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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 1Sumana1

Awesome update, i liked the twist...

thnx for the PM😊


thanks! 😳
glad u liked the twist 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

In The Taxi

Madhu was very shattered and heartbroken as she left from there...she came in hopes to find Rk but, it was all good for nothing and then..then this lie that had been told to her for days...she did not want to think about good or bad..all she knew was that she felt cheated...once again her trust was broken...everything around her seemed a lie...she didn't know what to do...she just couldn't think...she headed towards siddhi-vinayak temple to find some peace and to pray for Rk's safety and to meet him soon...


In The Temple

Soon she reached the temple...she walked towards the temple and after praying she just went and sat in a corner...just then her toe hit something...it was Rk's finger ring...she picked it up and considered it as a good sign for the future...


Chapter 14 - RK FOUND

At the chawl

Padmini is staring at those envelopes and letters which were lying on the bed...

Trishna: maa yeh sab..

Padmini: mujhe vishwaas nahi ho raha jo main dekh rahi hoon...shaayad yeh sab sach ho yaa phir madhu ko apne paas rakhne ki ek zidd...mujhe samajh nahi aa raha...

Trishna : maa madhu kahaan hai? Baahar bhi nahi hai...

Padmini calls madhu...madhu is busy on another call...

Padmini: subah se phone nahi uthaa rahi..kahaan dhoondhu iss ladki ko..

At the temple

(madhu on phone)


Madhu: bittuji Rk ki vanity ka number maine aapko bhej diya hai..

Bittuji : bhabhiji aap chinta matt kijiye main commissioner se baat karke "vanity van missing" ka case banvaataa hoon...isse chief ki khabar media mein nahi aayegi...

Madhu : bittuji, mujhe lag raha hai ki Rk yahi kahi hai...main siddhi-vinayak aayi thi...aur yahaan mujhe Rk ki angoothii mili...

Bittuji : (very happy) bhabhiji main wahin aataa hoon...waise wo angoothii chief ke pitaaji ki thi...wo kabhi usse kahin nahi bhoolte..

Madhu : rukiye bittuji, agar Rk yahaan aaya tha toh kisine usse dekha kaise nahi?


Bittuji gets worried


Bittuji : bhabhiji shaayad vo raat ko aaye ho...

Madhu : bittuji mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai...kahin Rk ko kuch ho naa gaya ho...(she cuts the call)


And madhu's phone rings again... 'maa calling' madhu answers while walkin out of the temple...

Padmini (yelling): madhu kabse phone laga rahi hoon...shaam ho gayi hai...kahaan hai tu madhu..?


(its raining now)


Madhu : maa mujhe kahin jaana hai main aap se baad mein baat karti hoon..

Padmini: MADHU! MADHU.. (but madhu cut the call)


madhu runs out to catch a taxi...she doesn't find one...by now its pouring heavily...she picks up her phone to call bittuji but her phone is dead...she decides to walk...soon she finds a taxi to go to sitaara studio finally thinking about just what she had thought about in the morning..


(its night now and still raining)


madhu reaches sitaara studio and starts walking towards the gates which were locked...she looks around and is about to walk towards the security gaurd's cabin when she starts feeling dizzy and faints...Rk runs towards her to save her from falling...he picks her up and takes her to the vanity van...(Rk is worried and angry)...he sprinkles water on her...madhu regains consciousness


Rk: madhu tum thik ho? (and just hugs her tightly)

Madhu : tumhe kyu farak padta hai? (and she immediately breaks away from the hug)

Rk (yelling holding madhu's shoulder): SOCH KYA RAHI THI TUM? ITNI RAAT KO BAARISH MEIN YAHAAN KYU AAYI HO?


Then he suddenly realises that he held her too tight so he lay his hands off her n says "sorry"

Madhu just stares at him in anger and 'SLAP'

Rk looks at her shocked..


Madhu: acchaa hota agar wahi girkar saari raat baarish mein padi rehti...


Madhu gets up and is about to walk towards the door but she feels dizzy again...Rk holds her and makes her sit on the seat...


Rk (while making her sit) : ab khaana bhi nahi khaaya hoga tumne...akkad itni hai kisiki sunii hi nahi hogi..

Madhu : kyu? Tumne khaayaa?

Rk : CHALNE TAK KA HOSH NAHI HAI AUR MAZAAK SUJH RAHA HAI!!

Madhu (angrily) : mazaak? ...do dinn se yahaan sab pareshaan hain tumhein dhoondhte huye aur tum...kahaan thi tumhaari parvaah tab...sochaa nahi tumne ki kyaa haal ho raha hoga sabka?


Madhu puts her hands on rk's to remove them off her shoulder...Rk lets out "ouch" by mistake...just then she notices the blood on the shirt (on the arms)...

Madhu looks at rk in shock and confusion and asks, "rk yeh kya..." she holds his arm... "aur tum yahaan kyu...ghar kyu nahi gaye?"


Rk just avoids her and walks towards a cupboard in the vanity..


Madhu: tum kyu chahte thhe ki main chali jaaoon?


Precap :

Madhu : Rk main sach-much sab chodkar tumhaare saath chalne ke liye tayiyaar thi...

