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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zariya123

waht was this?????????/


😆 😆 😆 sorry dear if i scared u...but, it was necessary
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks dear! will try and update soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shinseen

Prologue parety hi same thought aying in my Mind
jhatka hai yeh
ya update ki prepration hai😆


yeh meri darawne avtar ki sign hai...sabr ka phal nxt update hota hai 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samwllms

i m confused after reading the updt...maybe nxt chap will clear everything...do pm...


sorry dear mext chapter wont clear everything...but, i hope u like the further story 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks a lot 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maria090

Awesome update😳
but mere RK ko kush huwa tu tumere khar nahi 😡😆


thanks a lot maria 😳

another dhamki! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: memad

m confused with chap 21 prologue.. pls update chapter soon


sorry dear...will try n update fast 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sp110

superb prologue.. arousing interest for further


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alonsomania

Just started reading it and just one word "wooow",really the dialogues are amazing😳. keep it up.. and keep writing these amazing dialogues and scenes.. i actually could see the scenes in front of my eyes..👏


thanks a lot dear firstly for reading it and commenting...also, u could imagine the scenes makes me happy beyond limits 😳 😊😭 😳
m curious to know where u hav reached...pls gimme feed back on all chapters if u can 😳 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

and then rolled her in, such that her hand rested on his shoulder while her head rested on his chest...and they pulled in for a hug...

Main toh bas teri chahat mein

Chahoon rehna sada

Main toh bas teri qurbat mein

Chahoon rehna sada

Saya bhi tera mein

Hone na doon juda..

Maine..tay kar liya

"chief" and Rk and madhu pulled out of the hug just in time...

Bittuji came in searching for Rk...


Rk : kya hai bittuji (in a little disappointment)

Bittuji : chief aaj aapko woh rishi se milna hai...woh naya story-writer,director...

Madhu : bittuji aapke chief ko kisine nahi milna...unhe rest karne ke orders hain...(looking at rk) Rk tum kahin nahi jaa rahe...

Rk : bittuji ek kaam kijiye usse ghar hi bula lijiye...khush?(at madhu)


Madhu nods her head to say yes..

Bittuji : ok chief... (he exits)


Madhu : Rk..

Rk : shhh...holding her from behind...biwi, mujhe decide karne do, Spain yaa Italy..


Chapter 21 - THE FILM!


At chawl

Trishna: maa kal ek film ke liye audition hai (while reading the newspaper)

Padmini : kiski film hai trishna? (while making lunch)

Trishna : pata nahi maa...koi naya director hai shayad theatre se hai..

Padmini : aur iss baar bhi agar yeh film nahi mili toh?

Trishna : aap se toh baat karna hi bekaar hai, aap chahti hi nahi ki mujhe..

Padmini : trishna kab tak? Aage ka kuch socha hai tuune kabhi? Aur shaadi?

Trishna : maa please...yeh mera sapna hai bachpan se..aap janti hain..

Padmini : jaanti hoon lekin main nahi chahti ki tu bhi roma ki tarah...waada kar ki yeh aakhri koshish...aur tu aage ke baare mein sochegi iske baad...

Trishna : jaane do maa aap nahi samjhogi..

Padmini : trishna wadaa...nahi toh aajse main teri maa nahi...

Trishna just walks out to roma's room and shuts the door behind in anger , frustration and helplessness...

At Rk mansion


In The Bedroom

Madhu is cutting fruits into a plate while sitting on the bed...Rk enters the room and sits on the bed besides madhu...he picks up a slice and starts eating...


Madhu : aa gaye?

Rk : nahi biwi iss apple ne awaaz di toh mujhe aana pada (showing her the slice of apple in his hand)

Madhu : ho gaya?

Rk : madhu main sirf bittuji se baat kar raha tha...itna miss kiya mujhe?

Madhu : nahi bas yeh dawaayi aur apple miss kar rahe thhe tumhein patidev!

Rk : acchaa? Chalo ab apple kha liya maine...aur yeh dawaa bhi(having the medicine in a gulp)...ab jaoon?

Madhu gets up and walks up to the wardrobe...Rk gets up too and walks up to madhu...he holds her shoulder and turns her towards him...he signals her to wait with his hand gesture and opens his cupboard...

Rk : biwi inn dono mein se kaunsa pehnu parso reception party mein? (he removes two suits)

Madhu looks at him in frustration and amazement...

Rk: biwi, tumse baat kar raha hoon...aur main saamne hoon wahaan zamein par nahi...ab kaho in dono mein se kaunsa suit?

Madhu : kuch bhi pehen lo...tum toh superstar ho naa!

Rk : woh toh main hoon!(naughtily) waise tum kya pehenogi? (smirking)

Madhu : pattidev, tum akele hi kyun nahi mana lete reception party? (little angry) Meri zaroorat nahi, hai naa? (Sarcastically smiling)

Rk : itna gussa! Ruko (he removes a gift wrapped thing) ye lo...tum yeh pehen lena...

Madhu opens the wrapper and hits Rk on his shoulder saying, "yeh! Yeh pehenoongi main Rk ?" (it was a short night gown)

Rk : ouch...biwi!

Madhu : sorry ...sorry Rk main bhul gayi woh tumhaari chot...chalo patti bhi badalni hai..(she make him sit on the couch n starts the bandaging)

Rk : galti ho gayi...woh toh kisi aur ke liye tha! (Smiling)

Madhu : kya?

Rk : nahi? Tumhein chahiye? Chalo pehenlo...main uske liye doosra le loonga... (casually,with a straight face)

Madhu : tum rakho apne paas!

