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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: armummy

Nice update . I like Hindi version


thank u!
glad u like hindi version! thank u 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82


Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

Rk comes close to madhu...holds her by the shoulder and yells at her "ho kya gaya hai tumhe? Kabse bula raha hoon...par tum jawab bhi nahi de sakti..."

Madhu : sorry woh mera dhyaan nahi tha..

Rk: aur yeh (pointing his hand at her)...maine tumse kaha tha ready rehna...

Madhu : rk hum jaa kahaan rahe hain?

Rk: biwi 10 min mein gaadi mein aa jao..main wait karunga..


Rk walks out of the room picking up his jacket on the way out ..


Chapter 4 - RK'S SURPRISE

In the car...rk is driving n madhu is sitting next to him


Madhu: rk pehle batao hum jaa kaha rahe hai?

Rk :biwi ! tum sawwal poochna kab bandd karogi?


N they drive off...both are silent all the way...then rk stops the car...Both get out of the car...Rk grabs her hand n they walk towards a building...get into the lift and get off on the last floor...rk takes out a key from the pocket of his jacket n opens the only door there...RK holds madhu around her waist and takes a step into the house n says, "welcome biwi!"

(ps:its the versova house)

In front of madhu is a the view of a living room as big as the one in rk mansion. It is beautifully decorated with candles. The entire house is in shades of red,grey and white...in the centre of the room is a table with food for dinner and a bottle of wine...

Rk tightens the hold on madhu's waist and walks in with her..


Rk: biwi, ab shaadi kar rahe hain toh yeh zaruri hai naa...chalo...celebration toh hona chahiye naa? Tum mere paas laut aayi ho aur phir ab shaadi ke liye bhi maan gayi ho...

(Madhu just looked at him n smiled)

Rk: waise biwi, uss din dinner date pe jo hua wo thik nahi tha toh maine socha ki ek dinner date toh honi chahiye uss sultan ke bina hai naa...

Madhu didn't respond...

Rk in panic says : sorry..sorry madhu..main phirse uska naam nahi loonga...chalo...


To madhu's surprise rk held her waist n dragged her inside some other room instead of heading to the dinner table...

The room had various mannequins of bride and groom outfits...some other mannequins with jewellery and accessories...


Madhu : rk yeh kya hai?


Rk steps back a little and holds madhu from behind keeping his hands on her stomach and locking her...he rests his head on her shoulder and says in a soft tone "hum shopping karne aaye hain biwi..."

madhu smiles sweetly

Rk continues.. : madhu...bhul jaao uss raat ko...yeh nayi shuruvaat hogi...khudpar aur mujhpar ek ehsaan kardo...main nahi chahta ki uss raat ki koi bhi baat hum dohraaein...

madhu: par main yeh nahi chahti rk..


rk leaves madhu n turns her to face him n says shocked n scared "madhu...?"


madhu : rk main chahti hoon ki hum shaadi wahi karein jahaan uss raat karne waale the...


rk in angry n frustrated mood grabs her shoulder n says : jab main nahi chahta ki hum dono uss din ko yaad karein phir kyu tum baar baar wohi keh rahi ho? Wahan shaadi karne se ussi din ki kadvi yaadein reh jaayengi...kya tum yehi chahti ho?

Madhu looks at him with disgust but before she can say anything rk hugs her tight in fear n says "nahi...madhu main tumhaare bina nahi jee nahi sakta...tum kyu...?"

Madhu pull off from the hug n cuts him in middle saying "rk main chahti hoon ki uss jagah ki kadvi yaadein hum inn pyaar ke palon se mita de"

Rk smiles at her...still not very convinced, just happy that she is not angry...after selecting clothes for each other they head towards the living room for dinner...both r silent n just staring at each other amidst the candle lit room...

Rk is at loss of words...he doesn't want to speak and anger madhu anymore...madhu is just thinking about the wedding and then she breaks the silence...

Madhu : rk main maa se kya kahoon?

rk doesn't respond...after a while he says

rk : sab thik ho jaayega...(n saying that he puts forward his hand asking for dance..)


rk holds madhu and hugs her from behind...rishbala are lost in the moment...


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dOb67dS-hB8[/YOUTUBE]


Aankhen band kar loo jo mein

dekhu bas tumhe

khwabo mein hi keh sakta hoon

apna tumhe

rehne de mera yeh vehm pe hi yakeen

naa ja abhi

pyar ki yeh raat hain

ab na jaa

chotti si ek baat hain

ab na jaa

tumhhi se hain meri neende

naa bhi ho to kya

tumhi see hain meri battein

naa bhi ho to kya

kehne do taaro ko kahani ankahi

na jaa abhi

pyar ki yeh raat hain

ab na jaa

chotti si ek baat hain

ab na jaa

pal do pal ka saath hain

ab na jaa

jadoo si yeh raat hain

ab na jaa

ab na jaa

maathe pe pyar ki boonde

bikhre se kai sawal

aankhon mein kitne mausam

pal mein beete kitne saal

rehne de jahan bhi le jaaye zindagi

na jaa abhi

pyar ki yeh raat hain

ab na jaa

chotti si ek baat hain

ab na jaa

pal do pal ka saath hain

ab na jaa

jadoo si yeh raat hain

ab na jaa

ab na jaa



Precap :

Trishna bangs her hand on his chest n pushes him out of the house..

