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Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Chapter 2 - CANDLE LIGHT PROPOSAL


In Rk's bedroom

Madhu is in the washroom..

Rk is staring at his dad's frame and at that time madhu's phone rings..

Rk picks up...(On the other side of the phone he hears sultan)

he hears sultan saying, "madhu meri baat maano...tum sahi nahi kar rahi uske paas jaakar..yeh thik nahi hai"

He gets angry and cuts the call without letting sultan know that it was him who heard it...

He is about to walk out of the room when his eye falls on the knife with which madhu attempted to cut her wrist to gain his trust...

Then he remembered how madhu stood by him when padmini cut off with madhu...

And all that sultan spoke came back to him...he kept repeating sultan's words in his mind...

He walked a little ahead n then switches off all the light in the room...


(meanwhile madhu walks out of the washroom n is shocked to see the darkness...)


Madhu: light kaise chali gayi...? (she whispers)


Madhu walks a little ahead to try and reach her phone, while carefully placing her feet...she's scared

And suddenly she is numb looking at the sight in front of her...

Rk was in front of her...knelt on one knee...and holding a candle towards her...

Just the light from one candle lit their faces. Both stared intensely at each other.


Rk: iss roshni se thodi roshni chura kar

Apni aankhon me bhar lo

Dekho mujhe aur apna pyaar dekar

Mere dil ke andhere ko duur kar do

Madhu mujhse shaadi karlo..

Chalo madhu hum 7 phere lekar saari rasamo ke saath shaadi kar lete hai..


Madhu: tum mujhse shaadi kyu karna chahte ho...main yahin hoon...

Rk: kyunki biwi maine jo adhura choda tha uss galti ko main ab sudhaarna chahta hoon...

Madhu: hato rk...main tumse pyaar nahi karti...tumne hi kaha...baar baar kaha...

Rk : biwi phir tum yahaan kyun ho?

Madhu : kyunki...(rk cuts her in the middle)

Rk: MADHU MAIN JAANTA HOON TUM MUJHSE UTNA HI PYAAR KARTI HO JITNA MAIN TUMSE PHIR YEH SHAADI KYU...


(rk had just realised what he had blurted out)

Madhu is staring at him in shock...


Madhu: kya kaha tumne rk?

Rk: biwi wo...main...HAAN KARTA HOON MAIN TUMSE PYAAR (yelling)

Madhu tumne mujhe maaf kiya? Madhu tum mujhe chodke nahi jaaogi naa?

Madhu kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi?

Madhu: kyaa tum sab kuch chodkar chal sakte ho mere saath?

Rk : madhu?

Madhu: bolo na rk...chal sakte ho?

Rk: nahi...nahi kho sakta tumhe...madhu iss baar koi dhoka nahi,koi chalawa nahi...tumhe paane ke liye ab kuch bhi chod sakta hoon...

Madhu : rk main iss shaadi mein kisiko bhi nahi bulana chahti...maa toh nahi maanegi...aur sab chodkar jaana hai toh tum apni maa ko bhi naa bulaao toh accha rahega...

Rk: biwi yeh shaadi sirf humaare liye hai...jo uss waqt adhuraa raha usse pura karna hai...phir chahe...___ madhu...agar main tumhaari jagah hota toh yeh kabhi nahi...

Rk places the candle on a table and gets up n hugs madhu...madhu hesitantly hugs back...(rk:biwi main lights on karta hoon)


Then hiding his eyes in confusion, embarrassment n frustration he walks to switch on the lights...n walks towards the door


Rk: biwi khanaa aa chukka hai...


(he says...looking at the tray of food lying outside their door)

N he walks out of the room..

Madhu burst out in tears...all that she was holding onto since so long...she laid down on the bed..put on the blanket and went off to sleep...

Precap:

Next day morning


Rk: madhu mujhe vishwaas nahi ho raha hai ki 1 hafte mein humaari shaadi hai

(And rk pulls madhu close by holding on to her waist...

Rk thinking about last night...)

