RM CS 'mistrusting trust' 4TH AUG pg 140 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum updates..dint get time to read b4..but 2day read all chapters..amazing story..continue soon.
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Originally posted by: titli4love

very nice update..song is so romantic..
Precap guy is RK..I'm sure.He came to apologize to Paddo n Trishna..😎


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yes u r right...but what he came for...lets c..
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awesum updates..dint get time to read b4..but 2day read all chapters..amazing story..continue soon.


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awsome updates...😛

A Big Sorry For Late Reply...

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awsome updates...😛

A Big Sorry For Late Reply...

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continue soon waiting for ur next update 😳

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Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

Madhu : rk main maa se kya kahoon?

rk doesn't respond...after a while he says

rk : sab thik ho jaayega...(n saying that he puts forward his hand asking for dance..)


rk holds madhu and hugs her from behind...rishbala are lost in the moment...

Aankhen band kar loo jo mein

dekhu bas tumhe

khwabo mein hi keh sakta hoon

apna tumhe

rehne de mera yeh vehm pe hi yakeen

naa ja abhi

pyar ki yeh raat hain

ab na jaa

chotti si ek baat hain

ab na jaa


Chapter 5 - SUDDEN REALISATIONS


At rk mansion

Next day RK is leaving early for shoot while madhu is still asleep...he walks towards madhu's side of the bed n smiles peacefully staring at her...then he bends a little towards her forehead n is about to kiss her but, hesitates n goes out of his room...

(after some time)

Madhu wakes up n gets ready...she heads to the kitchen to cook lunch...while cooking she remembers last night...she remembers how rk was trying to fix things..then she remembers those words he said at the altar "tum ho hi nahi iss layak ki main tumse pyaar karu" n she remembers that she will not give in this time...she will not allow him to control her...


At the chawl

(its evening now)

Trishna hears a knock at the door and proceeds to open it meanwhile padmini is making evening tea...trishna open the door n gets furious on seeing him...


Trishna bangs her hands on his chest n pushes him out of the house..


Trishna: ab kyu aaye ho?

(padmini is witnessing from behind)

Rk: trishna ab itni bholi toh tum ho nahi ki naa samjho main kyu aaya hoon..hai naa?

Trishna: itna gir chuke ho, ab tumhaara badla bhi pura ho raha hai kyunki madhu laut gayi hai isse zyaada ab aur kya chahiye tumhe hai naa?

Rk: toh tumhe lagta hai ki main phirse badla le raha hoon? (with a straight face)

Trishna: aur kuch sochne ki wajah nahi di tumne rk!

(N she holds his hand n pulls him out of the house n towards the chawl gallery...)

Trishna : Dekho Rk...yeh jagah dekho (she point out at the chawl courtyard and speaks in anger)...yeh wahi jagah hai jahan tumne madhu ko saare chawl walon ke saamne zaleel kiya tha...kya kaha tha tumne, ki madhu ko tum waapas chodne aaye ho jaise 6 mahine baad koi customer koi cheez pasand naa aane par usse waapas kar deta hai...

Rk : uss baat ki maafi main maang chukka hoon...

Trishna : kab rk? Mujhe yaa chawl waalon ko toh kuch yaad nahi aisa..


Rk is tongue-tied...


Trishna : ab kya hua rk? Tum chahte ho ki main vishwaas karu ki tumhe vo CHEEZ phirse pasand aa gayi hai?


Rk is listening in anger n guilt..


"arre madhu toh hai hi aisi...tumse itna pyaar karti hai kit um par phirse vishwaas kar baithi...mujhse yeh ummeed mat rakhna...baat karni hogi mujhe uss se...dimaag kharab ho gaya hai uska..."

rk : koi dimaag kharab nahi hua hai uska...main usse iss baar koi dhoka nahi de raha...shaadi karna chahta hoon uss se..saare rasmo rivaaz ke saath...

trishna is shocked n says.. "aur wo maan gayi??" trishna picks up her phone to call madhu...rk snatches her phone..

rk : kya kar rahi ho? Pyaar hai phir tumhe shaadi se problem kya hai?

Trishna : pyaar? Kaisa pyaar rk? Jab mann kiya shaadi kar li jab mann kiya tod di...madhu tumhaara koi khilonaa nahi hai...main nahi hone de sakti yeh shaadi..

Rk : yahaan main tumse aur saasuma se shaadi ki baat karne ayaa tha aur tumhe toh...


Before rk could complete trishna pulled him towards the chawl stairs...n yelled


"Yahaan(pointing at the stairs)...yahaan royi thi wo..tutt ke...tumhaare liye...jab usse pata chala ki wo kabhi tumhaare saath nahi jee paayegi...aur tumhe kisi tarah ki sharm nahi hai rk aur naa hi koi ehsaas hai ki kya beeti hogi uspar...kya socha hai tumne kabhi uske baare? Uski khwaaishon ke baare mein? Uske bharose ke tuttne ke dard ke baare mein?"

