Arjun FF: Haunted mansion Ch. 30, p.79;end note p. 80. *Complete* - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: invisible2018

how did they conclude yatin might be alive??? was thr any clue in any earlier update which i couldnt guess?😕😕

Now there's only one solution of this problem, start reading carefully from the starting.😉
but nice update..choto nd food jodi salamat rahe...😉😛
its getting very intersting plz update soon...
thanks for the pm...



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607



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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 13(2nd installment) :

All jumped at their places.

All : What???

Arjun : Are you sure Shree?

Shree : May be I'm wrong sir... but evidences are not. I've studied NC's bank statement. There's several big tranjactions have been made. NC transfers a huge amount of money to Yatin's account...that too last month.

Arjun : Account hain kahan yeh?

Shree : One in Hydrabad and another in NY.

Saakshi : NC's elder son also lives in NY, Hain na Shree?

Shree : Haan... but NC never sends money to his account. He never sends any money to his sons. In fact, they do not have accounts.

Arjun : That's impossible !! There should be an account... Chote ka na sahi par bade ka to hona hi chahiye... Bina account ke bete ko US veja kaise? Shree dig deeper about these sons... There's something fishy.

Shree : Sir, there's another thing... NC & Maya ki monthly income & expenditure match nahi karte...kaafi differences hain. Aur NC ki call record main vi garbar hain, kuch unusual texts hain & may be he uses more than one numbers...

Arjun : That means NC have some illegal incomes... Shree, kadi nazar rakho iss NC per... Aur Sonali ka vi extra khayal rakhna hoga, kahin yeh sab chakkar main bechari faans na jaye.

Shree was about to go, Arjun stopped him.

Arjun : Yeh do junior Swami's ke bhi knndali nikal lo, ajeeb baat...bete hai bhi aur nahi bhi...Kuch to choot raha hain.

...

Evening, 5.30 pm, Shree's working station.

Shree was busy with his computers... While that stupid bird (Chikky) was troubling him ...and other four were having fun at his misery.

Shree : Ufff...soohh..soohhh.. .. kyun tang karr rahi hai yaar...kaam to karne de...(he lifted his head and saw four people amusingly enjoying his state)... tum logon ko koi kaam dhandha nahi hain kya? Yahan koi film chal raha hain kya?

Liza : Haan...romantic film chal raha hai...naam..."Gutur..goo.. Main aur Tu".

Shree : It's not funny.

Aisha : Humne kab kahan kii yeh funny hai...it's romantic.

Shree : Dekho yaar... Yeh cheez subha se dimag kharab karke rakha hain... aaj toh main thikse lunch vi nahi kaar payee...aadhe chawal isne kha gayee...keyboard aur monitor ko dirty kia... abhi dekho Arjun sir ko yeh file dena tha, uspe vi...aab phir se naya file laana parega. (Chikky hit shree's glasses)... yeh dekho...tu rukh..

Shree hold Chikky in his hands, emptied the trash basket and put it on table upside down, putting chikky inside. Then he kept some files on it.

Shree : Aab raho yahan.

Chotu : Haila Shree... Yeh kya kia. Payaar ka saaza hawalat !!... aab to kabutar chor koi larki vi tujhe payaar nahi karegi... Tu sidha lock up main jo daal dega!!

Shree : Oh hello... meri cheezain main lock up main rakhu ya ghar pe... tera kya... tu aapni wali pe dhayaan de. Tu to avi tak charge vi nahi laaga paya...arrest karna to bohot dur...

"Kaun kis pe charge laga raha hain?"...Arjun asked from behind.

Aisha : Kuch nahi sir... Bas aise hi...

Arjun : Agar kaam khatam ho gaya ho ...to ghar jao... Report tomorrow morning at 6.30, Sharp.

Aisha : Why, Sir?

Arjun : We're going to Mehra Mansion... to inspect the crime scene.

...

How was it?

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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting track..
Sorry I missed out so many updates... Been busy..

Well, I read all.. and It was fun..

Do continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Itna chota... :(
Bt loved it
Shree n kabutar scene was awesome...
Bechara shree
I hv start imagining him... :p
Thanx for pm
Update soon
Bt is time bara wala haan..
Plzz plzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was such a small update not that i am complaining its just that ki story itne interesting hain ki
lagta hain padthe jao
anyways woh chikki tho bechare shree ke picche hi pad gayi lagta hain lizza ka patta saf
kar ke hi rahegi 😆
thanks for pm pls next part bada chahiye
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another great part dear...

So Yatin is alive...
And NC is under suspicion now...interesting...
Eager to know the advancement of this hint...
They are going to the mansion again...
Hope more things will get sorted out this time...

And the last part was really cute...
Poor Shree...!!!!

Cont. soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really sorry for late...exams chal rahe the...
Read last three updates...they are superb, awesome, fantastic...
Don't even think to stop this FF...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
great turn in the story...NC main suspect now...
they r going to the mansion again??? this time in the morning...

continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
thanx for pm
continue soon

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