saakshi : yeh jaata kahan thi?

Shree : Iss cottage tak...(Saakshi was about to ask something) Yatin ne isko open nahi kia...last plan main vi yeh bandh hi tha..

Rathod : Now team, split in three...Rawte, Saakshi go left and check that; Shree, Sonali, go upstairs and join Chotu, Shree take some men and go to Swami's backdoor. & Sonali, jaake van main baitho. Aisha, let's check the right passage.

Shree : Sir that passage is full of pigeons...we entered there..

Rathod : We'll handle it...now spit up.

Shree : Sir, communicators aur torch toh le jaiyee...

He gave them torches & communicators and move to staircase.

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Arjun and Saakshi entered the dark left passage. It was not like other passages..it looks more natural while other passages looked man -made.

Saakshi : I think it's a natural cave...but..

Arjun : But?

Saakshi : I don't think other end is closed.

Arjun : Let's see..

They reached at the end, where the tunnel ends.

Arjun : It's closed.(he checked the wall) It's cement wall..& closed. Come lets join Rathod.

He found Saakshi in deep thoughts. He tugged her hand and drew her with him. Arjun contacted Sameer and asked him to wait for them.

They entered the passage and started approaching forward, but those flying pigeons made their way difficult. Rathod suggest them to switch off the torches and crawl, else those pigeons never let them reach to the other end. They followed Rathods instruction and started moving forward, they lit their torches for minimum time only to see the way and then again switch them off. Thos pigeons were scuffling, flying over their head; those birds became frightened, as they couldn't found a place to settle or make off this dark alley. They were diving toward the light, that's why they had to switch of the torches. Finally, they reached to the wooden door which was broke open by Shree & Sonali. They approached further and found Rathod and Aisha sitting on the ground leaning against another closed door.

Arjun : What happened?

Rathod : Iss door ka lock nahi hain...aur iski peeche bohot saare pigeons hain...Yeh yatin ka pigeon house hain.

Saakshi : But that's in the other direction...& we didn't crawl that much...

 Arjun : Right, but iss door ke piche vi birdhouse ho sakta hain...nahi toh...

Rathod : Haan, but yahan aas pass koi aur birdhouse...we didn't saw any...

Aisha : & NC's pigeon house is built on the ground...and I bet it has a basement...&If it had, why NC bother to keep those birds there?

Arjun : May be it's not the basement at all...come let's go in.

Rathod : but the birds...

Arjun : Itna risk toh le hi sakte hain..let's go.

They opened the door and entered the room. All switched on their torches and gaping at the room, surprised.

Rathod : It's an empty room!! That means...

Arjun : They releases those birds intentionally. But yeh room..

Saakshi : Basement nahi hain...

she waved her torch to the small door. The room was dirty, but looks someone just cleaned it properly.

Aisha : Yahan kuch nahi milega...they cleaned it well...Sir, now what?

Rathod : Bahar nikalte hain...phir team ka wait karenge..Rawte, Shree se contact karo aur pucho iss waqt hum kahan hain...Aur chotu ko kaho humko bahar join kare...

Arjun instructed Chotu to take position outside that place. And they moved to the Door.

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How was it? 

Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update...
 
Phew...finally all r safe...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Smart Sakshi...
Now what next???
 
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 10 years ago

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