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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maria090

awesome update 😳❤️ i loved it ❤️


thanks dear! glad u loved it! 😊
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Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

Rk: kaun tha?

Madhu : kahan?

Rk : phone pe madhu!! aajkal ho kya gaya hai tumhe? Khoyi khoyi rehti ho? Yaa phir mere saath rehne se yeh haal ho jata hai tumhaara?(he winks)

Madhu : rk wo... didu thi phone par...

Rk: accha? Kya kaha? (rk was thinking abt the chawl talk)

Madhu : kuch nahi bas naaraaz thi...tum toh jaante hi ho...

Rk : madhu wo...madhu kya tum sachme mujhe doosra...madhu kya tum mere saath khush ho? (with concern)

Madhu : haan rk...kyu pooch rahe ho?

Rk : kuch nahi biwi...chalo khana khaate hain...


Chapter 6 - HIDDEN MOTIVES

Next day morning

At rk mansion

Rk (on phone...he's sitting on the bed) : haan bittuji main aa raha hoon...maine aap se kaha tha wo kaam ho gaya?

Bittuji : ji chief...bas 30 mins mein studio mein honge...

Rk : thik hai...(n he cuts the call)

Biwi! BIWI!

Madhu : haan rk.. (madhu just enters the room)

Rk : madhu main...


Before rk completes he notices madhu looking tired...her eyes were red...her hand was on her head and she was about to fall...rk rushes to catch her...n picks her up in his arms and puts her on the bed safely...he sprinkles some water on her n gets her back to consciousness...He picks up his phone n calls the doctor...then looks at madhu in panic..


Rk : madhu tum thik ho?


Rishbala eyelock


Madhu : haan rk bas wo...pata nahi kaise...

Rk: ab bataogi? Yeh ho kya raha?(angrily) do dinn mein shaadi hai aur tum...(he stops midway) madhu kya tum mujhe kuch batana chahti ho?

Madhu : rk main thik hoon...tum jao shoot pe...

Rk : main kahin nahi jaa raha...

Madhu : jaao RK phir hum waise bhi sab chodkar jaa rahe hain...tumhe yeh film khatam karni hai naa...


Rk walks off n after a while comes back with a glass of sweet-lime water.. "yeh lo biwi"...Madhu takes the glass n sips...

There's a knock at the door...Doctor enters and checks madhu...


Doctor : yeh thik hain...bas thoda stress le rahi hai...inhe aaram ki zaroorat hai...

Rk : thank u doctor..


Doctor exits...


Madhu : jao rk main thik hoon..


Rk walks off in anger...


At the studio

Bittuji: chief vo aapka vanity mein wait kar rahe rahi...

Rk: thank u bittuji..

and rk heads off to the vanity van enters locking the door behind him...


At rk mansion

(In the bedroom)

Madhu is asleep... her phone rings...she picks up the phone...


Madhu:hello?

Trishna: madhu kuch hua hai? Vo yahan aaya tha...

Madhu: rk wahaan aaya tha? Usne mujhe bataya nahi...

Trishna: keh raha tha shaadi karna chahta hai, maafi maangne aaya hai...glycerine yeh ho kya raha hai...?

Madhu : didu...tujhe mujhpar bharosa hai naa...

Trishna : haan par tu kar kya rahi hai? Tu thik hai naa?

Madhu : didu main thik hoon...main tujhse baadme baat karti hoon..(n she hangs up)


At chawl

(in the evening)

Deepali knocks at the the door..


Trishna: tum kyu aayi ho yahaan

Deepali : tum logo ko thoda sach bataane...

Trishna : seedhe seedhe kyu nahi kehti kya kaam hai?

Deepali : tum logo ko kya lagta hai ki madhu jo kar rahi hai wo mujhe dikhayi nahi de raha...yeh jo pyaar ka naatak kar rahi hai...


Trishna n padmini r shocked...but trying hard to hide their expressions


Padmini : tum kehna kya chahti ho ?

Deepali : paminiji ab kyu khamkha koshish kar rahi hai...kya aap jaanti nahi rk ko? Aapko nahi lagta madhu ko rokna chahiye?

Trishna : ho gaya? Ab jaao yahaan se...OUT!

Deepali : jaa rahi hoon...tumhaari marzi...soch lo agar rk ko yeh baat pata chali toh madhu ka kya hoga...


Deepali exits


Padmini: trishna yeh thik nahi ho raha...deepali ne jo kaha shaayad...shaayad...agar rk ko...nahi...rk ko pata chalne ke baad madhu ka kya hoga...(in a panic state)

Trishna :maa madhu thik hai...usse kuch nahi hoga...meri abhi hi uss se baat huyi hai..


At rk mansion

At night

Rk enters the room...madhu has slept already...dinner is untouched...rk walks out of the room in frustration...


Precap :

Rk : madhu aaj shooting ka aakhri din hai...phir...ek minute biwi...hum jaayenge kahaan?

