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Posted: 12 years ago

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

Madhu just checks in the room n sees padmini and trishna still asleep...she just picks up her dupattaa n walks towards the door to leave..just then someone knocks the door...madhu opens the door..

Courier person hands her an envelope and says

Courier person: madam yahaa sign kijiye..

madhu signs n takes the letter...she opens the letter...the letter contains the following in big, bold and shabby handwriting

vanity van no. MH 02 GJ 5757

--tumhaara shubhchintak

Chapter 13 - ARJUN DIKSHIT


At The Chawl

madhu checks the backside of the letter

Rk ka pataa jan-naa chahti ho toh mujhse milo..

"address. . . . . . . . . . . . . .

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ."

-Arjun dikshit

madhu was stunned to look at it...she picked up her phone and rushed out of the chawl with the letter in her hand...she caught a taxi to the given address...


Arjun Dikshit's House

it was a 2 floored building(bunglow)...it looked old but very well maintained with creepers hanging from the balconies and flower pots lying on the parapets...the place looked very calm and fresh...madhu entered the building and rung the bell...a maid came and opened the door and asked "kaun? Kain chahiye?"

madhu answered "main madhu...arjun dikshit yahin hai?"

the maid let madhu come in...and a voice came from inside "kaun hai taai?"

maid answerd "koi madhu hai..aapko milne aayi hai"

and madhu saw a man walking up to where she was sitting and madhu blurted out, "SULTAN"


madhu: tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho?

Sultan: ye mera ghar hai madhu...mera naam hai Arjun...aur Aryan mera beta hai...

Madhu is shocked and she questions in anger "tum kehna kya chahte ho?aur yeh letter? Aur RK kahaan hai?"

Sultan: paanch saal pehle...jab Aryan teen saal ka tha tab main aur araadhna usse kaka ke paas chodke kahin jaa rahe the...tabhi hamaari gaadi ek truck se takraayi aur araadhna buri tarah ghaayal ho gayi...uske elaaj ke liye paison ki zaroorat thi mujhe...


N he looks at kaka n says..."haan yeh suitcase yahaan rakh do...aur Aryan ka saamaan bhi baandh lo.."


Madhu : tum kahin jaa rahe ho? RK KAHAAN HAI??


But sultan continues ignoring madhu...


"..isliye maine sultan se kuch paise udhaar liye thhe...unn dino main ek mamuli saa hawaldaar hua kartaa thaa...ab nahi...lekin araadhna ke elaaj ke paise naa lautaane par sultan aur uske aadmiyon ne araadhna ko maar diya...uss din se main issi intezaar mein tha..."

Madhu : sultan RK KAHAAN HAI??

Sultan : kaha naa maine tumse sultan nahi ARJUN...usse main maar chukka hoon..


(here on i will address sultan as arjun)


Arjun: ...encounter specialist...kisine sultan ka chehra nahi dekha tha par maine dekhaa tha lekin tab main nahi jaanta tha wo kaun hai...isliye jiss din mujhe khabarr mili ki sultan dubai se laut raha hai maine usse airport ke bahar se bandhi banaakar maar daala...mera badla pura hua...lekin sultan ke aadmiyon ko pakadne ke liye main khud wahaan sultan bankar gaya...

Madhu: aur Aryan??

Arjun : Aryan ko bandhi banana zaroori tha kyunki maine unn baaki logo ke chehre nahi dekhe thhe...lekin uss raat jungle main un logon ne tumhe dekh liya...uss raat goli lagne ke waqt tumne meri madad ki uske liye shukriyaa...jaanti ho jabse tumhe mila hoon tumhaare bare main sochta hoon ki tum aaradhna jaisi ho...lekin tumhaari uss madad ke kaaran tumhaari jaan khatre mein pad gayi thi...isiliye main chawl rehne aaya tha...main jaanta tha wo log zaroor wahan milenge...shaayad galti ho gayi...maine tumhaari acchaayi ka fayda uthaakar uss chawl mein yeh tamasha hone diya...sorry madhu..

Madhu just stood up and in anger 'SLAP!!'

Arjun : isiliye maine tumse Aryan ko sambhaalne ka waada maanga...aryan ke bahaane main chawl mein aa-jaa sakta tha...

Madhu stares at him in disgust..

Arjun: tumhaari salaamati ke liye jinn logo ne tumhe dekhaa tha unka marnaa bohot zaroori tha...teen raatein pehle maine bhujang ko bhi maar diya...ab tum surakshit ho...

