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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alexrock

Nice update
Really like the song


thanks!
glad u liked the song 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Zoyal

wonderful update!!!! 😃


thanks!!😊

i like ur dp btw 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: war_is_peace



<font size="2" color="#990000">thanks a lot komal!!😳</font>
<font size="2" color="#990000">it means a lot😊</font>
<font size="2" color="#990000">i know its a little emotional...sorry if it made u mad😆</font>
<font size="2" color="#990000">sultan was of no use to me..so carefully scraped him out😆</font>
<font size="2" color="#990000">u like the precap wich i not there😆👍🏼🤣</font>

<font size="2" color="#990000">will update soon n will pm u for sure😊</font>

<font color="#990000" size="2">many ppl requested for translation n i cant say no...so had to make it in 2 versions😊</font>
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<font color="#990000" size="2">wich one u read btw?</font>



I read the English version 😊

And glad you got rid of the kabab mein haddi early!
Do update soon! Looking forward to the next update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks sanaammu! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

chk dis place in a while 😊
i'll pm u anyway 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"

Recap:

Rk : main tumhein zabardasti ghar le aaya...madhu shaayad tumne yeh shaadi khud ko khudki nazron mein begunaah saabit karne ke liye ki...waqt dena chahta tumhein...sochne ke liye ki kya tumne dil se mujhe maaf kiya...ya phir sirf ek kamzor pal ki wajah se...


Madhu hugs Rk saying "Rk main wo sab bhula chuki hoon..." Rk hugs her back...


Rk removes his phone from his pocket and switches it on and calls "rajesh gaadi lekar sitaara studio pohocho...abhi"


(the rain has stopped outside...it is cold...its almost 5 am...)


Rk hangs up on the phone and dizzly walks towards the couch...madhu runs to hold him...n they sit on the couch...Rk's breathing becomes loud...he feels breathless...madhu is shocked...


Chapter 17 - NEW BEGINNINGS

Inside Sitaara Studio

Rk hangs up on the phone and dizzly walks towards the couch...madhu runs to hold him...n they sit on the couch...Rk's breathing becomes loud...he feels breathless...madhu is shocked...she holds his face n says..


Madhu: rk...rk kya hua? (in shock...tears rolling down her eyes)


Rk just motions his hand to madhu in a way to say 'its nothing' n he tries to get up...madhu helps him get up...slowly they walk towards the door while madhu tightly holds on to rk's arm...when they reach the door...rk turns his head back to have a look at the place before leaving...madhu looks at him with concern...and they start moving out of the studio towards the vanity van...as soon as they reach the gate rk feels breathless again...they pause...


Madhu : rk..(with a question mark on her face)


Rk just avoids madhu's question and walks ahead...madhu walks along...they reach the vanity van and this time in the early morning light she witnesses the broken glass of the vanity...


In The Vanity Van

they enter the vanity van and Rk sits on the seat while madhu is about to go towards the counter when rk pulls her by her hand..


Rk : biiwiii ! shuru ho gaya tumhaara nurse ban-na ?

Madhu : rk mazaak karne ka bhi koi waqt hota hai ! (angrily)

Rk : biwi relax ! zinda hoon main abhi...tumhein dekhke saanse ruk gayi thi!

N she jerks her hand freeing it from rk and moves towards the counter to get a glass of water for him...she gives him the glass when rk's phone rings...madhu snatches the phone from his hand and answers...


Bittuji : cheif aap thik hain? Mujhe abhi abhi raaajesh ne bataaya

Madhu : bittuji...

Bittuji : bhabhiji ?

Madhu : bittuji...main aur aapke cheif thik hain

Bittuji : bhabhiji...main studio ke paas pohoch raha hoon..

Madhu : bittuji rajesh gaadi lekar aa raha hai...aap bas maa ka khyaal rakhiye (call ends)


Rk snatches the phone from madhu's hands and calls rajesh..before rk could speak

"cheif gaadi studio ke baahar khadi hai"

Rk : haan thik hai..hum aa rahe hain...


In The Car

Rk and madhu get out of the vanity van and sit in the car's back seat...rajesh starts driving when rk says, "chawl chalo"

Madhu stares at rk with a confused look...but, immediately speaks, "hum rk mansion jaa rahe hain rk...chawl nahi...tumhaari tabiyat bhi thik nahi hai"

Rk : main thik hoon biwi..kaha naa maine tumse...hum chawl jaa rahe hain..final

Madhu : Rk...wo...woh vanity ka tutaa hua sheehsa?...tumhaari yeh chot (pointing at his right shoulder)

Rk : madhu woh...woh mujhe yaad nahi...