Rk : jooth...sirf tab jab tumhein uss raat mera sach pata chala...hai naa? Aur kyu karu main vishwaas...socho agar tumne nahi sunaa hotaa toh yeh shaadi nahi huyi hoti...hai naa madhu?


ps: hope u like it 😳


Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

ENGLISH VERSION

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

In The Taxi

Madhu was very shattered and heartbroken as she left from there...she came in hopes to find Rk but, it was all good for nothing and then..then this lie that had been told to her for days...she did not want to think about good or bad..all she knew was that she felt cheated...once again her trust was broken...everything around her seemed a lie...she didn't know what to do...she just couldn't think...she headed towards siddhi-vinayak temple to find some peace and to pray for Rk's safety and to meet him soon...


In The Temple

Soon she reached the temple...she walked towards the temple and after praying she just went and sat in a corner...just then her toe hit something...it was Rk's finger ring...she picked it up and considered it as a good sign for the future...


Chapter 14 - RK FOUND

At the chawl

Padmini is staring at those envelopes and letters which were lying on the bed...

Trishna: mom all this..

Padmini: i cannot believe my eyes...maybe all this is true or is it a stubborn wish to keep madhu near him...i cannot understand...

Trishna : maa where is madhu? she's not even there outside...

Padmini calls madhu...madhu is busy on another call...

Padmini: since morning she isn't picking up her phone...where do i search for this girl...

At the temple

(madhu on phone)


Madhu: bittuji i have sent you Rk's vanity van number...

Bittuji : bhabhiji dont worry i'll talk to the commissioner and get a "vanity van missing" complaint registered...that will avoid chief's information to be leaked out in media...

Madhu : bittuji, i feel Rk is somewhere closeby...i had come to siddhi-vinayak...and here i found Rk's finger ring...

Bittuji : (very happy) bhabhiji i'm coming there...btw that ring belongs to Rk's father...he never forgets it anywhere...

Madhu : wait bittuji, if Rk came here then how come nobody saw him?


Bittuji gets worried


Bittuji : bhabhiji maybe he came at night...

Madhu : bittuji i'm very scared...hope nothing has happened to Rk...(she cuts the call)


And madhu's phone rings again... 'maa calling' madhu answers while walkin out of the temple...

Padmini (yelling): madhu, since when i'm calling you...its evening now...where are you madhu..?


(its raining now)


Madhu : maa i ahve to go somewhere...i'll talk to you later...

Padmini: MADHU! MADHU.. (but madhu cut the call)


madhu runs out to catch a taxi...she doesn't find one...by now its pouring heavily...she picks up her phone to call bittuji but her phone is dead...she decides to walk...soon she finds a taxi to go to sitaara studio finally thinking about just what she had thought about in the morning..


(its night now and still raining)


madhu reaches sitaara studio and starts walking towards the gates which were locked...she looks around and is about to walk towards the security gaurd's cabin when she starts feeling dizzy and faints...Rk runs towards her to save her from falling...he picks her up and takes her to the vanity van...(Rk is worried and angry)...he sprinkles water on her...madhu regains consciousness


Rk: madhu are you alright? (and just hugs her tightly)

Madhu : what does it matter to you? (and she immediately breaks away from the hug)

Rk (yelling holding madhu's shoulder): WHAT WERE YOU THINKING? IN THIS RAIN AND NIGHT WHY HAVE YOU COME HERE?

Then he suddenly realises that he held her too tight so he lay his hands off her n says "sorry"

Madhu just stares at him in anger and 'SLAP'

Rk looks at her shocked..


Madhu: would have been better if i would have been left there fallen all night in the rain...


Madhu gets up and is about to walk towards the door but she feels dizzy again...Rk holds her and makes her sit on the seat...


Rk (while making her sit) : now you wouldn't have eaten even...so stubborn you are , wouldn't have listened to anyone...

Madhu : why? you ate?

Rk : DONT EVEN HAVE ENERGY TO WALK CONSCIOUSLY AND YOU WANT TO JOKE!!

Madhu (angrily) : joke? ...since two days here everyone is worried searching for you...where was your worry at that time...u didn't think how everyone would have been...?

Madhu puts her hands on rk's to remove them off her shoulder...Rk lets out "ouch" by mistake...just then she notices the blood on the shirt (on the arms)...

Madhu looks at rk in shock and confusion and asks, "rk what's this..." she holds his arm... "and why are you here...why didn't you go home?"


Rk just avoids her and walks towards a cupboard in the vanity..


Madhu: why did you want me to go away?


Precap :

Madhu : Rk i was honestly ready to leave everything and go with you...

Rk : lie...only when you heard my truth that night...right? and why should i trust...think if you wouldn't have heard me that night then this marriage wouldn't have happened...right madhu?

ps: hope u like it 😳


Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayy...I am the first to comment.🥳

O My god this RK is again hurt!

Why doesn't he forgive Madhu?? This is the problem with men. If they have done something wrong they easily want to be forgiven because you are a woman sometimes their sister, sometimes their mother, sometimes their wife or lover. But if a woman has commited any mistake then they will give you super long lectures that you have broken my heart, how can I trust you etc.
Why don't they understand that women also want the same treatment which men expect for themselves from women??
Edited by SHINYSHREYA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really nice dear. I skipped the last few days episode and it was difficult for me to read the fictions also. I am very sensitive person I can't see my favorites in pain. So I came across this chapter only now. Nicely written one and thank you for the pm. Reading the updates back to back
Edited by aan-rish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update
Finally mb found her Rk
Rk in blood something must had happened
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc update, glad RK is back 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Awesome..~!!! Lovely..Waitin for next n Thnks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...pls pm me next tym n update soon... Will b waiting 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayyy...! RK mil Gaya finally but is hurt ..!
very nice update ... 😊 n the precap is very interesting ...continue soon plz 😊

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