Madhu : maine tum par bharosa kiya aur tumne apne maksad ke liye sabki jaan khatre mein daal di? Ab kuch kehne sunn-ne ko nahi reh gaya hai...batao RK kahan hai? Kya kiya tumne uske saath??(madhu is angry but also scared)

Arjun : main tumhe Aryan ke wade se mukt kartaa hoon...main jaa raha hoon iss zeher bhari duniya se duur ek nayi zindagi basaane...ho sake toh maaf kar dena aur bhul jaana...thank u jo tumne mere laapataa hone ke samay Aryan ka khyaal rakhaa...meri flight hai teen ghante main...ab nikalna hoga...

(Arjun's back is turned towards madhu) Mera tumse milna bohot zaroori tha...tumhe sach bataana zaroori tha...madhu main uss din shaadi rokne aaya tha jab mujhe pataa chala ki tumhe Rk se khatra ho sakta hai...lekin jab main wahaan pohocha tab tum wahaan se jaa chuki thi...maine Rk ki vanity van dekhi thi...isiliye socha tumhe yeh number ki zaroorat hogi...mujhe nahi pataa rk kahaan hai...

Madhu walks in front of Arjun holds his collar and yells "KIS TARAH KE MATLABI INSAAN HO?JAB NAHI PATA THA TOH MERA WAQT KYUN BARBAAD KIYA?? KITNA VISHWAAS THA MUJHE KI SHAAYAD MAIN RK TAK POHOCH JAAOONGI! (madhu in tears...arjun tries to calm her down by putting his hand on her shoulder but madhu puts off his hands in anger and runs out of there)


In The Taxi

Madhu was very shattered and heartbroken as she left from there...she came in hopes to find Rk but, it was all good for nothing and then..then this lie that had been told to her for days...she did not want to think about good or bad..all she knew was that she felt cheated...once again her trust was broken...everything around her seemed a lie...she didn't know what to do...she just couldn't think...she headed towards siddhi-vinayak temple to find some peace and to pray for Rk's safety and to meet him soon...


In The Temple

Soon she reached the temple...she walked towards the temple and after praying she just went and sat in a corner...just then her toe hit something...it was Rk's finger ring...she picked it up and considered it as a good sign for the future...


Precap:

Padmini: mujhe vishwaas nahi ho raha jo main dekh rahi hoon...shaayad yeh sab sach ho yaa phir madhu ko apne paas rakhne ki ek zidd...mujhe samajh nahi aa raha...

Trishna : maa madhu kahaan hai? Baahar bhi nahi hai...

Padmini calls madhu...madhu is busy on another call..


ps : i know u guys are desperately waiting for Rk...he'll be back soon...hope u liked this update...do comment if u like it and also if u hated it let me know..i need to know 😊

my hero enters in next update 😳

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

Madhu just checks in the room n sees padmini and trishna still asleep...she just picks up her dupattaa n walks towards the door to leave..just then someone knocks the door...madhu opens the door..

Courier person hand her an envelope and says

Courier person: madam pls sign here..

madhu signs n takes the letter...she opens the letter...the letter contains the following in big, bold and shabby handwriting

vanity van no. MH 02 GJ 5757

--your wellwisher

Chapter 13 - ARJUN DIKSHIT


At The Chawl

madhu checks the backside of the letter

If u wish to know where Rk is then come meet me..

"address. . . . . . . . . . . . . .

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ."

-Arjun dikshit

madhu was stunned to look at it...she picked up her phone and rushed out of the chawl with the letter in her hand...she caught a taxi to the given address...


Arjun Dikshit's House

it was a 2 floored building(bunglow)...it looked old but very well maintained with creepers hanging from the balconies and flower pots lying on the parapets...the place looked very calm and fresh...madhu entered the building and rung the bell...a maid came and opened the door and asked "kaun? Kain chahiye?"

madhu answered "i'm madhu...arjun dikshit..is he here?"

the maid let madhu come in...and a voice came from inside "who is it taai?"

maid answerd "some madhu...she has come to meet you"

and madhu saw a man walking up to where she was sitting and madhu blurted out, "SULTAN"


madhu: what are you doing here?

Sultan: this is my house madhu...my name is Arjun...and Aryan is my son...

Madhu is shocked and she questions in anger "what do you mean to say?and this letter? and where is RK?"

Sultan: 5 years back..when Aryan was 3 years of age, me and araadhna left him with kaka to go somewhere for some work...that time our car was hit by a truck...araadhna was severely injured...i needed money for her treatment...

N he looks at kaka n says..."yeah this suitcase , keep it here...and pack Aryan's suitcase as well"


Madhu : are you going anywhere? WHERE IS RK??


But sultan continues ignoring madhu...


"..so i rented some money from sultan...those days i was an ordinary hawaldar(lowest ranking police)...not anymore...but, because i failed to return the money back on time sultan and his men killed my wife araadhna...since that day i was just waiting..."

Madhu : sultan WHERE IS RK??

Sultan : i told you right not sultani am Arjun...i have killed him..

