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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
Arnav: protective husband
Khushi: Sweetcake
Shayam: Freak
Loved it
continue soon
Love
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 10

"What's the question?" Arnav still had a protective hold on his wife as he heard his brother-in-law say this.
"Saale Sahib, do you know who the father is?" he said with a sick smile.
Arnav lost all control with that. He instantly let go of Khushi's arm and swung it at Shyam. Arnav hit him straight in the nose, completely breaking it.
"Don't ever say anything about my wife again," Arnav whispered so no one could here except the bloodied man.
"I'm sorry Jijaji. Did you get hurt?" he picked the picked him up and shoved his outside by the pool. He came back, closed the door, and locked the window along with pulling the drapes.
Khushi was frozen. 'Now Arnav will hate me again. He will think that the baby is that snake's not his. ' she though to herself. Yes, she was mad at him, furious for not trusting her, not asking her for her side of the story, but she had realized that even after everything he did, he's the one that melted her heart. He's the one that made her heart beat faster, he's the one she loved.
Khushi snapped out of her thoughts and saw her husband coming back. Except it wasn't Arnav. It was ASR. She instantly flinched and started moving back.
Arnav had been furious. He would have killed the b*st*rd if he wasn't married to his Di. Now, as he was coming back, he saw Khushi flinch and every step he took foreword, she took a step back. Every step she took, felt like someone was stepping on his heart. His expression softened automatically. "Khushi, I'm not angry at you. I'm not gonna hurt you. Never again." he told her as he slowly took one step. He wanted her to believe him so bad, but he knew it would take time before he gained her trust again.
Khushi felt stuck between her heart and mind. She loved him, but she was afraid he would somehow go back to the way he was, mean and cruel.
"I don't know. I don't know weather to believe you or not." She started crying, "I don't know if I can trust you anymore."
"Khushi. Please don't cry. I can't stand them."
As he said that, Khushi looked up at him. The fire was back in her eyes.
"But you could stand them before? Why should I listen to you. I hate you Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada. I HATE YOU!!!" she screamed at him. With that she turned to get a new sari and ran to the bathroom. She closed the door and leaned against it.
Arnav was frozen. He couldn't move even if he had wanted to. He always thought that she would hate him, but had never actually believed it. But hearing the actual words leave her mouth, it felt like someone had stabbed him multiple times, but not nearly enough to kill him.
She felt horrible. She slid to the ground and sobbed. Sobbed for the life she could have had, the love she could have had. But Shyam had taken all that away. She didn't know if she could ever get it back. Now she just wanted the six months to end already. To give her a chance to leave. Give them both a chance to start over.


How was it? What do you think is gonna happen now? Will Arnav still be able to get Khushi back? What do u think Shyam is gonna try now??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
shyam is such a dash ... arnav 1 punch wasn't enough 4 him he need thousands of them

poor khushi 😭 ... over alll nice part 😊

yeah i think as time will pass khushi will forgive arnav

i think he will try to kill arnav , maybe jst a thought,it is hard to think what that creep is planning

thanx 4 the pm ... update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Aww,.. Loved the punch..

How I wish he could hit him more..

Awsome...

Can't wait for the next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Ugh I hate that bas***d Shyam and Arnav is just a sweetheart please PM me when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Aww why didn't he kill the bast###!
I feel so sorry 4 khushi, not knowing what to do now...
At least arnavs trying to be more reasonable

Anyway awesome part
Tthank u 4 the pm
& I'm expecting a pm very soon sweety.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
knew snake would have played that card poor khushi she is so afraid he will turn back in to asr and hurt her loved the update snake need to get a beat down one punch was nor enough
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Part 11

Here's part 11. Enjoy!
Arnav fell back on the bed as he listened to his wife's heartfelt cries. He couldn't do anything but listen.
Nani, Anjali and Mami were sitting downstairs, getting ready for breakfast when they heard yelling, a door slamming and then crying. They all had confused expressions on thier faces as they looked up towards Arnav's and Khushi's room.
"Hello hi bye bye, Pati sari must have done something to make Arnav bitwa angry again." Mami commented.
"Manorama! These things happen. I'm sure she didn't actually mean what she said. Let them work it out. When they come down, I don't want you saying anything. Understand?" Nani told her and waited until Manorama said yes. She knew something had been up. Chote's hurried marriage, the way they acted towards each other. Khushi always acted happy, but she had a feeling she wasn't.
"Your absolutely correct Nani. But.. She really shouldn't be any under stress in her condition. It's not healthy. I'll go check on them." replied Anjali as she got up from her place next to her husband who had just come down.
"I'll go with you Anjali bitwa." Nani said as she got and both granddaughter and grandmother went up the stairs to see what was happening.
Shyam had just come down from their room and had heard everything that Arnav and Khushi said and everything the woman downstairs said. Just as Rani Sahiba finished, he sat down and she got up saying she was going to check on her Chote and sister-in-law. He was so happy that Khushi hated Arnav. Now he could have a better chance to be with her. He just prayed that his naive wife and her grandma didn't mess up anything for him.
Khushi stopped crying, got up and washed her face. She got into the shower and let the hot water beat down on her. After she was done, she carefully wrapped the sari around her, and brushed her hair before she came out.
Arnav heard a knock the a soft voice whisper his name. The same soft, smooth as silk voice he had been hearing for the past 28 years of his life. He wiped his eyes and got up to open the door. Outside his room were standing Nani and Di.
"Nani, Di! What are you doing here? Is everything all right? Is the baby fine, Di?" he blurted out. 'Why else would they come up? There must be something wrong.' he thought as he was panicking. "No Chote, everything is fine, and the baby is fine. We just wanted to make sure you two were fine. Do you need anything?" Anjali asked her brother. She knew he wouldn't tell her m, but it was worth a try. "What the..." he tried to gain his composure. He didn't realize that they had kinda gotten a little bit out of control and that they had heard them downstairs."Yes Di, everything is fine. We don't need anything. We will be down in a couple minutes." he replied after he had recollected himself.
Khushi heard low voices outside in the room and wondered what happened. She opened the door to find Nani, Di, and Arnav standing in the doorway talking. When she closed the door, they all looked up at her.
Nani was first to speak, "Khushi, What happened? Are you ok?"
"Yes..."Khushi started, but was interrupted by Arnav.
"Why wouldn't she be, Nani?"
How was it? Plz comment. Thanx!

This is a friend's FF. Please read an comment. Hope you like it. :)
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2923301
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Really good!! But why the cliff hanger!!! Grrr
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
That was awesome upload more please

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