Madhu : wo toh tumhe pata hona chahiye naa? (rk looks at her confused) waise hum uss gaon main jaa sakte hai...

Rk: chalo madhu...tumhe kuch dikhana hai...


ps: i hope u like this part...i know its a little less of rishbala...but i promise the next chapter has more 😊

cant help a bit of it turned out to be same in the serial...tho it was written before that..😆 😆

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

ENGLISH VERSION

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

Rk: who was it?

Madhu : where?

Rk : on the phone madhu!! what's got into u nowadays? u r always lost? or is it because u r staying with me?(he winks)

Madhu : rk it was... didu on the phone...

Rk: alright? what did she say? (rk was thinking abt the chawl talk)

Madhu : nothing, she was just angry...u know it all...

Rk : madhu that...madhu r u really giving me second...madhu r u happy with me? (with concern)

Madhu : yes rk...y do u ask?

Rk : nothing biwi...come lets have dinner...


Chapter 6 - HIDDEN MOTIVES

Next day morning

At rk mansion

Rk (on phone...he's sitting on the bed) : yes bittuji i'm coming...did u do the work i had told u to?

Bittuji : yes chief...just 30 mins and they'll be in studio...

Rk : alright...(n he cuts the call)

Biwi! BIWI!

Madhu : yes rk.. (madhu just enters the room)

Rk : madhu I...


Before rk completes he notices madhu looking tired...her eyes were red...her hand was on her head and she was about to fall...rk rushes to catch her...n picks her up in his arms and puts her on the bed safely...he sprinkles some water on her n gets her back to consciousness...He picks up his phone n calls the doctor...then looks at madhu in panic..


Rk : madhu r u okay?


Rishbala eyelock


Madhu : yes rk just that...i dont know how...

Rk: now will u say? what is going on?(angrily) we're getting married in two days and u...(he stops midway) madhu do u want to tell me something?

Madhu : rk i'm fine...u go for your shoot...

Rk : i'm not going anywhere...

Madhu : go Rk, as it is we r leaving everything and going later...u have to finish this film right...


Rk walks off n after a while comes back with a glass of sweet-lime water.. "have this biwi"...Madhu takes the glass n sips...

There's a knock at the door...Doctor enters and checks madhu...


Doctor : she is fine...just a little stressed out...she needs rest...

Rk : thank u doctor...


Doctor exits...


Madhu : go rk i'm fine...


Rk walks off in anger...


At the studio

Bittuji: chief they r waiting for u in the vanity van...

Rk: thank u bittuji..

and rk heads off to the vanity van enters locking the door behind him...


At rk mansion

(In the bedroom)

Madhu is asleep... her phone rings...she picks up the phone...


Madhu:hello?

Trishna: madhu has something happened? he had come here...

Madhu: rk had come there? he didn't tell me...

Trishna: was saying he wants to marry you, had come to ask for forgiveness...glycerine what is happening...?

Madhu : didu...u trust me right...

Trishna : yes but, what r u doing? u r fine right?

Madhu : didu i'm fine...i'll talk to u later..(n she hangs up)


At chawl

(in the evening)

Deepali knocks at the the door..


Trishna: y have u come here?

Deepali : to tell u guys some truth...

Trishna : come to the point, what work do u have?

Deepali : what do u guys think...u think that i cant c what madhu is upto...i cant see all this show off and fake love of hers?


Trishna n padmini r shocked...but trying hard to hide their expressions


Padmini : what do u mean?

Deepali : paminiji y r u even trying...dont u know rk? dont you think madhu shud be stopped?

Trishna : r u done? now go away from here...OUT!

Deepali : i'm going...your wish...think if rk comes to know about this what he will do with madhu...


Deepali exits


Padmini: trishna this is not right...whatever deepali said maybe...maybe...what if rk...no...if rk comes to know then what about madhu...(in a panic state)

Trishna :mom madhu is fine...nothing will happen to her...i just spoke to her..


At rk mansion

At night

Rk enters the room...madhu has slept already...dinner is untouched...rk walks out of the room in frustration...


Precap :

Rk : madhu today is the last day of shoot...then...one minute biwi...where will we go?

Madhu : that u shud know right? (rk looks at her confused) btw we can go to that village...

Rk: come on madhu...want to show u something...


ps: i hope u like this part...i know its a little less of rishbala...but i promise the next chapter has more 😊

cant help a bit of it turned out to be same in the serial...tho it was written before that..😆 😆

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I THINK IM FIRST. YIPPIEEE. LOVED THE UPDATE VERY MUCH👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update. Plz do me pm whenever you update next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey nice update..waiting for next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
Thank for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...loved it awesome update😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice update... i am enjoying this...
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Posted: 12 years ago
May be CVs have read ur update before writng the script n they liked it!!if so then plz make a romantic n happy ending for Rishbala n don't bring any 3rd party b/w them.plz 😆😆😆
nice update dear..😊

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