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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zariya123

is rk already know??????????//

or he is really changed and not faking???????????


yes he knows mostly,,

he has not changed...he is not faking either..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sp110

so cute update..thanks


thank u😊
rk taking care of madhu...hmm...more cute update on its way..😊 😳
Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update..!!i hope we have a happy ending to this..I'm really tensed about the show wala wedding too!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dilnasheen

Great update..!!i hope we have a happy ending to this..I'm really tensed about the show wala wedding too!!😳


thanks a lot 😊
ending...dunno if u guys will call it happy...😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really nice update . Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Really nice update . Thanx for the pm


😊 thanks!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

At rk mansion

At night

Rk enters the room...madhu has slept already...dinner is untouched...rk walks out of the room in frustration...


Chapter 7 - THE VENUE


Next day afternoon

At rk mansion

Rk : madhu aaj shooting ka aakhri din hai...phir...ek minute biwi...hum jaayenge kahaan?

Madhu : wo toh tumhe pata hona chahiye naa? (rk looks at her confused) waise hum uss gaon main jaa sakte hai...

Rk: chalo madhu...tumhe kuch dikhana hai...

Madhu : par rk tumhaara shoot?

Rk : biwi aaj raat ki shift hai...kal shaam tak hogi shooting...ab chalo bhi...


Both of them sit in the car n drive off...they arrive at the same place where they had once decided to get married...


The Wedding Venue

Madhu was trying hard to hide her tears...rk was feeling guilty but he hid his feelings...rk noticed madhu in tears n raised his hand to softly wipe away her tears n then he said


Rk: dekha biwi maine kaha tha naa ki hum shaadi kahin aur karenge...

Madhu : rk yeh sab bohot khoobsurat hai...yeh tumne kab?


Rk had decorated the wedding place with beautiful flowers that hung from pillars placed in a circular arrangement...the centre of it housed a havan kund (holy fire)...and the carpet to the entrance of this grand wedding place was replaced with grass...the sides of the grass had stands which had diyas on top of them...


Rk: main chahta hoon ki iss baar kuch bhi joothaa naa ho...jab yeh aasman, yeh talao, yeh hawwa, yeh agni sab apni sachaai bayaan kar rahe hai toh main peeche kaise hatt sakta hoon...isliye biwi...yeh ghaas jo humaare swaagat mein hamesha khilii rahegi...aur yeh diye jo maine jalaaye hain humaari duniyaa main roshni bharte rahenge...aur yeh phool jiski khushboo humaare aane waale kal mein in hawaao ke zariye mehekti rahegi..


Madhu smiled sweetly n suddenly hugged him...he hugged her back a little in shock...


They broke the hug awkwardly..


Rk : chalo...yahaan...


Rk grabbed her hand and took her ahead towards a vanity van...he opened the door and dragged madhu in...


Rk : tumne poochaa tha naa kahan jaayenge? Kahan jaayenge yeh toh pata nahi lekin,iss vanity ko apna ghar bana sakte hain...jab tak...jab tak hum aisi koi jagah naa dhundh le jahan hume koi naa pehchaane...

Madhu : rk tum yeh sab kyu kar rahe ho?

Rk : ab main nahi karoonga toh kaun karega biwi?

Madhu: rk...pyaar karte ho mujhse?

Rk : haan karta hoon madhu(with all sincerity)...main jaanta hoon ki tumhaare liye mujhpe vishwaas karna mumkin nahi...lekin main kaise tumhe yakin dilaaoon? Tumhaare liye sab kuch chodne ko tayiyaar hoon...

Madhu : mujhe chod sakte ho rk?

Rk : madhu? (in panic)


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Rk : ek baar tumhe chodne ki galti kar chukka hoon...dubara nahi kar sakta...

Madhu : rk shoot pe jaane se pehle mujhe chawl chodoge?

Rk : madhu kya hum wahan shaadi ke baad nahi jaa sakte? Wo main..

Madhu : kyunki tumhe lagta hai ki maa aur didu mujhe aane nahi denge?

Rk : nahi madhu...wo...kya tumne bataya ki hum kal shaam shaadi kar rahe hain?

Madhu : rk wo...wo...chitthi...wahan chodni hai...

Rk smiles like a kid...