Madhu tum sab-kuch chodkar kyu jaana chahti ho?


PS: I hope u like this part...do comment n share your views...😊


pps: for english version scroll down to next post..

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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ENGLISH VERSION

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Chapter 2 - CANDLE LIGHT PROPOSAL


In Rk's bedroom

Madhu is in the washroom..

Rk is staring at his dad's frame and at that time madhu's phone rings..

Rk picks up...(On the other side of the phone he hears sultan)

he hears sultan saying, "madhu listen to what i say...u r not doing the right thing by going to him..this is not right"

He gets angry and cuts the call without letting sultan know that it was him who heard it...

He is about to walk out of the room when his eye falls on the knife with which madhu attempted to cut her wrist to gain his trust...

Then he remembered how madhu stood by him when padmini cut off with madhu...

And all that sultan spoke came back to him...he kept repeating sultan's words in his mind...

He walked a little ahead n then switches off all the light in the room...


(meanwhile madhu walks out of the washroom n is shocked to see the darkness...)


Madhu: how did the lights go off...? (she whispers)


Madhu walks a little ahead to try and reach her phone, while carefully placing her feet...she's scared

And suddenly she is numb looking at the sight in front of her...

Rk was in front of her...knelt on one knee...and holding a candle towards her...

Just the light from one candle lit their faces. Both stared intensely at each other.


Rk: steal a little light from this light

and fill it in your eyes

see me and show your love

and rid me off this darkness in my heart

Madhu marry me..

Come madhu, let us take 7 pheras and marry with all rituals..


Madhu: why do u want to marry me?...i'm here only...

Rk: because biwi, i want to complete what i once left incomplete...that mistake of mine...i want to fix it...

Madhu: move rk...i do not love u...u only said it...said it again and again...

Rk : biwi then why r u here?

Madhu : because...(rk cuts her in the middle)

Rk: MADHU I KNOW U LOVE ME JUST AS MUCH AS I DO THEN WHY CAN'T THIS MARRIAGE...


(rk had just realised what he had blurted out)

Madhu is staring at him in shock...


Madhu: what did u say rk?

Rk: biwi umm...I...YES, I LOVE YOU (yelling)

Madhu did u forgive me? Madhu u will not leave me and go away right?

Madhu will you marry me?

Madhu: can you leave everything and come with me?

Rk : madhu?

Madhu: speak up rk...can you come?

Rk: can't...can't lose you this time...madhu this time no ditching,no show-off...to win you now, i am ready to lose anything...

Madhu : rk i do not wish to invite anyone in this marriage...mom wont agree anyway...and we are going to leave everyone so its only better if u dont invite your mom...

Rk: biwi this marriage is only for us...to complete what was left incomplete in the past...then let it be...___ madhu...had i been in your place i couldn't have ever...

Rk places the candle on a table and gets up n hugs madhu...madhu hesitantly hugs back...(rk:biwi i'll go switch on the lights)


Then hiding his eyes in confusion, embarrassment n frustration he walks to switch on the lights...n walks towards the door


Rk: biwi dinner has arrived...


(he says...looking at the tray of food lying outside their door)

N he walks out of the room..

Madhu burst out in tears...all that she was holding onto since so long...she laid down on the bed..put on the blanket and went off to sleep...

Precap:

Next day morning


Rk: madhu i can't believe that we are marrying in one week...

(And rk pulls madhu close by holding on to her waist...

Rk thinking about last night...)

Madhu why do you want to leave everything and go away?


PS: I hope u like this part...do comment n share your views...😊


pps: for hindi version scroll up to previous post..

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye i'm the first one to comment..congratulate me ..
Hey awesome one..u write really well yaar..i'm amazed..loved this part..waiting for next part..
Edited by smitakundra - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: smitakundra

oye i'm the first one to comment..congratulate me ..
Hey awesome one..u write really well yaar..i'm amazed..loved this part..waiting for next part..


congratulations!👏👏
hey thanks a lot! so sweet of u 😳

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