(here on i will address sultan as arjun)


Arjun: ...encounter specialist...nobody had seen sultan's face but i had...but, at that time i wasn't aware of who he was...as soon as i got the news of him returning from dubai i kidnapped him from outside the airport and killed him...my revenge was over...but, to catch hold of sultan's gang i went there myself in his place...

Madhu: and Aryan??

Arjun : it was necessary to make Aryan prey because i had not seen the faces of others before...but that night at the jungle those men saw you...the night u saved me from the bullet i thank you for that...ever since i met you i have been thinking about you and how u are just like araadhna...but,because you helped me your life fell in danger...thats why i came to stay at the chawl...i knew those men would come there...i made a mistake maybe...i took advantage of your good behaviour and let all this happen in the chawl...sorry madhu...

Madhu just stood up and in anger 'SLAP!!'

Arjun : thats why i made you promise me that u would take care of Aryan..because of Aryan i could easily come to chawl as per my need...

Madhu stares at him in disgust..

Arjun: for your safety it was very important for me to kill all those men who recognised you...3 nights back i killed bhujand...now u r safe...

Madhu : i trusted you and u used me to fulfill your revenge and put everyone's lives in danger? nothing is left now to say or hear...tell me where is Rk? what did you do to him??(madhu is angry but also scared)

Arjun : i set you free of that promise u made to me about Aryan...i'm going away from this violent life forever to start a new life...if possible forgive me and forget me...thank u for taking care of aryan when i was missing...i have a flight to catch in three hours...have to leave now...

(Arjun's back is turned towards madhu) it was very important for me to meet you...was important to tell you the truth...madhu that day i had come to stop the wedding because i got to know that you maybe in danger...but, when i reached there u had left...i had seen rk's vanity van...so i thought this number might be important for you...i dont know where Rk is...

Madhu walks in front of Arjun holds his collar and yells "WHAT KIND OF A SELFISH PERSON ARE YOU?WHEN U DIDN'T KNOW THEN WHY DID YOU WASTE MY TIME?WITH SO MUCH FAITH I HAD COME HERE..THINKING I WILL FIND RK NOW! (madhu in tears...arjun tries to calm her down by putting his hand on her shoulder but madhu puts off his hands in anger and runs out of there)


In The Taxi

Madhu was very shattered and heartbroken as she left from there...she came in hopes to find Rk but, it was all good for nothing and then..then this lie that had been told to her for days...she did not want to think about good or bad..all she knew was that she felt cheated...once again her trust was broken...everything around her seemed a lie...she didn't know what to do...she just couldn't think...she headed towards siddhi-vinayak temple to find some peace and to pray for Rk's safety and to meet him soon...


In The Temple

Soon she reached the temple...she walked towards the temple and after praying she just went and sat in a corner...just then her toe hit something...it was Rk's finger ring...she picked it up and considered it as a good sign for the future...


Precap:

Padmini: i cannot believe my eyes...maybe all this is the truth or just a stubborn wish to keep madhu close...i can't understand...

Trishna : maa where is madhu?she isn't outside even...

Padmini calls madhu...madhu is busy on another call..


ps : i know u guys are desperately waiting for Rk...he'll be back soon...hope u liked this update...do comment if u like it and also if u hated it let me know..i need to know 😊

my hero enters in next update 😳

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey hiya now sultan is not sultan actually..he is arjun..awesome..i was stunned..umm now i want rk to come back..have enough rona dhona..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smitakundra

Hey hiya now sultan is not sultan actually..he is arjun..awesome..i was stunned..umm now i want rk to come back..have enough rona dhona..


thanks!😳
rk wil come...nxt update 😉

u r forgetting...he is arjun or sultan or watever...he is no more in this FF! 😳😆
Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thnx u packed bhai's bag. But y 1 slap? No hurry in rk's return. Let madhu cry 4 smetme n let rk repent 4 smetime.
Gud one.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: masan1


Thnx u packed bhai's bag. But y 1 slap? No hurry in rk's return. Let madhu cry 4 smetme n let rk repent 4 smetime.
Gud one.


haha! i cudn't have him in the story anymore...not required 😆
one slap he is not as imp as Rk 😉
rk will not enter literally...just...cant disclose😉
thanks a lot! 😳

one whole update for bhai...i'm expecting to get horrible reviews 😆
but,important to pack him n put him aside..
Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hii Hiya 🤗
mast update, awsm twist wid Bhai n thx sending him out..poor Madhu again her trust gt broken ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg wat a twist... i cant believe... interesting... nice update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh so Sultan is arjun...? N loved it when Madhu slapped him (hope this happens in the serial too) 😆 n yes eagerly waiting for RK... Thanx for the PM... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally ye Bhai gaya😆. Ab theek hai bas RK aa jaaye.😊

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