Madhu : tum kahaan thhe Rk?


Rk was drunk and soon unconscious...he woke up suddenly after a couple of hours with sweat on his forehead and back...he raised his right arm to wipe it off and felt acute pain...he turned around his head and noticed the the cut on the side of his right shoulder...there was a small piece of glass which had pierced him and was stuck in...he tried to remove the glass piece with his left hand slowly...it was painful...as soon as he removed it blood started flowing out...he ran to the cabinet and grabbed a tie to wind it around his wound...after a little while he changed into shirt and jeans and lay on the seat for a while...it was late evening almost...he went to the driver's seat and started driving the van towards the main road with his arm still aching and the headache due to alcohol...he wanted to go home...but he didn't feel like facing his mom right now...he just wanted sometime off...he felt lost...the thought of losing madhu took over him...he could not resist...a lone tear slid off his eyes...he wondered if she would return after him asking her again to leave...he felt lonely...it was getting dark...he slowly started driving but his headache didn't allow him to focus...he just stopped the vanity van...went to the counter and sipped water...he went to the cabinet and removed a dupatta and just stared at it remembering his marriage with madhu...kneeling down he rested his head on the cabinet door thinking about the pain he had caused to his madhu...a part of him was happy to let her go and a part of him was in pain that she left...after a while he started driving again...but, he stopped when he saw siddhivinayak temple...he tied the dupatta around his head to ease the headache and then walked out of the vanity towards the temple...the temple was shut...he woke up the watchman and asked him to open the gate...the watchman refused initially but agreed when he saw it was rk...rk gave him some money to hide the fact that he had been here...the watchman agreed...

The temple was dark with almost all the lights out except for some diyas lit up that made the ambience very peaceful...rk sat in a corner...he was tired of all the mess...resting his head on the wall behind and lost in thoughts he fell asleep... 'ting! Ting! Ting ! ting' the 4 am aarti woke him up...he got up n went towards the deity..took blessings and had the prasad and quickly slid out of the temple...


Madhu : Rk ?

N rk snapped out of his thoughts...madhu was holding his father's ring in front of his eyes...rk checked his hands to realise it was his ring...

Rk : madhu yeh tumhe kahaan mili?

Madhu : siddhivinayak

Madhu tells rk where all she had been (skipping the arjun dikshit part) and they continue the talk...

...

...

Rk : aur phir wahan se nikal kar main yahaan...studio par...lekin andar jaane ki himmat nahi thi...aur phir kal raat pata nahi kaise mujhe laga ki tum aas-paas ho...

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Rajesh stopped the car...


At The Chawl

Madhu and rk reached the chawl knocked the door...madhu bent down to pick up the ring that fell off her hand by mistake...


Padmini : RK! MADHU KAHAN HAI?

Madhu : maa... (Coming out from behind Rk)

Padmini : madhu tu thik hai naa? Raat bhar ek phone karna zaroori nahi samjha?

Rk looks at madhu in "what to say" kind of expression

Madhu : maa main thik hoon...main karne waali thi phone lekin...(rk cuts her midway)

Rk : maa hum andar aa sakte hain?

And rk grabs madhu's hand and just walks in closing the door behind


To everyone's surprise rk enters the kitchen...he picks up a vessel and pours water in it and puts it on the stove...

Padmini, trishna and madhu are just staring...when madhu speaks "rk tum kya kar rahe ho?"


Rk : SHH (showing her his raised hand hinting to not interrupt)


He turns and looks around a little and picks up the spices containing jars...puts in half a spoon of turmeric powder and ginger powder in boiling water...and then opens the fridge...takes out a bottle of honey and pours a little in the vessel...pours the mix in a cup and walks to madhu...


Rk : lo biwi ! isse pee lo...(Madhu stares at him bewildered...) ab ghuur kyu rahi ho...tumhe pata hi hai naa... yeh gunpowder,zeher aur drug ka kadha hai...


Padmini was still trying to understand ("kar kya raha hai yeh ladka")

Trishna was smiling and enjoying looking at both rk and madhu..


Padmini : Rk tum...(and rk cuts her)

Rk : (turning to face padmini) trishna se waada kiya tha maine ki shaadi ke baad madhu ko lekar aaunga aapse aashirwad lene ke liye...

