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Posted: 12 years ago
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Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

Rk: biwi khanaa aa chukka hai...

(he says...looking at the tray of food lying outside their door)

N he walks out of the room..

Madhu burst out in tears...all that she was holding onto since so long...she laid down on the bed...put on the blanket and went off to sleep...


Chapter 3 - RISHBALA SPECIAL

Rk enters the room after sometime...he sees the food tray untouched n gets frustrated. He feels guilty thinking she didn't eat because he didn't eat...he goes to his side of the bed and lies down staring at madhu sleeping n a smile comes on his face...but it doesn't stay long he feels pinched when he sees dried tears on her cheeks...he slowly extends his hand towards her n moves the hair from her face n bends a little to kiss her forehead.


Next day morning

Rk wakes up n sees madhu walking in from the door with breakfast tray...madhu reaches the bed n keeps the tray down...rk gets up and grabs her hand and pulls her saying..


Rk: tumne khaana kyu nahi khayaa?

Madhu: tumne kyu nahi khaaya rk?

Rk: sawaal mera tha! Jaanti ho maa se kehkar khaas tumhaare liye banwaya tha..

Madhu: sorry rk mujhe bohot neend aa rahi thi...tabyat thik nahi lag rahi thi...


Rk puts his hand on madhu's forehead instantly n asks...


Rk: tabyat..madhu kya hua? Kya hua...tum baith jao...main doctor ko bulaata hoon..

Madhu: rk...rk main thik hoon

Rk: madhu mujhe vishwaas nahi ho raha hai ki 1 hafte mein humaari shaadi hai


(And rk pulls madhu close by holding on to her waist...

Rk thinking about last night...)


Rk : Madhu tum sab-kuch chodkar kyu jaana chahti ho?Ab toh main tum par vishwaas karta hoon...aur logo par bhi...phir kyu? Yeh sab kuch chodne ki zidd kyu?

Madhu: kya tum darr rahe ho rk? Yeh soch kar Ki main agar tumhe chod ke chali gayi toh?

Rk: nahi madhu...mujhe tum par pura vishwaas hai..tum mujhe dhoka nahi de sakti..

Madhu: rk chodo bhi ab mujhe...jaana hai...maa bula rahi hai kitchen mein..

Rk: biwi aaj shaam tayiyaar rehna..hume kahin jaana hai..

(N saying that rk removes his hand from her waist)

Madhu : kahan rk?


Bittuji enters the room


Bittuji: chief...aadhe ghante mein shooting hai...

Rk: main aa raha hoon...


Rk heads to the washroom...


In the kitchen

Deepali: madhu itni bhi kya tadap hai jo itni be-izzati ke baad bhi tum yahaan reh rahi ho?

Madhu: aadat dal do deepali...ab main yahin hoon...main aur rk shaadi kar rahe hai..

Deepali: what! Rk ka dimaag kharaab ho gaya hai...usse dikhaayi kyu nahi deta! (and she bangs her fist on the kitchen platform)


Radha enters the kitchen


Madhu: maa mein dal-chaawal bana rahi hoon aur...

Radha: madhu, tum rishu ke paas lauti uske liye shukriya beta...usne tumhe kaise manaya?Kya usne maafi mangi apne kiye ki?

Madhu: maa usne kaha ki wo mujhse pyaar karta hai...

Radha: (smiles n says) main bohot khush hoon...hey ganpati bappa


Madhu lowers her eyelids feeling angry thinking about rk's behaviour at the party and the unwedding day...she leaves the kitchen..

Rk's bedroom

(In the evening)

Rk enters the room yelling "biwi! Biwi!"

Madhu is cleaning some frames n keeping some clothes in place


Rk comes close to madhu...holds her by the shoulder and yells at her "ho kya gaya hai tumhe? Kabse bula raha hoon...par tum jawab bhi nahi de sakti..."

Madhu : sorry woh mera dhyaan nahi tha..

Rk: aur yeh (pointing his hand at her)...maine tumse kaha tha ready rehna...

Madhu : rk hum jaa kahaan rahe hain?

Rk: biwi 10 min mein gaadi mein aa jao..main wait karunga..


Rk walks out of the room picking up his jacket on the way out


Precap:

Rk: biwi, ab shaadi kar rahe hain toh yeh zaruri hai naa...



Ps: if u r commenting pls mention which version u like (hindi/english) i m curious to know😳

likes, comments,suggestions are welcome😊

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ENGLISH VERSION

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

Rk: biwi, dinner has arrived...