"Main kyun tumhe yeh sab bataa rahi hoon...tum madhu ko deserve hi nahi karte...aur tum kehte ho ki pyaar karte ho usse...(she gives a look of disbelief and anger)"


Rk is almost in tears of guilt but he doesn't show it to trishna...he is in panic state now...


Rk: trishna main yahaan tumse aur saasumaa se maafi maangne aaya tha...lekin tumne jo kaha...shayad tum mujh par kabhi vishwaas hi nahi karogi...main jaa raha hoon... agli baar shaadi ke baad hi aaoonga madhu ko saath lekar...phir shaayad tumhe bharosa ho jaaye...


Saying this rk walked out n went towards his car...all the way home he was thinking only about trishna's words...he desperately wanted to make mallik family believe him...but, he felt helpless for the time being...his mind almost agreed to whatever trishna said...


Meanwhile at rk mansion

(Madhu is on phone in the bedroom )

Madhu:hello?

Sultan : madhu main bol raha hoon...sultan

Madhu : sultan..

Sultan: madhu kya tum thik ho? Rk ne phirse kuch kiya toh nahi naa..

Madhu : main thik hoon lekin tum? Tum ne kyu phone kiya?

Sultan : bas yeh jaanna tha ki kya tum ab bhi wahi kar rahi ho jo tumne mujhse kaha tha?

Madhu : haan...aur yeh hi sahi hai...aur thik bhi...aur (contd)


RK reached rk mansion n was heading towards his room in anger..when, deepali stopped him by saying..


Deepali : kya kar rahe ho rk? Bina pyaar ke tum madhu se shaadi kar rahe ho?

Rk : tumse kisne kaha?

Deepali : uff rk ab ek ghar mein rehke mujhe kya itna bhi nahi pata chalega? Waise ek baat batao, kya sach mein uss se pyaar karte ho? Mujhe toh kabhi aise roka nahi aur naa hi kidnap kiya...kya tum...


Before deepali could complete rk ran away...rk enters the room and...


(Contd) aur ab main iss bare mein baat nahi karna chahti...

Sultan : madhu..apna khyaal rakhana aur agar madad ki zaroorat ho toh kabhi bhi phone kar sakti ho...

Madhu: ab wo mujhe kuch nahi karega...main rakhti hoon...(n she cuts the call)


Rk is looking at madhu from behind...madhu feels his presence n turns back..


Madhu: tum aa gaye...

Rk : nahi mera dil bechain ho raha tha toh usne socha ki kyun naa RK mansion mein thoda ghum ke aa jaaye...

(Madhu just smiles as she is trying to gauge how much of her phone talk rk heard..)

Rk: kaun tha?

Madhu : kahan?

Rk : phone pe madhu!! aajkal ho kya gaya hai tumhe? Khoyi khoyi rehti ho? Yaa phir mere saath rehne se yeh haal ho jata hai tumhaara?(he winks)

Madhu : rk wo... didu thi phone par...

Rk: accha? Kya kaha? (rk was thinking abt the chawl talk)

Madhu : kuch nahi bas naaraaz thi...tum toh jaante hi ho...

Rk : madhu wo...madhu kya tum sachme mujhe doosra...madhu kya tum mere saath khush ho? (with concern)

Madhu : haan rk...kyu pooch rahe ho?

Rk : kuch nahi biwi...chalo khana khaate hain...


Precap :

Madhu : haan rk bas wo...pata nahi kaise..

Rk: ab bataogi? Yeh ho kya raha?(angrily) do din mein shaadi hai aur tum...(he stops midway) madhu kya tum mujhe kuch batana chahti ho?


ps: sorry for late update...but its a long one...hope u like it...

pls like and comment..thank u😊

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

ENGLISH VERSION

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

Madhu : rk what will i tell mom?

rk doesn't respond...after a while he says

rk : everything will be fine...(n saying that he puts forward his hand asking for dance..)


rk holds madhu and hugs her from behind...rishbala are lost in the moment...

when i close my eyes

i only see u

only in my dreams i can

call u mine

let me keep faith in this dream

dont go now

this is the night for love

dont go now

just a little wish

dont go now


Chapter 5 - SUDDEN REALISATIONS


At rk mansion

Next day RK is leaving early for shoot while madhu is still asleep...he walks towards madhu's side of the bed n smiles peacefully staring at her...then he bends a little towards her forehead n is about to kiss her but, hesitates n goes out of his room...

(after some time)

Madhu wakes up n gets ready...she heads to the kitchen to cook lunch...while cooking she remembers last night...she remembers how rk was trying to fix things..then she remembers those words he said at the altar "tum ho hi nahi iss layak ki main tumse pyaar karu" n she remembers that she will not give in this time...she will not allow him to control her...


At the chawl

(its evening now)

Trishna hears a knock at the door and proceeds to open it meanwhile padmini is making evening tea...trishna open the door n gets furious on seeing him...