Maa main maafi maangta hoon maine jo kiya madhu ke saath...aap sabke saath kiya...lekin mera aapse waada hai ki main madhu ko hamesha khush rakhoonga...usse kabhi kisi cheez ki takleef nahi hone doonga...


And he bends down to take blessings...

Madhu gets up to join him...

Padmini initially hesitates but, smiles and gives in...she keeps her hand on both of their heads with relief...


Trishna : madhu, mera aashirwad? (smiling at her)

Madhu and rk walk to trishna...madhu hugs trishna

Trishna : pair chuo rk...(just joking manner)

Madhu just pats trishna's shoulder hinting to stop pestering rk...but, to madhu's and trishna's surprise...rk says "thank u" and bends...while trishna stops him midway...they smile..

after a minute...

Rk : chalo madhu..

And saying this rk opens the door and he almost runs to the car...


Precap:

doctor : aapko 2 dinn rest ki zaroorat hai...

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"

Recap:

Rk : i brought u home without your wishes...madhu maybe you married me to prove yourself innocent in your own eyes...i wanted to give you time...to think if u have truly forgiven me...or was it only a decision taken in a weak moment...

Madhu hugs Rk saying "Rk i have forgotten all that..." Rk hugs her back...


Rk removes his phone from his pocket and switches it on and calls "rajesh ghet into the car and reach sitaara studio...now"


(the rain has stopped outside...it is cold...its almost 5 am...)


Rk hangs up on the phone and dizzly walks towards the couch...madhu runs to hold him...n they sit on the couch...Rk's breathing becomes loud...he feels breathless...madhu is shocked...

Chapter 17 - NEW BEGINNINGS

Inside Sitaara Studio

Rk hangs up on the phone and dizzly walks towards the couch...madhu runs to hold him...n they sit on the couch...Rk's breathing becomes loud...he feels breathless...madhu is shocked...she holds his face n says..


Madhu: rk...rk what happened? (in shock...tears rolling down her eyes)


Rk just motions his hand to madhu in a way to say 'its nothing' n he tries to get up...madhu helps him get up...slowly they walk towards the door while madhu tightly holds on to rk's arm...when they reach the door...rk turns his head back to have a look at the place before leaving...madhu looks at him with concern...and they start moving out of the studio towards the vanity van...as soon as they reach the gate rk feels breathless again...they pause...


Madhu : rk..(with a question mark on her face)


Rk just avoids madhu's question and walks ahead...madhu walks along...they reach the vanity van and this time in the early morning light she witnesses the broken glass of the vanity...


In The Vanity Van

they enter the vanity van and Rk sits on the seat while madhu is about to go towards the counter when rk pulls her by her hand..


Rk : biiwiii ! strated with ur nurse behaviour?

Madhu : rk there's a time to joke around ! (angrily)

Rk : biwi relax ! i am still alive...seeing u my breathing had stopped!

N she jerks her hand freeing it from rk and moves towards the counter to get a glass of water for him...she gives him the glass when rk's phone rings...madhu snatches the phone from his hand and answers...


Bittuji : cheif are you ok? i got to know from raajesh just now

Madhu : bittuji...

Bittuji : bhabhiji ?

Madhu : bittuji...me and your chief are fine

Bittuji : bhabhiji...i am reaching the studio...

Madhu : bittuji rajesh is getting the car...you just stay home and take care of maa(call ends)


Rk snatches the phone from madhu's hands and calls rajesh..before rk could speak

"cheif car is waiting outside the studio"

Rk : yaa ok...we are coming...


In The Car

Rk and madhu get out of the vanity van and sit in the car's back seat...rajesh starts driving when rk says, "to chawl"

Madhu stares at rk with a confused look...but, immediately speaks, "we are going to rk mansion...not chawl...u are not well even"

Rk : i am fine biwi...i told you...we are going to the chawl..final

Madhu : Rk...that...that broken glass of the vanity?...and this injury (pointing at his right shoulder)

Rk : madhu umm...umm i dont remember...

Madhu : where were you Rk?


