Arshi FF: New start, Please? completed 6/5

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~Takes place when Arnav once finds out Shyam was lying~ Khushi had become indifferent to him. She no longer tried to find out the reason for the rash marriage. She no longer tried to get into his good graces. She no longer showed any emotion to anything he did. He had finally achieved his goal of breaking her. Even though her family had forgiven her, she no longer felt anything. For anybody. Arnav thought that maybe once he broke her, he would finally feel better. But, in fact he felt even worse. So when Payal and Aakash told him the truth, he felt like he had his heart ripped out of his chest. He had never felt anything worse. How could he ever doubt Khushi? The love of his life? Now all he wanted to do was make the one responsible pay. He went out to the poolside to think. As he went out, he saw Khushi sitting underneath one of the lights in a beautiful red sari. He caught his breath and just starred at her for a moment. He then called her name," Khushi?" She slowly turned to look at him with eyes that had no more light or life in them. When he looked at her eyes, he felt like he had just gotten kicked in the stomach. At the moment, he just wanted to run to her and hug her. To tell her he loves her. Tell her how much she means to him. But he was afraid that she would just push him off, not that he didn't deserve it. He deserved so much worse. He didn't deserve her at all. He walked to her and grabbed her by the hand and pulled her to her feet. She instantly pushed him away. He grabbed her hand again and this time held on more tightly, but not to the point to hurt her. "Khushi, this is all my fault. If I hadn't been such an arrogant, a**, this wouldn't have happened. Why did I believe a single word of his? I believed him over you. I didn't even ask for your side. I just believed what I wanted. I'm so sorry." She listened to him but he could tell it didn't make a difference to her. "Are you done?" she asked. And she tried once again to break free, but once again failed. "Please leave me Arnavji. I have work to do." His arms dropped to the side like she had suddenly become radioactive recognizing the same words he had once told her. Finding her chance, Khushi made her way to the door. His eyes teared up and his voice broke as he called her name after her. He remembered one night where she had had a nightmare and in fear had hugged him. At first he was surprised and just held her. Then he remembered what she had done with Shyam and instantly pushed her away "Don't ever touch me again." and he turned his back to her. Remembering how he had treated her, he knew that how she treated him was fair. He fell to his knees and broke down. He started sobbing for the love he lost. No... Not lost but forgotten and poisoned. He was going to resurface the love. He knew she still had feelings for him, that she still loved him. But he had to make sure Shyam stayed away and to be the loving husband, the prince charming Khushi always dreamed of. [/COLOR]
please comment, I would like to see wat u guys think. This is my first FF, so please go easy on me. Thank you 😊


Index:

Parts 1 and 2: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981

Parts 3 and 4: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=2

Parts 5 and 6: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=3

Part 7: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=4

Part 8: india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=5

Part 9: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=6

Part 10: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=7

Part 11: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=8

Part 12: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=9

Part 13: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=10

Part 14: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=11

Part 15: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=13

Part 16: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=14

Part 17: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=15

Part 18: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=16

Part 19: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=18

Part 20: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=19

Part 21: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=21

Part 22: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2905981&TPN=23

Part 23:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=25


Part 24:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=26


Part 25:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=27


Part 26: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=28

Part 27: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=30</a>


Part 28: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=32

Part 29: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=33

Part 30: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=35

Part 31(A): https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=38

Part 31(B): https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=40

Part 32: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=43

Part 33: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=46

Part 34: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5?pn=47

Part 35: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5

Part 36: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5

Part 37: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5

Part 38: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5

Part 39: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/61486779

Part 40: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2905981/arshi-ff-new-start-please-completed-6-5
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nice start loved it please pm can't wait to read more
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It sounds good so far. Add more please
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Part 2


