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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 1Sumana1

Chap-16

aww, i loved how you made us picturise those chilhood moments of Rishabh, those were very cuteee and at the same time heart wrenching too...superb write up! 👏

Chap-17 RK was awesome in this update...😆...loved the fact that you put that dialogue ''yeh zeher, acid aur drug ka mixture hai'' in your own way ''yeh gunpowder, zeher aur drug ka mixture hai'' 🤣 🤣 and skipping Arjun's part will might cause probs in RishBala life i think...
toatally mast update!

Chap-18
Awesome Greh Pravesh! loved the playful RK!😆


thanks a lot sumu 🤗
chap 16 is my personal favourite 😳

ch-17 thanks a lot! i luv that dialoguee yaar 😆

ch-18 thank u...ab main naughty ho gayi hoon...ab se rk naughty milega 😆
Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

"Mistrusting trust"

Okay i know prologue is supposed to be in the beginning..but, i prefer breaking rules 😆 😉...its not the kinds its supposed to be either...i wanted to post this along with the preview but, i dropped the idea coz it made no sense there...

so, now i'll shut up n u can read...and let me know if u want me to continue...


PROLOGUE

"madhu main tumse milna chahta hoon , abhi"

"main aa rahi hoon Rk"

"woh kaun thi...aapka unse kya rishta tha?"

"dost thi meri...aur, mere bete ke liye uski madhu...ab toh saal beet gaye, shayad usse yaad naa ho"

"wo kaha karta tha ki, har cheez mein drama hona zaroori hai...marte waqt bhi ek dialogue toh bolke hi jaoonga"

"yeh tha humaari ore se aapko Rk ka aakhri salaam"



PS : please dont throw chappals at me...i will try n update Ch 21 tomorrow 😊


NOTE: PLS ADD ME TO UR BUDDY LIST IF U WANT FURTHER PM's...Its getting very difficult for me to send so many PM's...pls pls pls understand and just click the buddy button😊 🥺

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

"Mistrusting trust"

Okay i know prologue is supposed to be in the beginning..but, i prefer breaking rules 😆 😉...its not the kinds its supposed to be either...i wanted to post this along with the preview but, i dropped the idea coz it made no sense there...

so, now i'll shut up n u can read...and let me know if u want me to continue...


PROLOGUE

"madhu i want to meet you , now"

"i'm coming Rk"

"who was she...what was your relation with her?"

"was a friend...and, for my son, his madhu...now its been long,maybe she didn't remember"

"he used to say that, every thing should be dramatic...before dying as well i will surely say atleast one dialogue"

"this was from our side to you all...Rk's last salute"



PS : please dont throw chappals at me...i will try n update Ch 21 tomorrow 😊



NOTE: PLS ADD ME TO UR BUDDY LIST IF U WANT FURTHER PM's...Its getting very difficult for me to send so many PM's...pls pls pls understand and just click the buddy button😊 🥺

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😡 😡 😡 i was expecting chapter 😆 😆 😆
it seems RK is counting his last days...is he gonna die 😔
sorry like button is not working
Edited by taraka2005 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What was it?? I didn't get..😕
Edited by titli4love - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey yeh kya hai kesa ajeeb sa atpata sa and darawna sa prologue hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
What !!!! are you going to kill Rk 😡😡.Oh pls Nooo
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Posted: 12 years ago
what...? No plz ... Can't see RK dying .. N update soon na
Edited by mevanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG 😲 what was this??? Dont want Rk to die...pls pls, scary n interesting prologue
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Posted: 12 years ago
whats dis?? r u planning to kill RK.. U BETTER NOT!!!!!!!
UPDATE SOON PLZ...

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