Rk was drunk and soon unconscious...he woke up suddenly after a couple of hours with sweat on his forehead and back...he raised his right arm to wipe it off and felt acute pain...he turned around his head and noticed the the cut on the side of his right shoulder...there was a small piece of glass which had pierced him and was stuck in...he tried to remove the glass piece with his left hand slowly...it was painful...as soon as he removed it blood started flowing out...he ran to the cabinet and grabbed a tie to wind it around his wound...after a little while he changed into shirt and jeans and lay on the seat for a while...it was late evening almost...he went to the driver's seat and started driving the van towards the main road with his arm still aching and the headache due to alcohol...he wanted to go home...but he didn't feel like facing his mom right now...he just wanted sometime off...he felt lost...the thought of losing madhu took over him...he could not resist...a lone tear slid off his eyes...he wondered if she would return after him asking her again to leave...he felt lonely...it was getting dark...he slowly started driving but his headache didn't allow him to focus...he just stopped the vanity van...went to the counter and sipped water...he went to the cabinet and removed a dupatta and just stared at it remembering his marriage with madhu...kneeling down he rested his head on the cabinet door thinking about the pain he had caused to his madhu...a part of him was happy to let her go and a part of him was in pain that she left...after a while he started driving again...but, he stopped when he saw siddhivinayak temple...he tied the dupatta around his head to ease the headache and then walked out of the vanity towards the temple...the temple was shut...he woke up the watchman and asked him to open the gate...the watchman refused initially but agreed when he saw it was rk...rk gave him some money to hide the fact that he had been here...the watchman agreed...

The temple was dark with almost all the lights out except for some diyas lit up that made the ambience very peaceful...rk sat in a corner...he was tired of all the mess...resting his head on the wall behind and lost in thoughts he fell asleep... 'ting! Ting! Ting ! ting' the 4 am aarti woke him up...he got up n went towards the deity..took blessings and had the prasad and quickly slid out of the temple...


Madhu : Rk ?

N rk snapped out of his thoughts...madhu was holding his father's ring in front of his eyes...rk checked his hands to realise it was his ring...

Rk : madhu where did you find this?

Madhu : siddhivinayak

Madhu tells rk where all she had been (skipping the arjun dikshit part) and they continue the talk...

...

...

Rk : and then i left from there and here...at the studio...but, didn't have courage to enter inside...and then yesterday night i dont know how i felt your presence around...

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Rajesh stopped the car...they had reached the chawl..


At The Chawl

Madhu and rk reached the chawl knocked the door...madhu bent down to pick up the ring that fell off her hand by mistake...


Padmini : RK! WHERE IS MADHU?

Madhu : maa... (Coming out from behind Rk)

Padmini : madhu are you alright? all night you didnt find it important to call even once?

Rk looks at madhu in "what to say" kind of expression

Madhu : maa i am fine...i was going to call but,...(rk cuts her midway)

Rk : maa can we come in?

And rk grabs madhu's hand and just walks in closing the door behind


To everyone's surprise rk enters the kitchen...he picks up a vessel and pours water in it and puts it on the stove...

Padmini, trishna and madhu are just staring...when madhu speaks "rk what are you doing?"


Rk : SHH (showing her his raised hand hinting to not interrupt)


He turns and looks around a little and picks up the spices containing jars...puts in half a spoon of turmeric powder and ginger powder in boiling water...and then opens the fridge...takes out a bottle of honey and pours a little in the vessel...pours the mix in a cup and walks to madhu...


Rk : take biwi ! drink this...(Madhu stares at him bewildered...) now why are you staring...you already know...this is a tonic made with gunpowder,zeher aur drug


Padmini was still trying to understand ("what is this boy upto?")

Trishna was smiling and enjoying looking at both rk and madhu..


Padmini : Rk you...(and rk cuts her)

Rk : (turning to face padmini) i had promised trishna to get madhu here after our wedding and take your blessing...

Maa i am sorry for whatever i did with madhu...with all of you...but, i promise you that i will always keep madhu happy...i will not let her feel hurt ever...

And he bends down to take blessings...

Madhu gets up to join him...

Padmini initially hesitates but, smiles and gives in...she keeps her hand on both of their heads with relief...


Trishna : madhu, my blessings? (smiling at her)

Madhu and rk walk to trishna...madhu hugs trishna

Trishna : touch my feet rk...(just joking manner)

Madhu just pats trishna's shoulder hinting to stop pestering rk...but, to madhu's and trishna's surprise...rk says "thank u" and bends...while trishna stops him midway...they smile..

after a minute...

Rk : lets go madhu..

And saying this rk opens the door and he almost runs to the car...


Precap:

doctor : you need 2 days of rest...

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome Rk
Finally they are happy together and padmini also forgive him
Loving new Rk who cares
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Posted: 12 years ago
Felt nice reading the update ... it was amazing ...even though RK is hurt he is only concerned for Madhu 😊 n the best part was the precap ... 😳 Thanx for the PM... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
RK is so lovely yaar ... nice update...pls cont. soon...

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