This part is a little short, but I will make up for it in the next parts! Keep commenting, thank u 😊 Arnav is about to follow Khushi downstairs when his phone rings. He sees it's Akash, so he answers. He talks for a little then hangs up and continues downstairs. He sees Khushi talking to Anjali and smiles. After talking, Anjali goes into her room and Khushi proceeds to go downstairs. As she gets to the stairs, she feels a little lightheaded. She stops to steady herself when everything goes black. Arnav watches his Di go into her room and Khushi continue downstairs when she stops at the top of the stairs. He knows she's about to pass out and he runs to her. He catches her just in time before she falls. *rabbi ve* He picks her up and takes her to their room. He gently lays her on the bed and moves a strand of hair from her face. Arnav gets up to go to the bathroom to get a wet washcloth. He comes back, sits on the bed and puts the wet washcloth on her forehead. He grabs her hand and holds while talking to her. When he doesn't get a respond he grabs his phone and calls the doctor. While waiting for the doctor, Arnav's worry grows and is still talking. The doctor comes in and asks what happened. Arnav explained the situation to him while checking on her. Once he was done he told her she would be ok. It was just her body is getting used to some changes. At this Arnav was confused. "what do you mean changes? What changes?" The doctor replied "To tell you the truth, your wide is not absolutely fine. Mr.Raizada, your wife is..."
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Is she pregnant or depressed
Please update soon
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awesome 😊 ...please update soon and if it is possible ,so please pm me i'll be ver grea8full to u
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interesting ...wat happened to her ?...plz update soon
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Part 2

"What do you mean changes? What changes?" The doctor replied "To tell you the truth, your wife is not absolutely fine. Mr.Raizada, your wife is... pregnant. That is why she has been fainting. She is 2 months." "What the...? How is that...she's pregnant?" He was so in shock he was tongue tied. He didn't know what to say. All he did was walked and knelt by his wife, and held her hand. The doctor lightly tapped him and said to take her care of her well and that he had to go. Arnav thanked him and turned back to Khushi. He started talking to Khushi, his mind reeling from what the doctor had just told him. He was about to become a father. A father!!!! He couldn't believe it. Because of his ranting and the tears in his eyes, Arnav didn't realize that Khushi had woken up and was listening to him. At first she didn't understand what he was saying but slowly the words began to click. "Khushi...mother...pregnant..me...father...so happy..." Devi Mayya! She thought. I'm pregnant? This can't be. She slowly lifted her hand that Arnav wasn't holding and placed it on his other hand. He instantly stopped talking and held both her hands. He helped her sit before hugging her tightly before he eased off when he remembered her pregnancy. Khushi didn't do anything. She just let her arms hang by her sides, because, honestly she didn't know what to do. "Khushi, did you hear that? We're gonna have a child! I'm so happy!" "I'm pregnant...? A child? Our child? But how? I can't be pregnant." She remembered that night. They had on thier way home when the car had broken down. Arnav had gotten out to check the car but there was nothing they could've done in the middle of the night. They started walking, Arnav walking ahead fast and her walking behind trying to keep up. When all of sudden she tripped and fell. She screamed in surprise. Arnav turned around to find her on the ground. He went back and picked her up. He carries her to a small hotel they found about twenty minutes away. The whole way, Khushi was staring at her husband with shock. She hadn't expected something like this from him. Arnav looked down at Khushi to find her staring at him. "I only picked you up cause you fell and if you were walking, it would take forever to get to the hotel." He saw her look away and instantly felt a stab of guilt for lying to her. They reached the hotel and went inside. It was a beautiful room with a huge bed and a fireplace. They could both feel desire and need that was raging inside both of them. They looked at each other and their eyes locked. Before she knew, she was in her husband's arms. Finally, they had spend the night as husband and wife. "Khushi! Are you ok?" Khushi was brought back from her flashback by Arnav's voice. She looked to him to find him kneeling on the floor by the bed."What happened, sweetheart?"

How was it? Did u like it? Srry if the updates r short but I don't have that much time to write, just on the bus to and from school.
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nice,i was expecting that she is pregnant 😊... what will happen nxt ,i really wanted to know what is going on in her head ... update soon
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hey its great yaarr,,i like the way u write coz its short but gives evry feeling to the reader,,i did hav a smile on my face throughout,waitin

Edited by shabriya - 13 years ago

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