Trishna: ab kyu aaye ho?


meanwhile madhu is on phone (at rk mansion)

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

ENGLISH VERSION

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

Rk comes close to madhu...holds her by the shoulder and yells at her "what's wrong with u? i'm calling u since so long...but, u just cant answer back..."

Madhu : sorry i was lost...

Rk: and this (pointing his hand at her)...i had told you be ready...

Madhu : rk where r v going?

Rk: biwi 10 mins...come to the car..i'll be waiting..


Rk walks out of the room picking up his jacket on the way out


Chapter 4 - RK'S SURPRISE

In the car...rk is driving n madhu is sitting next to him


Madhu: rk first tell me where r v going?

Rk :biwi ! when will you stop asking questions?


N they drive off...both are silent all the way...then rk stops the car...Both get out of the car...Rk grabs her hand n they walk towards a building...get into the lift and get off on the last floor...rk takes out a key from the pocket of his jacket n opens the only door there...RK holds madhu around her waist and takes a step into the house n says, "welcome biwi!"

(ps:its the versova house)

In front of madhu is a the view of a living room as big as the one in rk mansion. It is beautifully decorated with candles. The entire house is in shades of red,grey and white...in the centre of the room is a table with food for dinner and a bottle of wine...

Rk tightens the hold on madhu's waist and walks in with her..


Rk: biwi, since we are getting married this is necessary...come...we must celebrate right? u have come back to me and agreed to marry me also...

(Madhu just looked at him n smiled)

Rk: btw biwi, that day whatever happened on dinner date was not right so i thought that we must have a dinner without that sultan in between right...

Madhu didn't respond...

Rk in panic says : sorry..sorry madhu..i will not utter his name again...come...


To madhu's surprise rk held her waist n dragged her inside some other room instead of heading to the dinner table...

The room had various mannequins of bride and groom outfits...some other mannequins with jewellery and accessories...


Madhu : rk what is this?


Rk steps back a little and holds madhu from behind keeping his hands on her stomach and locking her...he rests his head on her shoulder and says in a soft tone "we have come shopping biwi..."

madhu smiles sweetly

Rk continues.. : madhu...forget that night...this will be a new beginning...do a favour for yourself and me...i don't want that we repeat anything from that night...

madhu: but, i dont want that rk..


rk leaves madhu n turns her to face him n says shocked n scared "madhu...?"


madhu :i want that we marry at the same place where we were going to that night...


rk in angry n frustrated mood grabs her shoulder n says : when i dont want that both of us should remember that day then why do u repeat the same again and again? marrying there will only remind us of that unfortunate night...is this what u want?

Madhu looks at him with disgust but before she can say anything rk hugs her tight in fear n says "no...madhu i cannot live without u...y do u...?"

Madhu pull off from the hug n cuts him in middle saying " rk i want that we get married at the same place and erase all those ugly memories and replace them with loved memories"

Rk smiles at her...still not very convinced, just happy that she is not angry...after selecting clothes for each other they head towards the living room for dinner...both r silent n just staring at each other amidst the candle lit room...

Rk is at loss of words...he doesn't want to speak and anger madhu anymore...madhu is just thinking about the wedding and then she breaks the silence...

Madhu : rk what will i tell mom?

rk doesn't respond...after a while he says

rk : everything will be fine...(n saying that he puts forward his hand asking for dance..)


rk holds madhu hugs her from behind...rishbala are lost in the moment...


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dOb67ds-hB8[/YOUTUBE]


when i close my eyes

i only see u

only in my dreams i can

call u mine

let me keep faith in this dream

dont go now

this is the night for love

dont go now

just a little wish

dont go now

may i not sleep coz of u

but so what

may i not talk to u

but so what

let the stars say the story untold

dont go now

this is the night for love

dont go now

just a little wish

dont go now

just a small moment of togetherness

dont go now

this night is magical

dont go now

dont go now

face shines with tears of love

unanswered so many questions

so many seasons in the eyes

how many years passed by in a moment

let life take us wherever it wants to

dont go now

this is the night for love

dont go now

just a little wish

dont go now

just a small moment of togetherness

dont go now

this night is magical

dont go now

dont go now



Precap :

Trishna bangs her hand on his chest n pushes him out of the house..

Trishna: y have u come now?


meanwhile madhu is on phone (at rk mansion)

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Awesome...Update Soon & Plzzz PM Me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: AbhiyaMaaneet

Awesome...Update Soon & Plzzz PM Me 😊


thank u!
yeah sure😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
getting interesting aahaan..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: taraka2005

getting interesting aahaan..😊


thank u for ur lovely compliment! 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved both the previous updates..its getting interesting😛..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdear

loved both the previous updates..its getting interesting😛..


i'm glad to hear that! 😊😊
thank u!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i like d tittle MISTRUSTING TRUST very much AHAAN!. VERY NICE UPDATE. KEEP UP WID UR GOOD WORK BUDDY👍🏼

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