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Posted: 12 years ago

ENGLISH VERSION

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

panditji says "Fifth phera"...Rk stops...

Chapter 9 - THE FATE


At the Wedding Venue

Panchva phera...Rk stops...panditji says, "now the girl will walk ahead of the guy" n he starts his chants..

By now rk is almost in tears...madhu moves ahead crosses rk and glancing at him she moves ahead n stops coz she sees rk frozen at one place...then rk says a guilt filled "sorry"...but madhu doesn't glance back...instead she moves ahead saying...

Madhu : fifth phera...

I promise to love and cherish you for as long as I love. Your happiness is my happiness, and your sorrow is my sorrow. I will trust and honour you, and will strive to fulfill all your wishes.

... (rk follows)


Rk is still in shock...he's only staring at madhu from behind n walking behind...

Panditji : "sixth phera" n he continues his chants..

Madhu : I will always be by your side... (rk follows)

Panditji : "seventh phera" n he continues his chants..

Madhu : As God is witness, I am now your wife. We will love, honour and cherish each other forever... (rk follows)

Panditji : pheras are done...now tie the mangalsutra around her neck(looking at rk)


Rk takes it from panditji n turns towards madhu still trying to register what had happened...n he ties the mangalsutra around madhu's neck staring at her with pain filled eyes...

Rishbala eyelock...madhu stares with concern...but, rk breaks the eyelock feeling awkward n looks back at panditji...panditji hands over the sindoor(vermillion) to him...he takes it n fills it in on madhu head...


Panditji : marriage is complete...u r husband and wife from now onwards..

Madhu : thank u (at panditji)


N panditlji leaves from there...

Rk holds madhu's shoulders with both hand and speaks in an angry tone..


Rk : y did u marry me?

Madhu : because i love u

Rk : madhu u very well know what i am asking u...y did u marry me?

Madhu : when u knew about it, y didnt u stop me?

Rk : i tried...then i thought...

Madhu : thought that your love love is weak ...that i have the right to hurt you...that u deserve this hurt...right rk?

Rk : isnt this the truth? then why?

Madhu : i had over-heard u that day when u wer saying...


(Rk is a little taken aback..but, madhu continues)

(Flashback) (ps: refer end of ch6)

Rk enters the room...madhu has slept...dinner is untouched...rk walks out of the room in frustration...

After a couple of hours madhu wakes up n sees rk missing from the room...she gets up to chk the washroom but, he's not there...she chks the entertainment room..he's not there...she chks the bar...he's not there...she goes to rk's painting room...there he is...

Rk was sitting on his dad's chair n drinking... staring at his dad's photo in his wallet and he spoke..

Rk : dad, why did i do this? was my love so weak that i couldn't tell her?

(And he takes another sip from the bottle)

and she...why doesn't she understand that this revenge burnt me n i dont wish she go through the same...what do i do? how do i stop her? or maybe...maybe my stopping her is not right? she has the right to hurt me same...i deserve this...say dad...

He gets up n moves towards the sculpture of madhu that was made by him n stares at it saying "ji will have to live without you when u leave me n go away..."

Madhu is in tears n she runs back to the room...

(end of flashback)


Its almost morning now..

[Here onwards all of rk's dialogues are in expressions of 'guilt+pain+anger' and all of madhu's are with 'pain+concern']


Madhu : i heard all that...i cant see you like that...it hurts me...

Rk: go away...i cant do this anymore...

Madhu: we're married...i'm your wife...u said i'm only yours...

Rk: GO AWAY...

Madhu : u still can't trust me?

Rk : why do you love me so much? Hmm..? say?

Madhu : why do u want me to go away?

Rk : u wanted to leave everything and go away was a lie right...?


Madhu left from there in disgust...

Rk goes in his vanity van that is present at the marriage venue and picks up a bottle of whisky n starts drinking...

Meanwhile sultan enters the wedding venue...

Precap : no precap

Spoiler : rk goes missing


ps : i hope u like this update (pls don't hate me for this update...😕)

also tell me do you want me to continue?

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

note : sry for the late update today was really busy...and tomorrow is saturday so there will not be any update tomorrow...


thanks guys! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

revenge le leti toh zyada maza ata

phir baad me reunion bhi ho jata
khair nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zariya123

revenge le leti toh zyada maza ata

phir baad me reunion bhi ho jata
khair nice update


madhu rk nahi hai naa...kaise revenge le leti...😆

thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really nice update. My like button shows error. I like the udate. Can't wait to read the next part. Why did he ask her to go away?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Really nice update. My like button shows error. I like the udate. Can't wait to read the next part. Why did he ask her to go away?


well that only rk knows so he'll reveal it once he's found maybe...😉

glad u liked the update...i thought ppl will bash me 😆

btw ur like button is wrking fine 😊👍🏼
Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
DINT EXPECT DAT THEY WILL GET MARRIED..
BUT WHY MADHU LEFT & RK MISSING...

SOUNDS INTERESTING...
WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_sri

DINT EXPECT DAT THEY WILL GET MARRIED..

BUT WHY MADHU LEFT & RK MISSING...

SOUNDS INTERESTING...
WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE...


thanks!! 😊
happy u liked it...rk and madhu will answer ur questions once rk is found i guess 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hia just awesome..awesome...i really loved this part tooo muuuch..oh too good..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smitakundra

Hia just awesome..awesome...i really loved this part tooo muuuch..oh too good..


oh i soo love u for this comment!!😳😊
i was wondering kya reactions honge...glad u loved it🤗...dialogues for this part took a lot of time as well 😆

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