"Mistrusting trust"
This is my first attempt ever...i would like to thank PrittB who triggered some button in my head to begin writing an ss/ff, else i don't know if i would have ever written this...
Since the story is a continuation of the show it is written in drama style so, its kind of a screenplay story😆. This Story will not be from any character's POV...i'll leave it up to the readers to decide which character is thinking what😉
Prologue:
She sat on the bed with a steady gaze fixed onto the reflection of the leg of the bed on the polished wooden flooring of their bedroom.That is when she replayed it again and again in her head the two lines that he had said which made her ruthless enough to take her decisions. "maine tumse kabhi pyaar kiya hi nahi" " tum iss layak ho hi nahi ki main tumhein pyaar karu" and then some recent lines hammered her head sometimes when she looked him in the eyes "mujhse pyaar karti ho yaa nahi Madhubala Rishab Kundra?" she wondered why he should now spell her name with his when he admitted upon his revenge? she wondered why he ever wanted her back? she wondered whether he still wanted to hurt her or did he really want her? But, of all the things she thought only one thought stuck out loud and clear and that was, he wanted her but,he still didn't love her. She decided she would not hurt herself more.He forced her back to his house but, she wanted justice.However, the fact that she still loved him bothered her all the time and the moment she wanted to try to give him a chance he would go all the way round and end up doing all the wrong things which made her feel all the more humiliated. Today at the party she thought he cared for her. She wanted to trust him and then the next moment all she knew was, how he pointed a finger at her and Sultan, blaming she had a relation with another man. She did invite Sultan there unaware of her ex-husband's reaction. Was she at fault?
Her thoughts were interrupted by the rhythm of his footsteps. she glanced at him quickly noticing the disappointment on his face. then he spoke, "tumne mujhe maaf kiya? main galat tha. tum meri tarah kabhi dhoka nahi de sakti"
and then something in her broke. She couldn't turn back to him and accept that she had indeed called sultan there. He trusted her now when she had a knife and was about to cut herself or was the trust always there?
and then he said, "tum mujhe maaf karo ya naa karo, tum mujhe chodke kabhi nahi jaa sakti"
Teaser:
Rk: chali jaao...ab main aur nahi kar sakta yeh...
Madhu: humaari shaadi huyi hai...biwi hoon main tumhaari...tumne hi kaha tha sirf tumhaari hoon..
Rk: chali jaao...
THREAD #2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88877801�
Chapter 1 - MADHU'S SMART MOVE
In Rk's bedroom
Rk: BIWI! BIWI!
(Bittuji comes running into rk's room)
Bittuji: chief bhabhiji mandir gayi hain..
(its 9 am right now)
Rk: haan thik hai! (in a stern voice) aaj ka shooting schedule kya hai bittuji? (casually)
Bittuji: chief aaj 12 baje ka shoot hai aur phir ek interview hai 5 baje
Rk: bittuji interview cancel karvayiye
Bitttuji: thik hai chief...
(madhu enters the room...all teary)
Rk: bittuji ab mujhe aap ko samjhana padega ki yeh biwi aur mera bedroom hai?
Bittuji: sorry cheif! Main chalta hoon...
(On phone)"haan vo aaj interview..." (exits the room)
Rk staring at madhu...madhu looks back pretending to hide her tears...
Rk: kya hua biwi?
Madhu : maa kab tak mujhse naraaz rahegi..?
Rk pulls her in his arms n hugs n says..
Rk:biwi hum aaj shaam chalenge chawl...mujhe sasuma ko samjhanaa hoga...
Madhu: thank u rk
Rk: biwi waise aaj tumhaare aansoo ne meri shirt thikse dhoyi nahi..
Madhu looks up at him wondering what he is upto n feeling awkward..
rk walks out of the room...
madhu heads to the kitchen..
In the evening at the chawl
rk knocks at the door...
trishna opens n stares at rk-madhu n then looks at madhu for signs...
madhu just nods a no to her when rk is not seeing...
padmini is standing behind in the kitchen...she notices madhu's nod..
padmini: kyu aaye ho tum dono yahaan?
Madhu: maa meri baat toh suno...
Padmini: tum meri koi nahi...jab maine tumhe usi din keh diya tha toh phir kyu aayi ho..
Rk: sasuma waise aap mane naa mane isse mujhe koi farak nahi padta...par agar biwi pura din aankhe sujaaye mujhe dekhe toh main usse mota aur dhundhla dikhunga..isse mujhe farak padta hai..
Padmini gave rk an angered and irritated look
Padmini: yeh tumhaara aur tumhaari biwi ka maamla hai...mujhe isse koi lena-dena nahi
Madhu: maa par main sirf rk ko ek aur mauka dena chahti hoon...humaare pyaar ko ek aur mauka dena chahti hoon...
Padmini: kaunsa pyaar madhu? Isne kabhi tumse pyaar kiya hi nahi...aur tum isse kaise pyaar kar sakti ho...arre yeh toh wo hai hi nahi jisse tumne pyaar kiya tha...jispe hum sabne bharosa kiya tha...
Rk: sasuma...lekin...
Padmini: tum chup raho rk...mujhe tumhaari koi baat na sun-ni hai aur naahi us-par vishwaas karna hai...
Madhu: maa lekin...
Before they could finish speaking, padmini banged the door shut on their face...
Rk held madhu's hand n dragged her down the stairs and into the car...
Rk: bhul jaao biwi...hum khush hain...hume kisi aur ki zaroorat nahi..
Madhu silently weeping...
Rk: madhu main tumpe wishwaas karta hu...tumhaare pyaar par bharosa hai mujhe... sasuma ko bhi bharosa hoga...bas tum mere saath rehna...main hamesha tumhaare saath hoon..
Madhu: (crying) tum iss baar mera bharosa nahi todoge naa?
Rk: abb main tumhe kahi duur nahi jaane de sakta...
(they drive off to rk mansion)
At rk mansion
Madhu is in the washroom..
Rk is staring at his dad's frame and at that time madhu's phone rings..
Rk picks up...
Precap:
(On the other side of the phone)
Rk hears sultan saying, "madhu meri baat maano...tum sahi nahi kar rahi uske paas jaakar..yeh thik nahi hai"
Ps: hope u liked it...i will update soon...i don't know if this will be SS or FF..
Do leave back your likes,comments n suggestions...thanks in advance...
Should i continue??
pps: if u want an english version then here it is
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/82949753�
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