Arjun FF: Haunted mansion Ch. 30, p.79;end note p. 80. *Complete* - Page 28

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Chapter 18 (installment 2) :

In conference room, 6.00pm

Sonali was chatting with liza, while the ETF team rushed in and boys settled into their chair. Aisha made coffee and served to all and Saakshi placed Arjun's tea in front of him before moving to her place.

Arjun : So , Mr. Film critic confirmed our doubt on that coven. (he sipped his tea)

Saakshi : 33.(and she bit her tongue)

Arjun : What?

Saakshi : Nothing. I think that Sharma is hiding something.

Arjun : May be, but he cleared many things also.

Rathod : Haan, he just repeated everything we knew. Shree?

Shree : NC's finantials and phone records are ready, he uses another cellphone which is registered on Some Y. Mehra's name, he's resident in Hydrabad. I informed Hydrabad police to look into it. And his sons use that address also. Here, their details.(he passed some files).

Arjun : Interesting.

Shree : there's more sir. NC's men, I ran a little investigation on them and I found this man Vipul has a police record for creation chaos in public places.

Sonali : He looks scary.

Shree : Haan, and another thing NC talks a lot with some Apte, he's also in touch with Vipul. And he also went for a let night visit in docs. Our men followed him and saw him to go in a small lodge.

Rathod : He met someone there. Chotu, Find who it was. & keep an eye on docks.

Chotu :  sir, that lodge is generally shelters sailors. I'll find him soon.

Arjun : Shree, you went there today. What have you found?

Shree : I tried to search the entire area, but NC's assistant Vipul caught me. The backdoor is remote controlled and password protected. I found the control console inside a bush. And those two aerials, they're multipurpose, connected with a satellite. Here I ran a sarch program in our database, this aerials are used for GPS tracks, mobile connection, radio & satellite communication...in short those are of an advanced control room.

Rathod : Aab yeh kya chakkar hain?

Arjun : We'll find it. Shree, NC's travel details...

Shree : It's little complicated sir, Mr. & Mrs. Swami always plan for a three month vacation, but we found their destination are  Benguluru and Hydrabad. They first go Benguluru to meet their younger son, stay there for one or two week; then Hydrabad, but they only stay there for three days. Then they just disappear.

Rathod : What?

Shree : Haan sir, there's no further travel details.

Rathod : What do you mean no details? Dig deeper.

Shree : Ok, sir.

Saakshi and Sonali was busy with two junior Swami's files. They were discussing something in low voice.

Arjun : Tum log kya karr rahi ho? It's not your kitty party. Concentrate.

Saakshi : Haan Arjun, we know. These two Mehra's are NC's son, & they aree in touch with their parents.

Arjun : We know that already.

Sonali : Toh travel detail leke parshan kyun ho rahe ho? They meet both of their sons in a year, and also enjoy their private vacation also.Didn't you noticed those photoframes in their living room?

Rathod : Haan, paar ane jane ka information toh hoga na, who to nahi mil raha na?

Arjun : But ek cheez match nahi ho raha hain. Why they changed their children's surname?

Saakshi : Dono ka pata nahi, par Yash wala mystery main solve kar sakti hoon.

Arjun : Kaise?

Saakshi : Yash is not NC's son, he's Yatin's.

Arjun : Don't be ridiculous Saakshi. It's impossible. Yatin didn't married Maya.

Saakshi : Do you really think marriage is mandatory to have a baby? Yash is not NC's son. He can't be.

Arjun : (frowned) Justify?

Saakshi : Ok, (She pulled Shree's laptop and opened some files,then connet it to projector)Look at Maya's marriage date, and Yash's date of birth. There's only a Difference of 5 month and 12 days. Aaj tak koi insaan ka bachcha 5month & 12 days main paida hua hain? tumne suna hain? Liza?

Liza : Haan, it's impossible, around this time, baby premature hota hain, iss waqt sirf abortion ya miscarriage ho sakta hain, agar delivery hua vi toh baby couldn't survive ...

Saakshi : But Maya ne khud kaha ki uski normal delivery thi, hain na Sonali.

Sonali : Yep.

Liza : This is impossible...

Saakshi : It's only possible when Maya was pregnant at least 3 months before their marriage. And in that time she was with Yatin, not NC.

Aisha : But she knew NC, maybe she was attracted to NC, & fell for him. Yatin came to know and committed suicide.

Arjun : No, it can't be. Agar aisa hota toh uski suicide note main kuch aur hota...Aur agar Yeh bachcha NC ka hota toh apni bte ko who apna naam deta, kisi aur ka nahi. But dono bte ka ek hi surname...kuch toh choot raha hain... (he stood up, moved to the counter, picked the tea flask, pour some tea in his small glass and sit back in his place)

Saakshi : 34.

Arjun : What?

Saakshi : (looking at laptop screen) Yatin ka suicide note, he wrote , I'll never abandon you, Maya, not in my dream. I'm going away for some times, and I'll come back to you, again, in another form, in another mug & then we'll be always together." He pointed to his son, & he knew about it.

Arjun : I know, but what 34?

Saakshi  just ran away from the room.

Arjun gaped at her quick retreat, confused. But Sonali's voice brought him back.

Sonali : Another thing Arjun, May be NC knows we checked his resident from outside. And perhaps he figured out about youe white clothed officers.

Arjun : How?

Shree : Sir, that vipul was talking about some unknown people around that area...

Sonali : And he ckecked out Shree's shoes very closely. And you officer showed him.

Rathod : Tum gadha ho Shree? Mujhe to laagta tha sirf chotu bewkoof hain, aab tum vi?

Arjun : Sangat ka asar hain Rathod. Let bygones be bygones. Shree, keep your eye on NC and his friend. I want every detail about them, they all are hiding something, We need to find what is it.

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Asapom thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
what is sakshi counting???
so yash is yatin's baby 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Was sakshi counting the tea cups arjun had in a day?
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Story is moving
Bt yet unable to get whr it is leading
Waiting for nxt
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting update dear...

So NC & Maya were hiding so many things...
And that Y Mehra from Hyderabad...???
I think as per college records Yogesh is from hyderabad...right..??
Or is that Yatin himself...?????
And Yash is Yatin's son...but Yogesh...??
As the investigation proceeds, NC and Maya are getting more and more trapped...nice..

What is this 33 &34..???
Related with Arjun's tea..?? On that day also she was counting some 28 with that tea serving boy..

Cont. soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey nyc update miss whole team in show n yeh haunted mansion mistery kab solve hoge