Trishna bangs her hands on his chest n pushes him out of the house..


Trishna: why have u come now?

(padmini is witnessing from behind)

Rk: trishna now u r not so innocent that u dont understand y i am here...right?

Trishna: u have stooped so low, now even ur revenge is getting fulfilled coz madhu has returned back to u, what more do u want?

Rk: so u think i am taking revenge again? (with a straight face)

Trishna: u havnt given me reasons to think anything else!

(N she holds his hand n pulls him out of the house n towards the chawl gallery...)

Trishna : look Rk...look at this place (she point out at the chawl courtyard and speaks in anger)...this is the same place where u insulted n humiliated her infront of all people here at the chawl...n what did u say, u have come to return madhu back to us,in the same way that some customer would return something after 6 months on being dis-satisfied...

Rk : i have asked for forgiveness for that...

Trishna : when rk? me as well as people at the chawl don't remember any such thing...


Rk is tongue-tied...


Trishna : now what happened rk? do u want me to believe that u have started liking that THING again?


Rk is listening in anger n guilt..


"madhu is like this only...she loves u so much that she has started trusting u again...but, dont expect the same out of me...i'll have to talk to her...she has lost it..."

rk : she is not being dumb...i am not ditching her this time...i want to marry her...with all rituals n traditions...

trishna is shocked n says.. "and she agreed??" trishna picks up her phone to call madhu...rk snatches her phone..

rk : what r u doing? there's love then what problem do u have with the marriage?

Trishna : love? what love rk? when u desire u want to marry, u marry and when u dont wish u break it...madhu is not a toy...i will not let this marriage happen...

Rk : here i came to tell u n MIL about the marriage and u...


Before rk could complete trishna pulled him towards the chawl stairs...n yelled


"here(pointing at the stairs)...here she cried..shattered...for u...when she realised she will not be living with u ever...and u have no kind of shame and neither any sort of regret...did u ever think about her? about her wishes? about the pain of her broken trust?"

"y am i even telling u all this...u just don't deserve madhu...and u say that u love her...(she gives a look of disbelief and anger)"


Rk is almost in tears of guilt but he doesn't show it to trishna...he is in panic state now...


Rk: trishna i had come here to ask for forgiveness from u and MIL...but whatever u said...maybe u will never believe me...i am going...next time i will come only after the marriage and will get madhu along...then maybe u will trust me...


Saying this rk walked out n went towards his car...all the way home he was thinking only about trishna's words...he desperately wanted to make mallik family believe him...but, he felt helpless for the time being...his mind almost agreed to whatever trishna said...


Meanwhile at rk mansion

(Madhu is on phone in the bedroom )

Madhu:hello?

Sultan : madhu its me...sultan

Madhu : sultan..

Sultan: madhu r u ok? Rk has not done anything again right...

Madhu : i'm ok but u? y have u called?

Sultan : just wanted to know if u r still thinking on doing the same that u told me that day?

Madhu : yes...and this will only be right...and fair...and (contd)


RK reached rk mansion n was heading towards his room in anger..when, deepali stopped him by saying..


Deepali : what r u doing rk? going to marry madhu without any sort of love?

Rk : who told u?

Deepali : uff rk now staying n the same house how can i not know? btw tell me, do u really love her? u never stopped me or kidnapped even...do u...


Before deepali could complete rk ran away...rk enters the room and...


(Contd) and now i do not wish to talk about this anymore...

Sultan : madhu..take care of yourself and if u need any help u can call me anytime...

Madhu: now he will not harm me...i'l hang up now...(n she cuts the call)


Rk is looking at madhu from behind...madhu feels his presence n turns back..


Madhu: u came...

Rk : no my heart was feeling restless so it thought why not take a little round at RK mansion n come...

(Madhu just smiles as she is trying to gauge how much of her phone talk rk heard..)

Rk: who was it?

Madhu : where?

Rk : on the phone madhu!! what's got into u nowadays? u r always lost? or is it because u r staying with me?(he winks)

Madhu : rk it was... didu on the phone...

Rk: alright? what did she say? (rk was thinking abt the chawl talk)

Madhu : nothing, she was just angry...u know it all...

Rk : madhu that...madhu r u really giving me second...madhu r u happy with me? (with concern)

Madhu : yes rk...y do u ask?

Rk : nothing biwi...come lets have dinner...


Precap :

Madhu : yes rk just that...i dont know how..

Rk: now will u say? what is going on?(angrily) we're getting married in two days and u...(he stops midway) madhu do u want to tell me something?


ps: sorry for late update...but its a long one...hope u like it...

pls like and comment..thank u😊

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Hey hia awesome update..madhu is still on her plan and rk understanding his misdeeds..awesome just awesome..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smitakundra

Hey hia awesome update..madhu is still on her plan and rk understanding his misdeeds..awesome just awesome..


thanks dear! 😊

yeah u got it right 😳
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thank you! 😊

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