Arjun FF: Haunted mansion Ch. 30, p.79;end note p. 80. *Complete* - Page 33

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
still i am in confusions
waiting for the next part to clear off...
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Posted: 11 years ago
its really good...
keep upgrading...

its time to put the culprit behind the bars...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

that was nice and progressive

so yatin is one of nc's supposed son rite ?
sakshi having doubt that nc and yatin same person
every one is hairan and pleased to see sakshi alive 😆
lagta hain sonali pakdi gayi
thanks for pm

well, Yatin?...love ya too..😉
Saakshi's doubt is cleared...
& yah..Angry Arjun se milke zinda aa gayee, she's very lucky.😆
Sonali...may be. 😳
Stay tuned. Thanks for your feed back.😊

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97

very nice update.

loved it.
continue soon and thankx for pm.

Thanks a lot for youe feedback, stay with me.😊

Originally posted by: magati

very nice update

this story is becoming very interesting after each update
Update it really fast before I go mad thinking what is going to happen...
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Thanks dear, & update...😳 try to make it fast, but not feeling well from last few days. Plz, stay with me.😊

Originally posted by: Harsha111

Superb update di... 👏
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Itne saare??? Yeh tareef hain ya laddu banane ka machine??😆😆
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Originally posted by: Payal_156

awesome update.lovely !!
sakshi n team reaction lol..
gud!!
thanks for d pm..
kaunse scraps huh ?
me fit n fine dear..
exams finish so more active now..!

Thanks for those praising words..full of carbohydrates...😆
Scraps...😳...haan samajh gayee, aapki digestion capacity is very high.😃
So, stay with me for having more of those.😊

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

fantastic update...
so sonali found a radio control room...sonali is somewhere involved?? or is it she is framed ??

NC and Yatin are diff...what was there in the box??Pigeons??

but birds need food,they must be kept somewhere alive, and also they must be making some noise how come no one comes to know...

NC and maya,highly suspicious...😛

waiitng for more...continue soon...

thanks for pm

Well, Sonali mystery will be solved soon. have patience.
I have somethin on those Maya lovers...so again patience...😃
& birds, who trying to hide them, they are just transported within the city...just stay tuned.
Thanks for your comment, Rimi.😊...kachei theko.

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome updates...

Haila subah-subah dimag ki puri ksrat karwa di...
Amazing suspense...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...Sorry for late...

Oh Sneha...so long..😊
Welcome back.😃
Kasrat??...It's good for your brain, exam ke baad thora dimag ki bearings ko ulta ghumana zaroori hain.😃
Stay tuned...thanks for comment & congratulation for finishing all the chapters.😊

Thank you, my telegram girl no 1.😊stay with me.

Originally posted by: kunchu

nice update

still i am in confusions
waiting for the next part to clear off...

Thanks, kunchuuu.
Confusion??????😲 but you are the confusion Queen, Right?
Stay with me.😊

Originally posted by: akvmji

its really good...

keep upgrading...

its time to put the culprit behind the bars...

Hmm...hope so. Stay tuned.😊
Thanks for your feedback.😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 22 (installment 1)

Same day, morning 10.00am

Sonali was sitting near the window of Maya's living room and playing with Pinto. That mischievous bird helps her to forget everything. And especially today, she had to prepare herself for bid goodbye to her most loved one.

Maya : You look disturbed today.

Sonali : I'm fine.

Maya : your eyes don't say so.

Sonali remained silent for a long moment, took a deep breath.

Sonali : Today. They will do the last rites of him...In the evening...I have to go there...and...

Maya : I understand, biding goodbye to someone close is very difficult. Mujhe to use dur jaane ke khayal se vi darr lagta hain. But you are a strong girl.

Sonali : No, I'm not. I just pretend so. For those who are with me.

Maya : On day, you'll get over it? Time will heal everything.

Sonali : But some wounds never heal, Maya. They become parts of our lives...or sometimes we do not want them to be healed. Maya, Can I ask you a question?

Maya : Sure?

Sonali : Do you really get over Yatin? Tell me, don't you miss him?

Maya : He is my first love. & first love is unforgettable. Yes, I'm happy with NC, and Yatin is my past. But present is life and past is memories. It's not important how much I love NC, or how much I loved Yatin. Important thing is NC loves me and I have no right to humiliate his love. I respect his feelings. That is all.

Sonali : I liked that philosophy.

NC came there and saw two women talking.

NC : Maya, you are not ready yet? You had better hurry.

Sonali : Are you two going somewhere?

NC : Not us, only Maya. She has an appointment with dentist.

Sonali : Maya? You didn't tell me? Is everything Okay?

Maya : Hmm...just routine checkup. Just stay here with Pinto. I'll be back in two hours.

Sonali : Well...

NC : You can come to Parrot house...yahan akeli bore ho jaogi.

Sonali : Ok.

