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Arjun FF: Haunted mansion Ch. 30, p.79;end note p. 80. Complete- Page 59

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ishita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

eh eh..
tch tch tch..
ab bas sakshi,chhotu n shree hi kuch kar sakte hai..
baki to trapped!
well wo projection room...
well capable of scaring everyone!
ab kya hoga!?

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ishita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#582

eh eh..
tch tch tch..
ab bas sakshi,chhotu n shree hi kuch kar sakte hai..
baki to trapped!
well wo projection room...
well capable of scaring everyone!
ab kya hoga!?...agey padhti hu

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ishita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#583

oh teri..
ye to solid wala fas gye...
mujhe inke reactions se samajh nai aa rha tha hasu k chinta karu...
lo..gyi bhains pani me... arjun ke bhagne ka attempt v phuss ho gya...

pehelwano ne kch zyada ji zor se patak dia unhe..
hehe..mujhe aisha ke reaction se hassi a gyi..itna sannata kyu hai? hehe..

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ishita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#584

huff!
meri jan me jaan ayi..
bachpan ki scouting kaam a gyi...
sonali really worked well..

pigeions ko hathiyar banate h..kambakht log...

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ishita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#585

n i m impressed!
the naari shakti behind vipul was fab..
then sakshi-aisha supporting each other...

jhhoola jhul rhi hu.. yaha pe bhi joke!
wo bhi is situation me...kya baat hai...
arjun's desparate attempts to save his team mates...
wait wait...ye last me kya hua????
sakshi left d rope?

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ishita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#586

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ishita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#587

atisha ...tumne jaan nikal di..
i had almost started crying...
but sumwhr i felt that sakshi has some plan B...
she cares so much 4 her mates..
the ringtone ... mai has has k gir hi jati..
then comes chhotu k kandhe pe trip ...
arjun ..injured gadha.. 😆
chhotu ko yha v sakshi dara rhi thi...arjun ki shadow nai h ...sakshi ki atma n all...

then sakshi spcl.."2 dukhi atma!"

awesome

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ishita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#588

arey bapree
itni zyada planning...
sakshi ...good work girl!
mera to dimag hi ghum gya!

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ishita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#589

arey bapree..
it was so complicated...
everything was wilder than i imagined!
pinto goin with sona...awe

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 12 years ago

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OMG, yes I know I am really late for comments, 😔 however yesterday I just discovered your story and I read them in one shot, first hm followed by bs... wooow 😲! seriously i am speechless... it's so damn good! some lines were epic! jaise ke ghalat time ps sahi cheez pakda 🤣... no. of cutting chais and like i can continue forever, actually each and every comment deserves a separate comment however i was so engrossed that i just kept on reading and reading till the end came... u know at one point i myself started to get chills when u described the mansion... wow... i mean i can write a never ending comment since u picked upon my fav genre, i.e. mystery, crime, etc... but i guess thoda zyaada hi hojayega! Keep up the good work! waiting for the next part in bs!!!