(he says...looking at the tray of food lying outside their door)

N he walks out of the room..

Madhu burst out in tears...all that she was holding onto since so long...she laid down on the bed...put on the blanket and went off to sleep...


Chapter 3 - RISHBALA SPECIAL

Rk enters the room after sometime...he sees the food tray untouched n gets frustrated. He feels guilty thinking she didn't eat because he didn't eat...he goes to his side of the bed and lies down staring at madhu sleeping n a smile comes on his face...but it doesn't stay long he feels pinched when he sees dried tears on her cheeks...he slowly extends his hand towards her n moves the hair from her face n bends a little to kiss her forehead.


Next day morning

Rk wakes up n sees madhu walking in from the door with breakfast tray...madhu reaches the bed n keeps the tray down...rk gets up and grabs her hand and pulls her saying..


Rk: why didn't u have dinner?

Madhu: why didn't u have rk?

Rk: question was mine! do u know i specially told mom n got it made for you..

Madhu: sorry rk i was sleepy...was not feeling well...


Rk puts his hand on madhu's forehead instantly n asks...


Rk: not well..madhu what happened? what happened...u just sit...i'll call the doctor..

Madhu: rk...rk i am fine!

Rk: madhu i dont believe we're getting married in a week...

(And rk pulls madhu close by holding on to her waist...

Rk thinking about last night...)


Rk : Madhu why do u want to leave everything and go?now i even believe u...and believe people...then why? why this stubborn wish to leave everything?

Madhu: r u scared rk? r u thinking i will leave u and go away?

Rk: no madhu...i trust u...u can never ditch me..

Madhu: rk leave me now...i hav to go...mom is calling me in the kitchen...

Rk: biwi be ready today evening...we have to go somewhere...

(N saying that rk removes his hand from her waist)

Madhu : where rk?


Bittuji enters the room


Bittuji: chief...u have to go for shoot in 30 mins...

Rk: i'm coming...


Rk heads to the washroom...


In the kitchen

Deepali: madhu what is this desperation that u are staying here inspite of being insulted so much?

Madhu: get habituated to this deepali...now i will be here...me and rk are getting married...

Deepali: what! Rk has lost it!!...why can't he see?! (and she bangs her fist on the kitchen platform)


Radha enters the kitchen


Madhu: mom i'm making dal-rice and...

Radha: madhu,u returned to rishu for that thank u dear...how did he convince u?did he ask for forgiveness of his doings?

Madhu: mom he said that he loves me...

Radha: (smiles n says) i am very happy...hey ganpati bappa


Madhu lowers her eyelids feeling angry thinking about rk's behaviour at the party and the unwedding day...she leaves the kitchen..

Rk's bedroom

(In the evening)

Rk enters the room yelling "biwi! Biwi!"

Madhu is cleaning some frames n keeping some clothes in place


Rk comes close to madhu...holds her by the shoulder and yells at her "what's wrong with u? i'm calling u since so long...but, u just cant answer back..."

Madhu : sorry i was lost...

Rk: and this (pointing his hand at her)...i had told you be ready...

Madhu : rk where r v going?

Rk: biwi 10 mins...come to the car..i'll be waiting..


Rk walks out of the room picking up his jacket on the way out


Precap:

Rk: biwi, since we r marrying, this is necessary...



Ps: if u r commenting pls mention which version u like (hindi/english) i m curious to know😳

likes, comments,suggestions are welcome😊

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
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Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

madhu is revenging or rk???????

rk is being sweet but he deserves betrayal.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zariya123

madhu is revenging or rk???????

rk is being sweet but he deserves betrayal.


i suggest that u read the beginning of this part again maybe, u'll know...😉

thanks for commenting 😊
Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry buddy my like button not working. concept is nice.thats very nice of u if u update daily. im okay wid both versions. i think it wud b mtime consuming for u to give update in both versions. very good. keep up d good work.atlwast ss n ff r much better than our show at present.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: gurudrishti

sorry buddy my like button not working. concept is nice.thats very nice of u if u update daily. im okay wid both versions. i think it wud b mtime consuming for u to give update in both versions. very good. keep up d good work.atlwast ss n ff r much better than our show at present.


hey thanks a lot! 😊
ya its a lil time consuming...but il try always...i'l not stop the hindi version in case i fall short on time..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: taraka2005

pls cont. nyc update 😊


thanks yaar! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oye awesome update..waiting for next one..and congrats on being goldie..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: smitakundra

Oye awesome update..waiting for next one..and congrats on being goldie..


thank u! 😊

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