They sit in the car and rk drops madhu at the chawl and head off to the studio...(its late evening by now)

Rk is at shoot at night...while madhu is at chawl...however she heads to rk mansion at night...


At rk mansion

Next day evening

Madhu is ready in her bridal saaree...n she carefully gets out of Rk mansion so that nobody can stop her or question her...unaware that deepali has seen her...madhu gets into the car and head to the wedding venue...rk is waiting there...panditji is sitting there next to the holy fire...


Precap :

deepali : kya aapko pata hai aapki beti kya gul khilaa rahi hai?

padminiji : meri beti ke baare mein aisa-waisa kuch bhi bolne se pehle sochlo...

deepali : kyu? ab itni dudh ki dhuli toh wo hai nahi...maan-na padega...shaadi tak pohoch gayi baat...abhi hi kuch der pehle dekha maine usse...dulhan waale liwhaaz mein...


ps : pls like and comment...thanks in advance 😊

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

ENGLISH VERSION

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

At rk mansion

At night

Rk enters the room...madhu has slept already...dinner is untouched...rk walks out of the room in frustration...


Chapter 7 - THE VENUE


Next day afternoon

At rk mansion

Rk : madhu today is the last day of shoot...then...one minute biwi...where will we go?

Madhu : that u shud know right? (rk looks at her confused) btw we can go to that village...

Rk: come on madhu...want to show u something...

Madhu : but, rk your shoot?

Rk : biwi its night shift today...shooting will last till tomo evening...come on now...


Both of them sit in the car n drive off...they arrive at the same place where they had once decided to get married...


The Wedding Venue

Madhu was trying hard to hide her tears...rk was feeling guilty but he hid his feelings...rk noticed madhu in tears n raised his hand to softly wipe away her tears n then he said


Rk: see biwi, i had told u we'll marry at some other place...

Madhu : rk all this is very beautiful...this u did..when?


Rk had decorated the wedding place with beautiful flowers that hung from pillars placed in a circular arrangement...the centre of it housed a havan kund (holy fire)...and the carpet to the entrance of this grand wedding place was replaced with grass...the sides of the grass had stands which had diyas on top of them...


Rk: i want that this time nothing should be fake...this sky,this pond,this breeze,this fire, all these are saying their truths then how could i back out?...thats y biwi...this grass which will always grow in our welcome,and these diyas which i have lit will always spread light in our world,and these flowers whose fragrance will spread inour lives via this breeze...

Madhu smiled sweetly n suddenly hugged him...he hugged her back a little in shock...


They broke the hug awkwardly..


Rk : come...here...


Rk grabbed her hand and took her ahead towards a vanity van...he opened the door and dragged madhu in...


Rk : you had asked me where we will go right? where we will go i dont know but,this vanity van can be our home...till...till we don't find a place where no one knows us...

Madhu : rk why r u doing all this?

Rk :if i dont then who will biwi?

Madhu: rk...do u love me?

Rk : yes i do madhu(with all sincerity)...i know its difficult for u to trust me...but,how do i make u believe me? i am ready to leave everything for you...

Madhu : can u leave me rk?

Rk : madhu? (in panic)


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Rk : i have committed the mistake of leaving you once...cannot do it once again...

Madhu : rk will you drop me at chawl before going for ur shoot?

Rk : madhu cant we go there after our marriage? umm i..

Madhu : because you think mom n didu wont allow me to come?

Rk : no madhu...that...did u tell them that we are marrying tomorrow?

Madhu : rk that...that...letter...i want to leave it there...

Rk smiles like a kid...


They sit in the car and rk drops madhu at the chawl and head off to the studio...(its late evening by now)

Rk is at shoot at night...while madhu is at chawl...however she heads to rk mansion at night...


At rk mansion

Next day evening

Madhu is ready in her bridal saaree...n she carefully gets out of Rk mansion so that nobody can stop her or question her...unaware that deepali has seen her...madhu gets into the car and head to the wedding venue...rk is waiting there...panditji is sitting there next to the holy fire...


Precap :

deepali : do u know what all your daughter is upto?

padminiji : think twice before speaking ill about my daughter...

deepali : why? now she is not as pure as milk...will have to salute her...things have reached marriage now...just a little while back i saw her...in bridal outfit...


ps : pls like and comment...thanks in advance 😊

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks! 😊
that was fast! i was just about to pm but u reached before that 😆😳

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