Rk : haan, jaao...Spain waali jungle billi ke liye hai woh (winks)


(Madhu blushes...) reception mein koi bhi saree pehen lena...waise bhi maa ke paas bohot hongi tumhaare liye...

Madhu : chup karo Rk..

Rk : arre waise bhi woh mauka dhundhti rehti hai tumhein saree, gehne dene ka!

"chief" bittuji came walking into the room...


Rk : lo aa gaya tumhaari saas ka khabri!

Madhu : rk!

Bittuji : chief wo mr.Rishi aa gaye hain...niche hall mein wait kar rahe hain...

Rk : aap chaliye bittuji main aa raha hoon..

Bittuji : right chief (and he moves out of the room)

Madhu : Rk kya kar rahe ho...(rk was aimlessly looking around)

Rk : battisi dhundh raha hoon tumhaari! relax madhu...bas thodi der...main yahi hoon...hall mein yaa shayad bar mein..

Madhu : rk tumhein pata hai ki tumhein sharab...

Rk : bilkul nahi piyoonga...relax madhu...aur yeh (showing his phone) hai naa...

Rk walks downstairs to the living room...and goes on to stand where rishi is standing...


In The Living Room

Rk : hello Rishi (gesturing him to sit down while seating himself as well)

Rishi : hello mr. Rk

Rk : toh kahani yahin discuss kare? or shall we head to my bar?

Rishi : As u say...

Rk : waise film ki heroine finalise ho chuki hai?

Rishi : nahi, actually main koi fresh face ki talaash mein hoon...

Rk : oh! I see..., so shall we start?

Rishi : film abhi tak untitled hai...so, yeh kahani hai do logon ki jo tezi se apne sapno ki ore badh rahe thhe lekin, jab ek doosre se mile toh inke sapne badal gaye...dono bikhar se gaye aur phir shuru huyi inki zindagi jahaan yeh har waqt khudko samajhne mein lage rahe lekin kar nahi paaye...khudko samajhne ke liye inhein doosre ki zaroorat thi...

Rk : interesting...film ki timeline kya hai?

Rishi : present time...around 5-7 yrs stretch..

Rk : hmm...go ahead...

Rishi : toh film ki shuruvaat hoti hai heroine ke ghar se...jo ek fashion designer hai aur apni brand launch karne ka sapna rakhti hai...

Rk : okay (nodding his head)

Rishi : aur hero ek rich family ko belong karta hai jisse apne papa ki daulat aur company mein koi interest nahi hai...

Rk : location?

Rishi : story location Mumbai hai...thode scenes paris fashion week ke honge aur kuch flash backs old Bombay ke hain jiske liye Hyderabad jaana hoga...

Rk : sounds cool...shoot schedule ?

Rishi : on floors in 10 days...3 mnths long...

Rk : hmm...thik hai main bittuji se dates confirm karke tumhein inform kar doonga..

Rishi : sounds fine...so deal final?

Rk : main detail story padhke contract sign karke, i'll send it across

RIshi : ok i'll leave now...thank u Rk, nice meeting

Rk : same here..


(both shake hands and rk walks upstairs towards his room while rishi leaves rk mansion)

Next day at studio

Director : spot, agli ladki ko andar bhejo...


Spot walks out of that room and informs the first girl waiting in the row "madam aapko andar bulaya hai"


Girl : hmm...(she gets up... gracefully dressed in a gown , she walks in for the audition)

Director : ready?

Girl : yes sir

Direction : camera!..action!

Girl : "kitne log honge jinhe aisa mauka milta hoga? Aur tum! Responsibility naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai mr..."

"CUT"

Director : thoda aur gussa...ek last baar try karte hain..

Girl : "KITNE LOG HONGE, jinhe aisa mauka milta hoga? Aur TUM? Responsibility naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai MR..."

Director : "cut!" "thank u, agar aapka selection hua toh kal tak call aa jaayega"


the girl nods and heads out of the audition room

At Rk mansion

Radhaji, madhu, deepali, sikki and Rk are having dinner...

Radhaji : madhu zaraa khaane ke baad kamre mein aana..tumse kuch baat karni hai..

Rk : maa reception party sirf madhu ki nahi hai...hum dono ki hai..haan saree deni ho toh alag baat hai..(winking at madhu)

Radhaji : chup kar!

Deepali : Rk maine suna tumhaari nayi film mein heroine koi newcomer hogi ?

Rk : madhu, deepali toh pehle filmein kar chuki hai nahi ?

Deepali : rk main toh bas...

Rk : meri film mein kaun hai aur kaun nahi uski tumhein chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi bhabhiji, chalo madhu..(holding her hand and signalling to leave the place)


Reception day morning

Madhu woke up only to realise Rk wasn't anywhere around...she went about looking all around in rk mansion...

Precap :

Rishi : yeh ladki...isse maine kahin dekha hai...

Assistant : kahan?

Rishi : haan yaad aaya...tum ek kaam, karo iske saath meri ek meeting fix karo...


PS: please forgive me...i know i'm insanely late for this update but, couldn't help...was stuck up with work, my laptop crashed, and my net was not working 😭

so i'm giving u this LONG update! 😳

and for ppl who missed the prologue, pls check pg 126


PPS: i hope u like the update! waiting for ur lovely comments 😳 also, if u didnt get a pm then u r not on my buddy list so add me if u need a pm 😊

waiting ..waiting..😳 😊


Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago

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