Both left Sonali in the living room. And Sonali started roaming around the room. She saw the photographs framed on the wall and Mantelpiece. She saw Prakash drove off Maya& Bibha and NC walking into the study. Pinto flew to the study and she followed him.

NC : What are you doing here?

Sonali : Pinto...

NC : Let him be with me, you go to the parrot house, I'll join you after finishing this paperwork.

Sonali :OK.

Sonali approached to the main hall, and something stuck into her mind. This house is empty, & NC is busy in his study. She has a great opportunity to find something about them. She tiptoed to the bedroom and searched that place for clues about Yatin .

She checked every paper she found in bedside table, wardrobe, writing desk and waste paper basket. She pulled the cupboard door & found it locked. She tried with her hair clip, but failed.

Finishing her work there, she moved to other rooms as well. She was dying to look into the study, but NC was still in there. She was about to drop the idea of going into the study, she heard NC talking to someone.

NC : OK, then I'll send Vipul with a packet. And rest we'll discuss hen we meet...Oh, don't worry about that. They are after him, not mine...Ok I'll check them...don't worry. I'll take care of it.

NC cut the call and put that cell phone inside a drawer. Sonali was peeping from the door and was thinking of running from there. But the scene shocked her. She saw NC turning a showpiece on his table and a bookshelf slid away. NC walked into that room, left the door open.

Sonali mentally thanked god for giving her an excellent opportunity of seeing NC's secret, she also laughed inwardly for NC's being forgetfulness about the door. She approached to that door and the door started closing automatically. She literally ran towards the door and put a paperweight between the door lapels.

She peeped in through the exposed place and saw a well equipped room. She took her mobile, clicked some photos, removed the paperweight and made off from there.

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Vijay was feeding some squabs. While Sonali showed up there.

Vijay : Hey, good morning!!

Sonali : Morning...How's the babies?

Vijay : Good. Look Riko's babies are having new feathers.

Sonali : Now they have colors...

Vijay : Sonali, can you keep an eye on those parrots... I've to fill this bucket.

Sonali : Ok.

She sent a quick message to Sonali from her phone and photographs she took. Meanwhile, Vijay came back.

Sonali : Vijay, I have to go. Today I have to reach home early.

Vijay : Ok, are you coming tomorrow?

Sonali : May be.

She bid bye to Vijay and moved to the pigeon house to see NC. She found him talking to Vipul and a big packing box was kept beside them.

NC : Arre, Sonali.Parrot house ghumna khatam ho gayee?

Sonali : Haan..aab pigeon house ka ek chakkar lagake ghar jaungi.

NC : Maya kii aane tak toh ruko.

Sonali : No, It'll be late.

NC : Ok, Vipul come we've to look after those newborns.

They left Sonali behind and also the packing box. Sonali looked at it curiously and then moved her gaze around. She took that opportunity, and opened the box, she saw a portable cage inside with some birds. At the same time she felt a tap on her shoulder. She froze at her place. She just had been caught!!

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4.00 pm, some scrap workshop.

Sonali opened her eyes, and found herself in some hot, dark & dirty place. She tried to get up and touch her paining head, but she found herself tied up. Then she started wriggling to assume the place, it was a small box type place, maybe some trunk...and a strong smell of engine oil confirmed that it is a car. She tried to touch the wall by her fingers. It felt like old, rough metal. She understood, she is inside an old car-trunk and it was kept in some open place, under direct sun. Sunlight made the whole place just like a hot Tandoor.

Sonali tried to shout, but no sound escaped her mouth. The heat inside the trunk and, fright made her throat dried up. She gulped in far and tried to hear outside noise, but everything was as silent as a grave. That means she's all alone here, and nobody's gonna come to help her. & to add her misery, Her hands and feet were tied up in a manner, she could not help herself also. She felt her phone vibrating inside her pocket. She felt helpless. Nobody can know she is here!

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I know it's a short one. But feedback for previous one were less also.Now, leave feedback before leaving this page..otherwise...😭😭😭 I won't write even a word for this FF.😔

Edited by Shamsad1607 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update... 😊
NC nd yatin dono mile hue h...nd yatin must b NC nd maya's so called son.
Aah dat NC ...usne sonali ka kidnap kia aur marne koshish kr rba h...ab ETF use nhi chodnewali
upatre soon dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb
Now look that nc is dng everything
Thanx for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...chotta tha...
NC aur Yatin mile hue hai...😲😲😲
Sonali kidnapped...😲😲😲 😲😲😲
Hope ETF team find her soon...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...Plz don't stop this FF...
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Posted: 11 years ago
take care of your health first
update was awesome as always
For a second I got scared
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm and please don't stop sending pm's
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
lovely

nc n yatin r involved !!
nice twist

sonali kidnap !!?????
thanks for d pm..
tc..
hope d team find her soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG ab sonali kidnapped
Those 2 are really jerka
Thanks for the PM shamshad
COntinue soon
Chotu sa update but good one 😊

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